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  • ---BELOW ME ARE SHITTY VERSES---

  • I mae a french interpretation of this song check it on my channel its called "Qui l'aurais cru ?" see yall

  • yo i feel this beat from the ground up trough my feet pumpn in my teeth all the way to my head drug with drawals have me bightn trough led hearing voices in my head sayn i deserve to be dead mabey i should kill myself just leave a letter on the shelf sayn i couldnt handle the pain of this twisted game that god created im fed up of been hated lifes to over rated all ppl do is get faded and sell drugs till there house gets raided plus not to menchn all the rapest and raceist ppl out there

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  • When reading these comments, i don't know whether its a rap or just a statement so i say normal sentences in with the beat and come out to sound like an idiot.

  • another day of life again, someone bring it to an end,

    with a pen, even then,

    i might not feel pain

    eversince i was a kid my life wont be the same

    this animal im trying to tame

    that none can keep contained

    im i strange? i always think so

    no words said, its all in my head

    will i soon be dead? cause it feels like im gettin chased an my heart is racin,i pick up the pace an relize it was all in my cranium, gotta keeep away from these crazy thoughts cuz i cant be containing them

  • @GarIicjr Check out my song Visine... Shady 2.0 need to quit playin & sign me

  • Fuck this planet, and every body on it, fuck people, do evil. Get drunk and do dumb shit. I give a fuck who you want bitch ima slap you in the mouth and give you some dick. Im at home cheesesn just thinken about how last weekend I had your bitch on her kneese taken my back shots and letten me skeeze in her fun box. your mom loves cocks i love to start drama. Go to black community's and shout fuck obama. Hi im the new osama plz hate me, cause i just kidnapped lil wayne em and jayz.

  • Check out the freestyle i did to this beat..its on my youtube page all comments are helpful.... haters can ignore this doe cuz ill ignore ya!!! BTW some of these freestyles ppl write on this are dope as hell like @mistastealyagrl5 @tomwhotomme @potatohead93 and many more keep up the dope ass work

  • watch?v=o8BzjxOuEFQ

  • The world is goin crazy over triangles & pyramids not realizin they kids is too high to kno what year it is, They say Lunacie u take shit too serious Meanwhile amber cole is suckin dick after 3rd period.. -Lunacie

  • @Lunacie dude that shit is hot,

  • JME sampled this for serious,

  • im like a m 80 the way a couple drinks make me spark in the night,i get so drunk i barf on her like,bitch something aint right you that dudes wife honestly i think you should suck my dick tonight, get it right get a motive, these gun explosions leave ya lungs wide open,so read up about how i use to beat up ever single pussy and spit on his free lunch,was the late night type kinda what ya wife like, i might just slide in the pussy easier then gettin you to hit a crack pipe leave her back striped

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  • keep on talking ,

    il do the walkin , while your tounges twisted,

    im teleporting, to a higher realm,

    heres the beat ima warp it,

    heres your lyrics , there distorted,

    so cork it , let a real rapper grab the mic,

    and walk it , set fire to the booth,

    they say "fuck, abort it ,,

  • i dig the beat like panama canal pull the root of my body lika root canal an yell lika dike gettin its first dick i'l be better then curtis jackson first an 2nd soon to be 3rd flick i'm absurd an beatin off with mustard in the middle of slims concert my cons work better the fox 11 i box any age under 12 middleclass lightweight i hold my rod str8 out like flagpole in congressional hearing i'm pro stress an hit hiphop lika deadlift on top 18 wheeler driften with joker yellin theres a batman

  • MUTE THE TIRES AND YOU WILL HAVE about 1/2 of the instrumental not including that hook part tho whith the orchestra comes in for about 5 mins but the rest of this loop looks like it might work with the song so i might be able to make the acapella

  • carson owns

  • you can call me Trenton but my alter ego is CrazyTrent simmilar to slim shady

    but I call it my own didnt you read the caller id you got from me on your telephone,

    (crazy Trent)yup thats my name look me up but you wont get results im underground shocking people with lightling volts I like emily brownning and haley williams to tell you the truth id fuck both im disrespectful sorry I mean fuck off dont tell me your sad story lol

