not all that great, but nice try. It would have helped if it had more of a plot. You had a nice variety of camera angles in there but the ending was predictable at best and there really wasn't anything that interesting going on. Nice try though and good luck this spring! :)
Have you watched a short film? The Winner's of the Insomnia Film Festival had sigificantly less plot than this. :) The fact that there is plot at all is quite impressive, as well as trying to be interesting. Also, if you notice the way the film is shot the ending isn't supposed to be a surprise. The moment you walk into the 'party' and you see her face there's SUPPOSED to be that moment of "He's going to lick her!" which most people have gotten. But, to each his own. It was actually highly rated
yeah, that was the rule :P We'll be entering Insomnia again this year with a whole set of new rules, we'll see if we can manage to actually win something this time!
haha not bad, dutch angle could have been slightly more distinctive, other than that camera work good. killer party tho, haha yall really rocked out the place
it could have been much shorter, and still just as good though. I think the soda cans went on a little too long, but it was nice how everything built up to that one moment at the end. it definately had a satisfying ending.
ours in baseball girl
let me know your opinion, and if it has your vote. :)
Great job! I can't believe how far behind schedule Apple is. They tell us "no later than 9 EST" then push their own deadline back a couple of days. Check out our entry: "TO PAINT A BRIGHTER FUTURE"
Great idea, funny ending. Good job incorporating the elements into your story, too. A lot of the videos I've seen on YouTube incorporate them in some very awkward ways.
Check out my entry, The Daily Grind, if you have time.
This is the best of any that I've seen this year! I might be biased because I helped with it, but really. Quality, sound, simplicity, all better than the others. Enjoy!
a pretty weird idea, but funny for sure :P
kadryn 3 years ago
not all that great, but nice try. It would have helped if it had more of a plot. You had a nice variety of camera angles in there but the ending was predictable at best and there really wasn't anything that interesting going on. Nice try though and good luck this spring! :)
Dedoroff 3 years ago
Have you watched a short film? The Winner's of the Insomnia Film Festival had sigificantly less plot than this. :) The fact that there is plot at all is quite impressive, as well as trying to be interesting. Also, if you notice the way the film is shot the ending isn't supposed to be a surprise. The moment you walk into the 'party' and you see her face there's SUPPOSED to be that moment of "He's going to lick her!" which most people have gotten. But, to each his own. It was actually highly rated
marshzd 3 years ago
wow dedoroff, wow...
How many 3 minute short films have you seen and just how much plot do you expect to get from that short of time anyway?
Sure, it's not perfect. There are things I'd love to add or change, but the fact is, we only had 24 hours to produce it.
I think it's got a great punchline that satisfies anyone looking for a laugh.
Even the feedback on here has overall been good.
Bradidimus 3 years ago
it sucks insomnia 2008 got posponed till after the holidays.
pencap1528 3 years ago
haha pretty good
fingrlesFreund 3 years ago
hahaha, Robin Darjeeling is such a bad name in general, but them's the rules huh? :]
thisissylvain 3 years ago
yeah, that was the rule :P We'll be entering Insomnia again this year with a whole set of new rules, we'll see if we can manage to actually win something this time!
Bradidimus 3 years ago
I'm actually getting together a team this year also. (year, or next week more precisly).
Good luck :]
thisissylvain 3 years ago
So Insomnia was canceled for tomorrow at the last minute. Way to fail Apple.
Bradidimus 3 years ago
funny
backplayer2010 3 years ago
ha ha that was good. I liked the CTR ring slip in ha.
magnum10181 3 years ago
what video camera was used in this film?
prodigywookie 4 years ago
Panasonic AG-DVX100B
Bradidimus 4 years ago
awsome i love it
topherillvill 4 years ago
haha not bad, dutch angle could have been slightly more distinctive, other than that camera work good. killer party tho, haha yall really rocked out the place
supafly189 4 years ago
omg lol that was the best movie is this film festival supposed to be only ironic videos? this was really the best
doctorjew4 4 years ago
People can check out our video called "Perpetual Wake" on my profile. We submitted it for the festival.
DarthBotto 4 years ago
check out our new video. We made a commercial for the Aquafresh Extreme Clean Scene competition called "Alternatives"
Bradidimus 4 years ago
This is seriously the best video I've ever seen!
magulongbuto 4 years ago 3
Hey everybody, don't forget to rate our film on Apple's Site before November 9th!
