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  • Continued---I've got a roof over my head, food to eat, and a kind and loving mother. Every day I wake up thinking that maybe I will find something else to motivate me, to keep me going. And guess what? I've found the friend of a lifetime. Her name is Alana, and I would gladly give up my life to protect her. The point being, all of the people who are stuck in a bad situation, just remember that it always gets better sooner or later. Mark my word.

  • I understand how hard it is to have your father leave you all alone, I figured that out when I was 4. My dad beat my mom with a tire iron along the left side of her body, and threw a frying pan full of hot water at me and my little brother;I still can see the mark of the burn on my back, and I'm 13. But I've learned to live in the present. In almost anyone's eyes my life would seem imperfect; for some people, they can't even start to imagine it. But I believe my life is pretty darn good.

  • Airplane333, that is an extremely sad story. Are you still here or have you left this planet?

  • it's ok alot of people feel like this i had a daddy who left with my "brother".He left when my mom was prenet i think.I have a daddy now though you are not alone God and all angles wathch over you

  • i'm sorry. And I think we all must overcome this feeling. So we can live a good life. And let's be better and do better then these stupid men.

  • 3yrs-daddy hurts mommy and me with bruises ..

    3yrs-dad leaves .

    5yrs-almost get raped by him .

    7yrs-he tells me he loves his computer then he will ever love me .

    71/2yrs-he breaks my arm .

    8yrs-he is touching me a lot ..

    10yrs-My mom took me to his house & 1wk in hes having woman meet me already and i would cry in the night to the strange sound they made ..

    11yrs-first time he said 'i love you' in the past 3 years ..

    13yrs-I'm stronger now and said 'Bye Mike' for my last words .

    <|3

  • I've never had a dad.... and I dont have a mom.... Im 15... and all i have left really... are a few friends... *sighs* I know how it feels to feel like parents just... dont give a rats flippin tail about you... and ive felt like its been my fault

  • I have a father but he is never there for me and never told me he loved, care, was proud of me. Why did you leave? My parents split when I was born and only seen him once when I was 5. I wonder if you every really did love me.

  • i have have a dad but he was never there for me .he never told me he was pruod of me and he nver cared he always loved my one sister more out of all 4 of his children including me......well my parents are devorced and he wonders why i dont go to see him hmmmm i wonder when he will get the hint that i hate him

  • Im srry i dont know my daddy it hurts to say that......

  • what can i say is i miss him....

  • its funny how i never really knew my dad but if i ever see a girl with her dad, i start to feel really left out and lonely knowing mine died when i was 1

    its funny how i dont remember anything about my dad but when my mom told me stories about him i felt like he was right there with me listening too

    its funny how i used to think i was the only kid in the world who didnt have a dad, but i find out about all those who can relate to me..

    isnt it funny how I WANT MY DADDY BACK!?!

  • reading this makes me cry im so sorry and for everybody else they shouldnt have left us. i would say i know how it feels but i dont, instead my mom left me and my dad stayed by my side. but instead at 3 years old i only wanted my mother and she was never around for me so she just drove away.

  • crazy how a father can do this , it is definitely easier to become a father ; then to be one. //: David Smith is my father - he's in prison as of now .. so whats that tell you?

  • When I read this ou loud i cry.

  • @Theheterohomo My dads the same but I dnt see him anymore. He left when I was 10 and I never saw him again. So he left on 7/14/09 and I saw him again on 10/29/11 which is today. Hope it goes well:/

  • you know what after reading some of these comments i realise how lucky i am to have both my parents even tho i dont always realise it, thanks for opening my eyes and i just hope and pray that life gets better for everyone who is struggling to find the good in this world

  • @zoegibson10 Im happy u have both parents. And I'm happy reading these comments and watching this video made u realize how much they mean to u. Thank you.

  • my daughter won't ever have her biological father and it kills me to know that

  • my parents arnt together and he choose drugs and beer over me i wonder if he really dose love me

  • aww my dad died in war before i was born.. i was glad to hear that my dad was a hero though so it makes me happy that im flesh and blood from my perosnal angel :)

  • My dad's the same but he only goes home on weekends and only on family occasions. At school when we talked abt. family it reminded me of my dad who wasn't always beside me. I wish I can show this to my dad, but I don't have the guts to do it.

