hey thx man for watching some vids of us hehe.. check the final version of "arrival of planet x" if you have time.. it was the best i've done on my youtubechannel watch?v=RsnYRNCud_w
btw we don't exist anymore but thx for watching and commenting haha
nice guitar and good keys but there could definitely be some clean vocals and a few harmonized bridges would work well also, a breakdown would be nice too, other than that yall did great great guitar riffs, good minds write great music
love the guitar work, its amazing! im a guitar player myself, this stuff makes me jealous, the music i write for my band doesnt even come CLOSE to what you have written.
but, im also a vocalist. i like the metal screaming and everything, but im a fan of clean vocals. you should definately try and stick some in there, maybe harmonize with it? like during the chorus. it would sound really good. but keep up with the songs, love it! gives me inspiration to write better songs.
lol it's besi dude...^^thx btw you will not believe whats happening with the band right now..... i'm sure you will be completly shock.ed when you will watch the next vids coming up soon ^^ but i tell you something, jakob the clean voice left the band.. cheers bro and thx again
i'm so excited about the next weeks , i'll make the last efforts to try to get people for a complete band. if i don't suceed this time, i'll stop it ;)
:) i awesome as usual uhmm where do you get your drums from.... i tried to use drumkit from hell on FL studios but i have some issues with that.... so yeah keep rockin!
some of the vocals need a little work. the really deep stuff like right at the start sounds pretty fucking sweet, but the cookie monster vocals and the high stuff need a fair bit of work. the high stuff mainly.
i like it, you guys defiantly have a sound that is unique, your vocalist is good, sounds like he just needs to drink more water prior/during the performance, but over all that was amazing, and that solo was still good even if you "messed up" lol, keep it up! i cant wait to see more! :)
Maybe the backup vocalist should do the grunt parts, because as far as I am concerned the vocalist is a very good higher pitch screamer. Maybe just a bit more clean vocals, because when you mix clean and scream it can sound amazing.
Other than that I like this song better the AoPX, (the solo of which I liked but the rest I was indifferent to.) I think you guys still have room for improvement of AoPX lyrically wise and the final mixing of the song wasn't that great
thx for your comment dude ;)... the tapping part is the refrain and there will be clean vocals during that. aopx was my first lyric so yeah.. first time i tried ^^ and as you can see english is not my language lol^^ cheers bro hope you stay connected for comments ;)
Yeah well since your European (German right? lol) Thats fine, all I would suggest for the choruses is to make them flow a little better. Just try and mix differenent ways of phrasing things and you can get it epic sounding.
muahaha danke bärli und ja ähm wenn man mal schnell was aufnimmt testet man nicht die lautstärken ^^ wir sind halt im kreativprozess weniger profi wie du. aber dafür sind wir schöner ^^
hey danke fürn netten comment... und tja dann schreibst du wohl zu technische oder umständliche songs.. ^^ es muss nicht immer kompliziert sein damits gut klingt .. hast schon nen kompletten song fertisch? cheers
ja einige, gerade hab ich einen fertig gestellt de rist nicht wirklich nmetalcore, eher cso alternative, den kann ich auch spielen plus solo, ich kann eigentlich alles spielen aber sobald ich aufnehmene nicht mehr ^^, ist irgendwie nen fluch oder so, ein lied meiner alten band hab ich ja schon hochgeladen da hats geklapt ^^
3 reasons why I put clean vocals into the songs. 1st: most of mainstream listeners don't understand screaming at all but i still wanna reach them even its only for the refrain ^^.. 2nd.. i want some variety in the songs because i would find it pretty boring with only screaming and it doesn't show that anybody actually can sing.. 3rd.. for the GIRLS.... dude ^^ .. btw clean is not emo... ?! ^^
danke fürs angebot , wo warst du beim letzten video? da hätten wir dich gebraucht.. aufgrund des immensen arbeitsaufwands hab ich sowas in näherer zukunft nich nochmal geplant ^^ thx fürs vorbeischaun ^^
Das klingt doch schonmal ordentlich. Ich freue mich auf jeden Fall auf das Endergebnis, wenn das genauso gut wird wie Arrivel of Planet X dann seid ihr auf dem guten Weg ein super Album zu machen :) 5*
hey, habe gerade für meine Mündliche Prüfung in physik gelernt. Naja bin allgemin meist lange wach, bin halt Student ;-) Und was machst du so ausser videos reinstellen?
