updates on my work

[kelseybutler94]

love it, keep on posting :)

[BboySmaLLzs]

nicee man but i like #2 more

[62994A]

sample 1... 5/10

sample 2... 8/10 :)

[LuNaruto]

nice :D very good :))

[TrishE8679]

toooo mono tone!

[MJmeeko]

MODERN WARFARE 2!!!!!!!!!!!!11

[brookie966]

awsome!!

[misiaczek408]

~~cool ~~ =)

[firewithpower12]

Sick songs man!!  : )

[gslkgksdfjdhf]

nice sound man!

[HowlWithMe17]

sweet work! ;D i liked it

[98887877666565555555]

i like #2

[flea800]

Good work! :D

[MichaelDoakTV]

dangit i dont have an xbox live or 360 only a wii

[stephaniepercoski03]

wow dude this is stupid!

[HankIsAwsome]

dude nice work

[SkaterDude2419]

sexy jk but nice

[kevinmaihouse]

nice man!_! :)

[sk8rmagicflip]

beats are sick you need to work on your rap like go hard bro speak louder and it wouldnt hurt to through some sick diss's in there peace im out bro

[jasperoni100]

Cool dude

[candyyp]

wicked tunee..love the sound

[LilyLilyLilyPotter]

this is koolish. :l

[rocklee9876]

tight!!

[haticekubraaa]

Good , man ;)

[Suckersist]

nice

[misslucy37]

cool well can u see my vid when u mailed me?

[BLACKbloodPUNK]

first :P

[ApRiL3706]

they sound the same

[RayJazer]

i like them both!

[hannah30123]

look i dont really want to watch this so yah just tell me about this vid k bye (=

[neoviper25]

who the hell r you and why did u send me a video!?!?!?!

[bradypatsomg12]

1 is best

[2AMReanoy]

Dude you need ta put some soul and emotion or some shit in your voice when you rap, besides that your doin good.

my tag is: xGoDx Reanoy

Peace!

[AnimeQueen136]

ehh so so xP

[jaydellshah]

Total crap

[USEPartyPeople]

1. terrible

2. The exact same

3. please dont make a 3

[VivaMcd]

1 is better.

2 got no energy

[moonsparkle08]

Sample 2 is my favorite, however the beginning of sample 1 is nice as well.

[fireZeeZ]

1 is better..

2 needs work :/

[ZintheHood13]

Honestly, your raps were a little sketchy in my opinion.

Haha, you know its me, jaydays, writing new rap songs, doin' my thing.

didn't like it. the amount of syllables was inconsistent, and i found it a bit annoying. Plus, your sound quality wasn't the best. I would try getting a better mic. Autotune won't fix everything, my friend.

hey, you know i can't believe it, it's your boy jaydays about to spit on this beat because i can't take the rhymes.

found this very annoying.

Itellitlikeitis.

[mortalman]

Awsome!

Sample 2 was amazing =D

[TheRyan113]

Oh and 1 more thing, I would seriously listen to your music if you became an entertainer, and I usually really dont like rap, keep up the good work

[TheRyan113]

Awesome

[Wi1qi]

on the boat (2) is better

[after10pmenator]

i like sample 2 better. Great job! 5 stars!

[TheOTShow]

pretty  bad ass

[n1njak1dd]

you suck! it sound like your rapping to a pokemon beat

[ZintheHood13]

@n1njak1dd nice way to put it, my friend. Familiar with it?

[VampireSesshomaru]

nice! :)

[TechdosCompany]

Neat...

[Nakatawannacandy]

Good Job !

[bobandcake]

So so

[OoohShiny555]

5 stars

[samsta4eva11]

wow there great man good job

[62994A]

im glad i got this vid shown to me or i never would have seen your awsome video

[PeterRubens]

great job!!

[Sprax6]

Sprax21 my Gamertag

[VannaRebel]

preety awsome

[Nemiah010492]

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[ZintheHood13]

@Nemiah010492 why the hell would you spend ten minutes of your time writing this?

[Nemiah010492]

wHahahA... I onLy spEnd 1miNs tYpinG tHiS....

[shiniekwaz]

lol

[weirdrandomgirlXD]

definantly great beats, you need to go with it more, and dude call of duty is wicked! but i have it on ps2 so oh wells

[HalFlame55]

good job man.

