Calming, melodic performance David. 0:44 like your riff there for sure. very nice song - -- - --- - Your video looks really great, lighting and framing is fantastic.
That was really cool. Even a little eerie. I don't know if you intended for that or not, lol. I might suggest making it longer, with more instrumental sections. Drag it out more. I think a song like this works well with lots of music and sparse lyrics. That way the words are given more importance.
Thanks for the comment. Yeah, I don't know about this song yet. I keep changing the lyrics. I was thinking about recording it with a full band. Anyway, thanks for your suggestion, I 'll keep it mind. I like your music...keep it up!
hi david. i like the guitar part. it sets a precise mood which is probably in keeping with the lyrics, but it would be listener friendly if the lyrics were posted to the right under "more info". i kinda envy you in that your melodies aren't simple "1,4,5" chord patterns. i am wondering if your guitar is plugged in or not. continue the craft, chuck.
Awesome guitar work. Wow you are a one man band. You can do the job of 3 band members. Hope I could be like this. 10/10
SUNNYD3322 1 year ago
Man u are awesome!
Coldillusionist 2 years ago
Coldillusionist, thanks a lot! cool comment...
PEACE! DAVID JASON
nosajrinse1 2 years ago
Calming, melodic performance David. 0:44 like your riff there for sure. very nice song - -- - --- - Your video looks really great, lighting and framing is fantastic.
* * * * * Mary
marywinmusic 2 years ago
Thanks Mary! for the comment, it means allot.
nosajrinse1 2 years ago
That was really cool. Even a little eerie. I don't know if you intended for that or not, lol. I might suggest making it longer, with more instrumental sections. Drag it out more. I think a song like this works well with lots of music and sparse lyrics. That way the words are given more importance.
birkuscircus 2 years ago
Thanks for the comment. Yeah, I don't know about this song yet. I keep changing the lyrics. I was thinking about recording it with a full band. Anyway, thanks for your suggestion, I 'll keep it mind. I like your music...keep it up!
nosajrinse1 2 years ago
cool,man! i really like it.
Gigsixstring 2 years ago
Thanks Gigsixstring! for all your support... I really appreciate it...PEACE!
nosajrinse1 2 years ago
hi david. i like the guitar part. it sets a precise mood which is probably in keeping with the lyrics, but it would be listener friendly if the lyrics were posted to the right under "more info". i kinda envy you in that your melodies aren't simple "1,4,5" chord patterns. i am wondering if your guitar is plugged in or not. continue the craft, chuck.
chuxtrux 2 years ago
Quality tune yet again Dave, brilliant stuff, I like it a lot! Keep them coming bro.
ravens1001 2 years ago
Thanks ravens1001... PEACE BROTHER!
nosajrinse1 2 years ago