  • Im not Trenton Im not trent My name is crazy Trent hitting on girls hi cadence

    in your words how do you describe entertainment when real music hasent been alive for ages damm fuck the new school im driving in a brand new car kicking old school hearing nothing but vocals jamming to Todo (girl says) "is that a name of a frog"no homo,its the name of a famous band from before you were born when you were still in your dad sack

  • you guys Are okay but you lack creativity whatch this,

    all haters do is talk shit thier talkative like this critics on 10pm late night news look how many obstacles they have me fight thru people act like 2012 is the end of the world but the sky is still bright blue,fucken idiots,how the fuck are you gonna make a song without swear words without sounding like that fagget justin beiber (oh hell no) couldnt stand boy bands from the beginning not even thier screaming fans women

  • You AND THE FUCKING TIRES ARE PISSING ME OFF thats ok tho becuase i got the full STUDIO VERSION OF EMINEM - MMLP - WHO KNEW Instrumental ( OFFICIAL DJ PREMIER ) same beat dr dre used ... o.0 and im making the acapella right now!

  • Canibus uses words that hurt my brain,

    Like when superman decided not to fuck louis lane,

    Ja rule be getting horny over 2pac,

    He loves it when he gets fucked in the ass with black childs mac,

    Eminem could kill ja with a song like fack,

    And make him kill himself with a gun from his never before used gun rack,

  • @47tenlicks

    I write real lyrics and i'm white?

    goo listen .

  • i don't lack in rhymes when i rap in each line,i don't back down neither i smack clowns like im a wife beater im trying to get my life neater but i keep pullin a knife on these walmart greeters,wipe that fuckin smile off ur face before you get sprayed with a mace and laid to waste and i drown you with toothpaste.i

  • can kick ur ass quick have the audience yellin "that was fantastic" beat ur moms tits of and just say that they were plastic,this can get real drastic i can suspend you and put you into detention too just for getting sarcastic

  • im that motherfucker that never got laughed at ,i tuck gats ,ill stick u up so where the cash ,ima blow up like when gasoline meets a match and attack, like a pit ,on your ass ,yeah n i never kind around, talk shit than u and your crew will get nitted down, n i dont shit around, stick u up with a bandana and the fitted down, ask around im the rawhestt nigga in the town like this if u agree this rawh

  • lemme kno what u think hit me up on my page im 14 years old freshman in high school (white) read top to bottom please

  • yeah im goin in like the police raids on 45th, my people people despite, you stand behind me if you catch my drift, yea, haterz hate cause there rocked by my shift, and these words that i spit, make them pussys wanna get up an dip, shook and scared, beause obviously there not aware, that i was the hardest thing that hit 'em sine tupac shakur, ye , i knew they didnt want it, i got this money so i flaunt it, the worlds a scary house and im haunting it! so go ahead keep talkin that shit your the

  • continued^ -fuel to this fire your about to be hit...like the celebration blunt on the 4th of july, and the wick, what a perfect combination for shit exploading in the sky, why did my fatherr have to die, thats one less person to hate and despise, ashin the blunt passin out while watching the smoke rise, i wonder if they can feel the pain looking into a 14 year olds eyes, when its just a disguise to how i really feel

  • You live in a mud hut, don’t go hungry slut. Why don’t you get your drug infested father to light up a blunt, I’m sure he’ll be able to peform some mad stunt, cause the poor cunt is probably still on the hunt, for something more extreme, because of that daydream where he thought he was smearing over ice cream over your grand father in the sahara, whilst peforming felatio on a kid with a balaclava. So he thought he was in Lord of the Rings, and jumped into Lava.

  • and i thought that rap fans were a pain before?

    but look at yall, go ahead, complain some more,

    i'll just raid your store, and steal a bag of chips,

    and make change dissapear like magic tricks,

    if your in range, then your ears get ripped in half dog,

    walked into work, and i flipped the staff off,

    ...see i just wanna go home and jack off,

    drink a 6 pack, then i'll play some black ops.

    take my mask off and rape some virgins,

    and seal the bodies up in the drapes and curtains.

  • I laugh at how some people say that they wouldnt want to go mainstream, and theyed rather stay underground. THATS BULLSHIT. Everyone would give up maybe like 40 grand a year for hundreds of millions.

