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From: OldSchoolSweetheart
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  • I can't wait for you to continue this! It's brilliant ;) Take your time, girl! I know it'll be worth the wait. x

  • you have to finish this story...you can't just keep us hanging what's wrong with you....It's been months with no update...this is just wrong I'm begging finish the story...PLEASE~~~

  • OMGOSH Michael is such a pro. I love how much Michael wants to show Johanna how much he has wanted her all this time. Oh no need to be sorry at all, with anticipation come an even greater reward. I am very excited to see the continuation of this beautiful love making. You are brilliant Johanna, you truly are :-).

  • ...AND I´M LOVING IT MORE AND MORE :-P

  • Mobile please

  • BRILLIANTTT!!!!!

    <333

    OMG! You inspire me sooo much I started writing because of youuu <3333

  • @xTheTrueKingMJx aww really?? you just made my saturday. thanks so much babe <3

  • Fantastic !!!!! x

  • Continue plz!!!

  • Damn!! That was HOTT!

  • I cant talk..just need to catch my breath..all i have to say is "BRAVO" :O

  • Yes girl yessssss I wasssss feeling it literally.Whewww I just wanna...Know what nevermind I just love this.

  • Girl, you just f'n SLAYED me! I think I had a big freakin' "O" just from reading that! Or a heart attack....or BOTH! Doggonit, I need a drink! And a cigarette! And a booty call! Hahaha! You soooo bad, chica! L-O-V-E! xxSara

  • dammiitttttttttttttt i kneewww you wasss gonnnaaa dooo thhatttttttttt...ugghhhhhhhhhh­hhhhhhhhhhhhh! buttt ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh chilldddddddddddddddddd i am lossssssss for words, now stop teasing ughhh!

  • Miss Johanna, all I can say is you go girl! Loved it...especially the way he tried to hold back, and when he gave in he still made sure he satisfied his lady first. God, he was sooooooo sexy, what a loss! Of course I know it's just a story, but I'm jealous!! He and I were only a little over a year apart....I should've gone to medical school in California instead of Ohio!!! Can't wait for the next part. Kiss my grandbaby for me before you write another thing!

  • MOBILE!!!!!!!!!

  • @lillianisgr8 it wont let me sorry =( gonna have to watch it on computer.

  • What happend.? This video was mobile now its not. Can you make it mobile please? :)

  • @MichaelJacksonlove89 it wont let me =(( gonna have to watch it on the comp.

  • gosh that was very very spicy, i got a bit shy reading itO.O ^^, i wanna write something like this too, but more of a short horror romance with a passionate scene too, i just want to get all these crazy feelings out of my head im so stuck!lol, anyway sorry!:( i can't wait for the next part i knew they wouldn't be able to resist each other:)

  • just WOW oh WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!!!!!! i really REALLY need the next part or i'll die D: <333 this was BEYOND fantastic this was...FANAMAZIBRILTERIFINOMANA­L!!! (made it up) xD <333

  • Johanna.. that was MEAN! AND SEXXXXAY! AYE PAPI! YUM!

  • WOW i'm speechless

  • OMG that was so amazing!!!! Next part please!!!!

  • Omg Joanna you dont know what you did to me girl with that part..omg...i was waiting so much for this....amazing..JUST amazing....

  • OMG!

    AMAZINGGGGG!

    I love u for this storiess! <3333333333333333333333

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