It could've been a prettttty good masterpiece if you had better actors, and more realistic lines. Allllso, I loved the whole pace of it in the beginning.. but then towards the end it started just mashing altogether, and gave no time for the mind to process it; if you start slow.. keep it slow. And add more detail! :) <3
yeah the acting is rather dry in this one, if you check out my new movie And The Seven Thieves the acting is much better in that one. But no the Sweeney Todd was just a little funny reference I wanted to stick in there, Calvin just slowly becomes more and more insane.
thank you! yes i must admit that the acting could use a few touch ups here and there. my new movie about a bank robbery has some pretty solid acting definitely stay tuned
thank you for your feed back IntelligentCreature. Yes this movie was basically to test out all aspects, Directing, Editing, Cinematography, Writing. The acting was just there, not really as tested. And I agree, if I were to go back to this movie there would have been a much slower transformation along to a more plotted assault towards his roommate. I dunno, I guess the wicked laugh would have worked just having problems imagining it
great idea, seems like you put a lot of thought into the script...not sure about the accent though lol is that brooklyn gangsta? hahaha, regardless, well edited, and i can see how you planned out each take, also noted that there was a slight slur in speech outside the actual film that you might have wanted to re-shoot, but for testing out the writing, very nicely done
this is friggin not the real movie is it..? ret@rd(if it was then lol o.o so far i thought the movie was weird caz the adds were liike so diff.. well anyway nice job just good quality ^.~
lmao, i just didnt understand a single word you just said. well this is the second part of the movie and the adds are meant to show a abstract view of a person going insane from schizo. hopefully that cleared up any question you might have had?
WHAO! Man that was twisted...especially when the Little Miss Sunshine came on at the end haha. I must say that this was excellent. I think you need a cameraman though :P
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TheShancai 7 months ago
It could've been a prettttty good masterpiece if you had better actors, and more realistic lines. Allllso, I loved the whole pace of it in the beginning.. but then towards the end it started just mashing altogether, and gave no time for the mind to process it; if you start slow.. keep it slow. And add more detail! :) <3
comewitmeandwewillha 1 year ago
LOL Calvin and the dude with the hat are on two totally different spectrums xD
"Yo Calvin, WTF??"
"....."
pfft lol
ClayMastah344 2 years ago
haha yeah i know.
the actin is pretty dry in this but it was intended to be that way
HrachStarMedia 2 years ago
Omg Sweeney Todd!!!! =] I love how the razor was sitting right on top of it.
I like the plot line and all that, but the acting wasn't all that good. (no offense)
Quick Question:
did he go insane because of that movie, because he was obsessed with it? Or was it just there to be there?
emobeccaahha 2 years ago
yeah the acting is rather dry in this one, if you check out my new movie And The Seven Thieves the acting is much better in that one. But no the Sweeney Todd was just a little funny reference I wanted to stick in there, Calvin just slowly becomes more and more insane.
HrachStarMedia 2 years ago
Very nice acting XD
TheDiaboloMaster 2 years ago
thanks!
HrachStarMedia 2 years ago
it was good, but the acting could have use work, im in Theatre myself for 5 years and i still need more practice, but i like the whole concept
nice job
HeliosVamp13 2 years ago
thank you! yes i must admit that the acting could use a few touch ups here and there. my new movie about a bank robbery has some pretty solid acting definitely stay tuned
HrachStarMedia 2 years ago
good im looking forward to it
HeliosVamp13 2 years ago
are these directing and acting skills we are testing?
a slower transformantion to insanity would have made the kid a bit more relatable... and
perhaps there should have been more premeditation of the crime since the kid is such a genius...
and i agree with the wicked laugh at the end...
peace...
IntelligentCreature 3 years ago
thank you for your feed back IntelligentCreature. Yes this movie was basically to test out all aspects, Directing, Editing, Cinematography, Writing. The acting was just there, not really as tested. And I agree, if I were to go back to this movie there would have been a much slower transformation along to a more plotted assault towards his roommate. I dunno, I guess the wicked laugh would have worked just having problems imagining it
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
Sweeny Todd how ironic :) he should have laughed wickedly or crazily at the end!
MillietheBeast 3 years ago
haha yes!
funny thing is i didn't see the movie yet, but TIm Burton is a man of genius talent
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
haha 40 year old virgin in the background XD
MillietheBeast 3 years ago
but you have the camera focused on that too long
MillietheBeast 3 years ago
yeah i definitely dragged that part way too long, i tried to make it seem more 'real' but it was way to drawn out
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
you so hot and cute.....
sanderrodijk 3 years ago
who so hot and cute?
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
this movie was homemade but actualy really good XP and the mirror effects was pretty good but not the best...
mannenmedbyxor 3 years ago
Yes thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
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Sullie1161 3 years ago
Ah, i dont know, i dont think i wrote that in the script and it was just him?
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
The dead's fingerprints arn't on the knife.
IncognitoInnominate 3 years ago
The dead's??
I'm sorry i'm confused on what you are askin
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
great idea, seems like you put a lot of thought into the script...not sure about the accent though lol is that brooklyn gangsta? hahaha, regardless, well edited, and i can see how you planned out each take, also noted that there was a slight slur in speech outside the actual film that you might have wanted to re-shoot, but for testing out the writing, very nicely done
Sullie1161 3 years ago
Thanks man!
Yeah i mean i was going for like a college-esque type ordeal.
Which part was slurred? Me or the main character?
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
this is friggin not the real movie is it..? ret@rd(if it was then lol o.o so far i thought the movie was weird caz the adds were liike so diff.. well anyway nice job just good quality ^.~
iLina67 3 years ago
lmao, i just didnt understand a single word you just said. well this is the second part of the movie and the adds are meant to show a abstract view of a person going insane from schizo. hopefully that cleared up any question you might have had?
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
WHAO! Man that was twisted...especially when the Little Miss Sunshine came on at the end haha. I must say that this was excellent. I think you need a cameraman though :P
RenderingGlintFilms 3 years ago
Haha thanks man I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I am pretty happy with the eerie turnout, still more I wish I could have improved on.
And you are right, a cameraman would be helpful haha luckily my intentions for this was for nothing but still shots on the tripod.
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
dude this is awesome......can u send a dvd to me if i tell u my info...
skadoucheproductions 3 years ago
Yeah I could definitely do that
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
HOLY CRAP! Brittany is like a twin!!!!!
Singstarwannabe16 3 years ago
haha ummm thanks?
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
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MEOSHABEAN1 3 years ago
what was on the tv?
mmCait 3 years ago
haha um the 40 Year Old Virgin
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
nice writing, it all came together nicely.
all of the small details and such, keep it up!
kmattson118 3 years ago
thanks man! i'm glad that you enjoyed it
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
Awesome, it is about time you put it up. V-Good.
Fistfulofrumfilms 3 years ago
thanks man i am sorry it took so long to put up
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago
nice job man! really good build up until the very end. keep it up, nice job on the script!
Aaronpowellfilms 3 years ago
thanks man! yeah i was wondering how that build up was going to be but i'm glad you liked it
HrachStarMedia 3 years ago