  • em gassed this whole song

  • Nowdays everybody is actin strange, it's all a game, sayin' they'll make it from the street the the fame in a matter

    of two days. But me I can see that it's not about skill and being ill cause we got fake fucks like lady gaga and

    justin bieber still. but I ain't mad i feel glad that I ain't part of the fad and not on some car insurance ad singin

    about low prices on some new devices that came out from some new enterprises gee I wonder what the next surprise is?

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  • I ain't gangsta I'll admit it my names not Ice Cube, but at least I'm not lying like everyone else here on Youtube, your rhymes are whack, kiss my white middle class ass, I'm a class act and I'll tear you down thats a fact, all these pussies on here that think they can rap, just because they wear baggy clothes, nikes and a cap, it's not what you look like what you wear or how you speak its how well you spit and most of this shit is WEAK.

  • @1pete51 yeah yeah I agree with your paragraphic comment, I not only witness on here but locals around me think they OGs from smoking chronic, see I in reality am a renagade purify spitter, and in this rap game Im on the ONE mic like Nas, while these cunts following drake on twitter, wardrobe has nothing to do with the lyrical genetics of my game, but fuck it Im staying underground, not selling out for fame or to promote my name. Yall some futuristic skinny bitches smoking crack cocaine, insane.

  • @1pete51 haha dope flow man!! :P

  • Arrived drunk, guzzled further bourbon at the club/ "can i see your id sir" 'did you just ask me to fuck?!' / took a swing at the bouncer fore he threw me out the club. walked home in a haze, then in my daze was rather amazed, no keys and found to be locked out, starting bashin on the window then reverted to screamin out "is there anyone in the house" , took a walk to clear my head saw one of my girls and flopped my cock out/ sticked my bar in thought this would make her cherry pop 'ripe' out

  • with the sharpest knife I can grab/ driving along, running down anybody riding the bicycle path/ ran over that same fat bitch/ didn't she know not to ride her bike in traffic

  • I never knew I could rap like this/ I never I could get slapped right quick/ by some fat white bitch/ with a strapless too tight to fit/ chill out bitch, why don't you ride an exercise bike a bit/ anyway back to rapping/ glad to be a has been/ better than being a never have been/ stuck up and arrogant/ I'm a good samaritan/ nurse you back to health so you can get stabbed again

  • Sometimes I lie in bed, Pretend to be dead

    Because I'm to petrified to blast myself in the freaking head.

    I can't think straight, I'm trying to concentrate,

    But it seems no matter what I do, It matters not, as of late.

    I really tried this time, I honestly did.

    I just can't get through the door... Guess my head's too big.

    I might not be smart, but I'm not that dumb.

    At least I'm not like you, looking stupid, sucking your thumb...

    

  • Don't stop the tape/ Please, oh please, the replay button, i may have to rape!

    I can't get enough of this/ It's controlling my mind

    Something is wrong with this line/ Shouldn't I be making a diss?

    Oh, well, maybe not/ I'll just come out, instead, with something else, thats hot

    I may not be the next Shady/ But I will say one thing, baby

    "Fuck you!"/ That's what, grab you outta the stroller, kick you right in a zoo

    Let the lions eat u/ Think I give a shit, well, hell, maybe I do!

    But i dont, ;)

  • Dammit!!! Was listening to ths for a whole minute before I figured out it was the instrumental.

  • @XCRAZYdave21X hahaha thats awesome!!!

  • no hook? 

  • this is copied from JME - SERIOUS!!!! not original

  • i dont do right music i make tight music for loose bitches who doubt me/ never know any fu**in thing bout me/ i get roudy n cause a fight/ slice u in the neck with a 12' knife/ my skin white but mind aint ight mind u i do it er night/ oops just spilled the beans/ wind up dead inside my washin machine/ my flow so sick i light up the room like a glow stick/ no x needed i just slit both wrists n lost both wits/ only the two that i had left only leavin balls blue/ n the reason i do this is cuz of u

  • @WickedSchemer verbal sick rabies, im passin out the swine flu/ its all about me nevermind you/

    look im right behind you, drop ya body hope the copsll find you, cant see me is you blind dude?

    i fly thru take ya head, post it up./ dont care if you drug free im still dope as fuck./

    how you gon breath when i leave ya throat in cuts, focus slut what time ya legs open up?/

    Ya raps a joke betta wear ya fuckin clown suit,/ its me against you but still i surround you./

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  • @bmoore210

    and not cursing doesn't you a good rapper either, does it? besides, Eminem is considered a great rapper not because he curses, but because he is talented (complex multi syllable rhyme schemes, delivery, storytelling, style, emotions, etc). And even if you don't agree with him on a lot of stuff, u still can appreciate his artistic expression because if you have lived a similar life you probably would have different views as well, but if u haven't, its hard to understand.

