Wow, this is amazing, probably one of the best one-shots I've ever read. ;D
And, I just LOVEE that saying in the end "The clock isn't waiting for you." This is so inspirational. :D
ADVICE: When you're swimming in the OCEAN, try not to open your mouth UNDERWATER. It tastes disgusting, and, at a young age, trust me, I learned it the hard way. xD
I think that was very very cute :) I wish a boy would come to my window in the middle of the night and want to show me something and then take me to an isolated meadow with a lake. That would be amazing. :) <3
thats amazing! BEACH! lol i loved this all! it was AMAZINGG lol but i like the part with the life savers xD lol that was GENIUS! i laughed so hard at that part!
thats just adorable :) I am in love with Joe's charecter. my favorite line of the entire thing: "We've only got 86,400 scconds in a day, turn it all around or throw it all away." that was So cute. im in love with that saying :)
This was absolutely amazing, i love Jemi. & Kris Allen; omggg. KRIS ALLEN makes my WORLD!<3 your writing is getting even more amazing every day, Stasia. i loveee youuu. this was ahh. im speechless.
I really loved it!! I'm so glad that I subscribed otherwise I wouldn't of know how great of a writer that you are. :] I've been subscribed for a while, but I never really watch a lot of the videos in my sub box, but I saw it and decided to watch it. I'm really glad that I did! It's awesome.
omg its not even the fact that it was jemi (my alltime fave couple) that was AMAZING the end was so so so sweet and cute and i just love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! seriously!!!!!!!!!!!!
SOUTH CAROLINAAA! :] I'm sorry if I ever accidently say anything like that when it comes to the Carolinas. I kinda freak out when they're mentioned. Haha. NCSCFTW.
You are one amazinggg writer. I love your stories! They're so good! <3
I loved this! LIKE SO SO MUCH!
WorldOFJonasx 8 months ago
ocean, this one-shot was very moving stasia :)
elizabethhxstar 1 year ago
ocean,
it was really a moving one-shot, nicely done! xD
lovedrunkx33 1 year ago
ocean, this was adorable, Jemi is fascinating and BREATHTAKING!
<3
HayzJonasxoxo 2 years ago
I LOVE this story it is just sweet and true =)
J8L3 2 years ago
WOW....
speechless...lol
MissStoryteller13 2 years ago
Wonderful plot! Magnificent creativness! ocean :)
XOiheartmuffinsXO 2 years ago
how do you make your videos?
like on a website, or windows or summin?xx
JONASLOVERxXXXx 2 years ago
amazing.
incredible.
awesome.
I'm speechless :]
BIGESTnickjonasfanx 2 years ago
omg your such a good writer!
nileystorysftw 2 years ago
this is awesome! :)
cindyluvsdemselandjb 2 years ago
that was absolutely amazing!
i listened to the song as i read it .
It helped (:
You're a great writer!
Happy Turkey Day!
Ocean (:
ashleytisdale2468 2 years ago
what is the font for the text in the vid?
SelenaSweetiexx 2 years ago
@SelenaSweetiexx Calibri. Sorry for the late, reply, btw :)
stashhjonas 2 years ago
dude this is like WHOAA amazing!!
so true right now, like it really hits a soft spot. thanks for writing this : )
your writing just helped another random person, and not for the first time either : D
you have to make it on to the next round!
and you totally deserved to win the first one!!! CONGRATS CHICA! =D
oh and ocean ; )
dmdbx3 2 years ago
oh and before i forget, ocean. :P
aysii94 2 years ago
this was amazing.
i really loved the line at the end, so great job on that.
what else can i say? keep up the good work. :)
hoping to see more of these soon. you're a great writer.
aysii94 2 years ago
Amazing.
im speechless.
dina0nl 2 years ago
incredible.
liveontheedge16 2 years ago
Amazing Amazing Amazing!!!! I am speechless. :-)
Ocean! :-)
CosmicDreamer1 2 years ago
Aw I love it! So cute!!!
But, is it wrong of me to kinda hate Joe for burning down a bookstore, even if it was on accident? Those books didn't do anything to hurt him... :(
Awesome one-shot! And I LOVE LOVE LOVE Kris Allen and his new cd. All the songs are amazing in different ways.
Nelenatrailers 2 years ago
this is iNCREDiBLE!! =) seriously - awesome job! I LOVE KRiS ALLEN and this song =)
ocean!! xD
o0oCyrusViruso0o 2 years ago
AMAZING ! ♥
germandreamgirl11 2 years ago
VERY CUTE. Haha, I love this song btw!
o c e a n. :)
yourtypicalasiangirl 2 years ago
Theres no song...
