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  • hihihihihi

  • It could've been a prettttty good masterpiece if you had better actors, and more realistic lines. Allllso, I loved the whole pace of it in the beginning.. but then towards the end it started just mashing altogether, and gave no time for the mind to process it; if you start slow.. keep it slow. And add more detail! :) <3

  • LOL Calvin and the dude with the hat are on two totally different spectrums xD

    "Yo Calvin, WTF??"

    "....."

    pfft lol

  • haha yeah i know.

    the actin is pretty dry in this but it was intended to be that way

  • Omg Sweeney Todd!!!! =] I love how the razor was sitting right on top of it.

    I like the plot line and all that, but the acting wasn't all that good. (no offense)

    Quick Question:

    did he go insane because of that movie, because he was obsessed with it? Or was it just there to be there?

  • yeah the acting is rather dry in this one, if you check out my new movie And The Seven Thieves the acting is much better in that one. But no the Sweeney Todd was just a little funny reference I wanted to stick in there, Calvin just slowly becomes more and more insane.

  • Very nice acting XD

  • thanks!

  • it was good, but the acting could have use work, im in Theatre myself for 5 years and i still need more practice, but i like the whole concept

    nice job

  • thank you! yes i must admit that the acting could use a few touch ups here and there. my new movie about a bank robbery has some pretty solid acting definitely stay tuned

  • good im looking forward to it

  • are these directing and acting skills we are testing?

    a slower transformantion to insanity would have made the kid a bit more relatable... and

    perhaps there should have been more premeditation of the crime since the kid is such a genius...

    and i agree with the wicked laugh at the end...

    peace...

  • thank you for your feed back IntelligentCreature. Yes this movie was basically to test out all aspects, Directing, Editing, Cinematography, Writing. The acting was just there, not really as tested. And I agree, if I were to go back to this movie there would have been a much slower transformation along to a more plotted assault towards his roommate. I dunno, I guess the wicked laugh would have worked just having problems imagining it

  • Sweeny Todd how ironic :) he should have laughed wickedly or crazily at the end!

  • haha yes!

    funny thing is i didn't see the movie yet, but TIm Burton is a man of genius talent

  • haha 40 year old virgin in the background XD

  • but you have the camera focused on that too long

  • yeah i definitely dragged that part way too long, i tried to make it seem more 'real' but it was way to drawn out

  • you so hot and cute.....

  • who so hot and cute?

  • this movie was homemade but actualy really good XP and the mirror effects was pretty good but not the best...

  • Yes thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it

  • main

  • Ah, i dont know, i dont think i wrote that in the script and it was just him?

  • The dead's fingerprints arn't on the knife.

  • The dead's??

    I'm sorry i'm confused on what you are askin

  • great idea, seems like you put a lot of thought into the script...not sure about the accent though lol is that brooklyn gangsta? hahaha, regardless, well edited, and i can see how you planned out each take, also noted that there was a slight slur in speech outside the actual film that you might have wanted to re-shoot, but for testing out the writing, very nicely done

  • Thanks man!

    Yeah i mean i was going for like a college-esque type ordeal.

    Which part was slurred? Me or the main character?

  • this is friggin not the real movie is it..? ret@rd(if it was then lol o.o so far i thought the movie was weird caz the adds were liike so diff.. well anyway nice job just good quality ^.~

  • lmao, i just didnt understand a single word you just said. well this is the second part of the movie and the adds are meant to show a abstract view of a person going insane from schizo. hopefully that cleared up any question you might have had?

  • WHAO! Man that was twisted...especially when the Little Miss Sunshine came on at the end haha. I must say that this was excellent. I think you need a cameraman though :P

  • Haha thanks man I'm glad you enjoyed it!

    I am pretty happy with the eerie turnout, still more I wish I could have improved on.

    And you are right, a cameraman would be helpful haha luckily my intentions for this was for nothing but still shots on the tripod.

  • dude this is awesome......can u send a dvd to me if i tell u my info...

  • Yeah I could definitely do that

  • HOLY CRAP! Brittany is like a twin!!!!!

  • haha ummm thanks?

  • what was on the tv?

  • haha um the 40 Year Old Virgin

  • nice writing, it all came together nicely.

    all of the small details and such, keep it up!

  • thanks man! i'm glad that you enjoyed it

  • Awesome, it is about time you put it up. V-Good.

  • thanks man i am sorry it took so long to put up

  • nice job man! really good build up until the very end. keep it up, nice job on the script!

  • thanks man! yeah i was wondering how that build up was going to be but i'm glad you liked it

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