    I'm only 11 yrs. old

  • @sakurafanable U should show this to ur dad. U never know, it could open his eyes. He'll never know how you feel about him being absent if you never tell him. So take a a small jump. Talk to him first, and if he doesn't listen then take a big jump and show him this video. He may surprise u and catch u.

    I wish u all the luck in the world.

  • @sakurafanable same here :/

  • @WeeGooRawrrr

    Finally sum one that understands me .... Trust me I live ur same life I'm ur age nd my dad left me at age 1 also I think I Noe wut u mean

  • u must read this. once u started there is no turnind back. a little 10 year old girl was raped and murdured in 1945. her body was not found until 1947. then a boy last week read this and did not copy and paste this message. the dead girl appeared in his room haunting him and killed hin. if ou do not copy and paste this onto 10 videos in 30 minutes the dead girl will appear in your room tonight and haunt you and kill you. well you better start to copy and paste this

  • My dad left when I was was 1 accuse of a crime he didn't commit. I am 12 and yet my father is still not home with me. I cry myself to sleep knowing he may not be ever coming back. It tears my heart out everyday D":

  • i never had a father figure in my life, he makes promises only to break em, he dont call and he dont txt, when i call him, he sends me to voice mail, this poem really touches me.

  • @TheHeterohomo It gets better. I promise. Surround yourself with ppl who love u 4 u. Who accepts u no matter what, & the pain u feel about not having him around gets smaller. I'm not saying it goes away, bcuz it doesn't. It never will, but u have the power 2 either let it consume u, or make u a better person. Besides my friends & the family I can stand 2 be around, I made myself a promise 2 be a better person then my father ever could be. It gets better, I promise.

  • @LaQuis2006 how could it get any better my dad divorsed my mom wheni was 1 and a half years old he's never been there for me he never calles never emails me... anything! I dont talk to my dad he dont talk to me and it hurts but i dont care how much it hurts he is nothing to me. i have had no father figure in my life and i never will so life sucks...

  • @TheHeterohomo Same with my biological dad

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  •  I was adopted, too. as an infant. I am lucky to know my birthmother, but my biological father left when he knew she was pregnant. My adoptive mom didn't have a husband so this really hits home for me

  • my dad left me when i was 2 yrs old one day i wake up n hes in front of my bed lookin down at me sayin im back n me not knowin how he was or what he was i ran to my moms i asked her hows that man n he comes back kneels down n looks at me n says im ur dad n i cry n i cry n i said no ur not no ur not the next day he was gone agian n i never saw him till that day now i wonder in my bed what it would be like to have a dad how would it be if i excepted him as my father but y bother thinkin of him if

  • I rly love my dad we used to play and joke around but one day he got a divorce with my mom and moved to another country. Before he got on the plane he told I will call as soon as I get there and it's been 3 days and im missing him a Lot. Everytime I go to his room I cry and wish he was here for me and my lil sister. I am very confused and heart broken I needsomeone to talk to but my mom will never understand how I feel. Now I have to take of my lil sis who's 2 years old and I'm 15. And school w

  • Ever since my parents divorced my dad hasn't really been around. He piced up and moved and we didn't hear from him for months. When he finally moved back he was driving drunk with me and my siblings in the car and then again got arrested right in front of us. He was supposed to go to jail in April but instead moved to Alabama and I haven't seen him since. On fathers day his picture was in the crime stoppers section of the paper and I am embarrassed. I just wish he was the guy I used 2 know.

  • My dad died when i was six i didnt get to say goodbye or anything i forgot a lot and would call for him but he wouldnt come:[

  • I grew up not knowing anything deeper about my father. I was told that he went to the States to work ~ I'm from the Philippines! He never came home,,,, and when I was 18 years old he wrote me a letter telling me he hasn't forgotten me,,,, but still he never came home. I am now 43 years old with three daughters and a grandson. I learned a couple of years ago that my father died in the States,,,, and his ashes is now buried in my hometown,,,, I know how you feel!!!!

