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  • Where do u get the pics plz tell me

  • He is Kanora's son as well as Karin's, whom was one of Sasuke's teamates in Team Taka during their Akatsuki days. Magu has Kanora's red hair and has his mother's Chakra sensing ability, which he has honed down to the point that he can foresee his opponents next move and even see an opponent even through genjutsu and from ten miles away. Since Kanora sent him to live in the Leaf Village, he can only visit his son at night. He also has glowing Yellow Eyes which help him see farther his opponents.

  • this is really good

  • Never-mind my last comments. It's uploaded!

  • Okay... and have the Spirits of the uzumaki Siblings only come out of their bodies quickly and leave just as fast. As for the Shira Kyuubi, have it be brought up when he is meditating. And give me the name for the preview of the episode... and why do you have school? are you in colledge?

  • @23traves

    Okay, the video is uploading. It's called "Hey Partner" .

    

  • @23traves

    It says that the time it takes to make the video viewable will vary from a couple of minutes or hours so I don't know when you will see it.

  • And make sure to add me in it!

  • @23traves

    I'm afraid the episode is going to take awhile. I have school so I won't beable to work on it everyday, but I'll try my best. As for the video of stuff I've edited so far, I'm almost finished. What do you want to see in the next episode? How will The Uzumaki siblings react? I'll defiantly add a dream Hikari has and what about Kazu? Will the pure demon speak to him?

    thanks for all your help! I'll be sure to give you credit! I'll tell everyone that we are partners it making this!

  • Anyway is it done? I'm so excited to see this episode!

  • That sounds good!

  • How about "Startling Revelations.... Kanora The Brother of Naruto"

  • @23traves

    Awesome! So I'm assuming Kanora is reveled in the next episode?

  • Give me the name of the video when you are done! Then i can check it out.

  • @23traves

    Damn I forgot to make Amatesaru! I'll make her quickly! Meanwhile, lets talk about episode four! We need a name for it first off...

  • Okay... Hurry!

  • I think it was called the Assualt of Twin Lions i believe... i don't remember...

  • @23traves

    I'm making a video of the stuff that I have drawn so far. It won't take long.

  • Sage Chakra is something that would only make the T.B.F. that much more dangerous... i think that the Sage Chakra would just disrupt the Blades and only increase the Physical force of the fists, which give him the strength of tusnade, but also weaken his Wind Style Chakra since he would have to channel the Fist and the Chakra at the same time...

  • Anyway what do you think of the basics for my Tornado Blade fist? It doesn't have the organ attacking power of the Gentle fist, but it does have an advantage when dealing with opponents on the side and that are out of range. It can also block metal objects as well.

  • @23traves

    Have you seen, in shippuden, the episode called confessions? well in that one hinata uses some jutsu where she has chakura in the shap of a dragon head on her fists, do you know what that is called?

  • Nice... but using that technique should be a last resort technique... unless you want him to kill everyone he fights... the physics of that is that added with the gentle fist's organ attacking technique, adding the wind chakra will slice into the organs and cause the opponent to bleed massive amounts of blood.

  • @23traves

    Oh...right. maybe I should re-thing that one.

  • Anyway did you read about the basics about my Tornado Blade Fist style?

  • @23traves

    Yeah I did. Sown's awesome.

    What about Senin jutsu? Kanora wouldn't beable to use that unless he befriended a frog who could use reverse summoning to take him to that...uh...frog place, uh I don't know what it's called. But yah the place with the oil that helps them draw natural energy so that he can make three shadow clones to sit still for him. If you know what I mean, if not you probably havn't seen the episode.

  • No problem.... Anyway what do you think should happen after Kazu and Hikari find out about their Familiar Spirits?

  • and besides it is spelled out as the Byakugan...

  • @23traves

    whoops.

  • @23traves

    I was thinking...You know how the Hyuuga's target chakura points and fight with gentle fist? Well with the Aoi Byakugan Kazu could combine it with wind chakura there for he isn't just targeting the insides but is causing phisical damage on the body. Combining the Wind chakura could be the thing that will cost him alot of chakura but, like Naruto, he has ALOT of chakura to spare!

  • Good idea... and one day she finds the scroll of the Uzumaki Style Taijutsu, that somewhat immitates the rasengan and Wind Style blades. That is how i cam up with the Uzumaki's Kakimakinagiken, the Tornado Blade Fist. The basics is that the Rasengan is applied to the fists and inner part of the arm, while the blade is developed by wind-style chakra from the outer edge pf the pinky and ends at the elbow and arks upwards to the shoulder.

  • Nice one!

    Those sounds like a good passwords... though longer than what i thought of. Next we should figure out what will happen after Kazu and Hikari find out about their Familiar Spirits.

  • We could also call the pure sides that Angel Biju, and the dark sides the Demon Biju.

  • @23traves

    I did some research and this is what I came up with:

    "Junsui no Tenshi Biju, shojiru!"

    "Pure Angel Biju, arise" and later on when Kazu can summon Pure Biju, that can be his password!

    also, we can change the password of the dark Biju to this:

    "Kurai no Akuma Biju, Shojiru!"

