Came to think about the story told in the movie "Smoke". Where a son find his long lost father, frozen dead in a mountaingletcher and discover that the ice have restored him at the sons exact age. So it is, as he is looking at a mirror.
anime is short for animation weather it is done with a computer or traditional methods. If you thought I was refering to Japanese anime than the mistake was yours. Anime means animation regardless of origin
La 3D est belle. Il y a juste ce qu'il faut... Mais surtout, j'aime cette voix calme et triste. Ne pas rendre le deuil larmoyant, c'est précieux et rare. C'est beau sans faire pleurer. C'est tout ce qu'il faut. C'est juste ce qu'il faut
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le blem c pa la realisation 3D, car la c'est du bon travail, le problème c'est la réalisation du film, qui est a chié il faut le dire. c'est con de gacher un talent en 3D pour arriver à un truc vide..
On ressent le froid, le vent, la neige qui craque et dans laquelle on s'enfonce.
Les mouvements, tels celui où l'alpiniste donne un coup de pied dans la paroi de glace, sont extrêmement bien rendus: il n'y a pas d'effet "d'amorti" typique, et le bruitage très synchro ajoute à la vivacité du geste.
L'histoire est dramatique mais si bien exprimée...
Allez, continuez à nous faire de beaux "petits" films!
Pour tous ceux qui aiment les renards et qui ont, comme moi, adoré le film de Luc Jacquet "le renard et l'enfant", Voici un diaporama musical à voir de toute urgence : "Le renard 2" sur Youtube
Simplement excellent ! La qualité de reproduction des mouvements est extrèmement réussie. Excellent est un mot trop faible, je trouve cela fantastiquement génial. Je fais les vidéo pour mes chansons sur youtube mais ma machine manque de puissance et je restrainds la qualité... bye
superbe, une bonne qualité d'image. pour ceux qui critiquent, c'est qu'ils n'ont strictement rien compris. Pensez toujours que chaque détail est un choix. Si vous pensez qu'il manque des choses, c'est voulu...
La critique n'est pas forcément négative. Il s'agit d'un avis. Et si on pense qu'il manque quelque chose, ce n'est pas forcément voulu (ça m'étonnerai que ça soit voulu d'ailleurs).
Ces créateurs n'ont pas fait un film parfait, dieu merci. Sinon ils n'auraient plus envie d'apprendre quoi que ce soit.
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serieu c'est chiant les gars, et pourquoi l'autre il a une ptite tete, pas de musique, la voix d'un gars qui endort et qui mache ces mots (anglais trés mauvais). et puis bravo les sous-titres sans ombres, blanc sur blanc c top .....
putain t'es dur là ! Ce sont des étudiants qui ont fait le film. Il n'y a pas beaucoup de pro qui serait capable de faire ce film en étant si peu nombreux. C'est vrai que c'est long, mais c'est contemplatif. Il a une petite tete parce que c'est comme ça. Et pourquoi voudrai-tu mettre une musique dessus ?!
hi everyone, thanks for the comments ( good or bad ).....at least the movie makes people react which is a positive thing I think.....Davidrp84, I hear what you say but some of what you're saying is just hate-fuelled as said Chenkson....I don't mind you not liking this movie..you probably have your own reasons for this, but constantly trying to destroy it isn't very constructive...I think we got your point...
Really captures the bleakness of the environment and the father-son relationship well. Top notch animation. Very impressive!
Davidrp84 - I didn't have the time to read though all your hate fuelled, self absorbed and overly opinionated rantings; you must lead busy life? I think it's high time you gave this film the credit it deserves.
Not detracting from the real reason I came to this page. Awesome emotional effort. Best of luck getting the credit this superb short deserves.
Davidrp84 please tell me you're just joking or just being a wanker. I just saw your film which you say is better than this. I do hope it's just the animatic. And i do hope you plan on making the story better. Falling asleep, dragons, swords from the sky, what a crock of shit.
