Well First Erich, i must tell you that i am happy to see you doing some work on your own, but i have to give you some honest critic, i didn't like it, i find it to long, i think it could have been shorter than 7minutes, i didn't feel the conections between the actors,the guy didn't really play his charecter and i think you should spent a lil more time develop the female charecter and tell us some more about her back story, i must u had some nice lighting done there.
Well Erich if you want some honest critizisim ill have to say that there was little to nothing to keep the audiance interested. To much driving and zero opening dialouge made you feel like it was just going to be driving and then more driving. BUT i do see what you were going for here as far as the mood and style of the video so on that you did grand.Ill look forward to seein more ^___^
I think the driving establishes a lot about her, the setting, the style and mood... and really puts the audience in there. I do appreciate the feedback, and the next one will be up within a month!
Love the Chopin
kmf91604 3 years ago
that apartment is very popular for filming.
ripking 3 years ago
Well First Erich, i must tell you that i am happy to see you doing some work on your own, but i have to give you some honest critic, i didn't like it, i find it to long, i think it could have been shorter than 7minutes, i didn't feel the conections between the actors,the guy didn't really play his charecter and i think you should spent a lil more time develop the female charecter and tell us some more about her back story, i must u had some nice lighting done there.
ForesightFilmsING 3 years ago
Thanks for the feedback dude. But c'mon - you didn't feel the connections in Pulp Fiction! Somethin' wrong with your connections! Just playing ;)
erichkemp 3 years ago
Well Erich if you want some honest critizisim ill have to say that there was little to nothing to keep the audiance interested. To much driving and zero opening dialouge made you feel like it was just going to be driving and then more driving. BUT i do see what you were going for here as far as the mood and style of the video so on that you did grand.Ill look forward to seein more ^___^
darthraive 3 years ago
I think the driving establishes a lot about her, the setting, the style and mood... and really puts the audience in there. I do appreciate the feedback, and the next one will be up within a month!
erichkemp 3 years ago
Too much driving. Aside from that, not bad.
777Nny 3 years ago
Is this Nir? Thanks dude - Yeah, I had a ton of driving footage, I think I kept it from being overly-indulgent
erichkemp 3 years ago
Yeah it's me. Try more camera movements, too. 2 shots, 3 shots, over the shoulder.
Show off what we learned in class. You got is hand held to it's easy to move the camera A LOT.
777Nny 3 years ago
3-shots with only two actors, you sir are a visionary!
erichkemp 3 years ago
Well you can get another actor...
777Nny 3 years ago