For someone of GCSE age (now i assume you're in college or employment) is really quite good
Some minor editing issues would be good, a change of font and i'd stop at 0:45 with a longer flatline fade to black and then THINK! Don't and Drink and Drive!
Well done :) people need to be aware that alcohol is alcohol, and humans are humans - no matter WHAT country you're from, whether you're an American or a Pole, you're going to be affected the same way by alcohol - particularly after having had 4-5 beers, which everybody with a brain should know is WAY too much to even set foot NEAR a car. Boastful people like "kokrys" need to realise that - before THEY end up killing or crippling someone.
That should be a much higher standard for GCSE level! That's something a 1st tear would do! And I hope you had permission from your parents or had a responsible adult along with you when you were in the pub!
If you drink and drive,don't do that,before you drink take six tablets of golden clam tablet then you will be alright to hold the wheel,click my user name to find up more.
yeh, pretty good actually. mise-en-scene was detailed :) (look at me, using technical vocab and all), like when he put the drink down and the car keys were there.
and over 20,000 views for a gsce project must be a good thing :)
although i think there could have been a bit more creativity there, it kind of seemed like the average drink drive campain, but twas good, what did you get for it???
And how pray tell is a 15 year old supposed to do that when he/she does not have access to the proper people and equipment needed to do such a graphic scene?
But.... over 9,000 arrests for drink driving over Christmas which is not surprising when you see that EVERY break in a movie or program on freeview is an alchol advert. How on earth they get away with it i do not know. Last night one said 'Smirnoff and cranberry juice, perfect for watching the movie'
I find it more than disgusting they bombard people like that and especially when one second you are watching a film and the next nano second later a bottle of beer is in your face on the screen.
he must of been really drunk,...he was getting into the wrong side of the car...kidding...great job on the PSA!!,...i love when you show the easy alternitives to avoid such a disaster. yours truley nickygents (sober driver since 1995)
@kokrys it doesn't matter where you're from, the message from the video is clear; don't drink and drive. My teammate was hit by a drunk driver who had only a little over the allowed percentage of alcohol in his blood. He was still dead on impact. And just so you know, I'm not from America either.
@vam4eva Thats just sensationalist bullshit, one 'sip' isnt going to do anything to your judgement, but obviously you shouldnt drink and drive no matter how much you have had to drink.
this was absolutely rubbish , i could do better and im 15
TheAutoApple 3 months ago
this is good it was effective without being too graphic....not to be dumb but what does gcse mean?
QuetzalElla 4 months ago
For someone of GCSE age (now i assume you're in college or employment) is really quite good
Some minor editing issues would be good, a change of font and i'd stop at 0:45 with a longer flatline fade to black and then THINK! Don't and Drink and Drive!
Well done though
voiceofreason2008 11 months ago
Well done :) people need to be aware that alcohol is alcohol, and humans are humans - no matter WHAT country you're from, whether you're an American or a Pole, you're going to be affected the same way by alcohol - particularly after having had 4-5 beers, which everybody with a brain should know is WAY too much to even set foot NEAR a car. Boastful people like "kokrys" need to realise that - before THEY end up killing or crippling someone.
Jianlibao 1 year ago
That should be a much higher standard for GCSE level! That's something a 1st tear would do! And I hope you had permission from your parents or had a responsible adult along with you when you were in the pub!
TheKitDawg 1 year ago
If you drink and drive,don't do that,before you drink take six tablets of golden clam tablet then you will be alright to hold the wheel,click my user name to find up more.
kennethkiu 1 year ago
good idea , u shuld of got a a patent out on it so no one can steal idea
TJCSproductions 1 year ago
lame ad !!
TheStylefly 1 year ago
really good :)
MrPurplecrow 1 year ago
Very good.
MadameLil 1 year ago
thats a good video mate, well done, i dont drink myself but if that AD was to come on the tv it would make people think twice
ana183247 1 year ago
yeh, pretty good actually. mise-en-scene was detailed :) (look at me, using technical vocab and all), like when he put the drink down and the car keys were there.
and over 20,000 views for a gsce project must be a good thing :)
although i think there could have been a bit more creativity there, it kind of seemed like the average drink drive campain, but twas good, what did you get for it???
JoshWMHS 1 year ago
totally fake!!!! you can tell by the font, and the doesn't have HD in it!!!!
ivliuscaesar1865 1 year ago
That, girl who was in it was my mate, we are in the same class, Heyy x
MissHoppii 1 year ago
I like it.
1tomh1 1 year ago
would have been better if u showed the girl getting hit by the car
XXCOLINXXX 2 years ago
And how pray tell is a 15 year old supposed to do that when he/she does not have access to the proper people and equipment needed to do such a graphic scene?
This is pretty good for a 15 year old, well done.