A lovely film Maëlys Faget,Grégory Jennings, Kevin Franczuk, well done. Although not particularly similar your film reminded me of a short film called Dog by Suzie Templeton.
like i said search for the film kiwi, cause that is a fucking awesome film on cg even though it doesn't look as great. But it actually grabs my heart at the end of the film. This film just makes me not care.
Hey David, just out of curiosity, are you an animation hobbyist?
I've seen Kiwi, it's an ok little cute short film, but I really feel the emotional depth and impact of this film is far greater. I guess I just don't understand how you can see Kiwi as being better than this.
huh i'm an animation mayor, i just graduated. This film has nothing on kiwi, kiwi is better told and has better story. Ur just sold by the images instead of the story. U don't know anything bout animation. Or storytelling for that matter. This film might be good for the maker but thats bout it
Well actually, I'm a professional motion graphics producer. I went through school for this stuff and learned from people who work or worked at Pixar as well as a whole host of other studios.
You seem to very rooted in an elemental concept of how a story should be told. This is something I went through in school, but grew out of as I learned more. Just relax and take in what this film has to offer. Kiwi is an interesting film too, and has it's own merits, but it's rather hamfisted and somewhat conventional, there's a subtlety to this film that you'd be wise to step back and learn from.
n this story is crap, its like takin a full length movie and cuting out a 5 minute piece of it and saying this is a short film. even movie trailers are better. THis movie was made by a whole group of people, but kiwi was made by one person is so much deeper. because its contains so much that u don't see on the surface, like a fight to make some meaning out of life. Sacrifice until death for something u believe in. THis film here, is just like hi people my dad died for 5 minutes.
See but here's the thing, all that stuff in Kiwi is on the nose. The whole "he's sacrificing his life to live for just one moment" thing is cute, but not really that deep, and a little unnecessarily morbid. The animation is also very conventional character bouncing around kind of stuff, and the shedding a single tear thing is really cliche.
Despite all this, it's not a bad film, it's sort of cute and sweet, but I think this one has a deeper impact as do most of the people posting on this page (read: your target audience as an animator).
All i see are big no nos. As for camera movements, they aren;t nothing extreme specially considering that u can change the camera view as many times as u want using a 3d program.
I must say i was captivated by this film. The mood that it sets right from the beginning is perfect. It really made me feel like i was there experiencing it. I feel sorry for people who can't appreciate a film that doesn't have action or humor in it.
Extremely impressive. I'd be curious as to how much time was spent into it :).
As for the storytelling, well I find it superb as well:
-Camera views to make you feel the immense enviroment, without ever being awkward.
-And the slow-pace helps rub that solitude in.
Only crits would be the son's animation (the mix between his motionless expression and his body moving, seems awkward to me), and the first walk animation (seems too mechanic, but hey, it's a heavy suit ^^)
thank you, the guy on the top is probably closest to the truth, that the guy was more concentrating on the way it looks than on telling a story. Cause everyone telling me that the story works well is bullshit. Tell me how it works well? Cause all i see are mistakes, he uses clecha dialogue. He narrates what we are looking at. And he doesn't give us vital information so we can care enough about the character.
here is why it wasn't good story in few words, people die everyday, why should i care for this person's suffering. In a film u gotta give a person a reason for caring
Lol what a hater, first off my film is abstract well its more surreal than it is abstract. So you can't understand it. Even though it has somewhat of a narrative its the type of film where it has an underlying meaning which is left for the viewer to interpret. This film is just a narrative about nothing. ANd i've tried to make my little brother stay for this whole film and he can't he walks out. Your not judgeing it as a film your judgeing it for its cg only
The point is that this film, for what it is, isn't that great. Like i said watch the short film titled kiwi. Atleast my film you can sit through it, and its short, this film is 5 minutes of the same thing, that makes it extremely boring, my film atleast if your trying to give it a chance you can question yourself about it. This film tells you what its about straight off,
thats why its narrated, and still no one cares much about it cause it doesn't really have an idea or something important to say. Well atleast something people can care for.Try looking at some dhali films and paintings. And then come back to me all pissed
i will say it one last time, awesome cg, hoooorrible story. And for people who want to compare it to my film, first figure out what type of film it is, cause narratives and surrealism are 2 completely different genras. Besides atleast in my film you can actually sit through it. There are problems presented, and there are resolutions. THis film doesn't even have that.
