It definitely doesn't make much sense. I guess it could be like in "Don't Think Twice It's All Right," when Dylan sings about how much he loves the girl but won't stay with her because it's a bad match.
Still, that's not how I meant it, lol. I meant it to say "I'll do anything for you."
nice! If you're still writing this, can I just point out "there is nothing I wont do except stay right next to you" doesn't really make sense. Maybe think about it a bit.
It definitely doesn't make much sense. I guess it could be like in "Don't Think Twice It's All Right," when Dylan sings about how much he loves the girl but won't stay with her because it's a bad match.
Still, that's not how I meant it, lol. I meant it to say "I'll do anything for you."
Thanks for the second set of eyes.
ktbriggs 2 years ago
nice! If you're still writing this, can I just point out "there is nothing I wont do except stay right next to you" doesn't really make sense. Maybe think about it a bit.
Great work though.
Edthebanjo 2 years ago
well done - more, please
billkilpatrick 3 years ago
Sweet! Nice chunky sound to it.
BaronK69 3 years ago
NICE WORK, Briggadier.
teasethedog 3 years ago