er, the dialogue is sometimes a little strange... but i really like the way you portray tom (he's awesome!) ... and i could totally see how hermione would turn to that diary (especially in her first years) and to tom eventually, so, well done
Is english your second language? The premise here is okay, but your grammar is wrong and phrasing awkward. Next time, you might want to have someone beta the dialogue.
That's because it's not meant to say 'better'. Beta (in fanfiction and fanvideos) is another term for edit. My comment wasn't meant to be rude, just constructive. Though, you might want to look at your own writing before correcting someone else's.
I would never do that to my friends. No matter how much I loved someone. Friends are forever. Boys are whatever. That's my motto and it always will be.
@aquamarine3274 I used to believe friends are forever too :( But when I got with my now husband my friends didn't like him so they ditched me since I wouldn't leave him. Now it's been 5yrs we have 2 kids and an AWESOME marriage. I chose a boy over friends and I have never been happier in my life. Life lessons :)
wow! such an original storyline! congrats! .. it'd have been greater if Tom had killed Hermione in the end .. He's such an evil guy! .. btw great job!
Wow
tommarvolorocks 4 days ago
Nice ;))))))
DjMarbrax 1 year ago
Awesome!
ggirl20121 1 year ago
it sucks
354sydet 1 year ago
I love this! Christian coulson as Tom riddle is AMAZING!!!!! How do you make vids like this?
TomRiddlesGirl 1 year ago
I LOVE THIS ONE!!! You should turn it into a fan fiction!!!
SarineLewis 1 year ago
Very intreresting! Wonderful job!
ladyscorpiosha 2 years ago
CREEPY!!!!!! Loved it!!!
FlashakaViolet 2 years ago
O_O
Voldewart/Hermione?
That's new!
Morningdew1435 2 years ago 2
I don't think English is your first language... but lovely video anyways.
thelastenglishrose 2 years ago 3
This is pretty good
CassFrass11 2 years ago
umm intrasting i have to say i love how you do your videos.
RubyFan666 2 years ago
wtf is '''posing as harlot'''??? lol sorry wtf.. and rly what did ginny do? but then again voldemort is ruthless...xd
Szonja101 2 years ago
what did ginny do?
CREN13Queen 2 years ago
maybe she was just the bait... IDK
Szonja101 2 years ago
very well done could be totally believeble I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
tamari45667843432 2 years ago
wow very nice well done Would love if you wrote a fic even
ladynekoami 3 years ago
This is great! Its not like the other Tom/Hermione's I've watched. A nice change! Good job!
VeggiezGurl 3 years ago 2
Totally cool that she killed them I thought it was great
Stephycats7785 3 years ago 2
That was...depressing. But it was good. Does that make sense?
Anywho- I liked it. ^^
starlightmalfoy 3 years ago
who sings it and what's it called? Is it called like you?
bonkadoo 3 years ago
The song is Like You by Evanescence
CatherineDeMerville 3 years ago
how it will end ?
Tom will kill hermione?
Hani1989 3 years ago
haven't words for this... it's amazing, the story is very good & your editing let it seeems like it would really be so ^.^ Good job!
KeiraAndGeo 3 years ago 2
That's creepy...
mrscheshire 3 years ago
er, the dialogue is sometimes a little strange... but i really like the way you portray tom (he's awesome!) ... and i could totally see how hermione would turn to that diary (especially in her first years) and to tom eventually, so, well done
GGaddictDGB 3 years ago
I think I have a crush on Tom!!! He's just so cute!
Descendents1711 3 years ago
So. . .wait, what did he kill her and what's all this at the beginning about a Dean, I'm so confuzzled, but it was really good
XxGoodxRiddancexX 3 years ago
Ive Fallen for Tom!
Thats Bad Cause Ive Fallen For
Harry Potter & Draco Malfoy!:P
Now I have to Choice Good (harry), Bad (draco), or Evil (tom)
19nonnahs93 3 years ago
I don't see the prob really:D
How about a little good, a little bad, a little evil? I mean loads of all three of course!
GGaddictDGB 3 years ago
ok i have everyone! ya me! :P the prob was i didnt know who to pick!
19nonnahs93 3 years ago
omg that was soooooooo good!I love it!
PikachuGirl717 3 years ago
ok am i the only
one who thinks
tom riddle is
gorgeous?
19nonnahs93 3 years ago
no way!!!!
he is gorgeous =] =]
MizzBeccii 3 years ago
thanks god i thought
i was the only one
its just look at what
he becomes if he became
Voldemort cause no one
loved him then i should
be in the books cause
hes gorgeous!
19nonnahs93 3 years ago
lol
aii true
lol
well hes gorg. as tom riddle :L:L:L:L:L:L
MizzBeccii 3 years ago
obviously when he's
Tom Riddle! LOL! :D
19nonnahs93 3 years ago
lmao :D:D:D:D:D
true true
MizzBeccii 3 years ago
wow nicly done love the pairing
QueenoftheGods 3 years ago
loving it
xx1babyblu 3 years ago
sad!
Jessiisthebest 3 years ago
dun dun dun dark dark dark i love dark so dun worry. yay i love this pairing!
DarkEmoShadow 3 years ago
OMG tssss it is awesome!
hermione2411 4 years ago
Is english your second language? The premise here is okay, but your grammar is wrong and phrasing awkward. Next time, you might want to have someone beta the dialogue.