He presents to you smack down the middle of the story, a film like that needs atleast 2 hours. Thats not a good short, because there is waaaay to much information missing. So no one cares for the character, or what happens to him. He just fights a mountain end of story. No one could care less what happens to him cause they don't know anything about him or who he is. Specially when your talkin about a tragedy. Wanna watch a good cg film with good story, watch kiwi. Look for it on Youtube
its boring, the cg is awesome the story is not entertaining, i mean ok maybe he is doin something personal, but when u make a film u have to take into consideration that ur making it so that people watch it. Dude u obviously don;t know what your talking about. It don;t matter what he is goin through, in the end personal sentiments don't matter what matters is that people can connect with it some how.
what are you smoking? The story telling was perfect. of course you have to know something about everest to understand what this guy is going through. but still its awsome!
:(..
matyanksfx 2 years ago
Came to think about the story told in the movie "Smoke". Where a son find his long lost father, frozen dead in a mountaingletcher and discover that the ice have restored him at the sons exact age. So it is, as he is looking at a mirror.
Zhqrxt 2 years ago
hauntingly beautiful
salavini 2 years ago 2
Very slick anime with a powerful story to tell...a new favorite.
Scyko7 2 years ago
Yeah i'd agree, but it's not an "anime" is it.
Balloonbot 2 years ago 2
anime is short for animation weather it is done with a computer or traditional methods. If you thought I was refering to Japanese anime than the mistake was yours. Anime means animation regardless of origin
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Iloianimation 3 years ago
very nice, but it did not say how he died.
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X0xDrakanx0X 3 years ago
=(...
Sakura2387 3 years ago
pretty cool
physicals 3 years ago
God that shocked me a bit, i was born in 23 May and i was the 235th person to rate this video, hehe . . .
chinzilla88 3 years ago
Very well done, the ending made me tear.
SandShinobi535 3 years ago
Nice - Cold "Surrealistic" Landscape... & loneliness. Bravo! :)
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cheerheartxoxo 3 years ago
tiś je chori ciulik
OOniktOO 3 years ago
Travail superbe.
ForseT 3 years ago
La 3D est belle. Il y a juste ce qu'il faut... Mais surtout, j'aime cette voix calme et triste. Ne pas rendre le deuil larmoyant, c'est précieux et rare. C'est beau sans faire pleurer. C'est tout ce qu'il faut. C'est juste ce qu'il faut
famchmiz 3 years ago
c'est plutôt bien, pas besoin de paufiner à la perfection en effet, cela doit rester de la 3d. La voie c'était pas necessaire ni le sous texte.
yrtos 3 years ago
Joli travail sur le deuil
mariebal 3 years ago
superbe ! je la trouve trés bien cette histoire.
bravo
popoulus78 3 years ago
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azerty533 3 years ago
trés bien!!!!!!!!
ladibe43 3 years ago
le blem c pa la realisation 3D, car la c'est du bon travail, le problème c'est la réalisation du film, qui est a chié il faut le dire. c'est con de gacher un talent en 3D pour arriver à un truc vide..
moutarde75 3 years ago
de une .. c'est un cours métrage , et de deux si tu trouve sa vide , tu trouve peut être qu'un film comme die hard 4 c'est remplit ? ^^
je trouve sa calme on comprend une histoire toute simple, qui se repete doucement comme les derniers souffle d'une vie.
Fr4ksis 3 years ago 2
de une .. c'est un cours métrage , et de deux si tu trouve sa vide , tu trouve peut être qu'un film comme die hard 4 c'est remplit ? ^^
je trouve sa calme on comprend une histoire toute simple, qui se repete doucement comme les derniers souffle d'une vie.