RandyDarkshade 2 years ago
The guys face shouldnt have been shown while drinking. bad timing before she was hit. the text was too abrupt.
Rosky12 2 years ago
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drink + drive +dead kid = lol
StonerKid655321 2 years ago
this is cool and it states the inportent message
hamster700 2 years ago
@hamster700 Hell I drive better after 9 or 10 beers Im more relaxed and make better judgements. I think.
Trashfished 2 years ago
*important
knabbers 2 years ago
jesus, he didnt even finish his pint, and he was blitzed after it too :l what a lightweight..
6NewHorizons9 2 years ago 9
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airnza380 2 years ago
use youres
Ucaklar 2 years ago
dont think the car would of made that kind of noise is running over the girl hehe
TeJero99 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
But.... over 9,000 arrests for drink driving over Christmas which is not surprising when you see that EVERY break in a movie or program on freeview is an alchol advert. How on earth they get away with it i do not know. Last night one said 'Smirnoff and cranberry juice, perfect for watching the movie'
I find it more than disgusting they bombard people like that and especially when one second you are watching a film and the next nano second later a bottle of beer is in your face on the screen.
sweetypie000 3 years ago
that Girls body wud be alot worse then that in real life trust me i have seen pictures and theirs alot more blood broken bones an er nasty injuries
lHoodlum 3 years ago
sssh. i'm 15. i'm not going to cover a girl in blood and injuries. read the title, wang. GCSE.
vam4eva 3 years ago 4
Whats ur point in the reply to me? Lol
You dont make sence
all i was saying it in real life its alot more worse then on this video
''read the title'' right and ur point is?
im telling you that If you are a victim of a car crash or run over there is alot more blood and injuries then on this.
lHoodlum 3 years ago
This is a commercial for a school project. Anyone knows you get more injuries irl.
RandyDarkshade 2 years ago
@lHoodlum why are you looking at stuff like that, its weird and twisted, no offence
StanleyDiPalma 1 month ago
he must of been really drunk,...he was getting into the wrong side of the car...kidding...great job on the PSA!!,...i love when you show the easy alternitives to avoid such a disaster. yours truley nickygents (sober driver since 1995)
nickygentz 3 years ago
wrong side of the car? are you amercian?
sushilnash 2 years ago
its a bit long....
georgecochrane 3 years ago
Check out Chech's advert "Nemyslis Zaplatis"
kokrys 3 years ago
here is some constructive critisim:he didnt finish his beer
tediegay 3 years ago
It only takes one sip of alcohol to affect your judgement.
vam4eva 3 years ago
lol, maybe for dumb americans... Poles need to drink 4-5 beers to be unable to drive a car properly :)
kokrys 3 years ago
...
i'm not american.
ass.
vam4eva 3 years ago 3
wow, widze, że masz patriotyczne powody do dumy :/
ffafii 3 years ago
A nie ? Przecież lepiej jest chyba że mamy mocne głowy a nie tak jak zachodnie cioty?
kokrys 3 years ago
Może i mamy, a moze nam się tylko tak wydaje...
nie trzeba jednak sławić Polaków jako rozpitych głów :]
ffafii 3 years ago
why does everyone think that any one that anyone that doesnt speak what eva the hell that language is down there is american? gr8 vid aswell
gonz572 3 years ago
Everyone knows that Poland has the highest rate of drink-driving incidents.
xjaix2kex 1 year ago
@kokrys it doesn't matter where you're from, the message from the video is clear; don't drink and drive. My teammate was hit by a drunk driver who had only a little over the allowed percentage of alcohol in his blood. He was still dead on impact. And just so you know, I'm not from America either.
TenshiDuCeleste 3 months ago
@vam4eva Thats just sensationalist bullshit, one 'sip' isnt going to do anything to your judgement, but obviously you shouldnt drink and drive no matter how much you have had to drink.
dub2dabone11 7 months ago
w00t yust 3856 for such a good video???I dont get it 5/5
Takeonazon 3 years ago
hahahaha dear oh dear..
did you get a "E" for GCSE?
fergy1234 3 years ago
Did you get a 'Die', for 'Die'?
Firstly, it wasn't a media related project.
Secondly, don't like it, don't watch, simple.
Thirdly, err, what was I going to say, DIE. :D
And thank you everyone else.
vam4eva 3 years ago
the heartbeat is sort of annoying. :O But otherwise, great job! :D
kittykatty585 3 years ago
Aha, yeah understandable. Thank You!
vam4eva 3 years ago
very good, nice work x
booboobrinn 3 years ago
thank you! x
vam4eva 3 years ago
There's your comment smelleh.
aleatia 3 years ago
Good work!
aleatia 3 years ago
nice work!!!!!
StunGunsnWheatfields 3 years ago