good idea, actors, lighting. what needs work the most is the sound. Sound is very important, more important than people think. i don't know any good mics but good job.
the fake blood looks not real ..... if you want to use a ketchup for a fake blood make sure that the ketchup's color is dark red not red orange .. btw, nice work :)
ehh. coulda done a lot better. One thing that'll make it 5 times better, without mentioning any film techniques, is get a better camera, some kind of dslr, or a canon HD camcorder if you don't want to spend a lot. Dont forget to color correct it. The colors look washed out
I really like this film. ^_^ I must say that there was allot of time and effort put into this acting. But the thing that bothered me was , the story, I don't necessarily understand it. A couple in a cafe are talking, then the guys gets up and accidentally spill something on this one guy, that turns out to be a murder, he drops this camera, which shouldn't be out in the first place. xD And on the camera were some pictures of a corpse. The man came and took the guy. Im not going to ruin the end B+
could be much, much better. in the future: get better lighting, make your jump cuts cleaner, rerecord your dialogue and dub it over for better audio quality.
the dead corpse was pretty cheesy, you should've done a better makeup job. his body was too clean for a corpse.
good idea, actors, lighting. what needs work the most is the sound. Sound is very important, more important than people think. i don't know any good mics but good job.
PersianMidiLax 3 weeks ago
the fake blood looks not real ..... if you want to use a ketchup for a fake blood make sure that the ketchup's color is dark red not red orange .. btw, nice work :)
Bernachaeleeckson 9 months ago
ehh. coulda done a lot better. One thing that'll make it 5 times better, without mentioning any film techniques, is get a better camera, some kind of dslr, or a canon HD camcorder if you don't want to spend a lot. Dont forget to color correct it. The colors look washed out
bluetooth198 11 months ago
That's pretty good for high school stuff... nice job!
FilmStripses 1 year ago
good job! Any hints for others too make a horror?
leihcim123 1 year ago
Did that kid who made all the invasive videos of teachers and students make a film?
farmerpetey 1 year ago
This is actually very scary!!
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amyinponderland 1 year ago
Go Emmaus!!! :)
Robstenfan4ev 1 year ago
Excellent job on the horror film. It was well put together. You did very well.
AlicevsNemisis 2 years ago
Oops i meant 4:42 my bad
Tyfire101 2 years ago
Lol at like 4:52 theres a black lab
Tyfire101 2 years ago
that shits rad man. nice work.
hotronscorcher 2 years ago
pretty good for being high schoolers, not gunna lie.
KTmario11 2 years ago
Pretty darn good - some potential future film giants here!
studentshortfilms 2 years ago
this one is awsome
gunrunner2009 2 years ago
not bad. reminds me of horror movies I used to make back in high school :)
youngbono18 2 years ago
nice work
beepsbobby 2 years ago
I really like this film. ^_^ I must say that there was allot of time and effort put into this acting. But the thing that bothered me was , the story, I don't necessarily understand it. A couple in a cafe are talking, then the guys gets up and accidentally spill something on this one guy, that turns out to be a murder, he drops this camera, which shouldn't be out in the first place. xD And on the camera were some pictures of a corpse. The man came and took the guy. Im not going to ruin the end B+
HonorableTheft 2 years ago
could be much, much better. in the future: get better lighting, make your jump cuts cleaner, rerecord your dialogue and dub it over for better audio quality.
the dead corpse was pretty cheesy, you should've done a better makeup job. his body was too clean for a corpse.
adamzivo 2 years ago
i would have to agree.
soopa96 2 years ago
Not bad. Get into film school and polish your talent :)
Fallencypt 2 years ago
haha, im actually scared. you did your job if i dont want to e home alone right now. that is pretty much what a horror film does.
vashy101 2 years ago
Really good, you got the atmosphere spot on =)
Danzzz92 2 years ago
very good job.
Maxx8101 2 years ago
Very well done 4.5/5 Stars
(didn't really like the ending)
mikedevil8480 2 years ago
that was good.
axeinthehead14 2 years ago
Lol, the dog at 4:46
barrydope 2 years ago
Pretty well done
joshuaespinoza3 3 years ago
Great stuff. I love the curious puppy at 4.47
Keep up the good work!
sheshotsmoking 3 years ago
lol
motosportjunkie 3 years ago
Excellent! Can you tell me what music you used and where I can get it? Thanks. And well deserved!
EArulez321 3 years ago
Way cool! Congratulations!
tomandkari 3 years ago
Man, that was well done. Good job!
davidpapp 3 years ago