[tenaciousmango]

omg can't get it to play

[1000000Sub]

rap was coool !!! well done !!

[StJimmytheThird]

Pretty Cool

[MsBrownies123]

not bad

[RetributionAngel]

your not even on the beat

this is bad

[cuathao1]

nice

[MSPHATTyVANGy]

Need more work. But great beats.

[linkinpark3363]

its ok srry but im not really into this stuff sooo ya

[AdiRockzNCoolz]

nice i like your raps :)

[OwNmaSTeR820]

nice this is good. this is you!

[trisharoxz09]

Cool

[7nefsea]

nice, but add some more flow to your ryhmes. still 4/5

[ashleyyy9797]

cool

[ThyDr3am3r]

u should really put more emotions in raping , like it sound you read it from paper without any emotion to that , its not homework , its music , feel it , show us how u feel it ... Good luck

[craxxxxxxy]

lol. I'm on a boat instrumental?

[darkmattersunshine]

I liked Sample 1 <3

[Littleelfbailey]

1!!!! uh....2!!!!!....3? XD I like 'em both!

[2lazy2krazy]

1!!!!!!!!!!!

[sims2geek22]

Awesome vidz

[crashuke]

cool i will subscribe

[ShynessIsGolden]

I liked sample 1 better :3

[Gaby21291]

sample2!

[jesse777111]

Cool!

[00theH]

those are some sick beats keep going at it

[jamess4444]

hello i will have modern warfare 2 tomowor but heres my xbox live acount

oo7jamess ok sweet man

[shadowben19]

Go With Sample 1 :D

[Rickie479]

Awesome Video, please get people to subscribe!

[mnsfilms2]

cool 5/5

[Eaglesfan9727]

first one by a longshot really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[xxwhatswrongemokidxx]

cool! more please!

[christinajhnstn]

both was criss but my fav was sample 1, just make sure you dont sell your soul tryna become a rapper it aint worth all that.=p .... AYE CALL OF DUTY!! DHATS MY GAME!! my xbox broke though so imma get another one for christmas.damn i wanted to bust your ass real quick in that CoD. lol

[PeaceLoveHello]

both were great! i love sample 1 the most though. Great job! :)

[cry4me2day]

go with sample 1

i did not know you were a rapper xD (that is freakin cool!)

[ShadowRunZombie]

my gt is xFNPx

yea dude i agree with the others the beat is sick but work on the flo

[alexel26]

i liked the beat on second sample, but ur flo' was horrible....work more on your flo' and try to match the vocal part to the beat

[SaltShakerIsME]

Okay, I'm going to give it to you straight. The instrumental is great, but you need to work on your voice. You sound like you are slightly out of breath. Work on your cardio so you can put some more power behind your lyrics and make it more continuous. good luck =)

[MrBajaboy5b]

cool but needs more bass.

[RiotViolance]

Cool!!! More of this awesome crap!!!!

Good Luck, Dude

[LoveAdriann]

i liked sample1 a lot =D good luck!

[thatkidudontnotice]

its good but i really dont like rap or hip hop sorry

[coollikethewind]

nice video

[Rowan07001484]

It's good, but the sound quality is pretty bad.

[ashfallsdown]

Yo ur nice for it.

[MrFendkg287316]

.....

[patco444]

Interesting :)

[SkulledStardemXX]

Awesomness. @.@

[Uruthae]

nice :]

[HelierCube]

why u send me this.....idc

[SPECENTERTAINMENT]

you are good! <3

[armanx2]

i'm not a hip hop fun or something but your sample 1 is prety good i guess

[DianaH18]

cool beat

[Disneychrapper]

I like that beat lol.... those flows was raw

[DanceandDontstop]

awesome

[happah2]

nice

[annekajeremy]

cool

[brandonbenjamin]

Hey did you get that email from brandon benjamin...

[sickmaster123]

ye i can't w8

[granthinkle1]

my gamer profile is in all capital letters and its: KETCHAMAN

[ferrwyt44]

:o dude i didnt realize how rockin you are!!!! dang bro really 5.5

[raizenpk]

Awsome, dude :D

[666studios2]

cool

[mixsh]

I like 1 sample

[sickmaster123]

r u going to do a jaydays wiiner of the week angin?

[jaysdaystv2]

YES REALLY SOON ACTUALLY

[Sukii]

i like the beat

[ivananaya1]

awsome dude u rock