  • @BKZik

    agreed bro finally someone who understands lyrical concept. Hes got one of the most complex flows of any rapper and he reinnovated multi syllables.

  • @BKZik Oh oh oh oh I love you so much. You just shut him the fuck up

  • @BKZik good comment,but thats not what he meant.

  • @bmoore210

    obviously you can't tell he is being metaphoric when he pulls the will smith line...

  • @bmoore210 Eminem, doesn't talk about "fucking bitches" I mean, yeah it's on the surface, but he uses that to make points he isn't lie Lil Wayne or almost every other rapper who raps on the surface, he raps about life, politics, and things that people can connect to, or try to connect to, and what that other guy said too :D

  • @bmoore210 WAIT! Hold up, just so everyone knows, I am NOT talkinga bout Em at all. I was referring to all the punk kids who post their verses and its full or stupid shit like how they will fuck your sister cause they are a huster...but they are actually 12 year old suburban white kids. These kids will NEVER understand true rap/hip-hop if they stay in that mind-state. You gotta be deep

  • @bmoore210 YES YAY ur real man Dat is real man dats da right way to look at it

  • @bmoore210 FUCK!

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  • 500 charaters aint enough, especialy when imma buff, up your fuckin ass, so wuite while your ahead, maybe then you wont end up in a publick toilet dead!? i know you think imma bluff, but im not imma smoke you out with puff, you little poof, what the fuck are you tryin to proove, imma come back wiv more, imma come back and draw, ma dagger out ma pocket pocket, and like i said imma stab your sorry ass *jay Hudson* **11 year old from brummy town birmingham**
  • quit tryina fuck wiv royalty just coz you think your loyalty, to ur friend "the bad man" is enough, well once and for all, imma show u whos tough, get a life, get a girl, settle down, or imma turn the whole world around, imma play cath with ur life, then imma strike it with a nife, imma cut it open till you bleed, imma fuck u over till you plead, "pleaz stop pleaz please please" "ok" "realy" "NO now sit the fuck down or imma pokeya self esteam til thers nofing left, like a lung wivout a breath"
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  • @SYKEme123 WTF ? You are so dumb

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  • a confession is made, i haven't had a date since the nth grade.. n even then it was 2 late, they pronounced it as a date rape.. my guidance, a heineken, nd my teachers wat would they say then again teachers r gay just like canadians, ay?? fuck it, ill go 2 the nearest gym just get buff, talk smooth nd act tough nd make these pussies bak up go across my house 2 these milfs hut, give my milk up.. we fuck 2 late, husband comes home and they split up.. but you know me, lonely as bonos d quick to
  • its a shame that ppl online dont use proper English/ looped or not this beat helps me think of obscene shit/ whenever i grab this pen and paper or /whenever i snatch up a hot blonde bitch and rape her/ i mean honestly man are you that stupid/ essentially every beat in hip hop is like 8 bars of looped shit/ throw in a couple of sound effects/ like broken bottles moaning models of gay men having sex/ bam there you go a sick instrumental/ now all you need is a rapper like me whos sick and mental

  • I'm the realest there is, fuck the critics decisions

    opinionated bullshit man im so sick of fucking hearing it

    Im done dealing with it, ima kill them with this

    verse, its critical, cynical critic killing hiphop villian

    its visual, these lyrics I lay through my pen on this paper

    clear as day, take from it what you may, just know that ill still

    be spittin and droppin heat, till my heart skips a beat

    im well on my feet

  • i never knew i... would ever gets this big i never knew i... would affect this kid i never knew i.... get him to slit his wrist i never knew i... get him TO HIT THIS BITCH!! LoL

  • Throwing freak tantrums cause 500 letters ain't enough, for my brain to maintain so it occasionally combusts like my dick wen i fuck but wit freewill i contain what i must & aim for the fuckfaces that made it up. Using Youtube CEO faces as pucks hat tricking, pulling rabbits from space then shooting the place up, after giving em its leg to embrace luck. What an attractive trait, only til u extrapolate that i faxed this 100 years past this date to see what type of space & time pattern it creates.
  • Who Knew? that my askewd comment box use of youtube

    would ever introduce u to the cleverest smooth dude

    rippin & chewin on reused instrumentals wit mental voodoo,

    building fanbase wit each new view.