  • i dedicate this to my daddy even tho he is deaddd

  • I can somewhat relate 2 all of this. I wasn't a planned child so my mother gave me up 4 adoption. I flew back to California from Pennsylvania 2 live with my new parents. 10 months later my new adopted parents brought me 2 c my birthfather . He had said that he wanted 2 b a part of my life & had urged my mother 2 get me back. But she refused. Soon my birthfather stopped calling & moved away. He didn't bother giving a new address. I want 2 find him but I cant help but wonder if I'm better off.

  • I was born with out my dad. Two weeks before my brithday he said he wanted to get to know me. Here I am 19 will be 20 in October. And he up and leaves. This poem made me cry. The sad part of this is my father only wanted to try again with my mother. And they tried he just pushed me aside like I was a not alive. It's amazing how one person you just met a year ago can make you feel worthless. This poem is amazing.

  • @mjhwsh2010 Thank u, & I am so sorry ur dad made u feel that way. Mine filed paperwork a couple days before my 18th birthday statin I wasn't his and that he could never have kids. So we go 2 the DNA office & I see his new family. He doesn't say anything 2 me & I don't say a word 2 him. A couple weeks later I get paperwork in the mail sayin that I was 99.999995 percent his. He left a horrible message on my mom's answein machine, talkin about her & referrin 2 me as "that girl". I'm better off

  • @LaQuis2006 thats awful of your dad to just leave you in such a way!! i hope your well now

  • ikno how u feel out of my 2 sisters my dad hated me the most and was neer ever ever there for me and i alwasy askedmy self what did u do to make him hate me soo much tillone day i relized that it wasnt me it was him and he was missing out on alot

  • this proves this world is just fucked up

  • not haveing a dad who loved me use to make me sad but you have to relize whould you rather have no father or a father who fights with your other parent 24/7

    would you rather have some one who has a small temper or a huge heart that would cry for days && years if you died?

    my mom is my hero! <3 i do have my moments when i hate her ! but its just a faze

    and a great poem

  • My dad dosnt want me any more he rather have his wife he dosnt want too see me

  • My dad used to hit me. He left me with no address and no way of contact after my grandparents died. He is a heartless man, but I still miss him.

  • My dad had sex in front if ke and my mom when I was 5 and she was 30 and he was drunk and the 19 year old was and he was 36 and I started crying bc my mom did and I'm crying now ad after that he ran off with her and told my mom to fuck some other pervert and told her she was a bitch that should go to hell oh my god I'm crying now

  • That is the story of my life my dad left me when I was 4 to run off with a lady he met on a chat site, im 14 now and I hate him Bc of the things he did to me like leaving me. If I could have I would of told him to stay but I couldn't, Bc he left my mom went crazy, she always had new bfs over almost everyday.

  • My dad died last year of a Car crash, Now ever since his family wont get in toutch with me , My moms gone wierd and my sisters are BAd at skool, im 11 and i cant handle this! xx

  • my dad died wen i was 8 n now im 11 :(

  • @bieberfavorite

    Story of my life my da left at 4, I was really upset I didn't think he cared heard he has a girlfriend and a new baby boi, thought they were now hi life he said the same thong and wants to see me and stuff but where have the calls an Christmas card and birthday wishes been? I'm 16

  • im 26 and i have never met my father hell more like sprem donor, i want to but i have no idea where he is, no one on his side of my family even acts like im part of there family.

  • My Dad Left When I Was 4,I Wish I Could Have Told Him To Stay With Us.Maybe He Would Have.And After That I Never Saw Him Again.He Never Wrote,Called,Told Me He Loved Me.I Thought He Hated Me.So,I Hated Him.For Leaving..I Heard He Married Some Girl Who Has A Daughter.So,I Thought He Gave His Love To Them.So,I Told Myself,He Ain't Getting None Of My Love,And Now,I Am 14.And He Is Finally.Back In My Life,He Said He Never Stopped Loving Me.I'm Glad 2 Have U Back In My Life Daddy,But After 10 Years?

  • my fatheer died on my bday

  • i kno how you feel my dad left me and it hurt so bad but i forgave him for my self i dont speek to him or any thing it was just for me 2 getover it and it helped a lot but it still doesnt make things better

  • my dad left me when my mom was preg with me and im alot younger im 14 but i feel the same exact way. i ask the same questions. it kills me everyone tells me i shouldnt think of it but its not that easy when you see others with a dad i have no dad the signed my birth citifigate and it hurts to c it

    i feel you same pain.