Thanx
Bradidimus 4 years ago
haha this one was cute.
kandy07 4 years ago
Funny stuff. Check out "Mr. Radio Tuner" if you get a chance.
CrazyGorillaFace 4 years ago
Wow! Thanks for 2 1/2 minutes of suspense and a couple seconds of tongue. I love the movie guys. And wish you the best.
Moroni1221 4 years ago 2
Right on. Pretty cool.
Earman07 4 years ago
Great job! Good luck!
RoseBuddy929 4 years ago
nice work
niceguydav 4 years ago
Very well made, VERY FUNNY, I really hope you guys win, way more professional than most of the others It's yours!!!
smancy15 4 years ago 2
haha, that was the best!
cactiglb 4 years ago
Oh, no...our video wont play in the Apple Gallery. Is anyone else having this problem?
Filman777 4 years ago
sorry, on my post below I meant to say ours *is* "Baseball Girl"
and as I mentioned before, your shots are very well planned and edited...
good job!
kelleykatz 4 years ago
wow,
that was really well shot
and well edited too.
it could have been much shorter, and still just as good though. I think the soda cans went on a little too long, but it was nice how everything built up to that one moment at the end. it definately had a satisfying ending.
ours in baseball girl
let me know your opinion, and if it has your vote. :)
kelleykatz 4 years ago
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was hilarious!!! Check out ours: "Salted Lettuce" and please comment and vote for us on the Apple website. :)
amanda644 4 years ago
Great job! I can't believe how far behind schedule Apple is. They tell us "no later than 9 EST" then push their own deadline back a couple of days. Check out our entry: "TO PAINT A BRIGHTER FUTURE"
Filman777 4 years ago
Wow, this was excellent! Definitely among one of the top Insomnia 2007 videos I've seen so far! Very funny. xD Good luck!
sweetangel1927 4 years ago
haha very nice. go check mine out.
eriinmariie2010 4 years ago
Was anybody able to rate the films on apple yet? I checked and couldn't figure out how.
kungfupimpslap 4 years ago
they haven't updated their site yet, still waiting patiently...
Bradidimus 4 years ago
Definitely among the top of the top; been watching these since Sunday. Drop on by and check my entry.
mosjeffrinitely 4 years ago
hey guys this was funny! I like it a lot! Check out our entry and good luck!
moviemaker57 4 years ago
sorry i already licked all the grand prizes, haha great job guys
1bheckman 4 years ago
good acting - hilarious ending. Check out our submission CHECKMATE.
atgroundZero 4 years ago
Well done. I felt it was very well shot. Great tackle scene. Dig the CTR intro. First thing I picked up on:)
cameronjlee 4 years ago
not the remote :(
niceguydav 4 years ago
Great idea, funny ending. Good job incorporating the elements into your story, too. A lot of the videos I've seen on YouTube incorporate them in some very awkward ways.
Check out my entry, The Daily Grind, if you have time.
McrawfishMAC 4 years ago 2
Nice.
Check our Insomnia vid. Check our channel.
Its called "Throwing It All Away"
BandZProductions 4 years ago
Glad everybody is enjoying our work! Thanx!
It was awesome to be able to participate in this event! If you like our video don't forget to vote for it starting Friday on Apple's website!
Bradidimus 4 years ago
Very funny!
DPEnt 4 years ago
dude that was good, made my high school one look lame....but we will see who wins soon!...haha its mine
Archangle 4 years ago
haha, love it!
thegato 4 years ago
AWESOME!!! vote for us this FRIDAY 10/19!
Lorisha4 4 years ago
This is your best one yet!!!!!
chelo818 4 years ago
great short film,
i like the name robin darjeeling
im guessing a refrence to the darjeeling limited?
myfakeusername 4 years ago
robin darjeeling was one of the elements (you chose 3 of the 10) required by Apple to prove you made the film within the 24 hour period.
marshzd 4 years ago
what a cock block.
visiblepulse 4 years ago
Wow. This is the second best one I've seen so far. I totally hope you guys get second place.
drj000 4 years ago
lol this was great
mrLoganex 4 years ago
This is the best of any that I've seen this year! I might be biased because I helped with it, but really. Quality, sound, simplicity, all better than the others. Enjoy!
marshzd 4 years ago
Hehe, he licks her....!
derekclair 4 years ago
Yes it is now yours.
jacobthorup 4 years ago