    I still havent found what im looking for like U2

    so i leave visual jewels on pages till i bid you adieu.

    Im a Transylvanian beat phantom, BK born still i suck the life

    out of rhythmic feats at random to keep handsome.

    Except those needed for fee ransoms,

    Look out...it might be the next street anthem.

  • kick ass beat man

  • i have a confession to make i havent had a date scince the 8th grade, and even then it was date rape how many takes will it take, no rush we all make mistakes or at least thats what my teachers say, then again techers are gay. but so are canadians *eh* ill go to the gym to get buff, talk smooth and act tough, beat the small kids up without giving a FUCK, *enoughs enough* stop! if i had to resort to shit id resort to this... suicide w/o giving a shit what my family thinks
  • @CarsonsGuitarLesson Dude thats one dope ass verse u made props bro

  • @CarsonsGuitarLesson  Dude thats one dope ass verse u made props bro

  • @PabloL659 Thanks bro, means alot

  • @CarsonsGuitarLesson uh darth vader, im coming for your paper,

    ill catch a hater later say your prayer im your savior

    laugh at everything you say cuz ima fucking hater

    and if you want beef i dont have a passive nature

    yee, evil genius nah call me evil jesus with a penis in your nieces when i give them reese's pieces fill em with diseases grab your keys n peace cuz youll be sleepless when you see this im a beast i got polices pullin heaters when they speed here

  • @potatohead93 I Saw that on a AOTP instrumental. e.o shitcunt you stealing rhymes?

  • @xwca1 i'm the same guy dumbass... check again

  • @potatohead93 everything but the "evil jesus" part was awesome and funny,you got mad talent bro

  • @potatohead93 thanks im steeling all that

  • i put potatoes on the muzzle to muffle the blast.

    mr potatoe, you're crumbled, i got you looking hash.

    i'm in fatigues like it's nash, ready to rumble and clash.

    and armed for armageddon; fuck a tussle, i smash.

    till that last trumpet blast i'm a hustle my craft.

    put the muzzle off knish and let my dog walk my ass.

    sink my cuspids into trouble and ask it to bite back.

    fuck living on the humble, i could take a pimps flash.

    and decked out in his ensemble i gave you a pimp slap.

  • youre a bad looper

  • @chrisscross619

    lol stop making me laugh. I rather listen to this than to your lame beats. And by the way, who told you I looped this?

  • @BKZik

    haha okay.. so you didn´t looped this ? :D

    dumb ass.. this last bassline told it to me ;)

    And by the way you are gay ;)

  • @chrisscross619

    ha ha man u r so dumb. I thought u would understand by my last comment, but I guess you are just too stupid to realize that I just uploaded it. I'm not the guy who actually looped it. And even so, it's still a hundred times better than your beats (if you can even call them beats lol). So Fuck off u faggot, bitch ass pussy queef sniffer

  • @BKZik @BKZik well i dont know if you make beats becouse i dont want to waste my time checking out your gay ass channel .. but if you do.. i bet they are as good as this uploaded "instrumental" is looped you gay ass biiiaaatch ;)

  • @chrisscross815

    man u don't give up, do you? whether it's looped or not, it sounds much better than your "beats." besides, just check how many people thought this looped instrumental sucks. Now u r mad cuz I said ur beats r gay as fuck. Shit u r probably as gay as your so called beats. No wonder they suck dicks. So fuck off

  • @chrisscross815

    few more things: your cat is also gay like you. No wonder you got him in the bathroom. Did he sucked your dick. How come a 30 years old can spend so much time on Youtube arguing about whether or not a beat is looped. Don't u gotta a job or a girlfriend. Oh shit I almost forgot, you are gay.

  • the song is supper looooooooooool

  • remember me*

  • awesome love it

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