I would just like to say that 'critics' like this hsvtoro don't deserve politeness and class in return for bullshit and out-and-out rudeness! Obviously the point of this great song went unnoticed, which isn't surprising because this guy doesn't understand PURE GENIUS!!!
omg this song goes perfectly with the newscast I just watched...I remember when you could leave your doors unlocked ...no more.. love to shake this world....politicians need to get priorities straight...that is not going to happen any time soon...we were just named the Crime City...isn't that something that makes you want to shake this world...sooo awesome ...this song says it all and I appreciate it....sing it loud.....love it...katlin
Dear Joe, I sure admire anyone who writes Original Songs. Love the Title, Lyrics, & Music. Great Job. My Hubby, Joe passed away this year, & he & I wrote a lot of Original Songs together. He Sang & Played bass Guitar & I Played Drums. grandmafottz Daughter,--Lynnie.XXXOOO
When i said the 'guitar work is average at best' i meant your guitar sound/technique style and ability is average, bottom line the section in the track between 3:07- 3:32 needs a lead break and are you serious there is no Bass solo in that section i can't believe your trying to bullshit another musician, as for your ability i would say that you must be exceptional in this industry especially coming from Australia, and for me your just not good enough to make it big right now more practice.
Sorry but the guitar work on this track is average at best, it needed a lead break in the 'empty spot' at part 3:07-3:32 mins i could have helped you with that as i'm a guitarist (specializing in lead guitar) myself who grew up in Dandenong, as for the song its not bad but just sounds simple, good try though.......
@hsvtoro... Hi.. Thank you for your listening and your thoughts my friend.. I do appreciate them. I just wanted to mention to you also that the "empty spot" you spoke about was done deliberately this way; There is a bass solo in this section which is doubled by an elec guit...I had originally planned to have another lead over the top but decided to cut it out as the section became too crowded and too many melodies were happening at once. The song in this section needed to breathe and....
.......we thought it best to keep this section a little less cluttered to increase the affect leading to the breakdown which then leads into the soft chorus.
As for the the simple guitar work; Lyrically the song has alot of words, and connecting sentences.. so once again we decided it best to not overthrow / over power the lyrics with a more complex guitar part.
♥ Wonderful Song, and as always... your singing is just AWESOME, Joe. You have an amazing voice!! Thanks for sharing. Have a lovely weekend, Hugs Ruth ♥
Thoroughly enjoyed this, Joe! Such strong and positive lyrics...eye opening!! You never cease to surprise me with your original material....not to mention your versions of Elvis' songs. Keep on keeping on!!
thank you so much for share this beautifull song....Did you compose it? and the lyrics ?
Tell me Joe how can I get your album?.... You know Im performing "me and my piano" the17s jullay on the scene the manager called my father last night....Its the rock festival of DOMONT city.....
I would just like to say that 'critics' like this hsvtoro don't deserve politeness and class in return for bullshit and out-and-out rudeness! Obviously the point of this great song went unnoticed, which isn't surprising because this guy doesn't understand PURE GENIUS!!!
DianRay2 1 week ago in playlist Joe Var Veri originals
omg this song goes perfectly with the newscast I just watched...I remember when you could leave your doors unlocked ...no more.. love to shake this world....politicians need to get priorities straight...that is not going to happen any time soon...we were just named the Crime City...isn't that something that makes you want to shake this world...sooo awesome ...this song says it all and I appreciate it....sing it loud.....love it...katlin
KATLINRIMER08 3 months ago
anything but average, in both senses.... another great job Joe
ShadesOfWillow 4 months ago
Top!!!!
dl1hbs 5 months ago
Dear Joe, I sure admire anyone who writes Original Songs. Love the Title, Lyrics, & Music. Great Job. My Hubby, Joe passed away this year, & he & I wrote a lot of Original Songs together. He Sang & Played bass Guitar & I Played Drums. grandmafottz Daughter,--Lynnie.XXXOOO
grandmafottz 5 months ago
I love this song.It was on Gina's channel.Got more Joe? Can I put them On my channel.Great song,You are blessed.
