Smash Adventures Episode 1

[Swampy5524]

the funny thing is that he was playin a lvl 1 cpu. :P

[taquay]

ill tell you in the next episode 1 smashtasm 2 here

[LeoBlaze65]

the last line was from smashtasm but i forgot what episode

[ChaosPunishment5]

the beginning song, where can i find that version of ssbb intro?

[nikkmaster99]

lov the first song

[GtaKING161]

the episode was shit.

[Blazeknight7]

@GtaKING161

lets see you do better Chris

[GtaKING161]

shut up JARROD.

[GetReal900]

Lol I'm just serching around for good brawl machinima type things for the sake of not being bored during the holidays on my laptop...

[Dlr64]

May I suggest u get better voice actors anyways gd show Blaze gd show

[Blazeknight7]

Watch Episode 3 Most of the People in This Have Been Replaced With Better VA's

[AceflameX]

"I'm Blaze and I'm here to kick your ass"

awesome line

[wojogamer]

you forgot "humorsque of a dog" or whatever the title of thet song is in the video info.

[thePishfactor618]

escuse me Blaze,I have to say i respect you. I had some of the same problems with Smash University Episode1 and some of the same natured non helping critics. I like how you stand up to them the same as i did when i got criticism even tho i thot that My and your episode ones were pretty good

[Blazeknight7]

heh I Might Need to Check out your Machinima To See what it's like

[yorbak]

did you steal the smashtasm theme song?

[Blazeknight7]

Uh no

[NeonTogepi]

reviewing a second time, the only thing I noticed that needs changing really are:

1. Fight scenes could be shortened.

2. crop ot a bit more, but that doesn't matter cuz of hacks being able to remove that

3. ganondorf has an EXXXXXXXTREEMELY annoying voice.

4. the camera needs to be focused on the character talking more often.

Just some constructive critisism. Also, good job! :)

[Blazeknight7]

Thank you for your constructive critisism heres my soltion to each of those things you mentioned 1. I'll fix that next time I need to do a Fight scene 2. No HUD,No Tags, No Timer FTW

3.I can't really Do much about that Because He's pokemonmini not ganondorf but If he doesn't turn his lines in Faster Then he will be Replaced

4. that has been fixed in episode 2

Once again thank you for your Kind words

[galaktiker4]

uhhhhh???i dont know what i say

[BlueHat23]

I can see the hard effort put into this, BUT:

- You should make the voices more clear. I personally had trouble hearing what they said.

- Also, you shouldn't adjust the camera too much. Just keep it at a good view, and try experimenting with different camera angles while filming.

Your machinima was pretty good, and I wish you good luck on future videos.

[Blazeknight7]

thank you Your adivice Is greatly Apeasated I wish other people Would Learn to give consructive cirtismi Like you have

[FireClan11]

can u send me the music at the intro? and great machinima!

[Blazeknight7]

Ok Just PM your E-mail Adress and I'll send it to you

[Blazeknight7]

dude STFU why are you watching it if you think it's so bad

[xwillx0wnz]

i watched it hopping for a decent machinima, i was mistaken =(

[YuseiTheSynchroHero]

@xwillx0wnz:

Anyone who can just flame a machinima as decent as this and expect respect, then you're mistaken there as well.

[xwillx0wnz]

decent?

choppy scenes, horrible voice acting, bad concept? how us this decent?

[YuseiTheSynchroHero]

@xwillx0wnz:

Those can be fixed up a bit obviously...>___> You actually think that just because Blaze's concept is similar to Shippiddge's, it automatically means that he stole it. I've seen a few others use a concept like that and they're pretty good still. Besides, this is only the first episode. Flaming Blazeknight won't encourage him to get any better and you KNOW it...

[psig3n0]

this is one ofe my favorite machinima, heck i olaced it on my number 5 lost right next to dg! I think it's deserving or the spot and whoever thiknks this sucks then your contemplating white blade zero, Dekuscrubby andI think speedjolt! and thier beyond yuotube celebraty thier youtube GOD! Oh and wheres your machinima? huh? show it to me? yeah thats right you don't have on so STFU!