Fr4ksis 3 years ago
c un peu ennuyant
jimlegones 3 years ago
en prépa et école d'ingé l'an prochain (j'espère ^^), sérieux, très impressionnant, félicitations
spacemonkeypurf 3 years ago
bof bof et le faux accent francais americain qui mache les mots....
Zaleri 3 years ago
ben justement c'est un accent british
chrisdahlmusic 3 years ago
bof bof
glabulzateur 3 years ago
c vrai ou pas ca ses vraiment passer
pumasrocklac 3 years ago
Exelent ... franchmnt sa a du etre b1 kass Q mé franchmnt bravo !!
kiss a vs ;p
superdidi06 3 years ago
émouvant
joliroi 3 years ago
5* !
Beau court-métrage. Pas besoin de musique...
On ressent le froid, le vent, la neige qui craque et dans laquelle on s'enfonce.
Les mouvements, tels celui où l'alpiniste donne un coup de pied dans la paroi de glace, sont extrêmement bien rendus: il n'y a pas d'effet "d'amorti" typique, et le bruitage très synchro ajoute à la vivacité du geste.
L'histoire est dramatique mais si bien exprimée...
Allez, continuez à nous faire de beaux "petits" films!
Et même des plus longs!
vigdys 3 years ago
vraiment bon.excellent!!!
melppat 3 years ago
Pour tous ceux qui aiment les renards et qui ont, comme moi, adoré le film de Luc Jacquet "le renard et l'enfant", Voici un diaporama musical à voir de toute urgence : "Le renard 2" sur Youtube
Maxime94000 3 years ago
J'ai adore! Please go on making those animations... You're excellent!
annafolies 3 years ago
juste un mot a dire: whooooo !!
c'est super beau aussi bien l'histoire que (et surtout) les graphismes. bravo
jcrazor 3 years ago 2
fin lol
tombokto 3 years ago
Fiouh beau boulot les gars!
Reposant pour les yeux et pour l'esprit
(K)
mcxani 3 years ago 2
Simplement excellent ! La qualité de reproduction des mouvements est extrèmement réussie. Excellent est un mot trop faible, je trouve cela fantastiquement génial. Je fais les vidéo pour mes chansons sur youtube mais ma machine manque de puissance et je restrainds la qualité... bye
delphe3031 3 years ago
Très agréable a regarder,
Super ambiance,
Merci pour ces 5min de voyage !
ZenderWolf 3 years ago
C'est sur ceux qu'il n'ont jamais toucher aux 3D ne peuvent pas imaginer le travail que c'est.
petogo5 3 years ago
Tain z'etes gonflé les mecs qui critiquent ... essayez de faire le moindre flocon de neige et apres on en reparle les tocards.
LeGrodindon 3 years ago
Excellent travail, je touche un peu a 3DSMax et pour moi ce travail semble... surhumain !!!
nforcet 3 years ago
C'est... maginfique
Yetiewoman 3 years ago
Excellent. Dommage qu'il n'y ai pas de musique. Mais bon comme on dis, les gout et les couleurs...
Par contre je ne vois pas ce qu'il manque :s
GevangeN 3 years ago
c'est pas terrible j'en reste déçue
vikymo 3 years ago
une remarque aussi facile? As tu la moindre idée du travail fourni... Toi tu passerai toute ta vie à modéliser une tasse en 3D salope
erazor164 3 years ago
Et toi ? Tu en as la moindre idée ?
Il faut deux ans d'année scolaire. la premiere année étant là essentiellement pour créer l'histoire et la mettre au point.
memailpadsu 3 years ago
mais ferme ta gueule la pute, putain tu te rend compte du travail à fournir avant d'oser ouvrire ta bouche?
moulalata 3 years ago
superbe, une bonne qualité d'image. pour ceux qui critiquent, c'est qu'ils n'ont strictement rien compris. Pensez toujours que chaque détail est un choix. Si vous pensez qu'il manque des choses, c'est voulu...
petogo5 3 years ago 3
La critique n'est pas forcément négative. Il s'agit d'un avis. Et si on pense qu'il manque quelque chose, ce n'est pas forcément voulu (ça m'étonnerai que ça soit voulu d'ailleurs).
