all societies are created from ideas. it is the foundational ideas enmeshed in our corporate concrete culture that turns what is beautiful and whole into fractured and disposable.
The Church Of The Unattainable Truth And How To Make Your Pancakes Even More Delicious Than They Already Are... And Then Some - I kno it's a bit long but work with me here and think of the sales pitch...
DOPENESS! Sheer fucking DOPENESS! I loved the rock and roll beat in the background, it really gave the poem that eerie, violent..PUSH. The message so profound.
"etched respect from the ruthless brutality they shed, another teenager whilst the law enforces fled"
This fits in nicely with Terminator movie's opening. haha~ I could totally see this being a part of it, but it's completely original all the same. How do you do that? haha~ good job.
I reckon its simply a lack of fear for trying new styles and presentations, knowing the audience is vital and merging the two instincts means the playground is wide open!
I love to play about with styles, thats what I have been discovering about poetry is its ever infinite ways it can be presented and the such like! Thank you!
dude how did you do that with your voice ??!
Awesome !
waagemensch 2 years ago
A lovely piece of technology called "GoldWave"
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Dark Message...Hard Hitting
Why Cant We Just Get Along
Broatch6 2 years ago
I guess it's the instinctive picking order some unfortunate and backward people cannot seem to escape from.
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Great ending!
XaveJamesGrey 2 years ago
Thanks :o)
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
so I favorited <3 this One...
alchemistra 2 years ago
Thank you so much!!! :o)
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
uh huh, brilliant, like a Baudelaire, dark rain down crack alley, insipid, sordid, seeping and weeping morbid moisture...
alchemistra 2 years ago
all societies are created from ideas. it is the foundational ideas enmeshed in our corporate concrete culture that turns what is beautiful and whole into fractured and disposable.
13thDimension 2 years ago
Thats very true! Thanks!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Love the soundtrack and your playing in and out of it. Hard truths and nasty realities... Indeed. Do we choose our mean streets?
MrDaMan 2 years ago
To some degree we do, but we dont get to choose the criminal! Thanks!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
ohh yeah..i ove the feel to this...excellent words & music!! Woooooo!! =)..
thanks for the response
elviradark6 2 years ago
And thank you for your kind words too. It is always a pleasure for you to view my work, always!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Right - now i'm mystified... thanks...
badlydressedpoet 2 years ago
The Church Of The Unattainable Truth And How To Make Your Pancakes Even More Delicious Than They Already Are... And Then Some - I kno it's a bit long but work with me here and think of the sales pitch...
badlydressedpoet 2 years ago
Russian singer Emily A. Saaen once said I can be handed shit and return it back as candy.
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Awesome song.
couchpotatotheatre 2 years ago
Thank you!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Thank you very much! :)
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
That's an awesome and great video give it a 5/5!!!!
Joshparnell 2 years ago
Love the rhythm, hate the violence. What can we do about that?
Idlinfarm 2 years ago
Thanks. Without meaning to sound smart, stay away from it, as best you can!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Groovy ....Vision Ghost....
onegroovycharmer 2 years ago
Thank you :o)
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Why aren't you on MTV? Or Kerrang? Or Scuzz? You need to start your own Church...
badlydressedpoet 2 years ago
hahaha, hell yea, we've had the Holy Ghost now time for the church of the VisionGhost. Cool! :)
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Great performance - the whole piece works well. My favourite of yours I think.
dashpoet 2 years ago
Cool, thank you very much! :)
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
How am I going to explain to my boss how my head ended up rammed through my desk?
rozeboosje 2 years ago
Just play him this and see whats happens, could be interesting! :)
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Ok. Now his desk is gone too. But at least he understands now.
rozeboosje 2 years ago
U gotta dig these team buidling exercises hehe!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Damn fine work I love it *****stars; )
Kabuki0009 2 years ago
Thank you Kabuki :)
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
DOPENESS! Sheer fucking DOPENESS! I loved the rock and roll beat in the background, it really gave the poem that eerie, violent..PUSH. The message so profound.
"etched respect from the ruthless brutality they shed, another teenager whilst the law enforces fled"
I FUCKING DUG THIS PIECE!
MzSkribble 2 years ago
Wow! Thank you so much!! :o)
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
This fits in nicely with Terminator movie's opening. haha~ I could totally see this being a part of it, but it's completely original all the same. How do you do that? haha~ good job.
FableDoe 2 years ago
I reckon its simply a lack of fear for trying new styles and presentations, knowing the audience is vital and merging the two instincts means the playground is wide open!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Love the Rodney King quote! Nice jams by the way-- you do all that?
allgoraro 2 years ago
I could if I had the gear, but at the moment while I wait for the cash I use samples and bits & pieces I locate on the internet!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Good stuff, bro!
allgoraro 2 years ago
Thank you!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Your work has many facets, mate. Fascinating!
gronkar66 2 years ago
I love to play about with styles, thats what I have been discovering about poetry is its ever infinite ways it can be presented and the such like! Thank you!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
RAW!
TaxTeaParty 2 years ago
:o)
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
This was moving, loved the voice and the flow of the words....i bow..
MessiahChaos 2 years ago
Wow! Thank you so much MC :o)
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago