DAMN!! This is incredible!! I love the darkness/mysterious nature of this song! VERY well done! You have an excellent voice and I hope to have the opportunity to your cd soon! Good luck!!
Dude, I just came from another video of yours that best describes what I was talking about in my last comment. I hear your "Ring the Alarm". THAT SHIT IS HOT!!
Dude, I'm a tell you like they do on American Idol. You have a an outstanding voice, and certain parts of this song really bring it out, but maybe it's me, but the darkness of the song itself can tune people out in the first few seconds.
I aint knockin ya, YOU GOT A BAD ASS VOICE! Im just saying, I can see you making millions singing different stuff.
lmaoo, when you aked me to rate it and I opened the video... it was all black and mysterious, I thought it was one of those things that pop up and scare you!
Derenzo, you are amazing thanks for sending me the message to listen to you sorry its been so long, you have an amazing voice we will have to talk soon,, Kaylee xxxx
Heb het gevoel dat het refrein samen met de baseloop op ten duur wat in herhaling valt.Kan dus iets aandringender klinken na het helft van het nummer tot het eind.Voor de rest gaaf nummer!
I take back what I sad about getting more softness and light to your voice.. I just listen to when you sang I will always love you and you have a very nice voice! So that particular coment is only for this song.
- I do like it though but it does need something to lift it up a little...
I hope that this was the kind of criticism you where looking for and that you do the best of it. Thank you for asking about my opinion! Let me know if I made a fare coment! /Linda from Sweden
It took me a while before I made up my mind about this song and your voice... but I do think you have the potential to become a good singer...! You do need to focus more on your vocal training and realy work at it, but it is not bad! The song is ok. I wonder how your voice would sound in more up tempo song... If I were you I would try to bring more light and softness to my voice and also to the song because it has a risk of getting a little bit boring
Very nice, you have a voice, interesting melodic tune. I would say frm a proff perspective, you were out at certain points - Just keep at it, get vocal training - Even the best of them still get vocal training. But you definatley have the basis and talent to be even more amazing! - Good lyrics.
Hey.. nice work... your song sounds different, but, yeah, nice... uhmm... the style of singing, the music, etc. are not new, but they definitely bring a new sound when they are combined together... u sound pop, but ur accompaniment sounds like another genre of music.. very creative combination though... nice, indeed..
However, since u asked me to comment here, I just want to, uhmmm, say something about your lyrics... I think u have to give more depth in ur words... hmmm, how do I say this.. It lacks depth, sounds so literal... Just a little constructive criticism... But generally, u did a very great job man... This 1 is nyc... thank u so much 4 sharing ur music.. kip inspiring!!! develop and be a great musician.... God bless...!!
um well its great big props but i dont really no anyone personaly but i do accualy know someone who might take u i could send a message to hollywood records i luv the jonas brothers and they work for hollywood records and alot of other big stars so ill try my best alright keep it up
I hope it;s alright, im going to send a message to Big Machine Records. they area country music record deal, but they might be able to help you. get somewhere.
I got an e-mail from u to check this out, to be honest I didint watch the full video cuz i dont really want to, but i did vote 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yeey
Im must say im impressed, very much so infact, since i usually do not listen to this type of music. I hope your music will take you far and i can only wish you the best of luck oh and Merry Christmas!
ur voice is great, great intro, but try to change up the beat or tempo of music around 2:11 it's too soft for ur voice, and try to make the song a little shorter cuz the it would seem like the song kinds of drags on. overall, props on a job well done
To be honest, the only reason I don't like this song in particular is because it sounds like "Chim Chim Charoo" from Mary Poppins. But the other songs sound good. Nice voice!
not bad like your voice
alanapurple 2 months ago
nice
expomr 2 years ago 2
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this sucks
mrkeymn 2 years ago
wow...nice voice..
maelarlex 2 years ago
Great demo and awesome voice . Summer
1summersweet 2 years ago
you sound so good.... i wish other guys could sound this good.... new orleans agree
theragdoll1 2 years ago
Love it!!! =)
CrazyAllyB 2 years ago
Really good :)
sammy7272 2 years ago
Great !!!
EddyMJJ 2 years ago
O_O
you singing SUPER!!