Besser als Aopx? Kann gut sein, schließlich wird man mit der Zeit doch besser, auch wenn man es vielleicht nicht gleich merkt. ^^ Aber mit Aopx habt ihr echt einen hammer Song hingelegt. Wie läufts denn momentan bei MTV Rockie?
its not rlly that bad but ur singer rlly needs to work on his low vocals haha :D
percyal1 6 months ago
Timmey timmey timmey.... timmey
FAHBRECORDS 6 months ago
echt cool guyyyys
guitarDouchebaggery 11 months ago
low screams sound like cookie monster the highs are beast from what i hear. Lol.
XxmikethedrummerxX 1 year ago
Mute the vocals ! thx
w00twurzzel 1 year ago
lol your screamer spazzes every time he says something
blazefpyro 2 years ago
omfg lol nice mic .... maybe u can put mute on so u can sut up! let the guitar guy play!!!!
mzzmazda 2 years ago
at 0:17 min,is that a german voice that i noticed?
would be funny :D
bananaterakotapie 2 years ago
hehe true ^^ i said something like "I played some shit- sorry, I cannot allow this to happen" ^^
flashguru 2 years ago
hm auf youtube findet man nich viele bands die screamen bzw growlen und sich das auch noch gut anhört :P
hört sich echt cool an, macht weiter so :D
bananaterakotapie 2 years ago
god that singers screams sound so liquidy. he needs to work on that. his lows dont get enough growl either
TheCompulsionToKill 2 years ago
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i loved the guitar! awsome drums! cool keybaord! just need to work on the singing a little more!
bresbit 2 years ago
i loved the guitar! awsome drums! cool keybaord! just need to work on the singing a little more!
bresbit 2 years ago
hey thx man for watching some vids of us hehe.. check the final version of "arrival of planet x" if you have time.. it was the best i've done on my youtubechannel watch?v=RsnYRNCud_w
btw we don't exist anymore but thx for watching and commenting haha
flashguru 2 years ago
good job too bad you guys broke up you guys were great i was looking forward to hearing more of you
Tyler106334122 2 years ago
nice guitar and good keys but there could definitely be some clean vocals and a few harmonized bridges would work well also, a breakdown would be nice too, other than that yall did great great guitar riffs, good minds write great music
ewooten2013 2 years ago
Wicked "Dime Razorback" dude
TRIVIUMrocker123 2 years ago
nice dude you guys great!
DarkLord1610 2 years ago
Luv the guitar part. Not a huge fan of death/ black metal singing tho.
KrankItVZ 2 years ago
agreed. work on the growls
ironskilit 2 years ago
this song sounds like it needs calm singing in it.
MasterChiefNewb 2 years ago
love the guitar work, its amazing! im a guitar player myself, this stuff makes me jealous, the music i write for my band doesnt even come CLOSE to what you have written.
but, im also a vocalist. i like the metal screaming and everything, but im a fan of clean vocals. you should definately try and stick some in there, maybe harmonize with it? like during the chorus. it would sound really good. but keep up with the songs, love it! gives me inspiration to write better songs.
ligerxero666 2 years ago
Cool riffage guys.
csharpminr 2 years ago
I can def hear some clean vocals being in that song (not sure if you guys are into that kinda thing)
But I think it would sound sick.
Nice solo btw.
Keep it tight guys!
JasonD2006 2 years ago
you won't believe it.. clean vocals will be from a woman hehe ;) thx for your comment .
flashguru 2 years ago
who was your singer again? o.O
He's awesome, got a mix between Children of Bodom and that kinda bands, but also have doom metal there o.O
Darkdayzz 2 years ago
lol it's besi dude...^^thx btw you will not believe whats happening with the band right now..... i'm sure you will be completly shock.ed when you will watch the next vids coming up soon ^^ but i tell you something, jakob the clean voice left the band.. cheers bro and thx again
flashguru 2 years ago
wut why? o.O
Why does that sutff always happen to you ?? o.O
Im shocked indeed :O
Darkdayzz 2 years ago
you know.. it always happens to the best.. rofl^^
i'm so excited about the next weeks , i'll make the last efforts to try to get people for a complete band. if i don't suceed this time, i'll stop it ;)
cheers bro hehe
flashguru 2 years ago
Dude, you cant stop with your bands :O
Owh well what can i do about it :P
Darkdayzz 2 years ago
nice
zackrocker234 2 years ago
awesome
nickndabomb 2 years ago
nice work d00ds keep it up
Metalheads unite!! \m/
pumbakung 2 years ago
fuckin' bad ass how you guys put up your ideas on here... not many people do that.. anyway, sounds cool as shit.. keep that shit up!
