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  • YOU NEED NUTS?!?!?

  • Did you do your undergrad? Is english your first language? Why are there soooo many Typo's in this?... and after finding out, there are so many... how come it's still up? Take it down and re do it don't snivel to us because we can't watch bad spelling.

  • horrible use of typography

  • .....hey, did you know there's typos in this? :D

  • GOD DAM! isnt bad because im a satanist

    GO SATAN GO!!!

  • lol, gaudy monstrosity

  • You have good ideas with the play of words, but the words are too small.

  • Relatively weak. I just started checking out some of these kinetic typography clips and this is by far the weakest one I've seen. The concept is cool, but this looks like a quick, amateur attempt to copy some kicka** stuff that is out there.

  • dude. it's a year old, before motion typography really even became 1/2 as big as it is now.

    this is my new account.

  • I also made a type vid for a Film & TV Design class, it's on my channel. Feedback is very much appreciated! I like the red color in this one, the syncing is very spot-on.

  • very nice :) i even think the typos fit with the context...the movie...

  • PWNED!!!!

  • ive seen better

  • Poorly done; there are few spelling errors.

  • good stuff mate, good style to it.

    have a look at my videos, i think you'll like it cause its typographical too.

  • setsailproductions check us out !!!!!!!!!

  • nice

  • Eh. So-so. But I can't do things like this, so I guess I don't have room to complain.

  • Great work buddy. Enjoyed it immensely.

  • how do you dso this? is there a special program or something?

  • magic

  • oh yea of course..... its always magic lol. seriously though is it like iMovie or something?

  • and MSpaint

  • lol

  • Its adboe after effects, this guys just a faggot, i bet hes gonna die because he tells you.

  • haha okay thanks :) isnt that like a 150$ program? and yes hes deffffinataly gonna die cause of that lol :P

  • You mean that guy used abobe AE?

    It looked more like Flash to me.

  • That was amazing.... I always consider these projects to be something that only certain people can do well. you're one of them. =) Thanks so much for sharing

  • check reply for new one i made

  • it looks fine; its like that laid backk kinda feel in it

  • yeh that wasn't good. i have seen better. no excuses. The audio and text do not match and it lacks emotion unlike all the other pieces i have seen.

    I read your description and i don't care. You rushed through it? That's your fault. You threw it up on youtube! If you didn't think it was good why did you put it up. For praise or something?

    Don't post something unless you are comfortable with the backlash.

  • i personally love this video. i like the spelling error's it goes with the way reuben talks. it looks better to me. plus i love this movie, so that makes this video even better.

  • I love this movie

  • Stupid American schools. How can they censor work that is to be handed in to, I assume, some sort of Arts/Design/Communication?

    Censorship is primitive. Tell your school that.

    Also, I didn't much like this video. The font choice was terrible (which is like doing a watercolour painting when all you've got are oil paints), you should improve the pacing, fix all the errors

  • oh sorry about the American schools being so fascist because they don't want foul language being thrown all over the place towards students who (including me) don't want to hear it. because ya know... i can't tell you how many great things have come out of Argentine schools...

  • Some of the world's best modern engineers have come from Argentina. Why do you think that EVERY TIME when they're sent to the US to see what your "Computer Science" courses are like, the teachers are all amazed at how advanced they are.

    And, no, American schools are not fascist. Simply more authoritarian than they should be. Blame your right-wing semi-authoritarian President for that. And grow up, foul language is present everywhere. Censorship is neanderthalic.

  • SOME OF THE WORLD'S BEST MODERN ENGINEERS! OMG!

    You're calling President Bush Right-Wing?! wow. if he was right wing he wouldn't have approved of the rediggulous bailout in order to keep the rest of the world's economy somewhat afloat.

    Foul language shows less intelligence.

  • What is it with america.. no faul language and on sex/even exposed bodyparts.. but showing murders having guns and having entertainers like 50cent and the rest of the crackeheads.

  • our media is just as liberal as the rest.

    and i hate celebrities with a passion.

