overall the concept was okay, but could be delivered better. I got the story line only because i've seen the same type of story so many times before. as for the acting I thought they were good actors but need to tone it down a little. when someone jumps off a cliff they should have a reason. to me there wasn't a very present reason. they were all cut upend stuff (also they didn't look like they were acting like brutally torn up men) but that shouldn't be a definite reason. I was left thinking.
@vincereviews Yeah, it had to do with the camera set-up, it's called the 'Snorri cam' and we didn't have it secured quite right, so the actors had to hang onto the setup in order to keep it secure.
@1HarRan1 Thanks a bunch! Glad you liked it so much! We actually never thought about using after effects on this short film as absurd as that sounds it just never crossed our minds. BUT we're definitely going to do something with after-effects involved at some point! :)
heya, you posted on my comments to check you out and i'm glad you did! I've now discovered another passionate filmmaker :)
Good job man,
One question, how'd you do that cool effect when they're running through the forest with the low angle shot withouth losing the focused/central image at 1:30 etc ?
@FatalProductions10 Thanks, I have yet to check that film out, I just added it to my Netflix queue as a matter of fact! Please subscribe and let me know what you think of some of my other stuff.
@Masterpiecemovie Hahaha, indeed they did! Yes, quite, this was my first written, acted and produced short, I have mixed feelings about it. Thanks for checking it out Masterpiecemovie.
@Cheyemos overall the concept was okay, but could be delivered better. I got the story line only because i've seen the same type of story so many times before. as for the acting I thought they were good actors but need to tone it down a little. when someone jumps off a cliff they should have a reason. to me there wasn't a very present reason. they were all cut upend stuff (also they didn't look like they were acting like brutally torn up men) but that shouldn't be a definite reason.
@bruvvamoff Thanks, this is my first film I wrote, acted and produced. Yeah indeed, leaving the audience to interpret for themselves is something I like to try and incoporate. Glad you liked the acting, personally I would have done a lot of things different with my performance and the film itself now looking back on it, but 20/20 hind sight, right? We used the 'Snori cam' for the mount, worked out pretty well as did the makeup-blood. I think you'll enjoy my next film quite a bit. Cheers.
@BrainBlast Glad you think so! We used a makeup kit that has certain 'glue' like substances to mold what looks like lacerations or scars and then filled them with blood jam and then coated them with stage blood, held up on camera really well, looks pretty believable, if I say so myself.
@Cheyemos yes, most definitely does! kind of scared me at first, in a good way of course lol. but yeah, ill have to learn here on youtube how to do it all without a kit, believe its cheaper that way, but thanks! and keep the great videos coming.
@BrainBlast For sure! Haha, yeah I know what you mean! Yeah wouldn't be a bad idea to learn how to do it without a kit although the kit from BenNye was super cheap (25 bucks) and it's pretty user friendly, might be worth a look if you ever need to do some of these effects. Thanks, I'll keep em coming, got a few films I'll be uploading after they're out of post-production within a few months or so, hopefully sooner though!
The music didn't really sound like it was with the film or acting. The acting and camera work was good but the music just sort of threw everything off balance.
@confusciousthefly Interesting, we've definitely had mixed reviews on the music. If you like, please subscribe to my channel and check out some of my other work!
Has a great concept. Reminds me of an old Twilight Zone episode. I am a little impatient with movies though, so I wanted it to pick up the pace when panning. That's being a little picky on my part, I admit. All in all, I give it 4 out of 5 stars.
@Mattalicous Yeah, you're definitely right on that one, it's just something we overlooked and should have been paying more attention too, along with the part about the guy not being confused enough...However, you may like some of my other work on my channel, so if you get a chance and you're bored, check it out and maybe even subscribe.