    Dark demon Biju, arise

  • I Think that the Ao Byakugan should be more powerful and not need chakra to activate or maintain use... but it should have a cost on chakra when aiming for specific points or increasing sight range.

  • @23traves

    Thats good! His beyakyugan isn't very strong yet because it is still developing but eventually it will become very strong. I also have an idea for Hikari's original jutsu. I figured that since Naruto has Wind Natured Chakura Hikari will to except she's going to do more with it: First, she gather's chakura in her hands then uses that chakura to cut through anything, later she will be able to use Saikuron no jutsu (Cyclone technique) cutting her opponent to shreds!

  • Yeah! good idea!

    

  • @23traves

    I know that I'll be continuing form the last part of episode three I'll have Hikari and Kazu burst into the room and confront everyone.

    I was also thinking that Kou could know more than he's saying like the fact that Kazu can summon the pure sides of the demons. I was annoyed at the fact that I didn't make Kazu's eyes white like Hinatas so that he can use the beyakyugan but I decided that he'll be able to do it anyway "Aoi Beyakyugan!" (Blue byakyugan)

  • Why not just erase the marks and place holes onto the handle and put to more holes next to the main on at the end of the Kunai. this will be the placement of the Biju Crystals.

  • @23traves

    Okay, thats if I can find a good picture.

  • @23traves

    Oh and He could wear the crystals on a chain around his neck! I'll add that to my picture.

  • Okay! And make sure to remember Kanora's personality... and easy going guy like Naruto until angered or getting serious.

  • It is KAnora... and he is usually like Naruto, until he gets serious, then his voice gets deeper and shows little mercy unless his opponent begs for it, or forgiveness. You can see the D.C.K. at onemanga.com, look for naruto chapter 501 and and the blade will look somewhat like a trident, the points on the side are the guards, and the center point is the blade

  • @23traves

    sorry I meant Kanora.

    anyway, I'll go look at the D.C.K now.

  • @23traves

    Ah I see it! I'll find a pic somewhere and then edit the handle to look like a flute then it can be both flute and blade. I really don't know how I'm going to make all of this but I'll do my best!

  • Prepared for anything aren't ya? Anyway... lets have Kanora's personal goal to be to fight Naruto one on one to see which of them is stronger... and that he became leader to prove Konoha that the Uzumaki Clan will not die without a fight. and for Kanora's summoning tool, lets make it Yondaime's Dimensional Cutting Kunai, modified to summon the dark Biju.

  • @23traves

    Okay, so I think I've got the tune down now so I just need to play it at the right speed.I'm going to have to have to look at the kunai because I've never heard of it before. hmm.

    This is going really well and I've got a good RPC of Konora now and the uniform is done too. Is his personallity like Naruto's or is he all dark and stuff?

  • If you want you can make a copy on a keyboard by playing the sound with a wood-wind mode on it. Just hit it in the sequence you think is right and then make a little preview for the next episode to the summoning part and then i will give you my thoughts on it.

  • @23traves

    I can do that on garageband. (Well I can try)

    If I can't do it I have a friend that might be able to. He is really good a piano and i'll get him to record it for me.

  • Exactly... the only time she can speak with it is while she is asleep, yet she knows it is a dream. And to let you know, since she was born with it... it will call her little sister since the Kuro Kyuubi was formed when she was concieved... anyway... the power of the Kuro Kyuubi will remain under her control until summoned

  • @23traves

    Hikari and Kuroi kyuubi will have a bond then? Like, she'll hate it at first but then she won't be able to imagine life without it.

  • As for Kuro and Shira... how about you add another year?

  • And if you want to hear Kanora's summoning song, listen to the video called Calling Dark Wild Zords... (Sorry a bit of a Power rangers fan)

  • @23traves

    Thats cool but how can I get it for my Story? is it on itunes or something?

  • No... if she runs into Kanora when he has the Kyuubi Crystal out, it will be stripped from her body and she will be put into suspended animation until the time limit is up... but the Kuro kyuubi will protect her, even against Kanora's wishes. Basically whenever kanora calls out the Kuro Kyuubi, Hikari falls unconscious, but she will always be protected.

  • @23traves

    So he can use her kyuubi but it won't attack her! cool.

  • When called out, their strength doubles as long as the master channels his negative emotions into them, it is vice versa for the Pure halves. Since Kazu has the SHira Kyuubi, he can summon them if he makes contracts with the pure halves.

  • @23traves

    Then Hikari can call out the dark sides too if she makes the sprit bond? Then they could fight (Alot later of corse) againts each other 3 biju on 3.

  • I also have a name for a pair of twins in the Kakimaki, the twin children of Itachi Uchiha, both born with the Mangekyo Sharingan, it become Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan when they are together... the twins should be named Kuro and Shira.

  • @23traves

    Are they teenagers? I need to create them. For soem reason I picture them as incredibly powerful 13-year-olds! XD I'll get to work.

  • Exactly... they are just the darkness of the Biju brought into the physical world, while the pure halves remain inside the scrolls.