  • @prep12xo me too we have the same story the only difference is i'm only 13... i don't know my father's name but i still want him to be here sometimes i want to be in a different family to feel a dad's love for his child :'((( it just hurts so much

  • i feel the same as you my dad left me for another family :'(

  • wow sounds like me i thought those same things and i mant my dad back sooo much...love the poem it waz GREAT and meaning ful

  • its a great poem It reminded me of myself. I never know my dad either. I know its hard!

  • The poem is beautiful either way, though ^^ I'm sorry if I made it seem like I didnt like it.. o:

  • thats a good pome. ive never realy know my dad either. or mom for that matter

  • i cried to that song, i never had a dad......

  • me to never had one

  • poems do not have to rhyme i am a poet myself i have been writing poetry for 7 years

  • i know how u feel i never knew my dad at all never met him, dis is a gd poem

  • i love my dad he is with me he and my mom r married i love my life

  • @mileymchm your so lucky my dad dose not care about me and hes in a big house  living happy and i dont see him only once a year :(

  • this reminds me of my dad. My dad isnt divorced and he didnt leave us, he just got a new job and he has to live out of town....in another country, and i want him to come home.

  • when i was little my dad only came once every 6 months i could never remember his face but i knew his skin color so every dark guy that walked by i would scream `daddy!`and hug them it embaressed my mom

  • my mum was a single parent to 3 kids, than it was 14yrs later she met my step dad! He didnt get along with my older sis, but he did get along with me and my bro..My real father never cared, never wanted to see me, never even saw me when i was born! My step dad tried to make contact with him to see me but nothing happend! I love my step dad and his the best& closest thing to a real dad but sometimes not knowing the other half hurts alot! But Im sorry to all the other people who are hurting!! xoxo

  • i am the same i dont see my dad

  • my sperm donor (dad) walked out on me n u cnt help but 2 still love him..

    come check out my videos n let me know wht u think

  • my parents have been divorced for over 6 yrs nd i was only 6 so i didnt understand. when my dad let it wasnt much of a change for me bc my daddy was never around. it didnt bother me ntil this past yr bc hes remarried nd live far away. i c him on the wekkends sometimes but i always c my friends having a great time with their dads nd just wonder wat i did 2 have a dad that never cared

  • i am 10 yrs old and i wrote a poem so hear it is:it hurts to lose the one you love,but what hurts the most is that he could have done more and i have to ask myself everyday this Q how can you lose some thing you never had?

  • @ikaitlee thats amazin

  • @ikaitlee Hey, that's pretty good. Don't stop writting. u never kno, u could be great one day.

  • my mom and dad divorced when i was 4 and i used to go see him every other weekend for 4 years and we moved to south carolina and i only saw him during the summer and we moved down to mississippi and i saw him last when i was 11, now im 13 and ive spoken to him once since the last time i saw him, he doesnt write me, or call me, i love him and i kno he loves me but he has another wife,....he didnt call me on my bday or christmas.

  • @saxchick9 I kno how u feel, but my story is a lil different. I first met my dad when i was gettin ready to turn 19. He had filed for a DNA test. When I met him, I met his new wife and his new son. For my birthday, I found out what I already knew. He was my dad, and he still doesn't want to get to kno me. I'm 22 now, so u will be just fine. It gets better.

  • damn i was blubberin this is so sad :'(

  • I've been staring at this blank comment box for a half an hour now crying my eyes out...... I love my dad like none of u kno. it hurts so much when i wake up and hes at work, when i walk home from school cause hes at work, and when i have to go to bed and hes still at work.... My dad and I have a special connection that im sure none of u understand but i kno that every weekend ,after a week of working at a dance studio after school, and i buy cameras to capture the moments me and my dad share

  • me and my daddy have a special connection too, but i havent seen him going on two years even tho weve moved closer he hasnt had me to his house for a while and it kills me everyday that i dont hear from him

