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  • Thanks for the help man

  • Out of all the videos i watched this one was the most informative. Thank you very much you've pointed me in the right direction.

  • This video is mega useful for me!! :D thanks a lot... If you'd have any other tips please could you make another video?? :)

  • hit me free beats message me putting a mixtape together any good rappers

  • six haters  so far

  • Multies

    Put you down like an abandon dog*

    I dont run, always on a hansom jog * - - towards you*

    what you spit is stupid, random dialouge*

    Come and get me

    Bet you cant, Man I'm bored & thru..*

  • do the video without the music, i cant what your saying lol

  • ey bigspilly if thats a rap none of it rhymes lmao

  • Ey bro, can you make a video on how to rap from your nose, throat, chest, and Stomach.

  • nice one bro, really cool staff

  • Yo yo im the prophecy dnt piss me off ill bash you head on da concrete. Fukin make you eternally bleed. So go back were you came from you cnt face up ta diz. Ill destroy you fukin rymes ina blitz. Im from the lake. Dnt step up to da emcees here like me ill drop a bomb on yo house make you die instantly. You aint no thug ill fuk your bitch and yo moms for a couple hundred buks. im the realist dnt give dat look ill make you suck diz clenged fist. Go sucka dick like yo mom did ta me bitch. Ahaa

  • why is ur mic up on the window sill and a crutch next to the door. It looks like ur readin that shit.. do u even rap? what struggles are u even going through besides bein in a wack apartment. This is the worst video ever made. you don't need to read books to write rap lyrics. Freestylin doesn'tt help u be a better rapper. You gotta know how to rap u fucking wack mother fucker. You suck big DICK. This is the worst video EVER.

  • Were kan I get good beatts at??

  • Yee thanks bro

  • those are good tips man thanx

  • hey one thing troubling me is that should all syllables in each bar match up or be similar

    e.g. if the first bar is 15 syllables should the next bar be around 15 syllables? maybe 14 or 16

    also is it best for the previous bar to have extra syllables then the next or the other way around

    which fits better?

    thanks

  • @Acasa13 theres a pattern?? really? i kind of just umm start rhyming.. seems to work for me.. never actually tryed to match lyrics with a beat.. i just write em randomly.. hummm guess theres alot more to rap then all that o_O see above for an example of my just ummm ryhming lol

  • thanks for the tips I am on a mission to perfect my flows through freestylin and all i an say is practice!..check me out sometime maybe you could offer some personal advise!

  • I checked out his work and he's pretty good, kinda sounds like Ill Bill, but wtf? Everythings a year or two old? Are you dead or locked up or just lost your flow?

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  • real talk...

  • I like the bit about weed&beer...I gotta be str8 to really flow.. But it's different 4 evry1 :)

  • dumbass..

    Hip Hop's ||RAPPING (McIng)|| Breakdance|| DJing|| Graffity||

  • What program can to use to make a beat

  • @StiffyOs tell me what style of music you wanna make and I'll tell ya some good programs.

    FUCK THE NEW SCHOOL HIP HOP!!

  • @Whadzup100 Dark Rap

  • @StiffyOs Fruity loops home studio, or cakewalk home studio

  • YOU JUST GOTTA BUST OFF THE TOP OF THE HEAD AND JUST GO AND NOT GIVE A FUCK ... CHECK THIS DUDE OUT UNDER GOOGLE VIDEOS TYPE IN docwel freestyle unedited

  • Yo man I like ur video but I have one question tho see I got the writin part but I can't seem to stay on flow wit the beat! Everybody like wt I write but wen i go nd record I can't follow along wit the beat!wt do u think I should do ???

  • @MrStudio34 keep your bars between 10-16 syllables.

  • whats this beat calledin the begining

  • whats this beat called

  • peep my flo and comment on it

  • @freestyle374...............it­s ill freestyle

  • thanks. I got another question: would you normally find your beat first, then write the song or vice versa?

  • wat is this beat?

  • <----WHITE FEMALE RAPPER......UR HOTT

  • Thank you so much for this advice

  • This is guy is really good I learned a bit more then most of these youtube guys , like expertvillage, you really got in detailed with this thanks I'm 13 I'm trying to excell to be the greatest rapper of my age.

  • Good advice man, way better then most of these youtube guys. I like this better then expertvillage

  • thx man i will try

  • peep the ancient manuscrypts too, samarai code, etc......