CryForMeSky210 2 years ago
thx for the respect dude^^ ;) it's pretty fun i put up every shit on guitar since i started 4 years ago.. hehe cheers
flashguru 2 years ago
:) i awesome as usual uhmm where do you get your drums from.... i tried to use drumkit from hell on FL studios but i have some issues with that.... so yeah keep rockin!
BoneHead6661 2 years ago
oja ;)
wie nennt ihr in den ?
cheers
EGitarre15 2 years ago
gute frage.. hab noch kein plan .. ^^ cheers
flashguru 2 years ago
the remote bree thats a new one awsome song lads keep up the good work :)
ruairiflanagan 2 years ago
Good job once again. Just stoppin in to see how its goin.
rockinw401 2 years ago
is it inward growling at the begining of the video?
zeromind59 2 years ago
yeah it is ;)
flashguru 2 years ago
good ;)
calocalypse 2 years ago
Guitar work = good.
some of the vocals need a little work. the really deep stuff like right at the start sounds pretty fucking sweet, but the cookie monster vocals and the high stuff need a fair bit of work. the high stuff mainly.
SpikyPeahorn 2 years ago
thx man that comment helps alot best regards
flashguru 2 years ago
i like it, you guys defiantly have a sound that is unique, your vocalist is good, sounds like he just needs to drink more water prior/during the performance, but over all that was amazing, and that solo was still good even if you "messed up" lol, keep it up! i cant wait to see more! :)
CIre101 2 years ago
yeah next time he will just get water and no beer lol btw next version will be final version (if recording @ home will hopefully turn out ok)^^
flashguru 2 years ago
lol beer can really fuck up you vocal chords so thats a good idea.plus he has to watch you drinking it all =)
southdownies 2 years ago
sounds wickedd so farr
jeff223344 2 years ago
omg i'm into metal and i didn't know that.. fuck.. maybe i really become old rofl thx
flashguru 2 years ago
Maybe the backup vocalist should do the grunt parts, because as far as I am concerned the vocalist is a very good higher pitch screamer. Maybe just a bit more clean vocals, because when you mix clean and scream it can sound amazing.
Other than that I like this song better the AoPX, (the solo of which I liked but the rest I was indifferent to.) I think you guys still have room for improvement of AoPX lyrically wise and the final mixing of the song wasn't that great
But overall you guys rock
Zebanamana 2 years ago
thx for your comment dude ;)... the tapping part is the refrain and there will be clean vocals during that. aopx was my first lyric so yeah.. first time i tried ^^ and as you can see english is not my language lol^^ cheers bro hope you stay connected for comments ;)
flashguru 2 years ago
Yeah well since your European (German right? lol) Thats fine, all I would suggest for the choruses is to make them flow a little better. Just try and mix differenent ways of phrasing things and you can get it epic sounding.
I like the tapping it sounds beast as shit too
Zebanamana 2 years ago
(austrian -> we're way cooler lol) the advice for the chorus is pretty awsome i'll think about that cheers
flashguru 2 years ago
The vocals are a bit too loud compared to the guitar. Overall, SWEET SHIT! Tapping is killer schatzi ;)
PetrucciFever 2 years ago
muahaha danke bärli und ja ähm wenn man mal schnell was aufnimmt testet man nicht die lautstärken ^^ wir sind halt im kreativprozess weniger profi wie du. aber dafür sind wir schöner ^^
flashguru 2 years ago
sounds real cool, even with freestyle vocals xD
Darkdayzz 2 years ago
thx dude ^^ always wanted to know what this \m/ means.. ^^ never used it please tell me^^ cheers
flashguru 2 years ago
\m/
is a fist showing horns... :)
t0msi 2 years ago
holy moly i can see it now lol thx ^^
flashguru 2 years ago
ich find das lied besser als aopx, mal gucken was bei der finalversion dabei rauskommt, das tapping bei dem cleanen vocal part rockt!
wenn ich meine lider nur am stück perfekt durchspielen könnte würd ich auch einige smehr hochladen xD
edotguitar 2 years ago
hey danke fürn netten comment... und tja dann schreibst du wohl zu technische oder umständliche songs.. ^^ es muss nicht immer kompliziert sein damits gut klingt .. hast schon nen kompletten song fertisch? cheers
flashguru 2 years ago
ja einige, gerade hab ich einen fertig gestellt de rist nicht wirklich nmetalcore, eher cso alternative, den kann ich auch spielen plus solo, ich kann eigentlich alles spielen aber sobald ich aufnehmene nicht mehr ^^, ist irgendwie nen fluch oder so, ein lied meiner alten band hab ich ja schon hochgeladen da hats geklapt ^^
edotguitar 2 years ago
Why does there always have to be a gay clean emo vocals shitty part? :S
Elintasokas 2 years ago
whats the matter with clean vocals???
