prolifegaming (1 jaar geleden) Toon Verbergen 0 Gemarkeerd als spam Antwoorden | Verwijderen nice text, melody, only the singer has a strange voice and dont like it much sorry... dont take it personal
was my reaction a year ago, now today i came again on this song and i got to say, it sounds kinda nice. And yes i would love to hear coldplay play this!!
Uuhm nice song to being with I really love the melody of it, but I dislike the mutliple voices in 'lets run away'. can't you just sing it 4 times but without al the special editing, if you could it would be a very nice song. keep it on
It's a great song,! I am a singer too, but... I don't write songs, nor compose, I just sing, but I am looking for an extra song, I yuo have one you dont like... :)
Honestly, it sounds decent, except for the really low notes, and the fact that when you keep playing the "Let's run awaaaaay-ooohoo" part, it sounds REALLY bad being added on multiple times. It gets way too loud compared to the rest of the song, and the "ooohoo" part just sounds bad when it repeats 4 times.
Blood is pouring out of my ears because of this. Brad knows what I'm talking about though, he probably get's fucked in the ear by his daddy's little dick.
wow, this sucks. It has a melodie that has been used like 200 times, your singer sucks, It only has like 5 different sentences. Just don't try to play. Plus, this song is nowhere good as anysong by coldplay, in fact, the only song i can think of that is related to this mcdonalds theme song
wat do you call it punk,slomo,clasic or somthing like that not to be rude but i didn`t like it so mutch mayby becose i lisens to Nightwish and that stuff anyway it was good even do i didn`t like it so mutch
Good stuff, I'd say you sound more like 3 doors down than blink or coldplay, but I still like it, as far as the vocals go, you don't need to change them, just take a voice lesson or two, and slow down the delay on the "let's run away" but keep the "ooh's" the same cuz its soundin really good
The song is has potential. There's too much auto-tune on the vocals and the delay is a little bid too loud. Your singing is a little bit too nasaly. Anyway the purpose of this comment was to say that if i was such a loser as smoochy0271 which is logically impossible i would devote my entire life searching for him finding him and beat the fuck out of him until even a detective make no distinction between what's left from him and the pool of my shit and piss and vomit and cum he'd be drowned in.
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This guy is just another cock jamming son of a bitch who gets it in the ass after disobeying his dad's one inch dick, and going to the fucking pride parade.
people have been pretty harsh to you huh? but i actually really like it. okay so the vocals arn't amazing but my god they're better than mine. the lyrics are good and the tunes catchy. it's good. really good.
Wow, hey, remember me, you motherfucking son of a filthy whore? You're probably too busy fucking your sisters labia up, but fuck you. Your mother must have really fucked up with you. Your voice actually made me turn the volume off, because this song is worse than the dried up bullshit around your father's rippling anus, which you fuck.
tell me where the fuck you live smoochy ill come and hammer the daylights out of you. Stupid mother fucking ass hole Saying shit on the internet ? i bet this guy can pound your ass back into your fucking moms pussy which is prolly really badly stretched thanks to ur huge fucking mouth. suck me off you fucking internet pussy
Hellll Yeah! Good for you Brad. You knew that the vocals were terrible, but you went out there and proved that vocals don't have anything to do wwith the song. All that matters are the slideshow pictures. You look uber good when you have your eyes half way open. Oh and my favorite is when you are blowing on the glass. LOL, let's run away, just you and....me ;)
This slander is not apropriate on my brad site. I herebye band you from further comenting on my brad site. Yes that is right I represent brab by saying goodbye to you. You are welcome brad. No one will mess with tou if I can help it.
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lol you work as a security guard? i understand why your so angry, telling those punk kids not to bring their skateboards inside the mall, and giving directions to the bathrooms.
I hope you like constructive criticism rather than only compliments because this is one. The music is really good I like the beat but my problem is with the singing. The major problem in my opinion is that your voice is not suitable for such song that's for 1 for 2 the lyrics are a bit too vague and not deep enough. Anyways all in all it was an ok song very good instrumental wise but not that much vocally.