JonasBrothersClubb 2 years ago
ocean:)
THat was just... WOW
amythisrs 2 years ago
Wow, this is amazing, probably one of the best one-shots I've ever read. ;D
And, I just LOVEE that saying in the end "The clock isn't waiting for you." This is so inspirational. :D
ADVICE: When you're swimming in the OCEAN, try not to open your mouth UNDERWATER. It tastes disgusting, and, at a young age, trust me, I learned it the hard way. xD
One. Of. The. Best. Things. I've. Ever. Read.
-xoxo, Tina. :D
tinadyroll 2 years ago
Amazing, as always. It was very, very cute and a TON of fun to read. :)
I can't wait to see what you write next! Post up soon!
And the ocean looks pretty at night. :D
bookworm1880 2 years ago
Love it.
x)
I enjoy the reading and how you manage to put it in sony vegas.
10000/10
ElissaTita8 2 years ago
amazing
OCEAN
mileycyrusrules5988 2 years ago
i loved and i loved jemi ur stories truly r ah-mazing
xImaHotMess 2 years ago
:) Ocean
xMarieHedenx 2 years ago
Aw, cute :)
Ocean:)
ladiicrazii234 2 years ago
AMAZING ((:
Happy it was Jemi <3 xx
UR ONE AMAZING WRITER xxxxxx
Jesssandxx 2 years ago
have I ever mentioned that you're an AMAZING writer ? this one-shot was amazing, you defenitley deserve to go to the next round :)
"ocean" ;D
cristy922 2 years ago
that was amazing :D
ocean :D
x
XoXKalesXoX 2 years ago
OCEAN!
wow. you're an amazing writer. :D
ezzan38 2 years ago
beautiful! :)
i loved it :)
laurenehhx 2 years ago
I think that was very very cute :) I wish a boy would come to my window in the middle of the night and want to show me something and then take me to an isolated meadow with a lake. That would be amazing. :) <3
WITHYouiminLOVE 2 years ago
LOVED IT(:
nickjonasforever9876 2 years ago
lol. My friend Taylor pulled his lifesaver out in English a few weeks ago. She confiscated it. xD
Chiwowwow2 2 years ago
thats amazing! BEACH! lol i loved this all! it was AMAZINGG lol but i like the part with the life savers xD lol that was GENIUS! i laughed so hard at that part!
Deniselvr1 2 years ago
that was amazing:]!
round 3!!
OMGJonasBros15 2 years ago
this was amazing!
You are an amazing writer!
Oceans are beautiful!
elsie411 2 years ago
I loved this. You are soo, gonna make it the next round. I know it.
-Oceans-
Magnificent408 2 years ago
Oh my god, I think i love Jemi more because of this, It was AMAZING!!
The ocean is very pretty.
xoxoflipflop12 2 years ago
I love how you act so surprised when someone tells you you're an amazing writer. ;]
imadethisvideo123 2 years ago
Amazing! [but you knew that already ;)]
my favorite animal lives in the ocean ;)
Xox0NelenaLove0xoX 2 years ago
omg!
amazing!!!
dancencheerleading 2 years ago
im not a dork but im pretty sure its lightsabers
grandpasgirl18 2 years ago
Lightsabers? Oops, lol.
stashhjonassx3 2 years ago
thats just adorable :) I am in love with Joe's charecter. my favorite line of the entire thing: "We've only got 86,400 scconds in a day, turn it all around or throw it all away." that was So cute. im in love with that saying :)
fallen4jobros 2 years ago
oceans rule
bubblebear321 2 years ago
i ... loved ... this ... so much!
i think this is your best one-shot of all of them you did. It made me smile, a big smile.
I don't even know what else to say, this was just, amazing.
your making it to the next round, you just, have too, this was amazing!
worldofchancesxx 2 years ago
oh, and hm, Joe's eyes are like a ocean. Big, and you can get lost in them?
that didn't make sense. haha.
worldofchancesxx 2 years ago
I seriously think you should win this!=)
you have an amazing writing talent!
if you ever publish a book i seriously would buy it!
Oceans are pretty cool =)
demiNselena346 2 years ago
This is really cool
Comment back please ?
GoGreen156 2 years ago
Oh my god, I think i love Jemi more because of this, It was AMAZING!!
The ocean is very pretty.
jonasandjonas 2 years ago
you are an amazing writer./
carkeez11 2 years ago
i really hope u win =) u deserve it!
oceans are amazingly beautiful! just like ur stories...
haha sry that was kinda cheesy.
xoJemiNelena 2 years ago
AWW! LOVE IT!
XxinnocentRAWRxX 2 years ago
OMFG! ((((:
This was absolutely amazing, i love Jemi. & Kris Allen; omggg. KRIS ALLEN makes my WORLD!<3 your writing is getting even more amazing every day, Stasia. i loveee youuu. this was ahh. im speechless.
