Excuse me, mr. 47yearoldnamedsteve, I wasn't aware of the fact that you're king of the world. Please try to not let this video made by a one of the millions of fans of anime ruin your day.
nicely done, you should check out the new FMA series its quality and quite different called Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood. It follows the manga and its not as tragic but very very enjoyable. Also with the deleting of videos argue fair use and also dont put the full song in the video (thats the main reason they get removed)
try and have the pace of the clips match the music and make the scenes match the lyrics more other than that it is good. i mean for this being your first its a good job.
I suggest adding effects to the clips. It gets boring when you know what's gonna happen on the first episode. Btw do you know how to download other episodes cause I only saw 1 and the intro?
I'm not sure if it's what you were going for with the song 'like the angel' for these scenes, but if you really think about it it kinda makes sense. the main focus of that episode was about ed and al trying to bring back their mother, who could be considered as the 'angel' in the song. i don't know maybe i'm just rambling, but that's what i think
great song, great series... but i just dont think "like the angel" really goes with whats going on in the vid ^^;;. oh yeah and raws would be better, but meh, thats a minor detail. but all in all its not a bad amv for a 1st. ^^
i saw you post your kinda new at this? well song didnt go that well but dont let anyone elses comments get you down. Its better than half of these guys including me could do. Its nice keep up the good work man.
I didn't read what other people commented, but here's my 0.02$:
Need raw videos.
Need more variety of scenes.
Need to try and adapt whats on screen with the lyrics of the song. Rarely does the AMV work if the lyrics don't add up with the on screen happening. :)
True true, especially: Raw videos!:P Only let those subs stay if it really means anything in the vid, when the subs and the lyrics of the song maby match.
Its really good, one tihng you should change is having the "intro" scene at the end, instead include more footage. The "intro/credits" scene was boring.
Yh I agree w/ the others you got to match the theme/feeling of the song. For this Id do a clip of someone either leaving dying or fighting then dying, but thats just me
first off, and this is just me you're spelling better wrong, i thought it was really good but for a fast song like this you need some more action shots, i did really like the "..turns into gold.."- pulling out the spear part it seemed really cool because the song had a bit of alchemy in it and that's where he was using alchemy.
You asked for an opinion so I'll offer mine. The clips were just as if I was watching that one scene from the first episode again. Also, try to use more of a variety of clips and maybe match the song with the nature of the video more. Please understand I'm not trying to be horrible when I say this but merely providing the constructive criticism you requested. I've only made slideshows but these would be things I try and include in my AMV. There's potential though so keep at it! =D
thanks, i mean like i just learned how to make amvs like a couple weeks ago, and when i got my first episode i made an amv, out of that, but im trying to get all the episodes before i make a 4th amv
Lol stupid chainletter
IamAmazinghehe 1 month ago
nice XD
Grand2011Piano 6 months ago
Excuse me, mr. 47yearoldnamedsteve, I wasn't aware of the fact that you're king of the world. Please try to not let this video made by a one of the millions of fans of anime ruin your day.
skenny992 7 months ago
its great
shshkumar21 7 months ago
never, EVER mix rise against with this gay ass cartoon shit. its a disgrace to rise against
47YearOldNamedSteve 8 months ago
@47YearOldNamedSteve uh, fi you think its so gay and stupid, the why the hell are you watching it?
eeveeinthesky 6 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
SO SORRY
copy and paste this to 10 videos or your mum will die within the next 4 hours....
oidiota100 9 months ago
I LIKE THIS VID BUT PUT DIFFRENT SONG
49soccerkid 9 months ago
Honestly, I don't see how anime is relavent to a Rise Against song, don't try it again.
SoapyCam 1 year ago
@SoapyCam Anime can be relevent if clips of the anime have something to do with the Rise Agiants sone. It's not like every anime is the same.
MysteriousBrownEyes1 1 year ago
nicely done, you should check out the new FMA series its quality and quite different called Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood. It follows the manga and its not as tragic but very very enjoyable. Also with the deleting of videos argue fair use and also dont put the full song in the video (thats the main reason they get removed)
Henbot 1 year ago
please watch my guitar cover for 'Like The Angel' on my channel and rate/comment =]
Julianuribe23 1 year ago
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please watch my cover for 'Like The Angel' on my channel and rate/comment =]
Julianuribe23 1 year ago
Edward&Tim = Loveeeeeee.........!!!!!!!
RISEANDBREAKING 1 year ago
Awesome!!!!!
AmyChan4ever 1 year ago
try and have the pace of the clips match the music and make the scenes match the lyrics more other than that it is good. i mean for this being your first its a good job.
missemospurt 1 year ago
Boa musica...
wesrjbr 1 year ago
Nice Combination =o
Rise AND FMA! Not bad :P
Evilpumpkin 1 year ago
thanks for responses! Make sure to watch the other two videos. YouTube made me delete my best one though :(
FullMetalRiseAgainst 1 year ago
this song will go better with the movie and good job
GufferZ69 1 year ago
I suggest adding effects to the clips. It gets boring when you know what's gonna happen on the first episode. Btw do you know how to download other episodes cause I only saw 1 and the intro?
