Yes, I was worried about the pacing. There's rather a lot of lines to go with this section, I could cut them, make the wire longer or maybe have a trick in the middle like a spin around or a bounce or as you mentioned a bit of a wobble. See the flea film co uk for the script
Pretty cute idea... Could use a bit more life though. If the tricycle wobbles a bit at some point, like the fleas are unbalanced... That could give it some zing. Also, the back-and-forth movement should be a tad bit quicker... Kindof like a robbin-red-breast hopping on the lawn. Very quick hops.
Yes, I was worried about the pacing. There's rather a lot of lines to go with this section, I could cut them, make the wire longer or maybe have a trick in the middle like a spin around or a bounce or as you mentioned a bit of a wobble. See the flea film co uk for the script
FleaCircusDirector 4 years ago
Pretty cute idea... Could use a bit more life though. If the tricycle wobbles a bit at some point, like the fleas are unbalanced... That could give it some zing. Also, the back-and-forth movement should be a tad bit quicker... Kindof like a robbin-red-breast hopping on the lawn. Very quick hops.
kadeywow 4 years ago