Okay... what was the point of that? It was discusting and random... So why exactly did you make it? Was it supposed to be funny or something? To much. Too weird, and too discusting
@37soccerchick The point that we were trying to make is you have to face 'yourself' and your 'demons' and sometimes you have to make hard choices, so all in all the film is about facing your fears and what you do in that presence. Maybe check out some of my other 'softer' work, you may like that more, and please subscribe! :)
@cuzcatlan36 Nice, yeah it's definitely a 'concept' short film, it comes in really late on the story. Please subscribe to my channel and check out some of my other work!
@tracyx11 Everybody has their cup of tea. Check out some of my other work on my channel, you might like some of the other stuff I do, and if so, please subscribe! :)
@BlobberLove Thanks!! Yeah, we should probably make a short film on how it all began. Oh, please subscribe to my channel and check out some of my other work, I'd really appreciate it!
@RemixReplayRewind Glad you enjoyed it! Yeah that was one of things we were trying to achieve, for sure. If you haven't already, please, subscribe to my channel, I'd love for you to check out some of my other work!
overall the concept was okay, but could be delivered better. I got the story line only because i've seen the same type of story so many times before. as for the acting I thought they were good actors but need to tone it down a little. when someone jumps off a cliff they should have a reason. to me there wasn't a very present reason. they were all cut upend stuff (also they didn't look like they were acting like brutally torn up men) but that shouldn't be a definite reason. I was left thinking.
devo366 3 months ago
hey good video i suggest you make a dolly and get a tri pod
skimaniac34 6 months ago
What the fuck? And I mean that in a good way.
file0save0studios 8 months ago
@file0save0studios Glad it's in the good way! Perhaps subscribe (sorry if you already have) and check out some of my other acting/film work! :)
Cheyemos 8 months ago
XD slenderman.....
SchmingoD 8 months ago
I liked this one also but when he was running it didn't seem so realistic the way he moved
GameAssassinsAchieve 8 months ago
@GameAssassinsAchieve Interesting, what part of the running?
Cheyemos 8 months ago
@Cheyemos 0:28-0:33 and the others like that
GameAssassinsAchieve 8 months ago
@Cheyemos i kind of agree...when he was running with the camera in front of his head.
vincereviews 8 months ago
@vincereviews Yeah, it had to do with the camera set-up, it's called the 'Snorri cam' and we didn't have it secured quite right, so the actors had to hang onto the setup in order to keep it secure.
Cheyemos 8 months ago
Good Job Guyz!
clcrruz 8 months ago
@clcrruz Thanks, be sure to subscribe and check out some of my other works and perhaps tell your friends about me and my channel! :)
Cheyemos 8 months ago
hey nice vid dude i liked it its pretty cool
harrypotterchick32 8 months ago
@harrypotterchick32 Thanks chica! Glad you liked it. :)
Cheyemos 8 months ago
amazing movie love the ending ur amazing
did u ever think of using after effects
and you guys can make short movies based on short films such as the most dangerous game and other short stoires
1HarRan1 8 months ago
@1HarRan1 Thanks a bunch! Glad you liked it so much! We actually never thought about using after effects on this short film as absurd as that sounds it just never crossed our minds. BUT we're definitely going to do something with after-effects involved at some point! :)
Cheyemos 8 months ago
heya, you posted on my comments to check you out and i'm glad you did! I've now discovered another passionate filmmaker :)
Good job man,
One question, how'd you do that cool effect when they're running through the forest with the low angle shot withouth losing the focused/central image at 1:30 etc ?
dancerscriv 8 months ago
@dancerscriv Thanks for checking me out, I really appreciate it! Absolutely, it's always nice to meet fellow passionate film makers. =)
We used the 'snori cam' and just had it focused on me and the other actor, I believe that's the shot you're referring to at 1:30? :)
Cheyemos 8 months ago
And that's not a bad thing
FatalProductions10 8 months ago
@FatalProductions10 Thanks, I have yet to check that film out, I just added it to my Netflix queue as a matter of fact! Please subscribe and let me know what you think of some of my other stuff.
Cheyemos 8 months ago
Kind of reminds me of the beginning of Evil Dead 2
FatalProductions10 8 months ago
NICE BRO
LOOKS GOOD
rooksey09 8 months ago
@rooksey09 Thanks!