  • When doing this kind of video.. do you create the typography in illustrator and then just do camera and animation timing in ae?

  • wow what kind of pansy school do you go to if you cant even say god damn. what a load of bullshit

  • It's a relly good effort - most people don't realise the kind of effort you put in for that - it was more effective than others I've seen - 5*

  • my favorite part was "ahhh"

  • Designers are notorious typo makers. When you are looking at each letter form and relationship we tend to forget about the spelling. That's what proofers are for!

  • And you turned this in? Typos and all?

    Seriously, what kind of grade did you receive? If you were in my design classes, you'd have failed the project.

  • You go to a shit school if they wouldn't even allow you to show 'god damn'.

    And you're a pussy for changing it.

  • and your an asshole for caring.

  • ocean's 11 rules!

  • original was sooo much better. you should see the original

  • saw it, bored me to tears, turned it off and watched the new one twice.

    original > remake elitist bull crap pisses me off

  • gaudy* monstrosity.

  • hm. not bad, but the wrong "yours" really threw me off so i couldn't enjoy it much.

  • how do you make typography i've tried FOREVER please help me :(

  • The easiest way is using a combination of adobe illustrator and premier (part of the CS3 suite).

  • in what program you made it?

  • The V for Vendetta one is far better.

  • Well, the V for Vendetta typography is quoting something far cooler. I think the best I've seen is one of the Pulp Fiction ones.

  • hey youve splt EVERYTHING wrong, dumb ass. hows that for complaining about typo's? i say this even though you didnt.

  • I'm less concerned about the typos and more concerned about what appears to be stretched and compressed type. But you were young and carefree and unaware! :)

  • what's the song called in the background?

  • Love seeing type brought to life like this.

  • at 0:41, "your" should be "you're"

  • you know what... annotations can be fun sometimes... but not when you use them to spam people

  • coolbeans man... i liked it

  • Wow, that was awesome.

    Great job!

  • aaaaaaaah i love it!! love it love it!!!

    this is awesome

  • Arial?

    Please.

  • haha. i love you. i know i know.. disgusting.

    my pc didn't have helvetica back then. or else i woulda used that. same with that ima robot video i made. arial again :P

  • I have to do a similair project at school atm, and they make us do a font study. Find a font, download new ones even, that fits the movie. You should've done that too. Come on, you're animating fonts, the font itself is just as, maybe even more important then the spelling ;)

  • Man that spelling is just horr- JUST KIDDING! :D

  • nice

  • with what program you can do that?

  • read the about.

  • Brok! I wanna learn to do this, kinda.

    Rae

  • someone is n00b. checking out my vid in video response is not spam :P i made this video.

  • and that other one is mine too. (different name)

  • Could somebody please provide a tutorial etc on how to do this?

    Thanks.

  • kitchy

  • Could be better, but not bad at all. I'm a graphic design major and I really liked it. Great job!

  • Oh, and you don't take criticism well. As an artist the worst trait you can have is to react hostilely to criticism. I'd work on that...

  • It's "Gaudy Monstrosity"

  • There were a few typos in it.. Just kidding.

    Great Job.

  • This is great!

    Annoy the idiots who don't have to time to actually read the description and see that it was clearly done on purpose!

    Great Job and 100 Stars!

  • It was really good, I didnt mind the errors in spelling and that.. It was a lot of fun anyway.

  • love it ;)

  • most clips of that kind are way better.

  • Since you realize your spelling and grammar errors and aren't just a retard, this gets 5 stars! Sucks you had to change "god damn" just because it was to be showcased at school. He clearly says it so I don't see how seeing the word is any worse.

  • yesh! you get +20000 points!

  • don't gread i can kiss their

  • sorry didn't read the description. DONT KILL ME

  • lol

  • you put dog damn instead of god damn.

  • that was edited on purpose because I was showcasing it at school.

  • "your" needs to be changed to "you're" in some cases.

    And it's "Gawdy Monstrosity".

    Otherwise, this is cool.