[Jsomms312]

wow your really nice =P

[DrRobumnik]

You're good at filming fight scenes.

[blarka12]

nice machinima dude

[Blazeknight7]

Thanks

[psig3n0]

hey crzy4max is the olimar correct?

[Blazeknight7]

No he voiced bowser Worthywarrior01 voiced olimar

[ninguy342]

actually ill send you it by private mail... check youre inbox

[Blazeknight7]

yeh I got it

[ninguy342]

can you make the song in the beginning in mp3 format?

[Blazeknight7]

you mean the song in the intro then It's already in an Mp3 if you want I can send it to you just give me your e-mail adress

[ninguy342]

k im gonna send you my e-mail on youre account. cuz ppl are gonna spame me on the comment box. ok its coming now

[CopyBlazeknight7]

Awesome work

[misfitmotor]

This was Great for a first time Machinimator!

[Blazeknight7]

Thank you I tryed my best

[madcat7673]

I hate to be rude but Shippiddge made a story about hackers and now everyone is copying it in different ways.

[Blazeknight7]

It not a F**king copy it has hackers as the villans that doesn't make it a copy

[madcat7673]

Greg!!

[Blazeknight7]

So shipp doesn't own hackers as villans it's not copy just case the villans are hackers that not stealing from shipp or copying just case his main villan is a hacker and mine is to that doesn;t mean it's copying

[madcat7673]

ok then that means you got teh idea from Shippiddge

[Blazeknight7]

Your Point?

[madcat7673]

nothing if you got your idea from shipp then fine

[xwillx0wnz]

it shows how original you are, taking other peoples ideas arnt u imagintive.

[Blazeknight7]

well FUCK you Thats not taking someones Idea using hackers as villans Shipp does not own hackers as villans why can't people get that

[psig3n0]

I mean white blade does the same thing and does anyone bother him? no you should leave him alone!

[Blazeknight7]

I agree psig Good point

[takoro94]

nice machinima, and i say that even through the discussion we had...

but anyway 5/5

[ulifamv]

the ending reminds me of that smashtasm episode wen they meet greg lol

[Blazeknight7]

thats the point exept deku's not evil

[ulifamv]

i knew it!

[LightBrawler]

For the first episode, it was pretty good! Great work, Blaze. :)

[Blazeknight7]

thank you most of the problmes with this ep will be fixed in ep (at least I hope so)

[spikehamer2]

Some mistakes

The fighting sequences are taken by 1 record only, that makes it less better.

You were moving the camera way too much, that makes it really annoying.

Fighting against a CPU, try to play with a friend next time.

The voices were a little confusing, i had no idea who was talking at some parts.

You didn't cut the countdown and the go narrator part.

The cropping, just a little more to be better

and lastly, the story makes no sence

[spikehamer2]

Im not saying its the worst ever

you just need to make the same battle with more replays, and instead of just making 1 while moving the camera all around, just make many cuts with different camera positions

[Blazeknight7]

1. I don't like doing fights like that

2. I'll try to move the camera less

3.I had no one that I was able to play with at the time and it'd hrad to do fight sceens over Wifi

4. That will be fixed in the next ep

5.I did that on purpose case it's them playing the game

6. Will be fixed in the next ep

7. OMG IT'S THE FIRST FUCKING EPISODE THE STORY DOESN'T HAVE TO MAKE SENCE IN THE 1ST FUCKING EPISODE

Overall think befor you type because rember this is the first episode

[spikehamer2]

Im just trying to help at the battle scenes to make them far more better

But it seems you don't have the patience to make such a thing, and do you have to rage because i said it made no sence? intead of fucking raging like an idiot, just say something less idiotic

[Blazeknight7]

Ok fine the fight scenes I can coup with but the part about it not making sence is just a low blow I put my heart and soul into this and anyone who doesn't know me only points out it's falts as I said before IT'S THE FUCKING FIRST EPISODE CUT ME SOME SLACK BITCH

[DjmadDness2008]

wat a copy cat of brawl tube

[shadowfighter04]

how is he copying?

[ulifamv]

first off hes not copying brawltube second he is good friends with the creator of brawltube

[75TKP]

What is the song at the beggining?