I want to send a message to all the viewer, i am in charge now and i want to lay down some rules. 1.) No acting like a dumbass with dumbass comment 2.) only write nice comments so we can have a benifical outcome. 3.) help me boost brad's cofidence by telling him how good he is. 3.) Tell your friends about tis vid and how good it is. Thanks. If you have any questions just ask me, i would love to help
I want to send a message to all the viewer, i am in charge now and i want to lay down some rules. 1.) No acting like a dumbass with dumbass comment 2.) only write nice comments so we can have a benifical outcome. 3.) help me boost brad's cofidence by telling him how good he is. 3.) Tell your friends about tis vid and how good it is. Thanks. If you have any questions just ask me, i would love to help
I want to send a message to all the viewer, i am in charge now and i want to lay down some rules. 1.) No acting like a dumbass with dumbass comment 2.) only write nice comments so we can have a benifical outcome. 3.) help me boost brad's cofidence by telling him how good he is. 3.) Tell your friends about tis vid and how good it is. Thanks. If you have any questions just ask me, i would love to help
I want to send a message to all the viewer, i am in charge now and i want to lay down some rules. 1.) No acting like a dumbass with dumbass comment 2.) only write nice comments so we can have a benifical outcome. 3.) help me boost brad's cofidence by telling him how good he is. 3.) Tell your friends about tis vid and how good it is. Thanks. If you have any questions just ask me, i would love to help
I want to send a message to all the viewer, i am in charge now and i want to lay down some rules. 1.) No acting like a dumbass with dumbass comment 2.) only write nice comments so we can have a benifical outcome. 3.) help me boost brad's cofidence by telling him how good he is. 3.) Tell your friends about tis vid and how good it is. Thanks. If you have any questions just ask me, i would love to help
I want to send a message to all the viewer, i am in charge now and i want to lay down some rules. 1.) No acting like a dumbass with dumbass comment 2.) only write nice comments so we can have a benifical outcome. 3.) help me boost brad's cofidence by telling him how good he is. 3.) Tell your friends about tis vid and how good it is. Thanks. If you have any questions just ask me, i would love to help
This slander is not apropriate on my brad site. I herebye band you from further comenting on my brad site. Yes that is right I represent brab by saying goodbye to you. You are welcome brad. No one will mess with tou if I can help it.
i fink its a reli gud song, sorta repetitive as others hav sed but i still love it, the vocals arent tht bad, they jst need a little work, witha lil training and practise this will sound reli gr8
not bad, not exactly someone I'd put on a record but I'm sure at some point they said the same of Blink 182. Just keep going, and maybe let someone else write the lyrics, and of course to parrot several others, don't listen to talentless hacks who were probably mocked by every music teacher they ever had
I want to send a message to all the viewer, i am in charge now and i want to lay down some rules. 1.) No acting like a dumbass with dumbass comment 2.) only write nice comments so we can have a benifical outcome. 3.) help me boost brad's cofidence by telling him how good he is. 3.) Tell your friends about tis vid and how good it is. Thanks.
Well here's a taste of your own medicine. You are a fucking loser who listens to the shittiest music in the world after getting fucked by his dickless dad Have fun eating your mom's vagina, seems that's all you do, you fucking heaping pile of dogs feces covered in your fathers cum.
This slander is not apropriate on my brad site. I herebye band you from further comenting on my brad site. Yes that is right I represent brab by saying goodbye to you. You are welcome brad. No one will mess with tou if I can help it.
Okay, I was just testing if this asshole shit making singer fucking blocked me. Guess he is too much of a fucking asshole to have, what a fucker. Anyways, you can't deny that this song stinks more than melhar23 after he take cumshots all over himself. It's funny how he claims to say I have no life, yet fucking goes out and about reclessly talking bullshit about me.