Cecileee1 2 years ago
impressive.. very impressive...
djmthu 2 years ago
DAMN!! This is incredible!! I love the darkness/mysterious nature of this song! VERY well done! You have an excellent voice and I hope to have the opportunity to your cd soon! Good luck!!
Anniebmice 2 years ago
Dude, I just came from another video of yours that best describes what I was talking about in my last comment. I hear your "Ring the Alarm". THAT SHIT IS HOT!!
nanunanuu 2 years ago
Dude, I'm a tell you like they do on American Idol. You have a an outstanding voice, and certain parts of this song really bring it out, but maybe it's me, but the darkness of the song itself can tune people out in the first few seconds.
I aint knockin ya, YOU GOT A BAD ASS VOICE! Im just saying, I can see you making millions singing different stuff.
nanunanuu 2 years ago
your voice reminds me of Sisqo. you sound good. i really like the beat and the story. it's kind of haunting.
jewallac 2 years ago
Not to bad 8D
ozboybrian 2 years ago
is actualy the good song and i like your voice
egiczach 2 years ago
sounds like a cheap beat, but dont get me wrong you just started. my all over thoughts are that its good. keep it up :)
tomtdogg13 2 years ago
lmfao i thought the same thing as sstarfruitt i like the song tho. nice voice.
HELLAhandsomeKRiiS 2 years ago
this sound good
guddagurlkeya 2 years ago
nice tunes
martodawg 2 years ago
You sound professional, I like it. I'd actually download your CD/Demo when you come out with one.
JusticeBird 2 years ago
this is way awesome
seriously(:
dayumx12 2 years ago
lmaoo, when you aked me to rate it and I opened the video... it was all black and mysterious, I thought it was one of those things that pop up and scare you!
But yeah anyways; you sound really good :)
sstarfruitt 2 years ago
Love the song 5/5 , I am glad u asked me to listen!
lynn1825 2 years ago
I like ur voice, it reminds me of Chris Brown. Don't be like Chris tho! anyway, I rate 5\5 good job.
nomorefacts 2 years ago
Great job, bruh!!
SEFYH 2 years ago
i like it!
your voice is relaxing
and the beat is and mysterious.. it evens things out good job :)
idgafcauseimabamf 2 years ago
You have a nice voice!!!
mrssmithjr 2 years ago
dis is unbelievably good!! from 1 musician 2 anova, dis is one ov da best original tracks ive heard!! 100/10 xxx
BABYTIGZ 2 years ago
Great Job on Song!!
gotLUV4yallDK26 2 years ago
Derenzo, you are amazing thanks for sending me the message to listen to you sorry its been so long, you have an amazing voice we will have to talk soon,, Kaylee xxxx
kalyz 2 years ago
nice
battel4star 2 years ago
I love the story line. The beat is a beat dark and mysterious. All in all very good.
Juuleecew 3 years ago
Klinkt bijzonder mooi.
Heb het gevoel dat het refrein samen met de baseloop op ten duur wat in herhaling valt.Kan dus iets aandringender klinken na het helft van het nummer tot het eind.Voor de rest gaaf nummer!
superzaff 3 years ago
Omg, love ur voice
ChildishHentai 3 years ago
Awesome
nctrls2 3 years ago
good
speedyslife 3 years ago
You have a nice voice but not too crazy bout the song... Ill check out your other vids. :)
Missykinss 3 years ago
you have a very nice voice and it has a lot of potential. Keep it up and u could totally become famous with that voice of yours.
LonelyLittleAngel 3 years ago
I take back what I sad about getting more softness and light to your voice.. I just listen to when you sang I will always love you and you have a very nice voice! So that particular coment is only for this song.
mariakristall 3 years ago
- I do like it though but it does need something to lift it up a little...
