The Two Detectives Ep2: The Man Upstairs

[rapsis2x2]

Oh my god! I never liked detectives, but this is an exeption!

[XAngelofdarknessXful]

This is amazing it's hard to captivate an audience which a mystery/thriller story, all i can say is brilliant job and i can't wait to see more of the dectectives :)

[WildFireWoo]

Oooh, scary voice! The Man's voice reminded me a bit of Louis from Interview with the Vampire. :D Very nicely done.

[dogtorwho]

wooo, i love it :D Clever storyline ^-^

[medleyaj01]

brilliant fantastic and good storyline, i no its hard making good mysteries and you made three!

[TheDailyCrumb]

@medleyaj01 thankyou! you've made our day

[rubberonion]

"i'm alarmed!"

seriously enjoying this series... i'm impressed... again! good work!

[theHLetter]

how can it be pitch black when it is afternoon?

the 2 detectives walked in when it is afternoon

and the clock at the victim's room is about 01:10 or something I forgot

[TheDailyCrumb]

@theHLetter haha brilliant

[theHLetter]

@TheDailyCrumb

you shouldn't call me brilliant, you are brilliant

[JohnHutch]

HAHAHA he came back because there was no reception! Brilliant

[Zoot101]

Making a detective story is not easy, because you have to make a full mystery. Nice one!

I was watching the dark scene in a pitch-black room, and I was honestly terrified.

[TheDailyCrumb]

@Zoot101 good good :) glad u liked!

[laura2daisy]

brilliant! plot is thickening..at first i was going to say its a bit bad that you didnt lower the enemys voice in the kitchen so it was obvious it was overdubbed however when you included the phone i let you off =]