  • thanks bro true reall

  • look at this fuckin idiot trying to tell somebody how to rap when he has a fucking crutch on his wall. fuckin retarded poser

  • @DickBastardFUCK yo....stfu first off what does a crutch have to do with anything? second of why you comin on this to call him a poser when he helped me an a good amount of other people. so think before you talk...or btter yet think before you let the kid with turrets syndrome make your usernamee....pffff

  • lol!!xd

    

  • can help me make song

  • Your full of it and do not have a clue hip hop is the movement,rap is yhe music and the motherf s who talk about their cars and woman just don't get it

  • Well Done. I'm Glad You Mentioned Breathing Points, That Took Me a Minute To Get Down.You Saved Alot Of Cats Time Right There. Much Respect To You. Check The Video Response.ALWAYS OPEN FOR FEED BACK

  • respect to you brotha!! (y)

  • coool mannn!!!! tht ws gr8...Amen!!! wow tht sounds like a rap :)

  • its good advise but what about adding detail to the bars like how to create vivid pictures so people can understand the theme of your rap.

    ps i know theres more to rap than putting words together

    if poetry is the answer then ill study it but the problem of not having a source sucks..........anyone..

  • Strait to the point

  • thanks man you help somewhat

  • thanks very much !

  • R.A.P. (Retards Attempting Poetry) lol i don't hate rap just thought that be funny :P

  • @ColdestPhoenix :P yeah but what about the really good lyricists like Jayz and nas?

  • hip hop is tha culture

    mc´s, dj´s, grafiti artists, and bboys

  • im the best rapper

  • great vid im goin to get started rite now

  • I love that you're white man!

    My dream is to start rapping :D ! Keep it up!

  • nah yeah Hip Hop is a whole culture real Rap music represents that culture, Pop music is what you hear on the radio, Pop Rap.

  • Correct. People think whatever on the radio is hip hop. No, its whats been paid to be played. To the execs of the music industry, music is just like potato chips or Shoes. Real music is real music if it meas something to even just one person. What plays in the radio is like the soda you buy. sugary and bright and addictive, to maintain you as the customer. anything else is "dull" or "crude"

  • i mean, does SUPERMAN THAT HOE really have anymore cultural or artistic value than Blues Clues? They're both meant to entertain partly developed minds that cant yet appreciate creative content or complex compositions of art.

  • @EscoDaGreat  AMEN.

  • @EscoDaGreat  lmfao that is the simplest yet most descriptive way to put i agree 100%

  • @EscoDaGreat Your an idiot i can name 20 rappers that have more intelligence than you you fucking ignorant idiot.

  • Hip hop is a culture originated from the music genre. Rap is a type of lyric, so rap is part of hip hop, not parallel to it. A singer sings, a rapper raps. They're both part of HIP HOP.

  • @EscoDaGreat

    Rap has differnet beats, hiphop is repetitive, rap is repetitive but less so...

    Whats the 1st song on this video?? wikid tune man

  • People improperly label HIP HOP songs as "Rap" because its the only option in the FYE or TARGET or WALMART or whatever may have you . . . but its very simple to understand. for example, R&B, SOUL, ROCK n ROLL are GENRES of music in which the artist SINGS, so, regardless of the GENRE he/she is a SINGER. HIP HOP is a GENRE in which the artist RAPS, so regardless of what side of the country he/she is from, or what he/she RAPS about, he/she is a RAPPER.

  • True, True.

  • thanks for these tips :) im able to write lyrics and iv been told by my mates that they are really good just never been able to freestyle properly usually get stuck after 20s lol hopefully i can get better now thanks :D

  • nice advice,

    check out my songs i think they alright

    i'm lookin for a beatmaker

  • check out my beats on my channel!!!peace

  • it almost sounded like u was rapping cuz da beats are on

  • cool man...

  • i knew most of this already but i appreciate this man. good

  • wat really helps for rappin is reading a dictionary no lies

  • yeah man thtz true talk

  • @Gerard300349024 haha imma try that rite now

  • @Gerard300349024 lol...actually a thesaurus would help you more...

  • @prototype81 i think knowing all words in the english vocabulary is way better than a thesaurus

  • @Gerard300349024 lol good luck learning "all" words. impossible.

  • @prototype81 nothing is impossible, impossible is a limit set by your mind but it is always reachable and over achievable

  • @Gerard300349024 humm or if u actually payed attention in school.. and read books u d have an extensive vocab already, its working for me an im only 14. lol

    in school people always call me a fool,

    for readin books an fooling the rules.

    but in the end it dont matter,

    im spittin ryhmes like the mad hatter,

    pretty soon i ll be on top,

    partying with the cream of the crop,

    bitch, im rich,

    an its payday i wrote that in like a couple minutes xD i use youtube as my writing pad..

