Disgusting, you've made it even worse if at all possible. LOLJK. No, really, it was pretty good, maybe some grammar/spelling errors, none too jarring. At time the music was a bit loud, this is subjective, but one could say you were a bit quiet. That's about it, pretty good, oh, that picture of Crohn's Disease? That's a severe case if I ever saw one, worse than mine, and no, I'm not S**h (censorship for unneeded privacy), for readers to know. In fact, my walls of text are my signature. :)
Disgusting, you've made it even worse if at all possible. LOLJK. No, really, it was pretty good, maybe some grammar/spelling errors, none too jarring. At time the music was a bit loud, this is subjective, but one could say you were a bit quiet. That's about it, pretty good, oh, that picture of Crohn's Disease? That's a severe case if I ever saw one, worse than mine, and no, I'm not S**h (censorship for unneeded privacy), for readers to know. In fact, my walls of text are my signature. :)
TheMasterTien 11 months ago
@TheMasterTien that's S**h's intestines
PraetorSlayer2 11 months ago