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From: MelJean33
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  • You really did an amazing job. It was so believable. Keep up the good work.!

  • good job

  • Start and end with the word, "scene." Make it more believable..! You had a great voice, keep it up!

  • Gave me chills.

  • You show a lot of greatly portayed emotions. Well Done!

  • Excellently done! Brought me to tears(:

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  • Could I have feedback on my monologue? (This same one)

    It would mean sooo much! :) xo

  • This is really good.

    I did the same monologue myself.

    ;)

  • Where can I find that monologue please???? U did a great job,very nicely done, I can relate to this since I lost a special guy in my life. I'm looking for strong monolgues, love dramatics ones. Please and help where I can find these kinds of monolgues I will Greatly Appreciated, thanks=)

  • After reading some comments, I found out that all this was acting. You had me going there! I guess this just proves how great your acting is!

  • Wow! You're really good! :))))

  • Amazing, very good, you're really good it didn't seem staged at all. PLEASE tell me what you think of my acting, honestly and throw in some tips and advice. Thank you and keep up the good work.

  • wow your really good

  • It was great :) A little flat, I mean it can use a little more emotion but it wasn't cheesy or anything like that :) Keep up the good work!

  • i really liked it you did really well acting in the silence you didnt just spill out the words i really believed it and was drawn in it was great :)

  • Looking for actors & aspiring actors to join a new free social network.

    Upload monologue performances, demo reels, voice-overs, but more importantly, make a few acting friends.

    If you're interested, link is in my channel. Or you can just "Google" "Hows My Acting"

  • I think you should touch your face more...or move more.

    It just seems unnatural but you're really really great!

  • the most dramatic monologues are ones where we try to laugh our way out of the seriousness of the situation... and vice versa... you did well, but missing the forth wall... tackle that and you'll nail it..

  • Any acting tips? You seem to know your stuff.... I need to perform a monologue (serious or comical) from a movie or play and am totally stuck

  • @katchitifyoucan Are you kidding? There's no fourth wall in audition monologues on film... The casting agents don't really care either way... And besides, how immaterial is the fourth wall in stage anyway? Only plays done by Chekhov truly ignore the audience. But even then, the audience is always taken into consideration.

  • Forth wall gives presence to whom you're delivering the monologue to ... the monologue holds no relevance if the viewer has no clue who she's talking to... i.e confiding to a friend? her mother? an ex boyfriend? each of those people you would deliver the monologue differently to...it is more powerful and traditionally used on stage, but on film it defines your choices!

  • great job

  • That was really convincing...

    Please don't ever give up with acting.

    Sure, there were some high and low points

    in this video, but I was almost fully convinced, and I truly and honestly mean that. You're a great actress. The body language, facial gestures...everything! Well done!

  • where'd you get this monologue?

    i'd like to use it for an audition.

    great job btw! (:

  • this was really good!! i do think you could improve, but its getting real. there's an acting term called the glass wall. there are two sides, one amature, one amazing. and every actors goal is to break through the glass wall. i think you are soooooo close, but not quite there. but soo close! haha. you're crying was amazing though :D

    awsome job!

  • You were great dont listen to ^ that person! I felt what you were saying!!

  • Honestly, you're not terrible, but I don't feel like you believe what you're saying. It still feels like you're saying the words off the page rather than acting the character.

    Keep trying :)

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