ALONE (Short Horror Film)

[animatorbug]

wow... didn't know anonymous started killing people ._. lol

[yingofh2o]

This was pretty tight! Me and some of my peps from school are working on one right now! Keep it up man, you have my support!

[TheNewVersal]

Nice work, the audio, ADR was on point and it flowed very well, but if i might add i think the protagonist could have been more intimidating. Like unhuman in appearance because even though the initial shock at the end did shake me a bit, the V for Vendetta mask didnt do anything for me.

[LongIslandPB]

absolutely amazing.. kept me on my feet the whole time.. i tried using my dslr for a short horror film, turns out they hate the dark lol. again, great vid man!

[dannylameo]

great film! loved the acting too

[EleanorEnvy]

this was surprisingly good; Great job.

[lordifrit1]

do you always carry a knife to the door?

[kindred845]

Nice work

[Alv286]

Very nice work!!...keep it up!

[mrzip48]

ANONYMUS

[ookiesoup]

I'm glad this video is free, because it sucks! At least the price is right.

[thedollmasters4eva]

At 3:26 I paused.... TOO SCARY!

[procrastinatinghw]

killer:can you spell deatthhhh?

me: D-E-A-T-H

kiler: iT WASNT A REAL QUESTION

[LukedoubleDTV]

This was really good! I loved this!!!!!

[TheItaliana111]

"fucking remote.. let me just tap it like this on my palm that'll work yep shit nope"

[TheItaliana111]

really? was this a comedy or a horror film??

[gary10789]

All I can say is well done. Excellent job every scene was professional and good. Keep up the good work! G.S.T. Productions coming soon!

[FilmingProjectIsHere]

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[badleatherlad]

nothing we haven't seen a million or more times before, sad to say

as soon as the 911 operator told the stupid girl to get into her car immediately, I KNEW there would be a masked ( *yawn* ) killer waiting in the back seat......

it's been done to death dude

[toxicGhost1231]

Guy:Did you smell death?

Me:No,but i can smell you hobo @ss

[toxicGhost1231]

I would just leave if i heard the water running...Im not a stupid idgit who will go see.

[grindkane]

Easily one of the better shorts on YouTube. Good job.

[HandicappedParking1]

Hey man, I was just wondering how you were able to get the lighting the way you did with the scenes inside the house. Was it a camera effect or the lighting in the room?

[williecager]

@HandicappedParking1 hey buddy, it was all natural. low lighting. I just color corrected it and gave it a very blue look in final cut. they key is to not shoot so dark so you have room to lower the shots to as dark as you need. and set a color tone to what you like

[HandicappedParking1]

@williecager Thanks for the timely response! Great video by the way!

[gasmask408]

V for Murder lol

[DCtrucks]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa­aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa­hh scary =(

[mani00751]

gud job man...

[RoadLineFilms]

Fantastic! I've actually had that happen with the tap randomly turning on. Great job, genuinely scary

[jamie3862]

nice movie wat camera you use..

[williecager]

@jamie3862 panasonic dvx 100. very cheap now adays but great camera still

[AlleyKate85]

Really good job! :)

[djobsession]

Great work

[Stgfre]

Great film great work!

[pf008]

This looks really good, I was surprised. And I KNEW something was gonna go across the screen at 5:18 lol

[angelofdarkness25050]

dude theres promise in your movie making abilities

[williecager]

@angelofdarkness25050 thanks alot dude, working hard and striving for greatness as a filmmaker

[JC12209]

Nice short film, well shot and directed. Good atmosphere too.

[stot2614]

Other than using stock footage and a "V" mask for the killer, the quality of this short was right on par with why I love thrillers or horror movies... the suspence. Great job!

[champsfleur]

SCARY I DIDNT EVEN WATCH THE WHOLE THING!

[matrixklo]

yeah thats smart open the door without looking trough the peekhole or saying who is it. She just pulled a white girl move, dumb ass should have been white.

[lildrummerboy65]

Ha wasn't bad at all! Coulda used a better mask though haha

[psychicsumit]

THe V for Vendetta mask...!!

[gsimon123]

Very nice!

[Mbash93]

This was done well, but the use of a Guy Fawkes mask was probably a mistake given its preexisting connections.

[covinfox]

Nice job!!!! Thumb up for you.... hope you will like mine, too. If you do, please subscribe me. Thank you!!! ;)

[SpencerBoechler]

You guys are great! I love the acting and the story reminds me a little bit of the beginning of scream 1!

[turquoiseguy]

The acting and directing are superb! The story itself is incredibly cliche and boring.