4/5
DyteTheHedgehog1 2 years ago
at certain parts, the song really ties in with the show.
"And even though I've come so far,
I know I've got so far to go and
Any day now I'll explode."
I think that really ties it.
PERfECtlYxsCReWd 2 years ago
5/5 well done!! ^^
FMA's great and also the song!!
thanks for making it!!
SeiraReno92 2 years ago
I think it's a good video <3
SagariaXue 2 years ago
great song and vid! comes to my favo ^///^ well done!
ranji258 2 years ago
yeah kinda radom, is the bird the angel???
serickII 2 years ago
switch it up a little bit instead of keeping it to one scene of the show
hasayo666 2 years ago
It looks very random to meXD:P, even with the song srry mate
Garlox2 2 years ago
I'm not sure if it's what you were going for with the song 'like the angel' for these scenes, but if you really think about it it kinda makes sense. the main focus of that episode was about ed and al trying to bring back their mother, who could be considered as the 'angel' in the song. i don't know maybe i'm just rambling, but that's what i think
hellavictus 2 years ago 7
great song, great series... but i just dont think "like the angel" really goes with whats going on in the vid ^^;;. oh yeah and raws would be better, but meh, thats a minor detail. but all in all its not a bad amv for a 1st. ^^
kurotenshichan 2 years ago 2
You have to show more scenes from different episodes and the movie. But, otherwise it is perfect.
feorfax5 3 years ago
the subs destracted me from the song itself... brimngs back memories
heartbroken92595 3 years ago 2
i saw you post your kinda new at this? well song didnt go that well but dont let anyone elses comments get you down. Its better than half of these guys including me could do. Its nice keep up the good work man.
kenshinthereversed 3 years ago
I didn't read what other people commented, but here's my 0.02$:
Need raw videos.
Need more variety of scenes.
Need to try and adapt whats on screen with the lyrics of the song. Rarely does the AMV work if the lyrics don't add up with the on screen happening. :)
NebitnoJee 3 years ago 12
@NebitnoJee
True true, especially: Raw videos!:P Only let those subs stay if it really means anything in the vid, when the subs and the lyrics of the song maby match.
Garlox2 1 year ago
@NebitnoJee very good comment :)) I always try to compare lyrics with what is on the screen xD
Mangacreators 1 year ago
Its really good, one tihng you should change is having the "intro" scene at the end, instead include more footage. The "intro/credits" scene was boring.
dudeeaterkiller 3 years ago
CJZephyr, ur on crack. he was really organized. he had the perfect scene for the guitar solo
Dunepsycho283 3 years ago
you need to get more organized in your scenes.
like id pick a diff rise against song play this video with the sound turned off to a different song . i suggest rise against Drones.
it goes perfect with your beginning scenes.
CJZephyr 3 years ago
i like this song, anime and vid IMO...its decent :P
Zacoolguy 3 years ago
cookie !!!!!!!
heartbroken92595 3 years ago
Yh I agree w/ the others you got to match the theme/feeling of the song. For this Id do a clip of someone either leaving dying or fighting then dying, but thats just me
AnimeSkater101 3 years ago
first off, and this is just me you're spelling better wrong, i thought it was really good but for a fast song like this you need some more action shots, i did really like the "..turns into gold.."- pulling out the spear part it seemed really cool because the song had a bit of alchemy in it and that's where he was using alchemy.
DrArchibaldo 3 years ago
Okay you don't have to listen to all of my opinions cause i go with very detailed mistakes
anyways this is one of the easiest to achrieve ----- GET RAW CLIPS!!!!!!! these subbed ones are making my eyes sweat
and if you are using wmm then you are a good beginner ^^
Try some stuff with timing and cut up the clips more
if you want to know how to play with wmm more then google it and it will give you some awsome tut to read about.....
sorry if im expecting too much
xOXoWingedAng3lXoxO 3 years ago
You asked for an opinion so I'll offer mine. The clips were just as if I was watching that one scene from the first episode again. Also, try to use more of a variety of clips and maybe match the song with the nature of the video more. Please understand I'm not trying to be horrible when I say this but merely providing the constructive criticism you requested. I've only made slideshows but these would be things I try and include in my AMV. There's potential though so keep at it! =D
IdiotsApprentice 4 years ago
thanks, i mean like i just learned how to make amvs like a couple weeks ago, and when i got my first episode i made an amv, out of that, but im trying to get all the episodes before i make a 4th amv
FullMetalRiseAgainst 4 years ago
sweet amv. nice work
matimeo21 4 years ago
thank you, it's my first and im trying to make beter ones my second one is pretty good
FullMetalRiseAgainst 4 years ago