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  • I loved this! LIKE SO SO MUCH!

  • ocean, this one-shot was very moving stasia :)

  • ocean,

    it was really a moving one-shot, nicely done! xD

  • ocean, this was adorable, Jemi is fascinating and BREATHTAKING!

    <3

  • I LOVE this story it is just sweet and true =)

  • WOW....

    speechless...lol

  • Wonderful plot! Magnificent creativness! ocean :)

  • how do you make your videos?

    like on a website, or windows or summin?xx

  • amazing.

    incredible.

    awesome.

    I'm speechless :]

  • omg your such a good writer!

  • this is awesome! :)

  • that was absolutely amazing!

    i listened to the song as i read it .

    It helped (:

    You're a great writer!

    Happy Turkey Day!

    Ocean (:

  • what is the font for the text in the vid?

  • @SelenaSweetiexx Calibri. Sorry for the late, reply, btw :)

  • dude this is like WHOAA amazing!!

    so true right now, like it really hits a soft spot. thanks for writing this : )

    your writing just helped another random person, and not for the first time either : D

    you have to make it on to the next round!

    and you totally deserved to win the first one!!! CONGRATS CHICA! =D

    oh and ocean ; )

  • oh and before i forget, ocean. :P

  • this was amazing.

    i really loved the line at the end, so great job on that.

    what else can i say? keep up the good work. :)

    hoping to see more of these soon. you're a great writer.

  • Amazing.

    im speechless.

  • incredible.

  • Amazing Amazing Amazing!!!! I am speechless. :-)

    Ocean! :-)

  • Aw I love it! So cute!!!

    But, is it wrong of me to kinda hate Joe for burning down a bookstore, even if it was on accident? Those books didn't do anything to hurt him... :(

    Awesome one-shot! And I LOVE LOVE LOVE Kris Allen and his new cd. All the songs are amazing in different ways.

  • this is iNCREDiBLE!! =) seriously - awesome job! I LOVE KRiS ALLEN and this song =)

    ocean!! xD

  • AMAZING ! ♥

  • VERY CUTE. Haha, I love this song btw!

    o c e a n. :)

  • Theres no song...

  • ocean:)

    THat was just... WOW

  • Wow, this is amazing, probably one of the best one-shots I've ever read. ;D

    And, I just LOVEE that saying in the end "The clock isn't waiting for you." This is so inspirational. :D

    ADVICE: When you're swimming in the OCEAN, try not to open your mouth UNDERWATER. It tastes disgusting, and, at a young age, trust me, I learned it the hard way. xD

    One. Of. The. Best. Things. I've. Ever. Read.

    -xoxo, Tina. :D

  • Amazing, as always. It was very, very cute and a TON of fun to read. :)

    I can't wait to see what you write next! Post up soon!

    And the ocean looks pretty at night. :D

  • Love it.

    x)

    I enjoy the reading and how you manage to put it in sony vegas.

    10000/10

  • amazing

    OCEAN

  • i loved and i loved jemi ur stories truly r ah-mazing

  • :) Ocean

  • Aw, cute :)

    Ocean:)

  • AMAZING ((:

    Happy it was Jemi <3 xx

    UR ONE AMAZING WRITER xxxxxx

  • have I ever mentioned that you're an AMAZING writer ? this one-shot was amazing, you defenitley deserve to go to the next round :)

    "ocean" ;D

  • that was amazing :D

    ocean :D

    x

  • OCEAN!

    wow. you're an amazing writer. :D

  • beautiful! :)

    i loved it :)

  • I think that was very very cute :) I wish a boy would come to my window in the middle of the night and want to show me something and then take me to an isolated meadow with a lake. That would be amazing. :) <3

  • LOVED IT(:

  • lol. My friend Taylor pulled his lifesaver out in English a few weeks ago. She confiscated it. xD

  • thats amazing! BEACH! lol i loved this all! it was AMAZINGG lol but i like the part  with the life savers xD lol that was GENIUS! i laughed so hard at that part!

  • that was amazing:]!

    round 3!!

  • this was amazing!

    You are an amazing writer!

    Oceans are beautiful!

  • I loved this. You are soo, gonna make it the next round. I know it.

    -Oceans-

  • Oh my god, I think i love Jemi more because of this, It was AMAZING!!

    The ocean is very pretty.

  • I love how you act so surprised when someone tells you you're an amazing writer. ;]

  • Amazing! [but you knew that already ;)]

    my favorite animal lives in the ocean ;)

  • omg!

    amazing!!!

  • im not a dork but im pretty sure its lightsabers

  • Lightsabers? Oops, lol.

  • thats just adorable :) I am in love with Joe's charecter. my favorite line of the entire thing: "We've only got 86,400 scconds in a day, turn it all around or throw it all away." that was So cute. im in love with that saying :)

  • oceans rule

  • i ... loved ... this ... so much!

    i think this is your best one-shot of all of them you did. It made me smile, a big smile.