[rachiebabeLOVitx]

wow that is amazing i love love love it wow wow wow thats all i can say

[NinjaCookies7]

That random moment where you're not even paying attention that the t.v just went off you're just like "OMG I HAVE THE SAME REMOTE!" Good job guys ;D

[nailva14]

that was good: ) what equiptment did you use, like for the lighting.?

[crazytheo100]

amazing fair play:)



[kailarcr123]

omg this look like a real movie you guys are great actors

[kidnickels17]

are you kidding me? :\ this one was liked that much? search other horrow short films on here. lol... this was not that good... im not saying it was bad. but it really was not that good. no surprises. i mean, i called 'look behind you you dumb bimbo' as soon as she opened the car door.... solid acting, bad story. usually its the other way around :P

[MoominAlanna]

I'm going to send this to Denise Vlogs, hopefully it will increase the views on this :)

[williecager]

@MoominAlanna thanks alot much respect

[defianceofauthority]

Camera work is ok, a little shakey when she was watching the movie. Other wise, the story line is not very original...can you say "Scream much?". and serious with the Guy Fawks mask? you could have opted for a ski mask or sometype of scar or deformation. That would have been a better ending...

[Thylovely4you]

o man that was pretty awesome, you are very talented, thankyou

[ScreamHillPictures]

That was so good, scared me!

[rocketpro22]

That was absolutely awesome!

[hanjo9]

this was good



[victor199588]

i really liked this lol

[filmchef88]

how did u manage to light up the really dark scenes?

[rgga]

Nice legs girl!

[Sephitron]

Really dug the vibe of this film, reminded me of the original Scream kind of, especially the music. Where did you get the music from? Royalty free?

[619alexfarr]

wow,you really know how to make a great horror movie!

[FlippyKrueger]

I just wanted Monoxide Child to jump out and stab her to death.

[MISSINGROGERHOWARTH]

Great job...It would be nice if you could help all those B-Movies out. This was Hollywood quality, You should really consider seeking a future in filming, and your partner should try her hand out in acting,and again great job, I really enjoyed it=))).

[DETHxWOLF]

takin a sick day off of school so im alone in the house. I'm at 2:45 and I'm already excited and scared out of my mind.

[jecamartinez]

great job! the cinematography and the editing looks very professional and the acting's really good as well :)

[shandb9]

LOVE IT :)

[ryanfiki]

Yeah right when she got by the car i could already predict that the guy would be in the backseat. But otherwise very good.

[LoveHateAndSerenity]

yall know that after i heard that voice i would have been right out that door

[DeathIIV]

nnniiiceee

[BornInspired]

TUrn the fucking lights on

[MISSINGROGERHOWARTH]

@BornInspired Tuning the lights on will make it easier for anyone to see where she is. She had a better chance by staying in the dark. She just forgot to check the car before entering, but then again, they had to make it a movie somehow=).

[insanehard1]

well done, i like it a lot, i just didnt like the "scream" phone thingy and also at 06:23 the phone is still ringing when the 911 operator started to speak...otherwise, great job!

[destaniofhearts]

Ending = awesome! :D Well done!

[spp41]

Very similar to Scream's opening, but good job. A smart person would have checked the back seat though, just sayin

[TimCollinsATL]

This is fantastic, great job guys

[UnknownShadow360]

I wouldve looked in the back seat

[WritersRow]

Awesome guys! Wow! Are you guys in Atlanta?

[williecager]

@WritersRow NAH DUDE WE ARE IN LOS ANGELES, THANKS ALOT FOR THE LOVE

[stivaro]

Good flick man! I have to say though...at 5:46...I was a little disappointed just because that's been used so much in so many films.Other than that, really good! :)

[HungerCultFilms]

Very well done. Great atmosphere :)

[MrTntw]

Very nicely shot. I make films and by far this is one of the better shot shorts i've seen.

[khamaji09]

FK SHE IS CUTE

[feroz1212011]

nice one...

[breepizzarolls420]

What if the killer picked the wrong car to get into?

[remc0s]

I don't get it

So first V liberates Britain from Adam Sutler and his Norsefire Party and now he kills girls that are home alone?

LOL

Liked it. It's creepy

[princecyril1]

Holy shit

[princecyril1]

Maybe some people just dont like horrorl

[LostinOz24]

amazing

[NamtabCola]

Absolutely horrifying. Well done!

[NInjaEmoPandaDanii]

as soon as the TV cut off i would have took off running out the front door...lololol tf? she should have learned from that movie she was watching! xDD

[NinjaPoptartX]

Loved the camera techniques and cinematography. The thing i liked the most about the Directors style, was the shots using the stair columns to act like "prison bars" surrounding the victim, it almost emphasizes "entrapment."