Hey guys my name is mike and i am a musician i am not great i have only been playing for about a year and a half but i do try. I figure if everyone that can leaves me some comments ratings or even video responces just to help me i would really benifit from it. Sorry to have to tell you this way but i really need the constructive critisim. I am 14 and hopefully by the time i am 18 i will have taken singing lessons (cause my voice is terrible) So thanks alot guys just click my name
I dont like the vocals the instrument's good and Advice dont use the mark hoppus jazz bass i have used it in recordings and videos but i found thats it is his sound find a bass that is good for you and you could be some one some day................
i don't think you should say lets run away on the away part you should say somethin about what you and your girlfriend did together than say lets run away twice and add more oos/ you should listen to the scientist by coldplay that is a good song that i thinj your song could become like
sing higher and at the end of each line get higher same with run away get higher than lower but awesome lyric writing just work on how you sing it.tip:it would sound much prettier slower
Yeah three minutes apart, just long enough to have a listen and post a comment. so i guess you felt the need to just keep coming back for more then, maybe you can go take another beating from pops. and come back in another 3 minutes to please your ears some more.
Notice how the comments are fucking 3 minutes apart? You obviously failed math. It's okay though, keep spamming up people's videos. Maybe one day you will be more successful. Who know's, maybe you will eat jizz from costumers, like your father did.
obviously you must like the song if you feel the need to waste your time posting commets for going on ten minutes now so please feel free to enjoy the music you imbred peice of shit.
don't listen to that Faggot smoochy027 he's a fucking piece of steaming goat shit...you're song sounds sick its pretty cool. Just work on you're vocals for a while
Talk about shitty music. And your taste in music is almost as bad as your disgusting singing. Just stop it now, before you cause the rates of Deaf people to rise, you inhumane fucker.
lol honestly you have no life all you're doing is making fun of someones song you jackass. He's way better then you'll ever be in you're whole shitty life. So please jump of a bridge and make everyone happy including you're unfortunate parents who were dumb enough to have you're worthless ass of a human being. FUCK YOU SMOOCHY
I couldn't even fucking listen to the whole song, because I didn't want to die of fucking laughter. Oh my god, this is too fucking much. Good job, you cunty McFucker
yo go fucking suck a dick you gay piece of shit. Why the fuck are you bringing the poor guy down like that you fucking bastard. I bet you can't do any better, mainly cuz you're probably an ugly piece of dog shit and wouldn't go to put you're face on camera. NOW GO KILL YOURSELF YOU FUCK FACE
Hey everyone my name is Brad Adrion and this is my song, if you happen to come across it have a listen and tell me what you think. it will sound better through headphones and the ending oooo's are the best. Peace.
prolifegaming (1 jaar geleden) Toon Verbergen 0 Gemarkeerd als spam Antwoorden | Verwijderen nice text, melody, only the singer has a strange voice and dont like it much sorry... dont take it personal
was my reaction a year ago, now today i came again on this song and i got to say, it sounds kinda nice. And yes i would love to hear coldplay play this!!
prolifegaming 2 years ago
Thanks a lot! Glad your point of view has changed.
bradadrion 2 years ago
Uuhm nice song to being with I really love the melody of it, but I dislike the mutliple voices in 'lets run away'. can't you just sing it 4 times but without al the special editing, if you could it would be a very nice song. keep it on
wolfo666 2 years ago
Thanks, maybe if I ever re-record it. Glad you liked it for the most part though.
bradadrion 2 years ago
how come you have 134 comments and only 5800 views?
bertiemycat 2 years ago
It's a great song,! I am a singer too, but... I don't write songs, nor compose, I just sing, but I am looking for an extra song, I yuo have one you dont like... :)
jennifereiliffe12 2 years ago
Honestly, it sounds decent, except for the really low notes, and the fact that when you keep playing the "Let's run awaaaaay-ooohoo" part, it sounds REALLY bad being added on multiple times. It gets way too loud compared to the rest of the song, and the "ooohoo" part just sounds bad when it repeats 4 times.
Dizqard 2 years ago
thats good
keep playing
adamox61 2 years ago
This is the best of your songs, I really like it! 5/5 stars for me. Some of the vocals are ... but it's great!
MrDigitalKid 3 years ago
I loved it! there were some cute pics like the one at 2:01 but yeah! Is there somewhere I can download this song from?? good job btw!
ZamChAmP 3 years ago
pretty good. i think this is your second best other than say goodbye. keep up the good work!