Ces créateurs n'ont pas fait un film parfait, dieu merci. Sinon ils n'auraient plus envie d'apprendre quoi que ce soit.
memailpadsu 3 years ago
bizard, lent, silencieux, mais vraiment magnifique!! seul le souci des sous titre au debut!
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serieu c'est chiant les gars, et pourquoi l'autre il a une ptite tete, pas de musique, la voix d'un gars qui endort et qui mache ces mots (anglais trés mauvais). et puis bravo les sous-titres sans ombres, blanc sur blanc c top .....
moutarde75 3 years ago
putain t'es dur là ! Ce sont des étudiants qui ont fait le film. Il n'y a pas beaucoup de pro qui serait capable de faire ce film en étant si peu nombreux. C'est vrai que c'est long, mais c'est contemplatif. Il a une petite tete parce que c'est comme ça. Et pourquoi voudrai-tu mettre une musique dessus ?!
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BOOOOOOOOORING
Sun100sure 3 years ago
jolie réalisation bravo
missdu55190 3 years ago
Bravo, vraiment ... artistique? :)
KingCanPringles 3 years ago
très bien fait !
nilsvids 3 years ago 5
waw!! voilà de l'animation de super qualitée;
merci
cachameric 3 years ago
magnifique
yabuzasa 3 years ago 3
Super sympa :)
Une seule critique, certains sous-titres au début son blanc et illisibles! Celà a été corrigé au milieu :)
Sacré boulot...
moordrock 3 years ago 4
très beau rendu... Mais le film semble malgrès tout un peu long.
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3615polyprod 3 years ago
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ca vaut pas du Yakuza Song !
musiciensdu06 3 years ago
beau boulot ca gère trop faites-en d'autres!
Medusabiker 3 years ago 3
it is really sad it is a true history, very good realization.
S1nz76 3 years ago 3
it is really sad it is a true history, very good realization.
S1nz76 3 years ago 2
Stellar. I've never seen this before and it's a damn shame. Honor to Mr. Mark Howard Jennings. To his son, no better tribute could have been made.
SplitRewind 3 years ago
SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET!!! good job.
ciaran1943 3 years ago 2
that was cooool!!!
operation1enduring1b 3 years ago
Now that is one piece of a great video.
*Je l'aime beaucoup*
daNigaman 3 years ago
chapô !! Très joli !
penestroika 3 years ago 2
reminds me of Syberia..
123spasser123 3 years ago
just beautiful.
yarloo 4 years ago 3
Amazing visuals, smooth animation and filled with emotions.
Just Great (And I mean the capital "G" !).
yanndick 4 years ago 4
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sing1234567890 4 years ago
does anyone know if they teach in english at supinfocom? or would you need to take a french proficency test like the TOEFL for american universities?
paoloproduction 4 years ago
very beautiful but i couldnt quite make out what the narrator was saying,.... it was as if he was whispering to his ass
juki320 4 years ago
I agree
socialoutcast1982 3 years ago 3
Beautifull textures amazing style. very smooth. Great for NO music. hard to do
someguytalking2u 4 years ago 2
beautiful ;)
lynn74r 4 years ago 2
breathtaking
Jeff55369 4 years ago
To those that know animation and story, know this was magnificent. That wasnt just animation, that was gold.
thatmeanwhelp 4 years ago 4
I didn't quite liked it...
postal2600 4 years ago
This was amazing! really good storytelling. So much emotion with so "little" actual animation!
12frames 4 years ago
nice 3d!! allthough feels long to watch.
torrachan 4 years ago
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I like the animation...
if anyone is interested in watching me singing
check out my videos...
=D
paixao15 4 years ago
Excellent technique, nice concept, quite boring story and pointlesss endimg.
Usorth 4 years ago
esta guapa la animacion
nekromutante 4 years ago
I liked this film, nice camera angles and scenery.