  • @23traves

    does that mean that they are half as powerful without their "pure" side?

  • And for the password, he has to play his flute after he says the password

  • Good! and for the other two, Kage, which means shadow, and Hikari, which means light.

  • Ah... and i came up with a password for when Kanora summons the demons, he can summon all of them, but can only summon three at one time... the password is... "Shadow Biju... Arise!"

  • @23traves

    In other words:

     Kage Biju, Shojiru!

    Shaddow Beju, Arise!

  • And why is Naruto the reason that Kou's parents died?

  • @23traves

    Sorry, I didn't make that clear.

    Kou is angry at Naruto for choosing his kids over the village when his parents sacrificed their lives for the village. He dosn't think that Naruto is a good Hokage but it isn't his fault whereas when he looks at Hikari and Kazu all he sees is the Kuroi Kyuubi and can't help but hate them.

  • And Kogagetsu means Wolf Moon, which wolves do howl to summon their pack or define boundaries.

  • @23traves

    Mizu can use this jutsu! It kind of suits her don't you think? She can like, controle a pack of wolves to attack her enemies!

    We need names for the wolves too! Ame could be one (It means rain)

  • Well Oni means demon, ogre, or devil....But i have another name if you want it... I was thinking of calling it the Kogagetsu. and i was thinking that we could have a girl be Kanora's team mate... and she will be the daugther of Itachi, who wants revenge against her uncle.

  • @23traves

    If you want the exsact translation, I looked it up:

    Kunai Furuuto, Akuma noyo na toriga.

    Kunai flute, The devil Trigger.

    I made another girl member who I also made a quick drawing of. Her name is

    Mizu Ame and she is from the mist country which lost in the 4th (I think) Ninja war against Konoha. She now has a grudge against Konoha so she joined Kakimaki to get her revenge. Her hair is jet black and she has bright green eyes. She can controll the air and make herself disappear in mist

  • I have a couple of names for Kanora's best friend and partner, Amaterasu Uchiha, Itachi's only daughter. Since she was born of Itachi's blood after he gained the Mangekyo Sharingan, she should be born with it as well. She is also in love with Kanora, but Kanora doesn't treat her more than his best friend, even though he goes to great lengths to keep her safe.

  • Good idea! And the one inside her brother with be the Shira Kyuubi, the pure half of the kyuubi created by naruto's mother!

    And another thing... i think that Kanora should have made Familiar Spirit contracts with the Nine Biju's and carries crystal spheres that contain their spirits, which allows them to escape their scrolls for three minutes, but are under his control as long as he plays his Kunai Flute, the Devil Trigger.

  • @23traves

    Shira Kyuubi, I like it! Wow! We have so much stuff I don't know where to start! I'll have to reveal this stuff slowly. Kou (The guy with the orange hair) is going to leave and join the Kakimaki leaving his brother Kono a goal to make him come back to Konoha. Kou wanted his brother to join him but Kono refused. The reason he left was because he hated Naruto and his kids because they were the reason his parents had to die. I'm going to find Kunai flute, devil trigger in japanese!

  • I'm sure we'll good partners in this...buddy...

  • Oh and please tell me the other goal... i don't like not being informed... one of my pet peaves....

    and one more thing... i think that the Kakimaki should have one more goal, to revive the Uzumaki clan's Kekkei Genkai, the Tornado Blade Fist, or Kakimakinagiken and the clan itself.

  • Kanora is the same age as Naruto, since he was created from the remnants of Minato and Kushina. The idea i have for the uniforms should bear the seal of the Uzumaki clan, since the Unlucky Thirteen, the head members, are the last of the Uzumaki clan. And also i think they should be red with golden lightning bolts all around the coat. But i made a mistake on the name.. it is Kakimaki....

  • @23traves

    Oh! okay so they also can need to get all the scrolls holding the demons from the normal Naruto and I've also made up a name for the thing inside Hikari: Kuroi Kyuubi

    (Black 9 tails) and Her eyes turn half red hals black! I really need to make a whole bunch of rpcs and put them in a video for you. I have done some drawings that I will scan and include also (I'm not the bets drawer in the world but oh well)

    I'm glad for someone to work with!

  • And i meant the Kakimaki. Anyway... you should contact me and i'll give you more details.

  • Heya! I got an idea for a new Character... a Jonin named Kanora Namikaze... he should be Orochimaru's last experiment, an Exact Copy of Naruto and is sent by an organization named the called the Kakizaki, the Tornado. They want Naruto's children and Kanora is their strongest and most dangerous member. Kanora has all of Naruto's powers and he looks exactly like him, but has straight red hair. he also should have the power to transform into the Kyuubi.

  • @23traves

    I think that's an awesome idea! First of all, how old is he? Second, do you have an idea for the uniform? If not I can make one. I'll get to work making your character.

    I like the name of the organisation, Kakimaki. I thin Kanora will be the leader since he is the strongest. I think that I will add somthing else for the Kakimaki to seek to make it more of a challenge.

    Thanks for your ideas!

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