Culla94 3 years ago
dude love ya song's not to high suits the song great, dont listern to all these pricks. they have no taste.
keep up work mate whens next song out?? email me please...
dikie07 3 years ago
Es lamentable cómo a la gente le encanta criticar el trabajo de otros. La canción no será una obra maestra, pero...acaso ellos saben hacer algo mejor?
It is regrettable how people love saying nasty things about other people's work. The song might not be a masterpiece, but...can they do better?
Sileithel 3 years ago
definetly horrible out of tune dont try oooing ever...
again
tati38112 3 years ago
if thats yer girlfreind shes hot!!!:-)
zaqwertyuiopasdfgh 3 years ago
To everyone who says the voice is too deep.
Well it's not. It is the right key, and maybe i could have went an octave up, but i do that in the chorus. Maybe i could capo it up a coupla notes.
bradadrion 3 years ago
good lyrics but ur voice is a bit too deep. But i have to say good song
tazzron 3 years ago
Oh and....... lmao the picture at 0:31 hahaha
Kenpachi5495 3 years ago
Okay G, your voice is too deep.. The song wasn't half bad but your singing kind of messed it up.
Kenpachi5495 3 years ago 3
your vioce is too deep you wont get out there sorry but its the truth
hlm7654 3 years ago
nice text, melody, only the singer has a strange voice and dont like it much sorry... dont take it personal
prolifegaming 3 years ago
Fuck these people, they obviously couldn't tell talent if it kicked 'em in the ass.
pntblnk1823 3 years ago
i like it i dont think it sounds like coldplay the vocals are kinda rough but i cant sing so i shouldnt be talking good lyrics though!!
eclaireparris 3 years ago
... ouch
zyrinibob 3 years ago
Nice beat but get voice lessons. =P
frizydog 3 years ago
mm. sounds pretty cheap
kool1800 3 years ago
I like the beast of the song, and the melody, but I'm not trying to be mean, I really think you need to redo the vocals. :(
Celolapia1 3 years ago
not that bad...but not that good either. wait for your voice to mature...
LordGiggle 3 years ago
i can't tell how this would sound if someone who could sing sang it.. but it probably wouldn't be as bad as it is now
arn123321 3 years ago
this is like solid gold crap
thearcticwombats 3 years ago 3
The music isnt that bad but your voice is horriblle. Sorry, but get some lessons!!!
muahahaha101 3 years ago
Please.. stop singing! You have still a kids voice.. ask someone to sing! And quit the chorus. The rest you are in the good path..
lobomau 3 years ago
its ok but singing needs improving and the chorus is kinda crazy
richard4120 3 years ago 5
Blood is pouring out of my ears because of this. Brad knows what I'm talking about though, he probably get's fucked in the ear by his daddy's little dick.
ShutTheFuckUpWhore 3 years ago 2
Only a FUCKING FAG would post this!!!
tylerkillsyou 3 years ago
melhar23 YOU SUCK smoochie is right this brad guys is a flaming homo.
and so are you
TomD3long3182 4 years ago
yo dog no offense but this song is shit blink 182 wasnt nearly as bad as u but its the thought that u put it on utube that counts
jrfizz1410 4 years ago
wow, this sucks. It has a melodie that has been used like 200 times, your singer sucks, It only has like 5 different sentences. Just don't try to play. Plus, this song is nowhere good as anysong by coldplay, in fact, the only song i can think of that is related to this mcdonalds theme song
jarjarwumbo 4 years ago
... not bad melodie, but coldplay has more sound and chris has a nice voice
azubina 4 years ago
you know how i know your gay? you listen to coldplay
thats from 40 year old virgin
Fallensk8er282 4 years ago
i like how you commented on a video that has to do with coldplay asshole
jarjarwumbo 4 years ago
i must say that that song was not as bad as i thought it would be. it had a great feel to it. really good job. keep it up.
loveandpeace8407 4 years ago
wat do you call it punk,slomo,clasic or somthing like that not to be rude but i didn`t like it so mutch mayby becose i lisens to Nightwish and that stuff anyway it was good even do i didn`t like it so mutch
labargan 4 years ago
no matter what people say about you.. i tink the songs are great man !!