Mindfreak248 2 years ago
3 reasons why I put clean vocals into the songs. 1st: most of mainstream listeners don't understand screaming at all but i still wanna reach them even its only for the refrain ^^.. 2nd.. i want some variety in the songs because i would find it pretty boring with only screaming and it doesn't show that anybody actually can sing.. 3rd.. for the GIRLS.... dude ^^ .. btw clean is not emo... ?! ^^
flashguru 2 years ago
also falls ihr das wieder so geil machen wollt mit mehreren musikern, ich würd mich jetzt schonmal um den posten als bassist bewerben^^
12matty31 2 years ago
danke fürs angebot , wo warst du beim letzten video? da hätten wir dich gebraucht.. aufgrund des immensen arbeitsaufwands hab ich sowas in näherer zukunft nich nochmal geplant ^^ thx fürs vorbeischaun ^^
flashguru 2 years ago
ich finds schon ziemlich geil :P wird bestimmt wida übelst xD P
ich werd etz dann auch mal anfangen eigenes zeugs hochzuladen...hab einiges parat...nur dass des immer blos einzelne riffs sin xDD naja...
und geile vocals übrigens :P
grüße aus bayern
BuZeEeEe 2 years ago
haha danke mann ^^
hab gehört wenn man einzelne riffs zusammenhängt n song rauskommt!!!! lol probier mal^^
ach aus bayern.. cool da kommt mein guter kumpel petruccifever her ^^ cheers und danke fürs vorbeischaun
flashguru 2 years ago
hahaha xDD lol
es passt nur ned schön zam^^
aba vielen dank für den tipp mann :) xDD
BuZeEeEe 2 years ago
aso ja na dann.. abwarten bis die passenden riffs kommen ^^ wenn du mal was originales online hast lass michs wissen cheers
flashguru 2 years ago
WoW!
Besser als AopX? Oo Na da bin ich echt aufs Endprodukt gespannt =) Klingt auf jeden Fall schon echt geil!!!
Achja, meld dich amal bei mir und versteck deine schönen Augen ned immer hinter ner Sonnenbrille :P^^
Farmatyr 2 years ago
rly good guyz gz fucking good
fdgenie 2 years ago
klingt sehr geil! ...Aber viel Spaß beim Finden eines Drummers der das auf Dauer daspielt :)
humaAT 2 years ago
mh, das cleane sollte er lieber lassen :D
bloodyphyl 2 years ago
in diesem fall stimme ich dir zu.. ^^ deswegen haben wir ja auch noch den jakob in der schublade für solche notfälle ^^
flashguru 2 years ago
this sounds good so far :D Looking forward to how it all turns out :D
RebeccaRhoads1993 2 years ago
flash, could you please take dreads like you had before ? ^^
bombalexus 2 years ago
Das klingt doch schonmal ordentlich. Ich freue mich auf jeden Fall auf das Endergebnis, wenn das genauso gut wird wie Arrivel of Planet X dann seid ihr auf dem guten Weg ein super Album zu machen :) 5*
p.s. Flash, schönes Tapping
WoinSaerd 2 years ago
hey mann was machsn du noch wach? ^^ danke fürs commenten ... ps der song wird meiner meinung nach besser als aopx
flashguru 2 years ago
hey, habe gerade für meine Mündliche Prüfung in physik gelernt. Naja bin allgemin meist lange wach, bin halt Student ;-) Und was machst du so ausser videos reinstellen?
Besser als Aopx? Kann gut sein, schließlich wird man mit der Zeit doch besser, auch wenn man es vielleicht nicht gleich merkt. ^^ Aber mit Aopx habt ihr echt einen hammer Song hingelegt. Wie läufts denn momentan bei MTV Rockie?
WoinSaerd 2 years ago
Reminds me of some In Flames. :)
MarkJames666 2 years ago
rock on \m/
iMervyn 2 years ago
awesome
skullbo720 2 years ago
kickass song!!! \m/
hfwiwhf 2 years ago
9th VIEW!!!
lol just kidding. sick riff, i hope this song gets a better recording :P
Bubblizz92 2 years ago
rofl as it is a preview (last before final) there are no lyrics yet and the solo sux and and and.. but yeah cheers ^^ thx
flashguru 2 years ago
OMFG cool!!
rockersote 2 years ago
1st view xD
rockersote 2 years ago
i fucking hate first view comments rofl
flashguru 2 years ago
i wont do it again u.u
rockersote 2 years ago