  • i was crying when i was reading the poem =P nice poem tho =P

  • my real dad left me and my mom when i was only a couple months old i dont care though cause he tried to kidnap me and my step dad and my grandpa rescued me from him and to me my step dad better to be called Daddy cause hes always there for me but what sucks is that im in fear of losing him because him and my mom always fight and the words i hate the most are "GET OUTTA HERE AND LEAVE YOU STUPID BITCH!" or "your right i dont wanna be with you" and those words are always said

  • unlike you guys im an 12 year old girl and i got taken away from my mom to live with my grandparents and dad my mom and dad lived together but she was big on alcohol and my dad went with me to live with my grandparents because she never fed or bathed me so i had really nothing and i was desperately skinny and there where marijuana plants in the backyard so now i still live with my grandparents and they are about to adopt me!!!

  • It hurts to lose

    the ones you love

    but what hurts even more

    is losing the ones

    who could have done more

  • your right i wish my dad cared he never cared about me ever

  • and the next time I saw him he was cold and still I wanted to hit him and i wanted to scream But more than that I wanted to feel his warm arms around me just the way it used to be so i just ate and ate and ate the pain away and now, I'm a fat 15 year old girl without a daddy.
  • A child spaw, thats how i saw myself My daddy left because of me He hit mommy w/ a chair and walked away I was to young to watch him flee I was six when he first came around Saying how much he loved and missed me Around hoiladays and b-days, he bailed town 10, in a hosipital bed, only him I wanted to see But of course he never came, and I refused to eat I nearly died that week (literaly) Then I saw him, mother beating And I hated him from then on He left this world on September 1st
  • im 13 and my dad walked out when i was six.

    i was never really close to him.

    but when he left i lost all my confidence and i had to go to the doctors under depression at the age of six. i see my dad but not for long he got a different family now. and spends more time with them. but at least he has moved on and sometimes thinks about me and my other sister. he left taking everything and my mum had to buy everything again. shes a single mum and tries to help me and my sister as much as she can. Ty

  • omg this made me cry my dad left when i was 12 on my bday n said im tired of all this ex ex baggage

  • My mom kinda gone. I barely see her, she a truck driver. And when she is around, she never comes to say hi. T_T

    So if you lost someone dear to you, RIP to them. Sadly my mom has thought of suicide becuase her life is so terrible but she said these excact words before she left," I'm just getting my sh*t together so when I kill myself, you will have some crab to remember me by." After those words, they were the last I heard from her. T_T

    I also feel sorry for the whoever made this video, RIP!

  • my daddy left us since i was 7 y.o T_T

  • i cried so much at this video because it describes my life :( i never thought ov all the other people this has happened to it is comforting to find other peoplein the same situation. i know how hard it is ... i dont think ill ever be able to forgive him for leaving but reli evry 1 in the same situation remeber it is them tht is missing out <3

    i hate the fact i nevr knew my dad at all i see men walking down the street and it makes me wonder <3

  • My real dad is still alive but is never here for me. I was in the hostpital for 14 days having brain surgery and he only visited me once which broke my heart. And he is a HUGE alcoholic and is at stage 4 of alcoholism. Even though my dad cares nothing about me I still would hate to lose him. Atleast I have a wonderful stepdad

  • i feel bad for my dad because his dad well died in a shooting sene and it makes me cry knowing he barely had a dad for himself all he had was him mom and sister because his brother was saleing drugs and a man said give me some drugs for free and my dads brother said no and the man pulled out a gun and bam all then pain slide in like posin in like a person that has no idea they have posin in their drink and they drink it and die. my dad dies every day just a bit even in his smile u see fear.

  • some of us that do have dads wish we didnt. i mean my dad is in and out of prison he just got switched to a detention center from san quinten and it sucks, my dad comes around ocassionaly but when he does hes either high as fuck off crystal or hes too busy to stay longer than an hour. cherish what you have. it sucks when you dont have a dad. having a father that treats you lyk crap and not having one at all are two completely different pains and they still hurt the same

  • my dad is a jerk! he left me and my mom and got another mom pregno!

  • @oiekkaia08 my dad did the samething im the oldest of four kids!