Wslyktk 4 years ago
this song is actually really good. i thought you guys wouldn't be that good but sry for that.
mikeishere 4 years ago
i thought this was actually a lot better than some of the other pathetic jokes on youtube.
4llurb4s3 4 years ago 3
It's a pretty sweet song mate. Where you live?
xXxSevenfoldxXx 4 years ago
pretty good song(but plz dont do the whoohoo)
bollewini 4 years ago
this is gd
l1lj0d13 4 years ago 2
Why is this song so good?
guacamoleroxmysox 4 years ago
you know how i know your gay? you listen to Coldplay!
fydoman182 4 years ago
dude you fuckin blow...
seriously get sum vocal lessons
TomD3long3182 4 years ago
Third eye blind* not 3 doors down... my b
MStarg 4 years ago
Good stuff, I'd say you sound more like 3 doors down than blink or coldplay, but I still like it, as far as the vocals go, you don't need to change them, just take a voice lesson or two, and slow down the delay on the "let's run away" but keep the "ooh's" the same cuz its soundin really good
MStarg 4 years ago 2
The song is has potential. There's too much auto-tune on the vocals and the delay is a little bid too loud. Your singing is a little bit too nasaly. Anyway the purpose of this comment was to say that if i was such a loser as smoochy0271 which is logically impossible i would devote my entire life searching for him finding him and beat the fuck out of him until even a detective make no distinction between what's left from him and the pool of my shit and piss and vomit and cum he'd be drowned in.
colwarter 4 years ago 3
Your actually realllllly good!!
Dakota1322 4 years ago 2
This comment has received too many negative votes show
You got a terrible voice FUCK OFF BITCH!!!!
daddycrisse 4 years ago
sweet cool song
matchclark19 4 years ago
This comment has received too many negative votes show
This guy is just another cock jamming son of a bitch who gets it in the ass after disobeying his dad's one inch dick, and going to the fucking pride parade.
Smoochy0271 4 years ago
please please please do us all a favor and get some professional help.
guacamoleroxmysox 4 years ago
this comment isn't showing up as a resonce but it is supposed to be a response to Smoochy0271. Not the song. The song rox my sox.
guacamoleroxmysox 4 years ago
Good tune and lyrics, vocals could use some improvement, perhaps take some singing lessons. But overall pretty good. YOu've got lots of potential.
fareblaze 4 years ago 4
people have been pretty harsh to you huh? but i actually really like it. okay so the vocals arn't amazing but my god they're better than mine. the lyrics are good and the tunes catchy. it's good. really good.
natethxx 4 years ago 2
Wow, hey, remember me, you motherfucking son of a filthy whore? You're probably too busy fucking your sisters labia up, but fuck you. Your mother must have really fucked up with you. Your voice actually made me turn the volume off, because this song is worse than the dried up bullshit around your father's rippling anus, which you fuck.
Smoochy0271 4 years ago
Dude, what the fuck are you doing?
TheArachnoid 4 years ago
tell me where the fuck you live smoochy ill come and hammer the daylights out of you. Stupid mother fucking ass hole Saying shit on the internet ? i bet this guy can pound your ass back into your fucking moms pussy which is prolly really badly stretched thanks to ur huge fucking mouth. suck me off you fucking internet pussy
melhar23 4 years ago
great song but u might want to get new vocals but good song
BlaqSaphire 4 years ago
Hellll Yeah! Good for you Brad. You knew that the vocals were terrible, but you went out there and proved that vocals don't have anything to do wwith the song. All that matters are the slideshow pictures. You look uber good when you have your eyes half way open. Oh and my favorite is when you are blowing on the glass. LOL, let's run away, just you and....me ;)
letsrunawaywooohoo 4 years ago 2
Definately try nocking it up an octave, and also try breathing more relaxedly.