EllieNashSeanCameron 2 years ago
aww that was really great :)
I heard from a lot of people that you're an amazing writer, so I decided to check you out and I'm so very glad i did :)
-cough- ocean -cough- ;)
inlovexforxlife 2 years ago
that was beautiful!!!!
robomex55555 2 years ago
It was so ucte
It just makes me want to cry an "ocean" lol
GabyStarDarling 2 years ago
i loved that story. the message at the end was great. you're writing is so amazing. you are so descriptive and heartfelt.
lakergirl101 2 years ago
Congrats for making it into round 2! :D
I really loved it!! I'm so glad that I subscribed otherwise I wouldn't of know how great of a writer that you are. :] I've been subscribed for a while, but I never really watch a lot of the videos in my sub box, but I saw it and decided to watch it. I'm really glad that I did! It's awesome.
Pstttt.....I think oceans are pretty.
TrueLoveForevaa 2 years ago
And haha, Angelina Jolie looks just like my mom in that picture. XD No joke...
TrueLoveForevaa 2 years ago
OCEAN! :]
Wow, I absoutley ADORE this!! (:
My gosh, your such an amazing writer. And I bet you get that alot! Joe is so cute in this story (: <3 Jemi foreverr .!
xNerdyxJonasx 2 years ago
This is amazing.
I really hope you win.
Did you see oceanUP's tweet about Nick&Selena?
NazForReal 2 years ago
YES! I think it's possible he wrote it after they broke up xD
stashhjonas 2 years ago
Yup.
What I didn't like it's that right after, oceanUP twisted everything & kind of dissed Selena.
I like how people think we're taking a side on Nick's relationship with CERTAIN people. We assure you, this is all skepticism not FACT.
I believe that's dissing her.
NazForReal 2 years ago
Ahh. What happened?!
AllYouNeedIsLove023 2 years ago
First oceanUP tweeted ""But I Wont Apologize for #WhoIAm ..." Selena's song fits perfectly :D"
Then, "Selena & The Scene. Nick Jonas & The Administration. I Wont Apologize. Who I am. Puzzle Pieces. Hmm... Ponder Ponder."
& then, "I like how people think we're taking a side on Nick's relationship with CERTAIN people. We assure you, this is all skepticism not FACT."
NazForReal 2 years ago
Mmm.
Thank you (:
AllYouNeedIsLove023 2 years ago
No problem. :)
NazForReal 2 years ago
Congrats!
You deserved it!
Your stories and writing is truley amazing :)
fanfordisney 2 years ago
PS: I don't like you.
You're always making me jealous of your writing.
NazForReal 2 years ago
omg its not even the fact that it was jemi (my alltime fave couple) that was AMAZING the end was so so so sweet and cute and i just love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! seriously!!!!!!!!!!!!
avisinah 2 years ago
ahh amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! just plain outstanding! lol i loved it i wish you and other who are in the round Luck XDDD i love it =)
maddylovesthejobros 2 years ago
AHH! love it! <333
& ocean. :)
Jonasislyfx3 2 years ago
I LOVED IT!
You are truly brilliant& I hope you go to the next round, congratulations on your win!
brooklynelle22 2 years ago
That was absolutley amazing......
thats all i hav 2 say
JoeJonasLuver925 2 years ago
I loved it!
It was soo nice and cute!
I loved when Demi said, "Every second counts on the clock that's tickin."
This is amazing.
You're a GIFTED writer. You have talent.
DeeLiteM 2 years ago
& this is probably why you won round 1, haha. It was really good, Stasia! Good luck :D
mzzjudylee 2 years ago
Wow.
Amazing.
JoieGurl3 2 years ago
SOUTH CAROLINAAA! :] I'm sorry if I ever accidently say anything like that when it comes to the Carolinas. I kinda freak out when they're mentioned. Haha. NCSCFTW.
You are one amazinggg writer. I love your stories! They're so good! <3
xxJBxxLuverxx 2 years ago
That was amazing!! I loved the quote at the end! :)
SELENAFAN345 2 years ago
LLLOOOVVVEEE this SSSTTTOOORRRYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are soooooooooooo awesome and sssssuuuuuuuuuccchhhhh a freakin' awesome writer!!! LOL :]
Love Jemi! :D
NelenaDevidJemi 2 years ago
I LOVE IT!
ITS SO AWESOME!
UR AMAZING!
can u please answer am essage i sent you? u can answer me here if u want, i dont mindd.
:)
abcsoo 2 years ago
amazing Stasia :D
nishitaa1 2 years ago
MAN! you are so talented!
chocoholicgirls46 2 years ago