  • I'm 34 and I lost my dad on 11-28-2007 and I miss talking to him telling him about my day telling him how much I love him I miss watching sports with him and hanging out with him he was 57 1/2 years old I think about my dad I miss him dearly Patty RIP DADDY

  • random berry i feel sooo sorry for u ;(n x

  • I lost my dad and my little brother when I was 11. I miss them so much. I feel like I'm cursed, because I have also lost 3 of my closest friends. I try not to make anymore friends, because i'm afraid of losing anymore of them. I will do anything to keep my remaining friends safe. I also try to keep my mother safe. She loved them both so much. She has even had thoughts of Suicide. I always tell her that she can't leave me here, and that I still need her. Thats what keeps her from killing herself.

  • that made me cry

  • ive been without a dad my whole life and when i tried to contact him it blew up in my face theres alot of pain in not havin a dad you never know the other half and it sucks i feel that pain everyday!

  • im only 9 and my dads dead

  • this really relates to me, because My mom left, the sad thing is, is that she left too late, late enough for me to have memories with her in them, and sadly, those memories from 4-5 years ago, are the last times i remember being truly happy, i have my father, technacally, since i live in a diffrent house than he, but i only saw him once or twice this summer, and i heard from the other house, tht hes barely ever home anymore, he doesn't really care.

  • everyone please charish ur dads because their are people without them, I am wise beyond my years because im only 13 and i know my dad but i feel this pain deep inside me for all that dont have daddys. I love u all and i know its hard... but you make every minutes count cuz ur daddys looking down on you...and if hes still with us,.. too bad for him. Look what hes missing out on...You. Make them proud guys!! :) Even if they dont know u...make them sorry they dont. Make everyone proud of you:))))

  • Since I read some of these texts, I want to be a very good dad. :)

  • i never knew my father and it make me sad when i see other kids playing catch with there fathers. and it hurts to talk to people when they are haveing "father troubles" because i never knew how it felt. i start to cry when ever says "me and my dad are going fishing". and if there was a way i would want to feel how the people with a father feel.

  • this is so sad from now on i will never regret being with my dad in public ever again even when he dances like a chicken :P i love you daddy

  • my dad is so awesome he does everything with me he even let me drink some October Fest Beer!!!

    it is so awesome

    it must relly suck for the people without a dad too bad for you guys

  • i no my dad but he doesnt bother with me, i have six brothers and sisters, which all go on days out with him. he doesnt like me because he didnt want another child and as im the youngest im the one he didnt want, and if that isnt bad enough for him, i refused to sit there slagging off my mother, and i stuck up for her, yes i would love my dad to bother with me but i dont miss what ive never had, i love my mum and an really close to her, i no she will always be there for me x

  • this made me cry cos, i am 14, 15 thisw year and i have never ever ever met my dad, i have a stepdad that i dnt even get on with but my mum says she doesnt want anything ti do with him so i need to find him wen im 16, but if i have to find him it means he dnt want me, he apparently walks past me all the time. but never stops. i would love to meet him and ask him question, all i know is his name (David Dollard) :'(

  • i've known my father my whole life you know. He was never there for me. Never did anything with my brother and I and we even lived in the same house. he crushed our hearts when he wouldn't come to our school concerts or our games or matches. My dad moved out last summer I didn't even realize he was gone. I haven't seen him since he left he never calls, never stops by. I don't even know if he's alive. but he's dead to me. I miss him, but theres nothing to miss. It's the fact that he's my father.

  • :/ sorry to hear about that.

  • wow i know exactly how u fell my dad left me when i was 4 and i hear he has anouther wife and he has like 3 kids... or 4

    im really hurt by it.. :( and he dont even try and look for me people tell me he loves me still but if he loves me still y isnt he here still?? i always cry for him... i bearly remamber him i have his pic in my purse and im naver gonna forget him... no matter what

  • this is really good,

    my "dad" was never there. the first time i ever saw him was when i was 14 and it was for maybe 5 mins when we went to court. i have sat for 14 years blaming myself for him never wanting me, but the day i saw him the the court room i laughed and told myself i was lucky to not have him he is a deadbeat and has no life.

  • this hit me hard =**(

    my father doesn't care and never has

    that's why me and my brother stay true to my mom

    my sis loves my dad but she loves my mom too

    but i will love my mom more than my dad any other day of my life.

