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  • Sonic's part of the story really touched my heart. I'm glad you are so great at describing the story. I am a novelist too and hope to be as good as you some day.

  • these storys are making me cry my 20 year old brothers crying as well they are the best storys ever but they make me sad that animal testing is actully happening :( these are great storys u no that :)

  • You should make some kind of anime, that would be more fun.

  • @JayKayBlade I wanted to leave it for your imagination.... : )

  • hey my song's in here!

  • @codbarley heh, thank you for creating it. It fit perfectly for the scene ^^ You are credited in the description ;)

  • Can't wait for the next part!! =D I think that it's facfics like these that are keeping Sonic alive and not SEGA. I think that if the fans didn't like the character so much to come up with their own plots like this rather than leave it in SEGA's hands, the character would no longer exist.

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  • @NCfanboy1 as quoted from the comment I made about an hr ago....

    Ch. 6 production has been on hold due to the Dr. Cameron VA computer breaking down. He said he'll most likely get a new one this week though so it should pick back up again real soon.

    I'm sorry for the major delay. Just sit tight a little longer k : )

  • argh! Can't wait for the next one!! Has this story already been finnished though? is it on DA or something? I'd love a reply back even if it's not finnished

  • @throwfox66 The orignal story is not finished. Ch. 6 production has been on hold due to the Dr. Cameron VA computer breaking down. He said he'll most likely get a new one this week though so it should pick back up again real soon.

    I'm sorry for the major delay. Just sit tight a little longer k : )

  • this has given me the same suspense in a few min. than waiting 4 portal 2 to come out in a few weeks

    can't wait 4 next chap.

    P.S. u've found about the perfect voice actors, adds to the enjoyment 

  • Lol that's my song....cool beans!!

    I really like the use of my song and the whole thing...

  • @Stolkmen haha NP. Your song really fit the mood of that scene ^^ thanks for making it! You are credited in the description =)

  • this story is so intersesting to me that I went throw the whole story and acted out what was said, I loved it, I even have a sonic hat that I got when I reserved sonic colors, When the next chapter comes, I will act that out too when I listen to it. I love the emotion and the suspense. So far I give it a 10 out of 10.

  • great to see Sonic in a better mood I love this story XD

  • LOL, the voices are amazing. Chris was spot on.

  • Omg. Dr. Cameron creeps me out. Which means the voice actor did an amazing job! lol. And I have to disagree with Puppyshade, I think the voice actress who portrayed Jade did an excellent job, brought her to life really. And as always, Tails and Chris sound amazingly accurate. Woo! (Was Ch.5 really that short? Geez I really did cheat everyone didn't I? Lol)

  • @TwilyghtDragon Although I do have one critique and that would be that Jade sounded a lot younger than I imagined.

  • Darn the suspense. Keep it up love! ;D

  • AWESOME :DDDDDDD

  • amazing, amazing stuff! Great to see stuff again! :)

  • i love this series ! it's very good the only thing i don't really like was the person who played jade ...just some of the lines were a bit emotionless . just a bit :)

  • EEE, IS UP. <333 I found the fanfiction on ff.net, and I read the whole thing (or what was up of it) but I realized that the story is MUCH MUCH better with narration. Keep it up :D

  • Kn: Woooo~! xD Nice to see this finally come out! It had been so long that I forgot what happened... even though I was the narrator telling the story! lol Nice work with the editing, Loor, and great job voice acting, everybody. ^__^ Dr. Cameron scared me. xDDD When he was yelling at Jade for her insolence, it sounded like he was going to kill something. lol <3

  • very good, i can't wait the next part! ^w^

  • Is there somewhere I can read this?

  • you know, i completely forgot why i watched you.. nice to see you finally updated

  • @Megaluigi93 haha sorry, normally it takes a good month to get all the lines in. Chapter 5 took so long because I had to recast Amy Rose. I'm sorry for any inconvenience. ^^;

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