I hope that this was the kind of criticism you where looking for and that you do the best of it. Thank you for asking about my opinion! Let me know if I made a fare coment! /Linda from Sweden
mariakristall 3 years ago
It took me a while before I made up my mind about this song and your voice... but I do think you have the potential to become a good singer...! You do need to focus more on your vocal training and realy work at it, but it is not bad! The song is ok. I wonder how your voice would sound in more up tempo song... If I were you I would try to bring more light and softness to my voice and also to the song because it has a risk of getting a little bit boring
mariakristall 3 years ago
mooi:D
habboverslaafd 3 years ago
Hi thanks for asking my opinion:
Very nice, you have a voice, interesting melodic tune. I would say frm a proff perspective, you were out at certain points - Just keep at it, get vocal training - Even the best of them still get vocal training. But you definatley have the basis and talent to be even more amazing! - Good lyrics.
rioukgal 3 years ago
not really my genreof music but i still really liked it, Amazing Voice and is it just me or does this song remind people of halloween
charlievrw 3 years ago
Yeah im definately feelin it. YO voice is distinct... thats wutz up tho. Holla back
Tay0537 3 years ago
From now on, I will only buy used audio CD's. Amazon is a good source if you want to buy a used CD .
Don't download from online music stores anymore.
Don't buy new CDs, only used.
This is my pledge to boycott the scumbags at the music industry.
Spread the word.
janusego1 3 years ago
wow that was great!
thnxx 4 the message...
ur music does have it's own ring to it....that is awesome! i like it
606lol 3 years ago
that was great I really enjoyed it
carmelmama143 3 years ago
Very Good!
Like it!
baerchenjule 3 years ago
good work keep it up
alanapurple 3 years ago
you relly suck ass, my grandma can sing better :p
yugoboy1990 3 years ago
cool
pepleen 3 years ago
Nice man sorry took so long to get back at ya was in the pen. But keep it up man you got skillz.
lancecorporalmoto 3 years ago
Hey.. nice work... your song sounds different, but, yeah, nice... uhmm... the style of singing, the music, etc. are not new, but they definitely bring a new sound when they are combined together... u sound pop, but ur accompaniment sounds like another genre of music.. very creative combination though... nice, indeed..
ordisi001 3 years ago
However, since u asked me to comment here, I just want to, uhmmm, say something about your lyrics... I think u have to give more depth in ur words... hmmm, how do I say this.. It lacks depth, sounds so literal... Just a little constructive criticism... But generally, u did a very great job man... This 1 is nyc... thank u so much 4 sharing ur music.. kip inspiring!!! develop and be a great musician.... God bless...!!
ordisi001 3 years ago
good voice.
weird beatt...
lolo22rox 3 years ago
not bad...
mysteryblast 3 years ago
Man ik kan me nog herrineren dat je deze schreef destijds. Gruwelijk man hij is echt goed man.
Hicham
wartoma 3 years ago
well, nice work, have a nice day.
JORMEJI 3 years ago
Loving it ... Thanks for sharing...Keep it up! Take care Mate!
NeatEyeMedia 3 years ago
good voice
nightdreamer9897 3 years ago
WIKKIDI WIKKIDI WACK YO!
princesamooth 3 years ago
Wicked! I like it 5/5!
TiffyToff 3 years ago
wow this is fantastic mate, obviously very passionate, wicked. All the best x x x
Delicousdani177 3 years ago
Yes! Yes!! i like it ! thanks fore sharing, dear!
RipRabbitGurl 3 years ago
cool, you have a great voice! :]
Keep it up!!!
SilentFaces 3 years ago
nice =] x
S01XX 3 years ago
sick man, keep it up :)
jcthamc 3 years ago
nice work, keep it up
havalio 3 years ago
Staan je liedjes op limewire ?? ;$
CrazyQueentj 3 years ago
im not sure i like the song just personal taste nothing wrong with it but your voice is amazing !!!!
amitictac 3 years ago
good work ;]
Str3Lka 3 years ago
nice song... keep up the good work ;)
insuzy 3 years ago
wow duude! rad. very nice voice. i wish u luck...alas idk ne one who can help u out. im sori
weballin32 3 years ago
very nice!!!
graybabee 3 years ago
Great gift, I wish you for the best in the future..
ntrisKKT 3 years ago
wow that was good keep up the good work
NeAnOmPa 3 years ago
The beginning was pretty amazing. Good one, Keep it up. I like the style.
shahoodi91 3 years ago
i like it :) you have a really unique voice :) keep it up
DonomanOx 3 years ago
Good Shit Bro!!!!!!!
IchigoIX 3 years ago
bravo bravo that to good
sinza93380 3 years ago
great voice. i like the song.