  • @blackdawn88655 that was really shit "im spittin ryhmes like the mad hatter" WTF does that even mean?!?!

  • @Gerard300349024 no clue o_O lol i just rhyme what ever sounds god together. haha not like i really gve it much thought.. lol i dont really take writing things like this seriously.. i just lov to rhyme. an for some reason i can do that better on youtube. lol

    sides aint like i ve ever done this before xD its my first attempt ;p

    hum most i ve ever done is poetry (school an stuff) did one about christmas an ne about courage.. after that i have o expericance wat so ever with this stuff.. lol

  • @Gerard300349024 yeah, i know my rhymes aint great, but theres no reason to hate, i ve got lot to learn, guess respects just somethig im gonna have to earn, they say hip hop is dead, then why do i have all these lines floating aroud in my head. hip hop aint a career, its a way of life, bout writing words that cut like a knife. dont do it for the cash, fame is short,, goes by in a flash. we do it for the love of the game, hip hops a beast tht cant be tamed.
  • man this dude have a home made paper pop filter hahahahha

  • yeah cos they work

  • haha my bars will leave you cripple they call you MC Limpin' !!

  • This guy nows his rap

  • hip hop = the culture

    rap = the music

    wtf is this shit your saying

  • 5 stars. wow bro "read books" i didn't expect you to say that.

    good shit though, deep.

  • FAKE

  • thizzin and shrooms help me freestyle alot better, some ppl might wanna try that

  • thizzin? elaborateee lmao

  • hey it works i aint trippin haha

  • Ecstasy

  • i will kill anybody in this room below me or above me when it comes to rapping. no1 can fuck with me =] i promise you >]

    even veterans get charged

  • havent heard your skills but The Teacha could skool you no doubt

  • mister hot head over here ;) i believe you though haha most of the ppl watchin this dont knoe shit about rappin

  • I just think your being a little cocky, i'm pretty sure i could lyricaly destroy you... ;D

  • lmfao. yeah unless your eminem or jay-z himself. other than that chances of some1 that goes by the name of youngmicissoil destroying me are astronimically little :]

  • prove it then. i would lyrically fuck you up =D

  • thanks man

  • great vid bro. I learned something new today: Change my voice once in a while in my track 'cause I'll admit it... it bores people when you sound the same throughout the track.

  • in my opinion.. ???? wtf

  • you dont know shit about HipHop or Rap so STFU you wannabe!

  • dat video just start all wrong...nobody told dat mofucka dat hiphop cant be compared to rap? rap is part of hiphop...stupid mofucka tryin speak wise shit n never know HIPHOP consist of Rap,Breakdancin,Djin n Graffitt....Fuckin ignorant mothafucka...only way im talkin like dat iz cauz he tryin look like he some fuckin hiphop veteran or whatever.Bitch learn yo shit before tryin be a damn teacher on youtube.The damn comparison you makin is between rap genres...hardcore rap,gangsta rap etc...

  • well you make a vid then

    EXPERT

    you so gangsta on ya internet

  • thanks man i think i learned alot im really trying to becomea good rapper

  • good vid...covered alot....those ur beats in the background?

  • omg look at those eyes

  • who cares dick.

    look at any musicians eyes

    knob

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  • great great video..never new what half the stuff was but your step by step tips i think would help anyone,whether there in the knwledge or not

  • dawg this is so damn helpful to me aahahaha

    some day if i eva become famous ima be like

    this vid rite here influence me

    lolz

    wat else do u recommend ?

  • really nice vid. thnx man. respect.

  • really good video, thanks a lot

  • Nice video

  • pleas can someone tell me what hook,verse,and bars mean

  • hook is a chorus. verse and bars are the lyrics. andlyrics are ??? lol

  • i freestyle only...none of that writing stuff..i can freestyle good. but it neva sounds right after its written..idno why

  • In order to be a hip hop/rap artist, you need to be able to write a song. Freestyling....most producers won't want to work with you because you tend to get off topic when freestyling.

  • thnx alot bro ur a legend but theres 1 thing i need to know about hip hop like how many verses and choruses could u give me advice and keep doing what ur doing ur a top man thnk u ver much nuff respect

  • hey man, can you help me whit something how can I make beats i mean tracks beats to my song??

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