RhymesWithShady 4 years ago
Speaking of grammar..beta is not the correct way to say better
darkie2390 4 years ago
That's because it's not meant to say 'better'. Beta (in fanfiction and fanvideos) is another term for edit. My comment wasn't meant to be rude, just constructive. Though, you might want to look at your own writing before correcting someone else's.
RhymesWithShady 4 years ago
That is so awesome!!!!!!
5/5 and faves!
SarineLewis 4 years ago
hehehe - you really put a twist to the video Dasha.... WELL DONE
That was a THRILLER :D
swtchell 4 years ago
ich finds cool, aber natürlich würde sie nie ihre freunde töten. schließlich liebt sie ja eig ron, und harry ist ihr bester freund
96Musicgirl 4 years ago
I wonder what this says. Anybody able to read this?
SwollenEyeAgent 4 years ago
i don't like how u made hermione a murder. she would never b able 2 do that 2 the people she really loves
lovesfrogs15 4 years ago
completly right! hermione NEVER kill the ones she loves, besides, she's always worried about them, she woudn't change her mind so easy!
Eitir 4 years ago
it is just a video.
crookshanksexoh 4 years ago 2
I know seriously!
It's a thing called creativity!
darkie2390 4 years ago
i absolutely love it, you really made it dark and dramatic, my favorite!!
5Tiala5 4 years ago
oh this is good aqnd my fav evanescenc song, i cry when i hear it cause its ab her sister and i think what would ahppen if i lost my sister
latech97 4 years ago
okay is the song called Like You? Who sings it?
bonkadoo 4 years ago
"Like you" by Evanescence
Markvadass 4 years ago
Who sings this song?
aquamarine3274 4 years ago
Evanescence!
Markvadass 4 years ago
I would never do that to my friends. No matter how much I loved someone. Friends are forever. Boys are whatever. That's my motto and it always will be.
aquamarine3274 4 years ago 16
@aquamarine3274 yeah, chicks over dicks...Don't judge me, guys say "Bros over hoes" so now it's our turn. :)
MrsPattinson25 1 year ago 2
@aquamarine3274 I used to believe friends are forever too :( But when I got with my now husband my friends didn't like him so they ditched me since I wouldn't leave him. Now it's been 5yrs we have 2 kids and an AWESOME marriage. I chose a boy over friends and I have never been happier in my life. Life lessons :)
gabby0515 4 months ago
@aquamarine3274 You're so fucking right
TheBreakaway95 4 months ago
wow, a murderous hermione...you made it work... you're a genius
Huey027 4 years ago 10
wow
aquamarine3274 4 years ago
ok this is one of the saddest videos I've seem in a long time I mean she like murdered for love depressing yet such great editing!!overall good
~cloiegirl12~
cloiegirl12 4 years ago 3
Great story! Love the song too. Not too sure about the ending, though.
FantasmaLuna666 4 years ago
That's hot
cranterny 4 years ago 2
great :D fantastic story... :)
agusiaczek10 4 years ago
Awesome
Shiek01 4 years ago
Oh my god. how are you so freaking amazing?
SwollenEyeAgent 4 years ago
not bad @ all wd
jessaleksoski 4 years ago 2
Amazing! 5/5 ANOTHER ANOTHER!
Hatchett1992 4 years ago
Wonderful video! :-) Not to mention that it includes my favorite pairing and song! XD Great job!
Riddlemione 4 years ago
amazing video..i love it
sweetkiakkia 4 years ago
That was AWESOME.
Haha, really, it was great. It'd make a pretty good fanfic if you wanted. Nice editing, and yes, I think you made it very dramatic. :)
Chloesauris 4 years ago
Wow I love the story you created! Great job!
janguru4 4 years ago
Wow Amazing!!!!!!!
Beatiful,dark,fantastic and everythign else!
I really liked this viedo, you showed Hermys dark side and it really looked like she killed her friends and joined the dark side, amazingly done!!!
dartzu89 4 years ago
great video.
shygirl7 4 years ago
This was amazing... I never had such idea before...
ScreamingSnakes 4 years ago
that is definately a change..........I LIKE IT!
p3piper3p 4 years ago
That was an awesome video!! It must have taken you forever to make!
dontforgetmyvitaball 4 years ago
Wow, that was really cool! Hermione turned evil, I love it, especially when she killed Ron.
echoxxecho 4 years ago
what is this song i love it
totoro716 4 years ago
Oh wow, this was amazing! The scenes fit the dialoge so well! Congrats!!!
U2Phanatic01 4 years ago
brilliant!
Lynn15 4 years ago
The expressions fit the words so well....I love it! :D
Rohru 4 years ago
i love this one!
DeadlyElegance 4 years ago
very cool video ;] I like it!!!
BloNdeNature 4 years ago
wow! such an original storyline! congrats! .. it'd have been greater if Tom had killed Hermione in the end .. He's such an evil guy! .. btw great job!
LyraWeasley 4 years ago
this is so good! i love it! it's so well put together and so dark! great :)
mrstilney 4 years ago
класс! мне понравилось)) сюжет просто супер, ну и песня несомненно)) ухх, какой опасной может быть влюбленная Гермиона))
TheRhine 4 years ago