The one thing I would like to point out however, is that the cliched idea of "Checking your back seat" is a bit overused. There could of been a multiple amount of alternate, original endings the director could of chosen, but apart from that it was excellent. Good job!

[Cerenok9]

its 6:59 and im too scared to go on! i hope she doesnt die and i hope theres no pop out bits ahead D: great film btw :))

[MightySerbianFighter]

damn its 2:41 am here nad im watching this with all lights off.this is awesome!

[fundip3221]

ok that was freakin amazing!! Awesome job

[hannahbunny12]

GREAt JOB !! :)

[Grizzlywolf9]

Nice work on this short film! Pretty creepy & scary. Also, lead actress does a very good job in the film!

[TheMelodyLPS]

Omg Scary

[MitsukoStudios]

Hi,

I really enjoyed this video. The acting, camera work, directing, etc. was all great. You really built the tension well.

I'm actually arranging a horror film festival in the UK. I think this film would make an excellent addition to it. Please can you let me know if you'd be interested in being shown?

[Mackloutz]

Pretty good. though i thought the beginning was a little cheesy. Great Climax.

[qdude101]

ahhhhhh!!! well no der when she gets in the car and its not showing the back seat until SHE looks there but awesome! great acting, nice shots, too! i read somewhere in the comments u have a dolly 2 do those shots! it looks amazing!!!!

[ArcticTrees]

lol if she was scared to be in the house alone why would she be watching a scary movie :P but great film man :D

[beldonr]

Awesome man! Really enjoyed that.

[slm22186]

I really enjoyed this. I think you all done a good job. I usually don't like shorts but I enjoyed this one. Thanks for posting.

[DeViLiShDaYbReAk]

wow...just wow...i love the direction,the cinematography,acting...keep it up !!!!

[Man1acProductions]

It was okkkakyyyyy..... coulda been scarier (:

[whitewolf200]

what kind of editing program did you use?

[metalpuro90]

Nice! Really good! I liked the end :P

[AsOurSocietyFalls]

this was really good o;

[xpinay4lifex]

this was really goood!! ^_^ awesome!!!! Good job!!

[DavidZYLoh]

ARE YOU USING A MAC

[scipiomask]

Excellent, excellent! I'm going to be making a short horror film soon, and looking at this was perfect inspiration!

[NewEraTrackz]

Wow starting from 6:13 the scene becomes really similar to a scene i had seen in the movie called " Legal Tender"

[TheSarahW18]

I liked this. My theory is that the two people who disliked this don't appreciate different cultures of horror, a.k.a African American, but this was by far way better than a lot of caucasion horror flicks I see on here. Good job! I'd love to collaborate.

[emmatheenglishmuffin]

fantastic, fell of me chair at that ending!

[jaimereyes2013]

wEll done



[JavierSolera]

So scary, very good film. Only fail: Anonymous mask. Make it look a joke. But I liked.

[MrGraham710]

Editing was ok not saying my is any better lol what soft were you use

[tonymontana2112]

isn't that the mask from that movie V for vendetta? the video was ok could have been a bit better not so scary but good try...

[BrainInSkull]

This was really effective. A well executed simple idea and your lead was refreshingly natural. Nice job to all.

[williecager]

hey, thanks alot. No budget I built a dolly and decided to put it to use.

[bruvvamoff]

@williecager How did you build your own dolly?

[TimeGrigsby]

Very well done! What was your budget, if you don't mind my asking? Cinematography and acting was great. Nice pacing, too. My only critique would be that your use of (seemingly) stock sound effects did not do your film justice.

[twilightproductiontv]

lol just love the "halloween 2007" clip. great job btw.

[bruvvamoff]

Ha, I thought it said directed by Daniel Radcliffe.

[ringgoldrox]

I get a knife when someone rings the doorbell too. I think it's just because I live in a bad neighborhood though. xD

[SOLE1PRODUCTIONS]

fuck i had to close my eyes and im a guy haha

[CalebHoernschemeyer]

Great cinematography, decent shots, but horribly cliche story. Altogether it was pretty good though,

[darkconceptionfilms]

Wow, one of my favorite short independent films. Very well done. I hope our next actual short film could be as good as yours. What type of camera did you use?

[williecager]

@darkconceptionfilms Hey I used Panasonic DVX 100, No Hd ha

[jlopez412]

@darkconceptionfilms Could you please tell me what the remote control in the seat meant? I'm a little confused.

