Beethoven - Sonata op.78, 1st mov.

[rizz7604]

Very good in general. I think the tempo is a bit slow in some parts though...that's a personal thing, but think about the fact that, if you took the repeats, this piece would be almost 9 minutes long!!! At 1:01, really bring the accents out on the LH chords- I believe beats 1 and 3 are supposed to be accented, so make those beats more, and 2 and 4 significantly less...Work on the articulation of the big chords before the 16th runs...the first 2 are tied, and the third is sforzando...cont.

[rizz7604]

@rizz7604 You're making the 3 of them all sound the same. Your 16th note runs are lovely. I would try to make your trills faster in general?...just a thought. Use more dynamics on the huge unison 16th note run before the recapitulation of the theme...it should crescendo more and lead somewhere. One last thing...have you considering recording direct in from your keyboard for the audio? It would give listeners a better sound quality to work with...anyways, that's all, sounds good overall!

[rizz7604]

@rizz7604 oh, and by unison 16th note run I meant 16th note run in octaves. My bad...

[pagani1984]

Very nice. You have an incredible fluency . I´m trying to learn by myself about 5 months but it´s not easy at all. Sometimes I can´t make my fingers do what I want to.