JosephD79 4 years ago
For those out there who liked it and would like to see some artwork or talk about it please send me an email, I'd be glad to share...
greg8848 4 years ago
hi everyone, thanks for the comments ( good or bad ).....at least the movie makes people react which is a positive thing I think.....Davidrp84, I hear what you say but some of what you're saying is just hate-fuelled as said Chenkson....I don't mind you not liking this movie..you probably have your own reasons for this, but constantly trying to destroy it isn't very constructive...I think we got your point...
greg8848 4 years ago
Really captures the bleakness of the environment and the father-son relationship well. Top notch animation. Very impressive!
Davidrp84 - I didn't have the time to read though all your hate fuelled, self absorbed and overly opinionated rantings; you must lead busy life? I think it's high time you gave this film the credit it deserves.
Not detracting from the real reason I came to this page. Awesome emotional effort. Best of luck getting the credit this superb short deserves.
chenkson 4 years ago
love it... great animation, great story... beautiful...
shameel7 4 years ago
Davidrp84 please tell me you're just joking or just being a wanker. I just saw your film which you say is better than this. I do hope it's just the animatic. And i do hope you plan on making the story better. Falling asleep, dragons, swords from the sky, what a crock of shit.
A lovely film Maëlys Faget,Grégory Jennings, Kevin Franczuk, well done. Although not particularly similar your film reminded me of a short film called Dog by Suzie Templeton.
wethewalkingdead 4 years ago
made me sad for my daughter and she anit even born yet.
BloxDesign 4 years ago
like i said search for the film kiwi, cause that is a fucking awesome film on cg even though it doesn't look as great. But it actually grabs my heart at the end of the film. This film just makes me not care.
Davidrp84 4 years ago
Hey David, just out of curiosity, are you an animation hobbyist?
I've seen Kiwi, it's an ok little cute short film, but I really feel the emotional depth and impact of this film is far greater. I guess I just don't understand how you can see Kiwi as being better than this.
jporter313 4 years ago 2
huh i'm an animation mayor, i just graduated. This film has nothing on kiwi, kiwi is better told and has better story. Ur just sold by the images instead of the story. U don't know anything bout animation. Or storytelling for that matter. This film might be good for the maker but thats bout it
Davidrp84 4 years ago
lol, ok.
Well actually, I'm a professional motion graphics producer. I went through school for this stuff and learned from people who work or worked at Pixar as well as a whole host of other studios.
jporter313 4 years ago 2
You seem to very rooted in an elemental concept of how a story should be told. This is something I went through in school, but grew out of as I learned more. Just relax and take in what this film has to offer. Kiwi is an interesting film too, and has it's own merits, but it's rather hamfisted and somewhat conventional, there's a subtlety to this film that you'd be wise to step back and learn from.
jporter313 4 years ago 2
n this story is crap, its like takin a full length movie and cuting out a 5 minute piece of it and saying this is a short film. even movie trailers are better. THis movie was made by a whole group of people, but kiwi was made by one person is so much deeper. because its contains so much that u don't see on the surface, like a fight to make some meaning out of life. Sacrifice until death for something u believe in. THis film here, is just like hi people my dad died for 5 minutes.
Davidrp84 4 years ago
See but here's the thing, all that stuff in Kiwi is on the nose. The whole "he's sacrificing his life to live for just one moment" thing is cute, but not really that deep, and a little unnecessarily morbid. The animation is also very conventional character bouncing around kind of stuff, and the shedding a single tear thing is really cliche.
jporter313 4 years ago 2
Despite all this, it's not a bad film, it's sort of cute and sweet, but I think this one has a deeper impact as do most of the people posting on this page (read: your target audience as an animator).
jporter313 4 years ago
All i see are big no nos. As for camera movements, they aren;t nothing extreme specially considering that u can change the camera view as many times as u want using a 3d program.
Davidrp84 4 years ago
I must say i was captivated by this film. The mood that it sets right from the beginning is perfect. It really made me feel like i was there experiencing it. I feel sorry for people who can't appreciate a film that doesn't have action or humor in it.
ender52 4 years ago
Extremely impressive. I'd be curious as to how much time was spent into it :).