[timothyw98]

@jlopez412 I think the remote control was to to give out the sense somebody else had picked it up, she'd obviously put it down

[darkconceptionfilms]

@jlopez412 I never said remote control seat, what do you mean?

[TonyMcKayTV]

ohh! creepy looking killer! that was gr8! very well shot and looked really professional! :)

[junickfilms]

"i hate being in this house alone"

Thats why all the lights are off

[herpmorphs]

Good shots, music went well, built tension really well editing sweet, shame your in US could have used you for a feature im writing lol!

[93Kellina]

WOW great editing and use of garageband. Its funny how the title of your film is the same as mine. We are actually having a film festival tomorrow. your film would have won ;)

[williecager]

@93Kellina thanks but I doubt it would have one, Theres no story in My short just good filming and editing. the point was to just test out some new equipment thats all good luck with your festival, and thanks again

[crazyboyfourth]

@williecager Actually I thought the story was very good!!! It scared me! I had to fast forward and mute it at some parts!

[splattergirl72]

I really liked this... I was holding my breath.Your girlfriend's acting was very believable. to hell with going into the garage, though.Garages are creepy,lol.

[TheChrisProducer]

Hey I used that same song in my montage but good dolly shots and camera angles

[joshuakeefe]

I feel like a wus. Jumped once when she was going to the front door and the guy walked by. Good job! If this only involved the two of you, this was a high-quality big-screen worthy production. How did u film the scenes with such little light? Is there a special trick or advanced camera?

[1bobo1]

I like how realistic the emergency phone call was

[MEareCAT]

Amazing. Proffesional level acting, brilliant editing and soundtrack. Terrifying :)

[wimbledongirl]

Man this is really REALLY better than the new stupid hollywood movies!! awesome work!!! really scary and greaaaaat acting"""!!!! <3

[YellowTurtle13]

Fantastic! Great acting and very realistic dialogue for a short film. Surprisingly scary!

[tripletreatkearston]

I'm still shaking and my heart is still pounding! Great job! :)

[RiddimFingaz]

Great Job!!

[LiquidProductions07]

On my youtube channel i've just uploaded Part One of Six short film/ experimental film series from UK we're making.. would love to have some feedback we're new to this and are inspired from videos such as these :D good luck also with other videos you creat keep up the good work!! x

[blameist]

I thought it was interesting why haven't you made a longer version? The end kind of creep me out a little which is a laugh for me that doesn't come often with short films.

[MEareCAT]

5:19 almost gave me a heart attack! :@ Amazing short horror, one of the best on YouTube. The camera work is outstanding !!

[xPrincessJazx]

Woah..Best made horror film on here... I wasnt expecting that at the end and I got freaked lol x

[filth69ify1]

What The Fuck? Was That The V For Vendetta Guy in The Car? lol

[Mshoneybunny80]

i like it...brilliant!

[Mshoneybunny80]

i like it...brilliant1

[dan51978]

Ha ha...Good Movie. I like the build up. I didn't like the voice changer part. But other than that, very well done.

[vanishy0urself]

Oh yes, and one other thing: I want to know what's the music for this, did you take it from somewhere or did you compose it yourself... especially the ending theme... if you took it from somewhere, please tell me where, if you composed it, upload the ending theme PLEASE it's AWESOME.

[vanishy0urself]

LOL at the beginning I was like "hey why is she watching this in the dead of night" and then the rest of the short film happened. It actually scared me somewhat, which is nice. The ending caught me off-guard, I so did not expect that! Good job!

Still looking for something which can rival season 1 of Higurashi No Naku Koro Ni though... this is good and scary, but it's not HNNKN levels of scary. :P

[williecager]

@vanishy0urself Thanks for the Love. this short was something I put together in a few hours trying to Test out My Dolly and some camera angles. just me and My girlfriend who is the lead female actress. but So Glad you Enjoyed it. and thank you for the wonderful Comments. BEFORE DAWN BREAKS Feature film Coming Soon

[plentyxxx]

enjoyed watching your video

[williecager]

@plentyxxx thank ya kindly

[11poketrainer]

@williecager wow this is amazing! It's an inspiration to someone like me who wants to become a Horror Creator and Director! It reminded me of a "Scream" Intro!

[martintroy]

good camera work. keep it up!

[BigGunPromo]

Not Bad Fellas!

[Floydtvdotcom]

LmAo @eazybreezy45 but this was really good, i enjoyed it a lot

[eazybreezy45]

i was more scared in the 9 mins of watching this then the hour i spent watching Paranormal Activity. good shit.