I WANT TO BE IN THE STORY!!!!!!! LOL! but i LOVED this. this one is the best one yet. me and my friends are writing a story about b5 to. but i dont think its as good as yours. BUT I STILL WANT TO BE IN THE STORY!!!!!! LOL
aww thanks and im sorry im actually working on the ending to this story right now but be on the look out for cast calls and im pretty sure your story is gonna be good:)
See, I knew Devin wasn't Patrick's kid or Richelle. that little bitch. please excuse my laguage. Aw, I fell in love with Patrick and Mia's part. I almost cried. I feel bad for Asia, but I think Carnell's gonna find a way to make it to the wedding. I love it
AYAYAYA!!!!!! -claps-
breakdancer332 2 years ago
i'm late as heck..but loved it sis.
cRaZiGiRl2012 2 years ago 2
thnx u do know there r more chapters to this story nd i already started a new story..the one with you and Bryan:)
Ulukau808 2 years ago
I WANT TO BE IN THE STORY!!!!!!! LOL! but i LOVED this. this one is the best one yet. me and my friends are writing a story about b5 to. but i dont think its as good as yours. BUT I STILL WANT TO BE IN THE STORY!!!!!! LOL
INLOVEWITHB5 2 years ago 2
aww thanks and im sorry im actually working on the ending to this story right now but be on the look out for cast calls and im pretty sure your story is gonna be good:)
Ulukau808 2 years ago
omqq i knew dat kid wasnt Patricks
i had a feelinqq Mia and Patrick was qonna qet back toqather aqain
bepk18 2 years ago 2
lol check ouit chpt 23 itz out:)
Ulukau808 2 years ago
omg now i really wanna kill richelle
"im sorry richelle you are not the mother"
i wanna see maury say thyat 1 day now thats gonna b a crazy show
funniest line ever :life without you is like carnell fasting for a day
clumsy bryan
aww i wanted asia to be in it
I loved it
myzippy2 2 years ago
lol i know right id so watch that episode lol and i know eveytime people mention that line i laugh at and im the one who wrote it lol..so dumb lol
Ulukau808 2 years ago
lol i do that too
myzippy2 2 years ago
lol
Ulukau808 2 years ago
hahaha maury thats my fav show. i just love seein girls clawing each othe eyes out xD
breakdancer332 2 years ago
OMG! Ur killin me softly. Dis was jus 2 wonderful! Richelle is crazy and Devin is funny. Ur so talented! keep it up!
cocooil 2 years ago
aww thanks:)
Ulukau808 2 years ago
See, I knew Devin wasn't Patrick's kid or Richelle. that little bitch. please excuse my laguage. Aw, I fell in love with Patrick and Mia's part. I almost cried. I feel bad for Asia, but I think Carnell's gonna find a way to make it to the wedding. I love it
5 stars
MissKellyBreeding196 2 years ago
lol girl itz okay we all have colorful languages lol..and thanks:)
Ulukau808 2 years ago
AMAZING=] I LOVEEEDD IT!!!!LOL!I know what's gonna happen to asia...well atleast I have a guess!
Patrickownz4life 2 years ago
I knew you would becuhz right now im wishing i was you in the story lol..and ok dnt give out your guess cuhz it could be right and ruin it for others
Ulukau808 2 years ago
HAHAHAHA! I love this chapter too !!!!! 5/5
popoil9663 2 years ago
Aww poor asia.
She got no one.I hope Carnell come out soon.
5/5*
Kulkat98 2 years ago
loved it specially pat's and mia's pt!!
jupiture8 2 years ago
yeah thats my fav part too:)
Ulukau808 2 years ago
noooo it was gettin good
and pat and mia got baq together....YES
Lol loved it
quietchick36 2 years ago
OMG I loved it (as usual)...I'm so happy for Patrick and Mia...poor Asia has to sit out
prettypink2011 2 years ago
I Knew It Wasnt His But I Thought It Would Be Other Man But Thats His Nephew Omfg Sge Did Rong But Atleas There Toghter
Hope Nellz Get Out Of Jail SOON
Good Job Sis
ilovb5andu 2 years ago
I KNEW IT WASN'T HIS!!!! THAT LITTLE HOE! excuse my alphabet.
lol carnell fasting for a day
5/5
luuvz14576 2 years ago
Omg Cant Belive Richelle Thats Just Wrong! Atleast ItBrought Mia And Pat Together. I loved It 5 Stars
angelasweet3 2 years ago
omg i love it
5 stars
i love love love love it
:D
CillaGirl94 2 years ago