Patriotsfan1975 6 months ago
I love this song !!! Just how I feel, looking forward to listening to more of your originals !
gina
ladiesrock83 6 months ago
When i said the 'guitar work is average at best' i meant your guitar sound/technique style and ability is average, bottom line the section in the track between 3:07- 3:32 needs a lead break and are you serious there is no Bass solo in that section i can't believe your trying to bullshit another musician, as for your ability i would say that you must be exceptional in this industry especially coming from Australia, and for me your just not good enough to make it big right now more practice.
hsvtoro 8 months ago
@hsvtoro ..Bass line / melody.. not solo. It starts at 3:21 ends at 3:28. Wasn't trying to bullshit you.
Yes Ok, your point is noted.. prob could use a lead in there..thanks for your input.
JoeVarVeri 7 months ago
Sorry but the guitar work on this track is average at best, it needed a lead break in the 'empty spot' at part 3:07-3:32 mins i could have helped you with that as i'm a guitarist (specializing in lead guitar) myself who grew up in Dandenong, as for the song its not bad but just sounds simple, good try though.......
hsvtoro 8 months ago
@hsvtoro... Hi.. Thank you for your listening and your thoughts my friend.. I do appreciate them. I just wanted to mention to you also that the "empty spot" you spoke about was done deliberately this way; There is a bass solo in this section which is doubled by an elec guit...I had originally planned to have another lead over the top but decided to cut it out as the section became too crowded and too many melodies were happening at once. The song in this section needed to breathe and....
JoeVarVeri 8 months ago
.......we thought it best to keep this section a little less cluttered to increase the affect leading to the breakdown which then leads into the soft chorus.
As for the the simple guitar work; Lyrically the song has alot of words, and connecting sentences.. so once again we decided it best to not overthrow / over power the lyrics with a more complex guitar part.
Thanks again for your input..and for listening.
Many best wishes,
Joe
JoeVarVeri 8 months ago
Like this one very much!!! xx Heidi
djennas 8 months ago
beautiful....i subed :) best wishes. Venus
VenusDeArt 8 months ago
Excellent :-) I enjoyed that!
Teresa7777 9 months ago
♥ Wonderful Song, and as always... your singing is just AWESOME, Joe. You have an amazing voice!! Thanks for sharing. Have a lovely weekend, Hugs Ruth ♥
RuthTCB 9 months ago
When I hear this, I can't help to dance... (:-D
Wonderful song, Joe, and amazing voice and music.
Thank you very much for sharing it.
Panceitor 9 months ago
Thoroughly enjoyed this, Joe! Such strong and positive lyrics...eye opening!! You never cease to surprise me with your original material....not to mention your versions of Elvis' songs. Keep on keeping on!!
deb0109 9 months ago
So talented Joe, truly....fantastic original....lovin this one alot.....great song... great lyrics..
Marilyn
totallyamazing36 9 months ago
Good and great song Joe,..... for me ...keep on rockin', ...I love it.
Regards,
Bert
bertyper 9 months ago
Hi Joe!
Just wonderful song from you and great singing and playing!!*****and to my playlist. Have a nice evening my dear friend. hugs x
Maria :))
kotilo375 9 months ago
Best Joe song! Tx!
bagamandras 9 months ago
thank you so much for share this beautifull song....Did you compose it? and the lyrics ?
Tell me Joe how can I get your album?.... You know Im performing "me and my piano" the17s jullay on the scene the manager called my father last night....Its the rock festival of DOMONT city.....
YOUR FIEND AND GREATEST FAN RAFFI
MsGREGORIAN 9 months ago
Fantasic, original song Joe. sounds great right from the start to the finish. Good job. I enjoyed this...................Carl
TheCarlo66 9 months ago