As for the storytelling, well I find it superb as well:
-Camera views to make you feel the immense enviroment, without ever being awkward.
-And the slow-pace helps rub that solitude in.
Only crits would be the son's animation (the mix between his motionless expression and his body moving, seems awkward to me), and the first walk animation (seems too mechanic, but hey, it's a heavy suit ^^)
Titren 4 years ago
Really like this animation, different to any other animtion i've seen. The narrative and the story work well together.
danhub86 4 years ago
I dont think the guy making this animation was going 4 a great story, i think he was focused more on the mood of the film and also the direction.
danhub86 4 years ago
em guys i'm sorry but davidrp84 is right. story sucks nothing interesting happens...
koyima 4 years ago
thank you, the guy on the top is probably closest to the truth, that the guy was more concentrating on the way it looks than on telling a story. Cause everyone telling me that the story works well is bullshit. Tell me how it works well? Cause all i see are mistakes, he uses clecha dialogue. He narrates what we are looking at. And he doesn't give us vital information so we can care enough about the character.
Davidrp84 4 years ago
here is why it wasn't good story in few words, people die everyday, why should i care for this person's suffering. In a film u gotta give a person a reason for caring
Davidrp84 4 years ago
wow...i checked out your short David.....sorry i didn't connect with the "dragon-slaying-oh-my-god-was-this-a-dream-or-was-it-reality" part ......
bernardmickeyw 4 years ago
Lol what a hater, first off my film is abstract well its more surreal than it is abstract. So you can't understand it. Even though it has somewhat of a narrative its the type of film where it has an underlying meaning which is left for the viewer to interpret. This film is just a narrative about nothing. ANd i've tried to make my little brother stay for this whole film and he can't he walks out. Your not judgeing it as a film your judgeing it for its cg only
Davidrp84 4 years ago
The point is that this film, for what it is, isn't that great. Like i said watch the short film titled kiwi. Atleast my film you can sit through it, and its short, this film is 5 minutes of the same thing, that makes it extremely boring, my film atleast if your trying to give it a chance you can question yourself about it. This film tells you what its about straight off,
Davidrp84 4 years ago
thats why its narrated, and still no one cares much about it cause it doesn't really have an idea or something important to say. Well atleast something people can care for.Try looking at some dhali films and paintings. And then come back to me all pissed
Davidrp84 4 years ago
i will say it one last time, awesome cg, hoooorrible story. And for people who want to compare it to my film, first figure out what type of film it is, cause narratives and surrealism are 2 completely different genras. Besides atleast in my film you can actually sit through it. There are problems presented, and there are resolutions. THis film doesn't even have that.
Davidrp84 4 years ago
He presents to you smack down the middle of the story, a film like that needs atleast 2 hours. Thats not a good short, because there is waaaay to much information missing. So no one cares for the character, or what happens to him. He just fights a mountain end of story. No one could care less what happens to him cause they don't know anything about him or who he is. Specially when your talkin about a tragedy. Wanna watch a good cg film with good story, watch kiwi. Look for it on Youtube
Davidrp84 4 years ago
its boring, the cg is awesome the story is not entertaining, i mean ok maybe he is doin something personal, but when u make a film u have to take into consideration that ur making it so that people watch it. Dude u obviously don;t know what your talking about. It don;t matter what he is goin through, in the end personal sentiments don't matter what matters is that people can connect with it some how.
Davidrp84 4 years ago
great cg, horrible storytelling
Davidrp84 4 years ago
what are you smoking? The story telling was perfect. of course you have to know something about everest to understand what this guy is going through. but still its awsome!
hayseman 4 years ago
wow really nice animation. i really like it.really really well done and keep up the good work.
DulshanK 4 years ago
White captions on a white background don't wok so well though...overall, Very Nice.
maximusspqr 4 years ago
beautiful!
dude5487 4 years ago
Félicitations, très très beau travail :)
obiyann76 4 years ago
c'est kriiiiiiste T.T
kiruakiller 4 years ago
=OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! niceee =D
onimu44 4 years ago