  • Really cool, but the grammar and spelling were atrocious.

  • OK THANK YOU FOR BEING THE MILLIONTH PERSON TO TELL ME THAT!

    "yea. when i made this i didn't really take my time like i should have. i focused more on getting it done as fast as i could."

  • well you should have maybe proof read it before embarking on a journey that is SOLELY words. you look foolish making a video using ONLY words and typography that contain a shit load of errors and typos.

  • is "god damn" considered a curse word?

  • yes.

  • great!

  • what program do you use to create this typography? :)

  • I dunno, just look at the description.

    Do you really give up that fast?

  • flash and Indesign

  • i agree with all the others: good, but watch the typos. it IS typography.

  • yea. when i made this i didn't really take my time like i should have. i focused more on getting it done as fast as i could.

  • i think its "Gaudy" not "Gaudium"

  • tasty..

  • That's great!

  • Would be better if you got the spelling right.

  • I found it better then a couple of others. 4 Stars.

  • well i think its pretty good.

  • even it's not a typo, I like it

  • yeah...this isn't very good typography...

    great movie choice though : )

  • Not very good typography...

  • ...

  • your typography sucks. as a Graphic Designer I would have to tell you to PLEASE in god's name take this thing down and take some type classes. Just because you can put a word here and there does not mean YOU are a TYPOGRAPHER or a GRAPHICS DESIGNER.

    THIS IS NOT TYPOGRAPHY. THIS SPITS ON TYPOGRAPHY.

  • could you please show me some of the crap you have done?

  • I have little experience with after effects but I've done motion graphics for a number of large clients. I know good from poor typographic choices. The balance is off compositionally in most of your keyframes and pacing isn't that great. Pay attention to your letterforms!

  • well then let us see some of your shit and get fuckin inspired from it. you talk as if you're so great.

    it would've been more respectable if you at least commented constructive criticism to what this guy posted here. now show us your shit mutha fucker.

  • What was the song playing in the background?

  • the dialogue was on the soundtrack. so idk. the whole segment was just a track.

  • David Holmes - Ruben's Inn

  • What font is used?

  • i know longer know because i don't have the project file anymore. but i think it's arial.

  • did u find a huge difference between working with motion type in after effects and flash?? if so how is it different??

  • the difference is humungous. after effects in a way is much like flash though. using keypoints and such. but much more advanced and made for video. unlike flash which is made purely for the internet.

  • I wish it could be longer.

  • Do you know of any tutorials for motion text like this?

  • dnt listen to the otha bad comments...

    i liked it!

    lol

    =]]

  • thank you.

    i just don't get how it has the same rating as something as cruddy as that freaking "singin' in the rain typography" to your right...

  • Get off your freakin' imaginary pedestal that you've placed yourself upon, study some typography, and I mean REALLY study, and then learn how to take criticism. Sheesh, you have no clue who's looking at this on youtube. You're sooner to spout off to an internationally recognized designer and give them a childish attitude than you are to say "Thanks for your advice." No design firm looks to hire an ungrateful smartass, and you better believe they'll remember a smartass.

  • but you will remember me... haha.

  • he prob already forgot u... and this vid xD

  • *point taken.

     lolz.

  • thank you!

  • Same animations over and over, the angular "camera movement" sucked. And sorry, but such a thin font does nothing to represent the scene of the movie. Try again.

  • grammatical errors were very distracting. a very fine and ambitious project, though. But what's wonderful about typography is that there are so many options. You were defending above and saying you were copying the movie, but then later said you didn't care if the font didn't match the movie. Make up your mind! Go ahead and play with some fonts next time. It can be so much fun.

  • whats the font? im looking all over for it. oceans 11 is like my favorite movie.

  • i think it's just a plain font. i don't have the project file anymore but it could just be arial or something.

  • Sorry about my straight comments but

    i think the typography placings is not there yet

    and its not creative enough to bring out the words

    well

    nice try though

    "D

  • doode IT'S FREAKING DONE TO RESEMBLE THE MOVIE'S STYLE!!! ugh.