[Blazeknight7]

You mean During the intro or at hyrule

[75TKP]

The intro.

[Blazeknight7]

Well it was a remix of the SSBB main theme Not sure who made it but My friend SSBvet sent it to me

[75TKP]

Well,I don't blame you,but I blame Vet.He's my friend also,my fourth one.

[Slifersan]

I thought it was pretty good.

The fight scenes were pretty good, the concept was interesting, and you are quite the skilled recorder.

The constant turning of the camera did get a little annoying near the end, but it was bearable.

Bowser's voice was quite difficult to understand at times, and was annoying at others.

However, I thought Pit's voice was excellent~

Overall, it looks like ap retty good start. Keep it up and it'll go swimmingly

4/5

[NeonTogepi]

1. Too many fight scenes are extremely boring and are rarely fun to watch.

2. Don't move the camera too much. It got really annoying.

3. The script was not that great, but I'll give it a break since it is a pilot and pilots always suck.

[Blazeknight7]

Yo make something better asshole

[Blazeknight7]

Your recording qualtiy Sucks dick your edit does to and your Your voice sounds really gay if you don't Like a vid and you can't make anything better Don't say anything Faggot

[NeonTogepi]

1. I never v.a. in any of my machinimas. 2. I was giving you criticism, not saying it sucked. I was helping you.

[Blazeknight7]

Look at the other comments No one lese said that the fight scens were boring In fact no one else said anything that you did

[NeonTogepi]

Well, now sum1 did. Honestly, watch another machinima with aton of fight scenes. Their boring if they are not special in some way.

[psig3n0]

sweet thanks dude! i'll let u know when auditions r released!

P.S. Toon link is my favorite in both red, blue and black!

[psig3n0]

wow you have a really good voice. When I release auditions than I was wondering if you would be interested in playing my toon link character? (he wears red)

[Blazeknight7]

Ok I'll do it

[Blazeknight7]

OMFG it's Only been 2days sine I posted this yet alreay it has gotten 169 Views

[Salmon3186]

yay for SA!

[pmastershake210]

well it was prettty good but i couldnt hear gannon and olimar sometimes but other wise yeah good

[Dekuscrubby]

Pretty cool. And I was in it. Cameo appearance ftw!

One tip, don't use CPUs as actors. Though I can see how it would be difficult to fight yourself... invite someone around to help film then plan the fight out. That way your fight-scene camera skills will be shown more.

Overall good though.

[Blazeknight7]

yeh Worthywarrio now has a Wii and brawl and I go to his house every thursday so I can do the fights with him and ave the replays to My sd card But I won't need to do that for ep 2

[Dekuscrubby]

That's good to hear. I look forward to seeing the script for episode two!

[WhiteBladeZero]

Pretty good, for a start. There are a few problem-o's, though.

1) The fight scenes were OK, but you were moving the camera a bit too much. You might have to go through your replay multiple times to get the camera angles you want instead of trying to get them in one or two replay runs.

2) It would be less confusing if you focus on the character that is speaking. That way people will know who's voice is who's.

[WhiteBladeZero]

And...

3) I noticed that character symbols were still somewhat showing. Maybe cropping the video a little more might do the trick.

I hope this helps a bit. Great vid! 4/5

[mariobros65]

Not a bad start, Blazeknight...your strength is mainly getting very good camera angles for your fighting scenes. That laugh was too long...but you already pointed that out. *adjusts glasses* To sum it up, the voices are so-so but the fights are very good. 4/5 for you.

[crazy4max]

umm. it's supposed to be a joke

[mariobros65]

Maybe I'll see it as a joke eventually...

[Blackmagav]

WATCH IN HIGH QUALITY!!! everything was good but the fight seneces need a little work 8/10

[crazy4max]

Yay. I'm Bowser

[Blazeknight7]

I already Know that what did you think of the ep

[crazy4max]

Yeah it was good. But the only joke in it was not even in the script. It was in my line so I should know.

[Blazeknight7]

Um what are you talking about

[crazy4max]

the long and tiring hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha­ha

[Blazeknight7]

Well That wasn't a Joke It was just a laugh but I think It was a little to Long