Cheyemos 8 months ago
Those guys had a bloody good time! Interesting experimental film.
Masterpiecemovie 9 months ago 2
@Masterpiecemovie Hahaha, indeed they did! Yes, quite, this was my first written, acted and produced short, I have mixed feelings about it. Thanks for checking it out Masterpiecemovie.
Cheyemos 9 months ago
@Cheyemos overall the concept was okay, but could be delivered better. I got the story line only because i've seen the same type of story so many times before. as for the acting I thought they were good actors but need to tone it down a little. when someone jumps off a cliff they should have a reason. to me there wasn't a very present reason. they were all cut upend stuff (also they didn't look like they were acting like brutally torn up men) but that shouldn't be a definite reason.
devo366 3 months ago
well this was awesome,odd,but awesome
thejokerwhysoserios 9 months ago
@thejokerwhysoserios Thanks, glad you liked it and it's oddness. :)
Cheyemos 9 months ago
@Cheyemos indeed i did
thejokerwhysoserios 9 months ago
@thejokerwhysoserios :)
Cheyemos 9 months ago
@Cheyemos :D
thejokerwhysoserios 9 months ago
Nice. I love movies that leave me with questions. Blood looked good. Great actors too. What body mount do you use for the running face shots?
bruvvamoff 9 months ago
@bruvvamoff Thanks, this is my first film I wrote, acted and produced. Yeah indeed, leaving the audience to interpret for themselves is something I like to try and incoporate. Glad you liked the acting, personally I would have done a lot of things different with my performance and the film itself now looking back on it, but 20/20 hind sight, right? We used the 'Snori cam' for the mount, worked out pretty well as did the makeup-blood. I think you'll enjoy my next film quite a bit. Cheers.
Cheyemos 9 months ago
@bruvvamoff looked like a snooze cam
spider1g5 9 months ago
very interesting and new! and btw how do you make the blood like that on their faces????? always wanted to learn!
BrainBlast 10 months ago
@BrainBlast Glad you think so! We used a makeup kit that has certain 'glue' like substances to mold what looks like lacerations or scars and then filled them with blood jam and then coated them with stage blood, held up on camera really well, looks pretty believable, if I say so myself.
Cheyemos 10 months ago
@Cheyemos yes, most definitely does! kind of scared me at first, in a good way of course lol. but yeah, ill have to learn here on youtube how to do it all without a kit, believe its cheaper that way, but thanks! and keep the great videos coming.
BrainBlast 10 months ago
@BrainBlast For sure! Haha, yeah I know what you mean! Yeah wouldn't be a bad idea to learn how to do it without a kit although the kit from BenNye was super cheap (25 bucks) and it's pretty user friendly, might be worth a look if you ever need to do some of these effects. Thanks, I'll keep em coming, got a few films I'll be uploading after they're out of post-production within a few months or so, hopefully sooner though!
Cheyemos 10 months ago
Really great work =D
MsEquilibrium77 10 months ago
@MsEquilibrium77 Thanks so much, glad you liked it!
Cheyemos 10 months ago
that was weird i liked it nice!!!!
dj02tc5 10 months ago
@dj02tc5 Awesome! Glad we found something that you liked!! :)
Cheyemos 10 months ago
The music didn't really sound like it was with the film or acting. The acting and camera work was good but the music just sort of threw everything off balance.
confusciousthefly 11 months ago
@confusciousthefly Interesting, we've definitely had mixed reviews on the music. If you like, please subscribe to my channel and check out some of my other work!
Cheyemos 11 months ago
it was good but wayyy to bloody for me :)
tehee13 11 months ago
@tehee13 Glad you liked certain aspects of it, I guess you can't like em' all though! Please subscribe and check out some of my other work. =)
Cheyemos 11 months ago
Umm to be honest, it was weird haha, I was confused and I didn't really went for the acting you guys were doing, well that's my opinion.