PolakDave 4 years ago
This slander is not apropriate on my brad site. I herebye band you from further comenting on my brad site. Yes that is right I represent brab by saying goodbye to you. You are welcome brad. No one will mess with tou if I can help it.
theFATjessicaFAN 4 years ago
I want to send a message to all the viewer, i am in charge now and i want to lay down some rules. 1.) No acting like a dumbass with dumbass comment 2.) only write nice comments so we can have a benifical outcome. 3.) help me boost brad's cofidence by telling him how good he is. 3.) Tell your friends about tis vid and how good it is. Thanks. If you have any questions just ask me, i would love to help
theFATjessicaFAN 4 years ago
youve got potential (and a fan in ireland)!! love it . i think it rocks♥
8000clare0008 4 years ago
haha i love comedy songs, he's good at them
kmind71 4 years ago
you know what, im sorry man, lets stop acting like 3 year olds.
FORZION 4 years ago
try bringing it up an octave, otherwise a good song, lyrics good, just singing needs to be improved
derekjeterSUCKS 4 years ago
lol you work as a security guard? i understand why your so angry, telling those punk kids not to bring their skateboards inside the mall, and giving directions to the bathrooms.
FORZION 4 years ago
nice song, try make a rock song
smicallen999 4 years ago
lol why do you keep responding you sound like your 12
FORZION 4 years ago 2
Awesome lyrics, music, and vocals. With a little practice I think you will really make something of yourself!
kittykittychanel 4 years ago
lets run away from this song
projectpt11 4 years ago
I hope you like constructive criticism rather than only compliments because this is one. The music is really good I like the beat but my problem is with the singing. The major problem in my opinion is that your voice is not suitable for such song that's for 1 for 2 the lyrics are a bit too vague and not deep enough. Anyways all in all it was an ok song very good instrumental wise but not that much vocally.
moustafa09 4 years ago
cool song! i like it.
sillychica794 4 years ago
the way you look im sure she has a huge dick
FORZION 4 years ago
blink 182 and coldplay are almost opposite ends of the spectrum. i find it odd that you would reference those bands
wtfsconehead 4 years ago
Cool , you should work harder and keep doing your best!
maycee29Lee 4 years ago
I want to send a message to all the viewer, i am in charge now and i want to lay down some rules. 1.) No acting like a dumbass with dumbass comment 2.) only write nice comments so we can have a benifical outcome. 3.) help me boost brad's cofidence by telling him how good he is. 3.) Tell your friends about tis vid and how good it is. Thanks. If you have any questions just ask me, i would love to help
theFATjessicaFAN 4 years ago
I HOPE YOU DIE IN A FIRE
FORZION 4 years ago
asshole shut the fuck up (not you brad) you keep the good music up!
derekjeterSUCKS 4 years ago
I want to send a message to all the viewer, i am in charge now and i want to lay down some rules. 1.) No acting like a dumbass with dumbass comment 2.) only write nice comments so we can have a benifical outcome. 3.) help me boost brad's cofidence by telling him how good he is. 3.) Tell your friends about tis vid and how good it is. Thanks. If you have any questions just ask me, i would love to help
theFATjessicaFAN 4 years ago
I want to send a message to all the viewer, i am in charge now and i want to lay down some rules. 1.) No acting like a dumbass with dumbass comment 2.) only write nice comments so we can have a benifical outcome. 3.) help me boost brad's cofidence by telling him how good he is. 3.) Tell your friends about tis vid and how good it is. Thanks. If you have any questions just ask me, i would love to help
theFATjessicaFAN 4 years ago
I want to send a message to all the viewer, i am in charge now and i want to lay down some rules. 1.) No acting like a dumbass with dumbass comment 2.) only write nice comments so we can have a benifical outcome. 3.) help me boost brad's cofidence by telling him how good he is. 3.) Tell your friends about tis vid and how good it is. Thanks. If you have any questions just ask me, i would love to help
theFATjessicaFAN 4 years ago
I want to send a message to all the viewer, i am in charge now and i want to lay down some rules. 1.) No acting like a dumbass with dumbass comment 2.) only write nice comments so we can have a benifical outcome. 3.) help me boost brad's cofidence by telling him how good he is. 3.) Tell your friends about tis vid and how good it is. Thanks. If you have any questions just ask me, i would love to help
theFATjessicaFAN 4 years ago
I want to send a message to all the viewer, i am in charge now and i want to lay down some rules. 1.) No acting like a dumbass with dumbass comment 2.) only write nice comments so we can have a benifical outcome. 3.) help me boost brad's cofidence by telling him how good he is. 3.) Tell your friends about tis vid and how good it is. Thanks. If you have any questions just ask me, i would love to help
theFATjessicaFAN 4 years ago
This slander is not apropriate on my brad site. I herebye band you from further comenting on my brad site. Yes that is right I represent brab by saying goodbye to you. You are welcome brad. No one will mess with tou if I can help it.
