Whole (an original song)

[dankitti]

I saw your comment about Meghan Tonjes covering Terra Naomi and I followed it back here and I found this. Great song!! I subscribed right away. I am listening to Terra on Rhapsody. awesomeness.

[easavoy]

Terra is amazing! Thanks for the comment and for subscribing! :)

[drakionx]

Great song but I wanted to see your hands! I couldn't see your chords :(

[easavoy]

Sorry! Next time I'll be sure to try and get my hands in the shot.

[2012honk]

nice , starts with sound solid guitar sound. vocals should be isolated on another track. the song becomes (wasn't listening to lyrics)too melancholy, think about introducing a bridge in a major key to give a slightly more light hearted up beat feel . became monotonous. great potential . save up for some digital gear so you can isolate the tracks. the bathroom gives a good acoustic for your guitar. keep up the good work :)ps you even had me strumming along

[easavoy]

I honestly don't know too much about song writing or recording, but thanks for the tips. :)

[RockinVideosRSweet]

pretty good, you could add this to one of those online contests like yobi sing

[easavoy]

Thanks for the tip and the comment. :)

[koufix77]

Compliments for this song! First, I don't understand all lyrics, but I have a good dictionnary english-french ;-p

Beautiful song, really!

[easavoy]

Well, thank you. :)

[oneawkwardgirl]

AWESOME SONG! You're great!

[easavoy]

Thank you so much!

[livin4hymn]

wow, a comment from 1/2 of The Parselmouths. =D

[TheZombieFlanders]

This was incredible.

Thank you so much for posting this. I needed something like this right now. My faith has taken a dip, too, but I think it's finally getting back on track.

So, yeah. Thanks. =)

[easavoy]

Thank you. :) I'm glad to hear someone else could take something from it.

[GirlsWithGlasses]

What an emotional song! Compliments to the writer and performer ... ;-)

Resounding applause.

I'm sorry to say the bathroom acoustic is not the best. But that's a minor matter.

[easavoy]

Thank you. A friend asked me why I always performed in the bathroom, and I got the feeling the sound wasn't as good in there as I thought. Thanks for the tip.

[iminer87]

YAY! Go Phoebe!

[easavoy]

Yay, I feel so complimented. I ought to cover one of her songs.

[livin4hymn]

if you're taking requests: how about Smelly Cat :-p

[easavoy]

Funny you mention that. iminer87 suggested the same thing. lol

[livin4hymn]

great minds think alike. It's official then: that's your next vid :-p

[clarinetkid05]

I want the mp3! this new guitar gives it a deeper darker sound. and I think your technique really picked up since the recording you did last!!!!

[easavoy]

Yay, thanks Trash! :) I don't know if it's that much better, but at least I can do it in one sitting now-a-days. I need a better microphone though. It's not as clear as the old one.

[teacherbrunoivo]

that was cute

[easavoy]

Thank you.

[livin4hymn]

No need to apologize or blame. It's a beautiful song and you sound great (the harmony is a nice touch) =) Not just saying that cuz you're a friend either. Glad I got you to resurrect this song.

[easavoy]

haha thanks! I know...I'm always blaming and apologizing, eh? :P

[livin4hymn]

lol, ya but it's better to be humble about it than saying "this is my best original song ever. i better get featured on YT and get signed to a label for this!" :-p