    I don't even know what else to say, this was just, amazing.

    your making it to the next round, you just, have too, this was amazing!

  • oh, and hm, Joe's eyes are like a ocean. Big, and you can get lost in them?

    that didn't make sense. haha.

  • I seriously think you should win this!=)

    you have an amazing writing talent!

    if you ever publish a book i seriously would buy it!

    Oceans are pretty cool =)

  • This is really cool

    Comment back please ?

  • Oh my god, I think i love Jemi more because of this, It was AMAZING!!

    The ocean is very pretty.

  • you are an amazing writer./

  • i really hope u win =) u deserve it!

    oceans are amazingly beautiful! just like ur stories...

    haha sry that was kinda cheesy.

  • AWW! LOVE IT!

  • OMFG! ((((:

    This was absolutely amazing, i love Jemi. & Kris Allen; omggg. KRIS ALLEN makes my WORLD!<3 your writing is getting even more amazing every day, Stasia. i loveee youuu. this was ahh. im speechless.

  • aww that was really great :)

    I heard from a lot of people that you're an amazing writer, so I decided to check you out and I'm so very glad i did :)

    -cough- ocean -cough- ;)

  • that was beautiful!!!!

  • It was so ucte

    It just makes me want to cry an "ocean" lol

  • i loved that story. the message at the end was great. you're writing is so amazing. you are so descriptive and heartfelt.

  • Congrats for making it into round 2! :D

    I really loved it!! I'm so glad that I subscribed otherwise I wouldn't of know how great of a writer that you are. :] I've been subscribed for a while, but I never really watch a lot of the videos in my sub box, but I saw it and decided to watch it. I'm really glad that I did! It's awesome.

    Pstttt.....I think oceans are pretty.

  • And haha, Angelina Jolie looks just like my mom in that picture. XD No joke...

  • OCEAN! :]

    Wow, I absoutley ADORE this!! (:

    My gosh, your such an amazing writer. And I bet you get that alot! Joe is so cute in this story (: <3 Jemi foreverr .!

  • This is amazing.

    I really hope you win.

    Did you see oceanUP's tweet about Nick&Selena?

  • YES! I think it's possible he wrote it after they broke up xD

  • Yup.

    What I didn't like it's that right after, oceanUP twisted everything & kind of dissed Selena.

    I like how people think we're taking a side on Nick's relationship with CERTAIN people. We assure you, this is all skepticism not FACT.

    I believe that's dissing her.

  • Ahh. What happened?!

  • First oceanUP tweeted ""But I Wont Apologize for #WhoIAm ..." Selena's song fits perfectly :D"

    Then, "Selena & The Scene. Nick Jonas & The Administration. I Wont Apologize. Who I am. Puzzle Pieces. Hmm... Ponder Ponder."

    & then, "I like how people think we're taking a side on Nick's relationship with CERTAIN people. We assure you, this is all skepticism not FACT."

  • Mmm.

    Thank you (:

  • No problem. :)

  • Congrats!

    You deserved it!

    Your stories and writing is truley amazing :)

  • PS: I don't like you.

    You're always making me jealous of your writing.

  • omg its not even the fact that it was jemi (my alltime fave couple) that was AMAZING the end was so so so sweet and cute and i just love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! seriously!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • ahh amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! just plain outstanding! lol i loved it i wish you and other who are in the round Luck XDDD i love it =)

  • AHH! love it! <333

    & ocean. :)

  • I LOVED IT!

    You are truly brilliant& I hope you go to the next round, congratulations on your win!

  • That was absolutley amazing......

    thats all i hav 2 say

  • I loved it!

    It was soo nice and cute!

    I loved when Demi said, "Every second counts on the clock that's tickin."

    This is amazing.

    You're a GIFTED writer. You have talent.

  • & this is probably why you won round 1, haha. It was really good, Stasia! Good luck :D

  • Wow.

    Amazing.

  • SOUTH CAROLINAAA! :] I'm sorry if I ever accidently say anything like that when it comes to the Carolinas. I kinda freak out when they're mentioned. Haha. NCSCFTW.

    You are one amazinggg writer. I love your stories! They're so good! <3

  • That was amazing!! I loved the quote at the end! :)

  • LLLOOOVVVEEE this SSSTTTOOORRRYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!

    You are soooooooooooo awesome and sssssuuuuuuuuuccchhhhh a freakin' awesome writer!!! LOL :]

    Love Jemi! :D

  • I LOVE IT!

    ITS SO AWESOME!

    UR AMAZING!

    can u please answer am essage i sent you? u can answer me here if u want, i dont mindd.

    :)

  • amazing Stasia :D

  • MAN! you are so talented!

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