  • thats a nice poem o-o

    but for it to be a poem.. it has to rhyme o-o

  • No, it doesn't. A poem can be sound like anything you want it to sound like. Ppl just like for them to rhyme. Doesn't mean it has too.

  • @LaQuis2006 Well, for it to be a proper poem, it has to rhyme :/

  • @tanyarus Whatever dude

  • @tanyarus

    The best poems don't rhyme. Those are cheesy.

  • No it doesn't it can be like a writing something in ur heart u know something u feel inside of u. Something that u just want to say to the world. Something to make ppl feel the way u do. Something to let u hold on to ur feelings and write them. Express the way u feel be the person getting to feel the pain, happiness, sad, or even anger. Of what u write or what u read about them. U don't have to rhyme no express urself. Cuz u r the one making it. Sad, love, happiness, or anger. whateva itis be u.

  • @pick138 That's.. Such a wonderful way to define poetry <3

  • @pick138 Wow

  • @tanyarus a poem does not have to rhyme!

  • @tanyarus 

  • i feel your pain. [person under me]

  • I can really relate to this poem, I´m 19 years old and i have never met my father.

    I know his name and where he lives thoug and its not far away at all.

    it´s just that he don´t want to know me :(

  • im crying my eyes out, ive never met my daddy... i miss him soo much he left before i was born i dont even know if hes dead or alive... i only found out his name last year because i askedd my mum, she just doesnt understand... :'(

  • my dad left when i was 1 im now 13 i now it was for the best becuz if it was not then i wouldnt be living the life i have right now but sometimes i wished he never left

  • that is really awesome. I like it. and bless your heart. maybe soemtime the day will come. :)

  • i dont have a dad, he left when i was a baby but i know it was for the best cuz i wuldnt have the life i have now. yes i miss him dearly but god knows wuts best. as so my boyfriend taught me.

  • my dad left when i was a baby too. im 13 now, but i went and found him last year. hes an alcoholic who wrecks peoples lifes, and if he left you, your better off without.

  • yeaa i mean they left nd it hurts but its the best fo us.

  • same here my dad died when i was 3 i miss him very much but i know that everything happens for a reason my mother has moved on and remarried and i have a good life but it doesnt feel the same does it

  • no it doesnt feel thee samee at all. my mom has a boyfriend also known as future husband but im just not ready for that.

  • whats the song called ??

  • nice poem :) it actually made me cry since I can relate to it in many ways..my dads the same

  • my dad is dead im a whene i was 4 im balling

  • i indeed have a dad, but sometimes he makes me feel like he would rather have a son than a daughter. I realize that I'm always trying to make him proud to have a daughter...

    Love the movie/poem/music. 5 stars

  • i feel the same way

  • this is a really sad peom and i cansorta relate to it:(

  • that is sad but y did he leave u

  • aww thats so sad :(

    im srry ur dad left u !

  • very nice touching! tryin to hold the tears bck becuase this is wat i think of everynight somtimes i dont even kno wut my feelings againts him are

  • I CANT READ IT LOL

  • that is a nice poam. it's sad too

  • i can completely relate to this poem it is amazing. My father left when i was born and has never looked back he left me on my own when my mother died when i was 11. now i am almost 20 and i still have yet to hear from him ever but it makes you a stronger person just knowing what he is missing. you are an extremely talented person.

  • yer dad where did u go

  • You are enough. Yo are a human, and your poem shows you're a very gifted one.

    Anyone can be a father, but only somone very speacial can be a daddy.

  • that was so butaful

  • I too know how you feel. My dad who i never knew used to beat up my mum and my big bro when he was just 4 and i was a baby. They divorced and now my mum is happily married to my step dad who is really nice.

  • That is lovely it's so nice i worked out. Everyone deserves love.

  • Dads are Assholes

  • Im only 12 and i've had my parents fight so many times. Cops have been over at my house so many times. A few days ago my dad left and isnt answering his phone now and he shut me and my sisters phones of... AGAIN! My mom doesnt have money for rent.... my dad does. And They gave us a 30 day notice. I'm really scared. i hate my dad so much for mkaing my mo cry all these years. i dont know wht we did to deserve this):

  • You've done othing. Sometimes life is unfair, and people get hurt for no good reason. It just means you're strong.