DarkAngelNCharmed 3 years ago
very creative
your voice is lite but original
i like keep it up hun
you got a new fan =]
Raine4Lo23 3 years ago
That was great music and all...keep up the wk you will make it all the way
mytisis 3 years ago
you are very well ;)
maybe you have a great future
scvel 3 years ago
thx
lOlxwoo 3 years ago
yer nice matey
SASJOE08 3 years ago
Wow!! thats actually really good! u got a fab voice
xxxCcrazyCchickxxx 3 years ago
OMG! amazing
whisperer85 3 years ago
You definitely got talent
supra11 3 years ago
nice :)
mazon111 3 years ago
wikid n exelant
chearleading 3 years ago
you have a great voice i like your style.
COMPUTEERBOY 3 years ago
You sing very well
nice voice =)
musicarabe 3 years ago
Wow your really really GOOD!!!! xD
Shiawolffang 3 years ago
cool track.
riddim 3 years ago
Hey Dorenzo your a very talented and dats great track too.
Stakwell 3 years ago
this is really good ima subscribed after this song is done =].
veexx 3 years ago
i like your voice. its really good. ima subscribed :D
aznkid21038 3 years ago
It sounds GREAT!!! AWESOME job dude,best wishes to 2009!!!!
sadedelbosque 3 years ago
Very professional and unique! Best wishes from Spain!!!!!
37irene 3 years ago
Nice voice! :)
BatCatherine 3 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
i like it <3
kandykane1996 3 years ago
nice song! u sound good
romanamic 3 years ago
It's a nice effort and I wsh you all the best in 2009 :)
maretyoshikawa 3 years ago
I LIKE THIS SONG IT NICE KEEP IT COMING
LENEIL01 3 years ago
You do have a nice voice. I will give you f stars.
Xscapefan4ever1408 3 years ago
I like this. I just subscribed too. You have a really good voice.
TheManAbove 3 years ago
I like it but its not really my style
imsofucingtired 3 years ago
I love the song
brocktonbrian 3 years ago
very nice. i like it!!
clogginggirl33 3 years ago
Very Very nice!
=D
OnePiece4adje 3 years ago
Two thumbs up! WOW!
Corcodel3 3 years ago
cool is that you singing
coolboy5107 3 years ago
Very nice!
DGLINS 3 years ago
Sound good man. Kinda remind me of Case.
Hiphop2256 3 years ago
this is kinda creepy like what m i lookin at? but heres ur 5 stars for sucha nice msg :)
DizShaWTYcrUNK 3 years ago
i agree great job and you have a very moving voice awsome.
sexyleeza2 3 years ago
You're a awesome singer but it's not really my type of music... SRRY
meforlyf 3 years ago
um well its great big props but i dont really no anyone personaly but i do accualy know someone who might take u i could send a message to hollywood records i luv the jonas brothers and they work for hollywood records and alot of other big stars so ill try my best alright keep it up
watuplosers 3 years ago
I hope it;s alright, im going to send a message to Big Machine Records. they area country music record deal, but they might be able to help you. get somewhere.
lildancerr 3 years ago
You sound absolutely amazing!!!
Sm0kah0ntas 3 years ago
I'm not big on this kind of music, but wow.
There's absolutely not denying you're incredible.
Thank you so much for messaging me.
Best five minutes of my day.
ZombiesForLollis 3 years ago
omg ur good! thanks for the message!
love,
coty718
coty718 3 years ago
dude i hope you get signed your like the best singer ever, i hope you do good in your career!!
=]
funstuff2008 3 years ago
I got an e-mail from u to check this out, to be honest I didint watch the full video cuz i dont really want to, but i did vote 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yeey
fakeehero 3 years ago
great job man ^_^
skorpion350z 3 years ago
great song !!
lukacropsycho 3 years ago
Thanks for asking me to check you out; very awesome voice and beat; not to mention very sexy! Happy New Year! Hope you make it big friend!
born2balive1067 3 years ago
wow nice voice
bucceye210 3 years ago
Excellent Derenzo.. 6 stars!!
DolceVita 3 years ago
wow i like this song alot nice job
babyprincess48 3 years ago
this is cool!
fifthat 3 years ago
I liked that delivery around 2:16, switchin it up definently kept it interesting for me.
Esotrepid 3 years ago
the begining reminds me of a nightmare before christmass and thats bad ass
skigh45 3 years ago
wow amazing man soow i cant believe such a good voice omg x:D
yaseminbulut1 3 years ago
I love your voice!:) You have lots of talent! You will go far.
