not too bad, just a couple of things that i noticed:
1.) the high notes aren't exactly there, most are falling slightly flat. Would reccomend taking the tenor approach to them and think of them as a half step higher than what they actually are.
2.) don't over perform it, the giant arm actions aren't needed. The song is about grief, then hope ("here it was they lit the flame"), then grief again ("don't ask me what your sacrifice was for")
3.) watch your vowels and keep it supported and lifted
Happy to have heard from you, and better to have listened to you! You've an amazing future ahead. Please, keep me in the loop of what's likely to be a very illustrious career! Think Mr. Price would have wanted to be your coach!
too much movement. seems like you don't control your arms and hands. and why soo many steps? going forward, coming back then going right and to the left. It really makes the audiance lose their focus.
You should try hard being more still. It will also improve your vocal performance.
Nevertheless, the performance is just above the average.
P.S. try to hold "Oh my friends my friends" a a bit longer and the reaction will be wilder ;)
Thanks for the critique. I'd definitely rather do too much than not enough. I get what you're saying though because I agree with living in stillness and being grounded when delivering something like this, but by no means were the steps of my discretion, but were of that of the student director who blocked this @ the time. Anyway, with this performance being well over a year ago, growth has occurred and should I perform this again, I'll keep that in mind. :-)
Great work man everything but the higher parts were awesome
righteousbeachbum6 1 year ago
@righteousbeachbum6 thanks! Cant believe that was 4 years ago. I sing this song SOO much better now. Lol.
bmkfan 1 year ago
Shake the haters off.
Some of my best performances were in ETS and hell that was 10years ago and when I taught there in 2005
dclandrover 1 year ago
pretty good. but you should stick to rap music
righteousbeachbum6 1 year ago
@righteousbeachbum6 Seriously? why even go out of your way to post garbage like that - you should be ashamed.
raddwest 1 year ago
@righteousbeachbum6 wow is your name racist! --________--
emor3000 1 month ago
You should have a career in musicals! Very moving version.
lisaannejane2 2 years ago
yes no more!!!! sing eric!!!!
jayrizzle09 2 years ago
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not too bad, just a couple of things that i noticed:
1.) the high notes aren't exactly there, most are falling slightly flat. Would reccomend taking the tenor approach to them and think of them as a half step higher than what they actually are.
2.) don't over perform it, the giant arm actions aren't needed. The song is about grief, then hope ("here it was they lit the flame"), then grief again ("don't ask me what your sacrifice was for")
3.) watch your vowels and keep it supported and lifted
psymon17 2 years ago
VERY Nice! Even better than the musical performance I know!
Nark15 3 years ago
what kind of voice and how many octaves should someone have in order too sing this song..it looks quite difficult
endofmoney 3 years ago
you should have about 2 octaves..low A to high G
guitarherokevin 2 years ago
黒人がマリウスやんなよ
chloebinochu 3 years ago
Wonderful Job! What a great voice! I think you are better than that famous guy, Michael B.
mmcrow2897 3 years ago
Happy to have heard from you, and better to have listened to you! You've an amazing future ahead. Please, keep me in the loop of what's likely to be a very illustrious career! Think Mr. Price would have wanted to be your coach!
Indigo1045 3 years ago
too much movement. seems like you don't control your arms and hands. and why soo many steps? going forward, coming back then going right and to the left. It really makes the audiance lose their focus.
You should try hard being more still. It will also improve your vocal performance.
Nevertheless, the performance is just above the average.
P.S. try to hold "Oh my friends my friends" a a bit longer and the reaction will be wilder ;)
sithenor 3 years ago
Thanks for the critique. I'd definitely rather do too much than not enough. I get what you're saying though because I agree with living in stillness and being grounded when delivering something like this, but by no means were the steps of my discretion, but were of that of the student director who blocked this @ the time. Anyway, with this performance being well over a year ago, growth has occurred and should I perform this again, I'll keep that in mind. :-)
bmkfan 3 years ago
Such a beautiful voice. You've got a great range. Keep it up :) xx
vickiepineapple 3 years ago
thank u so much! i really appreciate it.
bmkfan 3 years ago
holy!
you are amazing!!
keep up the good work! your acting is also awesome.
:D
SingingAngel11 3 years ago
I'm an actor first, then a singer, and there were some interesting and odd acting choices.... but your voice is top notch man!!!
bradythed 4 years ago
yessssssss, u betta sing it boy!!! awesome! and mad u ain't tell me bout this clip, hadda find it from some1 else, smh. i see how it be, lol.
MontAKALamont07 4 years ago
yeah.... keep tryin'!
alissssse 4 years ago
nice job man.
jpg0901 4 years ago