CrazyFavHead1236 11 months ago
@CrazyFavHead1236 Interesting, maybe check out some of my other work on my channel, and if you like some of that, subscribe!
Cheyemos 11 months ago
Kudo's to the music score person very well done musicly...
lcafilms1 11 months ago
@lcafilms1 I'll be sure to tell him!
Cheyemos 11 months ago
Has a great concept. Reminds me of an old Twilight Zone episode. I am a little impatient with movies though, so I wanted it to pick up the pace when panning. That's being a little picky on my part, I admit. All in all, I give it 4 out of 5 stars.
jmarcum72 11 months ago
@jmarcum72 Thanks, glad you liked the concept, interesting feedback as well, thanks. Please subscribe! :)
Cheyemos 11 months ago
Ummm at 0:45 that trip looked a little fake, I think there's too much blood also and the guy doesnt look confused enough
Mattalicous 11 months ago
@Mattalicous Yeah, you're definitely right on that one, it's just something we overlooked and should have been paying more attention too, along with the part about the guy not being confused enough...However, you may like some of my other work on my channel, so if you get a chance and you're bored, check it out and maybe even subscribe.
Cheyemos 11 months ago
@Cheyemos On second thought, after watching the whole video, you guys had some good acting skills here and there, I'll sub
Mattalicous 11 months ago
@Mattalicous Glad you took another look, I appreciate that. Thanks for subbing as well!
Cheyemos 11 months ago
Okay... what was the point of that? It was discusting and random... So why exactly did you make it? Was it supposed to be funny or something? To much. Too weird, and too discusting
37soccerchick 11 months ago
@37soccerchick The point that we were trying to make is you have to face 'yourself' and your 'demons' and sometimes you have to make hard choices, so all in all the film is about facing your fears and what you do in that presence. Maybe check out some of my other 'softer' work, you may like that more, and please subscribe! :)
Cheyemos 11 months ago
great concept, it had me interested in what it was that was chasing them. It reminded me of "body snatchers" I would definetely watch the whole film.
cuzcatlan36 11 months ago
@cuzcatlan36 Nice, yeah it's definitely a 'concept' short film, it comes in really late on the story. Please subscribe to my channel and check out some of my other work!
Cheyemos 11 months ago
kinda freaky and wierd... soz but im not keen on the acting or the filming or writing or directing sozzzz :(
tracyx11 11 months ago
@tracyx11 Everybody has their cup of tea. Check out some of my other work on my channel, you might like some of the other stuff I do, and if so, please subscribe! :)
Cheyemos 11 months ago
@tracyx11 Check out some of my other work on my channel, you may like some of it and if you do, throw a subscription my way. :)
Cheyemos 11 months ago
Wow this was weird but AWESOME!!! But i'd like to see how it all started :)
BlobberLove 11 months ago
@BlobberLove Thanks!! Yeah, we should probably make a short film on how it all began. Oh, please subscribe to my channel and check out some of my other work, I'd really appreciate it!
Cheyemos 11 months ago
cool! :D
DoReMiRocker 11 months ago
@DoReMiRocker Thanks, glad you liked it! Thank you for subscribing. :)
Cheyemos 11 months ago
awesome! keep the movies coming!!
MrLukeimurdad6 11 months ago
@MrLukeimurdad6 Thanks a bunch, glad you enjoyed it! Please subscribe to my channel! Also, check out some of my other work as well. :)
Cheyemos 11 months ago
This is great Short-film fodder! :D Loved it , confusing but make you think about it
RemixReplayRewind 11 months ago
@RemixReplayRewind Glad you enjoyed it! Yeah that was one of things we were trying to achieve, for sure. If you haven't already, please, subscribe to my channel, I'd love for you to check out some of my other work!
Cheyemos 11 months ago
i would like to know how this started
nice music btw :p
project0omega 11 months ago
@project0omega Haha, we have the back story of how it got started, so maybe at some point we'll do another short film comprising of the whole thing!
Cheyemos 11 months ago