theFATjessicaFAN 4 years ago
u suck!
hate voice
emo lyrics!
no talent!
u sucks!
but keep going!
bloodthirstyboogers 4 years ago
Musicaly it's preety decent, the rhytem section is good. Work on the vocals.
IxnayHMX 4 years ago
i wish you would run away, off a cliff
FORZION 4 years ago
haha, thats funny
derekjeterSUCKS 4 years ago
stop spamming up stuff to make peopl listen to ur crappy song
plumbcrby 4 years ago
kick it up an octave
skmaggot731 4 years ago
i think u could have a really good voice..but id say to make ur voice a bit higher...cause the low notes seem to be hard for yall to hit
danielllalynnn 4 years ago
i fink its a reli gud song, sorta repetitive as others hav sed but i still love it, the vocals arent tht bad, they jst need a little work, witha lil training and practise this will sound reli gr8
<3 kirsti--Xx
SummerLover10 4 years ago
The song's pretty good itself - I'd listen to it, however I have to say your vocals do need some work. Sorry :/
letimotei 4 years ago
not bad, not exactly someone I'd put on a record but I'm sure at some point they said the same of Blink 182. Just keep going, and maybe let someone else write the lyrics, and of course to parrot several others, don't listen to talentless hacks who were probably mocked by every music teacher they ever had
deragna 4 years ago 2
ur not that great i like the lyrics but not ur voice i like blink 182 better and actually i hate the lyrics its just an annoying song sry
nerdterd12 4 years ago
lol atlest i don't look like a homo and sound like a girl
FORZION 4 years ago
YOU FUCKEN SUCK END YOURSELF
FORZION 4 years ago
sounds good:) just practice very hard and you will make something really good!
Ni3kk 4 years ago
theFATjessicaFAN or w/e
who told u to lay down the rules??
yea if u can make rules i can...
ummm....rule #1)
no being a bitch and trin to make rule for ppl that u dont know..cuz honestly nobodys gonnna follow them n e way..yess...i am i bitch
XsexiisexiileeX 4 years ago
Your vocals need to get better, but it's good overall
raguabros 4 years ago
Kinda repetative, but not bad. Blink 182 is my fav band to.
KibaBagel247 4 years ago
I want to send a message to all the viewer, i am in charge now and i want to lay down some rules. 1.) No acting like a dumbass with dumbass comment 2.) only write nice comments so we can have a benifical outcome. 3.) help me boost brad's cofidence by telling him how good he is. 3.) Tell your friends about tis vid and how good it is. Thanks.
theFATjessicaFAN 4 years ago
you guys have potential. maybe louder instruments and softer vochals if you want the coldplay/blink-182 feel.
guacamoleroxmysox 4 years ago
smoochy you ass hole shut up
jetsrock11 4 years ago 2
Sorry guys change the singer. Or prove me wrong and send me an other song.
iix23 4 years ago
i thought it was good.
4llurb4s3 4 years ago
Well here's a taste of your own medicine. You are a fucking loser who listens to the shittiest music in the world after getting fucked by his dickless dad Have fun eating your mom's vagina, seems that's all you do, you fucking heaping pile of dogs feces covered in your fathers cum.