Janzy9 3 years ago
well done!
Gary226 3 years ago
cool man
Hammer456456 3 years ago
hey thats really cool
MfG antidani
antidani100 3 years ago
Nice! :)
IranianDiaries 3 years ago
wow you've got a really good voice and good songs. you have got good beats and your voice goes with the song
xxyubbyxx 3 years ago
Im must say im impressed, very much so infact, since i usually do not listen to this type of music. I hope your music will take you far and i can only wish you the best of luck oh and Merry Christmas!
FrostWolfie 3 years ago
shits hott man...beats bangin and voice sounds smooth. BIG UPS
jtwalker2 3 years ago
W.O.W
the song is bad ass
a little scary but freakn awsome:]
you have a really nice voice=D
smuchez 3 years ago
Wooh you're good =D
yadejenmeenpaz 3 years ago
you've got a lovely voice=)
Babyndally007 3 years ago
very good!! Hope your singing take's you far...
musicloverdance 3 years ago
lekker dan derenz
hardcoreberlinj 3 years ago
te gek ga zo door man
kkkkyler 3 years ago
COOL! =]
TylerSellers2 3 years ago
woh this is good
breehail 3 years ago
ur voice is great, great intro, but try to change up the beat or tempo of music around 2:11 it's too soft for ur voice, and try to make the song a little shorter cuz the it would seem like the song kinds of drags on. overall, props on a job well done
featuringb 3 years ago
Wow. Very creepy song, but awesome singing. The story reminds me of an urban legend I heard once.
heavenlylifestyle 3 years ago
Nice man goed gedaan!!
Kilaruz 3 years ago
goed gedaan ai
lMORTYRl 3 years ago
alweer mooi gezongen :)
nicolinelovesyou 3 years ago
i luv it!!
CMBreezy1 3 years ago
ey is dope man D
pz
AFourMusic 3 years ago
To be honest, the only reason I don't like this song in particular is because it sounds like "Chim Chim Charoo" from Mary Poppins. But the other songs sound good. Nice voice!
VeronicaGreen 3 years ago
great vocals dude, keep up the great work...i already subscribed to your channel.
Xavier1EXE 3 years ago
very nice man...rly u are good
sylversaint 3 years ago
good vocals. good beat. but vocals with beat, it doesn't work. if you sing this song a little bit faster it would sound so much better.
deanlo 3 years ago
u are great bro
lukacropsycho 3 years ago
Very good voice and very good music! you have lots of talent
outblast85 3 years ago
great job!
thestreetdogg 3 years ago
sounds like indian style
nice job
wanghoujay 3 years ago
u hav a beautiful voice i wanna see wat u cum out w/
Candigirl225 3 years ago
Oh My God! Your amazing! You have an beatiful voice! Great Job ^_^
lyokoangel65 3 years ago
I really like it!
morochacapoeira 3 years ago
wow! Nice and You have great voice:) Very nice.
AdaMQ555 3 years ago
wow! you pro!! i love ur voice u shud become a famous singer lol =]
LastGenji20 3 years ago
very gud voice. very very nice.
soccerchic0130 3 years ago
great
realdboy67 3 years ago
its a little scared hahaha...
but its very good, i liked it
GREAT!!! :D
merielle0504 3 years ago
Adorei !
you have a good voice man!
5 stars !!
..:It makes me shiver [2] !
C1b4 3 years ago
yeah great voice. Peace bro
yapiss 3 years ago
AWSOME AND KINDA CREEPY LIKE SCARY!!!
lol hope you like my 5 star rate!!!!!
sub to you too!!!!
youtheee 3 years ago
i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv ur voice!!!! srry, im like a major fannnn!!!
Swabert1996 3 years ago
You have the best voice i have eva heard, god it makes me shiver
Swabert1996 3 years ago
this is soooo beautiful! luv ur voice, it's like perfect in every way!!!
Swabert1996 3 years ago
god i didnt know what to expect at first it turned to be savage great job and great voice!
MusicThatRox 3 years ago
amazzing 5***** ;D your voice is very nice keep going
CANDY4114 3 years ago
amazing voice *5
saudibint 3 years ago