  • I think the placing is pretty interesting. but needs more work like MrChoowei said. it'll get there. but your attitude in taking criticism and comments won't get you there.

  • Loves it!!!! Brilliant use of typography!

  • People behind you, and there's people ahead of you. So, why boast of what you did today when it ain't going to be remembered tomorrow, cause someone, somewhere, with no "SCHOOLING" will come round corner and do better, and with...no squishing.

    PS>> use different fonts. And that's from no schooling whatsoever.

  • just bc ur in highschool and know one u know is as good, doesnt mean ur good.

    this is horrible. the font isnt even the same as the movies. and so many parts dont line up well. and u squished! gaahh

  • so what if the font isn't the same as the movies!? zomg! holy crap!

    ure a bum..

  • ahhhh you squished precise! you squished precise! Why? WHy subject those perfectly fine letters to such distortion? The squishing doesn't even visually correspond with the definition of the word. It feels like you just threw that in there because you couldn't think of a better effect. Overall good job but next time make sure your effects match the words they are attached to

  • rofl.

    ya it does.

    precise as in precision small accurate.

  • I'll give you that but squishing? that is not precise. shrink the font, but don't squish it.

  • ARGH!

  • Wow, i liked it =D

  • very well done. i enjoyed it thoroughly. haha.

    would suggest for your next movie, try some different fonts. no more than 4 as a rule. 3, but 4 should be ok for this type of thing.

    nicely done. looking forward for more.

  • I too was distracted by the errors: "gawdy," "your," "were," "Benidict"..You can tell your critics to get a life, but when you're the one making multiple basic English mistakes in a 1-minute piece, it's you that looks uneducated. Rather than insult the person, you should probably thank them for pointing out the errors, in the hope that in the future, you won't make them again. Sheesh. YOU make mistakes, someone points them out, and you insult them? How arrogant is that?

  • ok ok.

    i know i'm prideful about my work. and it's because im in high school and no else i know can come close to me. so its like my ego.

  • I understand. Don't take it personal: I thought it was very good and I could never level your work. See those comments as progression points for future typography projects :)

  • That cockiness will definitely come back to bite you in the ass.

    Don't say 'no one can touch you' because that's not even going to make you push yourself to do your best if you think you're better than everyone else. You have to think that there's always people that are better than you so you can try harder to learn more, and that's the only way you'll become better.

  • Thats too cocky then. You may be in high school but I'm a freshmen and I've been doing this since I was 12. But unlike you I don't have the idea that I am going to be the greatest.

  • i loved this, it was brilliant, i dont know why its only got 3 stars rating

    the typeface suits oceans eleven, the angles, the accenting and what really made it cool was the funky semi-random spacing. it all suited oceans elevens style very well

  • nice done, i like it :D 5/5

  • why censuring? Jesus, what a crappy video.

  • poop in your mouth, it was for a class project.

  • What program did you use?

  • after effects.

  • "and you're going to need a crew as nuts as you are"

    See, that's what he said. "You're" is a contraction of "you" and "are". This is neat, but if you're gonna do this sort of thing, you ought to try not to conflate "your" and "you're" like, three times in one video.

  • holy crap get a life.

  • You don't see the hilarity in a video based on typography that has incorrect spelling? Honestly, the entire thing is based on words, you could at least get them right.

  • again cool.

  • Myriad? You probably could have used a more interesting typeface than myriad (or whatever this is.)

    Also, be sure to pay attention to the space between letters. They were often crowded.

    It's not a bad try though. I hope this helps :)

  • that's the kind of look i was going for. thanks though. helps me think of what OTHER people look for.

  • gaudy monstrosity

  • sorry bro,

    It was very insensitive of me to say that. You sound very passionate, so I take back what I said. And all the best. Honestly I am sorry for being an ass.

  • awesome!

  • oh come on! constructive criticism... this shit is hard! it looks easy but it really isn't..

  • shut up