Smoochy027 4 years ago
This slander is not apropriate on my brad site. I herebye band you from further comenting on my brad site. Yes that is right I represent brab by saying goodbye to you. You are welcome brad. No one will mess with tou if I can help it.
theFATjessicaFAN 4 years ago
your a bit of a faggot aren't ya
88THEBUNNYMAN88 4 years ago
Okay, I was just testing if this asshole shit making singer fucking blocked me. Guess he is too much of a fucking asshole to have, what a fucker. Anyways, you can't deny that this song stinks more than melhar23 after he take cumshots all over himself. It's funny how he claims to say I have no life, yet fucking goes out and about reclessly talking bullshit about me.
Smoochy027 4 years ago
Oh my god,
Smoochy027 4 years ago
the singer is bad
L1sch3n 4 years ago
Hey guys my name is mike and i am a musician i am not great i have only been playing for about a year and a half but i do try. I figure if everyone that can leaves me some comments ratings or even video responces just to help me i would really benifit from it. Sorry to have to tell you this way but i really need the constructive critisim. I am 14 and hopefully by the time i am 18 i will have taken singing lessons (cause my voice is terrible) So thanks alot guys just click my name
fingerlickers 4 years ago
I dont like the vocals the instrument's good and Advice dont use the mark hoppus jazz bass i have used it in recordings and videos but i found thats it is his sound find a bass that is good for you and you could be some one some day................
plus14482 4 years ago
good effort.Your vocals need practice.Dont listen to the idiots they pobably have no life
dimitrithebest 4 years ago
i don't think you should say lets run away on the away part you should say somethin about what you and your girlfriend did together than say lets run away twice and add more oos/ you should listen to the scientist by coldplay that is a good song that i thinj your song could become like
5406e 4 years ago
sing higher and at the end of each line get higher same with run away get higher than lower but awesome lyric writing just work on how you sing it.tip:it would sound much prettier slower
5406e 4 years ago
eh ?
letimotei 4 years ago
Yeah three minutes apart, just long enough to have a listen and post a comment. so i guess you felt the need to just keep coming back for more then, maybe you can go take another beating from pops. and come back in another 3 minutes to please your ears some more.
bradadrion 4 years ago
Notice how the comments are fucking 3 minutes apart? You obviously failed math. It's okay though, keep spamming up people's videos. Maybe one day you will be more successful. Who know's, maybe you will eat jizz from costumers, like your father did.
Smoochy027 4 years ago
Go suck an elephant dick you gay piece of 3rd class goat shit
melhar23 4 years ago
good!this song like coldplay.
junpei0109 4 years ago
obviously you must like the song if you feel the need to waste your time posting commets for going on ten minutes now so please feel free to enjoy the music you imbred peice of shit.
bradadrion 4 years ago
don't listen to that Faggot smoochy027 he's a fucking piece of steaming goat shit...you're song sounds sick its pretty cool. Just work on you're vocals for a while
melhar23 4 years ago 4
Talk about shitty music. And your taste in music is almost as bad as your disgusting singing. Just stop it now, before you cause the rates of Deaf people to rise, you inhumane fucker.
Smoochy027 4 years ago
lol honestly you have no life all you're doing is making fun of someones song you jackass. He's way better then you'll ever be in you're whole shitty life. So please jump of a bridge and make everyone happy including you're unfortunate parents who were dumb enough to have you're worthless ass of a human being. FUCK YOU SMOOCHY
melhar23 4 years ago
I couldn't even fucking listen to the whole song, because I didn't want to die of fucking laughter. Oh my god, this is too fucking much. Good job, you cunty McFucker
Smoochy027 4 years ago
You suck more dick than Chris fucking Cocksucker. Seriously, this song is making my ears bleed, you fucking numbskull bitch.
Smoochy027 4 years ago
yo go fucking suck a dick you gay piece of shit. Why the fuck are you bringing the poor guy down like that you fucking bastard. I bet you can't do any better, mainly cuz you're probably an ugly piece of dog shit and wouldn't go to put you're face on camera. NOW GO KILL YOURSELF YOU FUCK FACE
melhar23 4 years ago
Hey everyone my name is Brad Adrion and this is my song, if you happen to come across it have a listen and tell me what you think. it will sound better through headphones and the ending oooo's are the best. Peace.
bradadrion 4 years ago