That was great, I constantly try to write lyrics and constantly throw them out. If this is your first song please do not stop because it was really good!!
Thanks for the feedback, Mr. P! My previous attempts at songwriting have all failed miserably, I think due to trying too hard. This song came to me in about 10 minutes while I was at work. I guess the uke muse works in mysterious ways.
I thought Love was your last name. You're the kind of person who ought to be writing songs, clearly. Write lots more. And your nerdy T-shirt is actually cool!
Love is for sure my middle name. My parents effectively gave me one of the cheesiest pick up lines of all time when they named me. I can't make any promises about the results of future songwriting endeavors, but I will give it a try. Thanks for the encouragement!
First- would you mind posting the lyrics? I missed a couple.
Sam you have such a great, powerful voice. And why have you not been writing songs? This is an incredible first effort... are you sure you don't have a bunch already written & yr fibbin to us?
No, I am not fibbin', this is definitely my first completely original piece. I do have a little experience writing parodies and stuff, but that stuff mostly circulates only within my circle of close friends. As for actual songwriting, I've made some attempts, but I usually end up trying too hard and then it's just a big mess.
I will definitely be posting the lyrics for you. Thanks for the feedback, Adelle!
Well I feel like queen shit to have helped inspire yr first song! Trying usually turns into messes for me to. Inspiration comes when it wants but I'm sure now that you guys have met, he'll be back ;)
There was just one line near the beginning I didn't catch- you were singing quite clearly don't worry :)
Had to sign in as myself, Sam, to tell you how great your video is! It's not too cheesy because it's so playful that it doesn't get saccharine. Yep, you're the BEST!
Aw, shucks, Erika! If we keep this up, we are going to have the tamest VH1 Behind the Music/E! True Hollywood Story of all time! I thought I may have been going a little over the top by including my cheesiest pick up line of all time, so it's good to know that the cheese was kept at a manageable level.
Nice Song, listen to my composition if you have time ! : )
xkingzy 1 year ago
cute :D ♥
Empitnessify 1 year ago
@Empitnessify Thanks!
helveticaukes 1 year ago
Sam, you're awesome! I love the line "just shut up and kiss me" brings back some memories
scloober 2 years ago
Aw, shucks! Thanks a lot!
helveticaukes 2 years ago
Can't believe this is your first one! Great job!
Cheers,
Dirk
mugambismonkey 2 years ago
Thanks, Dirk!
helveticaukes 2 years ago
Wow Sam! I really hope you keep writing. This is an awesome song! You're definitely a natural at it. Great job, and I look forward to seeing more!
fourteentwelve 2 years ago
Thank you, especially for the encouragement!
helveticaukes 2 years ago
That was great, I constantly try to write lyrics and constantly throw them out. If this is your first song please do not stop because it was really good!!
MrPlatypus70 2 years ago
Thanks for the feedback, Mr. P! My previous attempts at songwriting have all failed miserably, I think due to trying too hard. This song came to me in about 10 minutes while I was at work. I guess the uke muse works in mysterious ways.
helveticaukes 2 years ago
beautifull song, some great lyrics.
good luck
Ken G
ken6675 2 years ago
Thanks, Ken!
helveticaukes 2 years ago
Excellent songwriting, great performance. This one has 'hit' written all over it!
phillipsderek 2 years ago
:) Thank you kindly.
helveticaukes 2 years ago
I knew before I watched or read that this was going to be fine, and very fine it is. A magnificent first. Keep 'em coming.
uke5417 2 years ago
Thanks for the encouragement! I don't think that I'll ever match your skill in songwriting, but I will sure give it a shot!
helveticaukes 2 years ago
That IS it. And thanks go to you! You're the whole package, Sam. Nice, nice, nice.
ukeyermind 2 years ago
Aw, shucks, Shawn. You really are too kind. Thanks for this lovely comment. :-D
helveticaukes 2 years ago
great lyrics -well played and sung our friend !
kennymelodica 2 years ago
Thanks, Captains!
helveticaukes 2 years ago
Great song!
deach69 2 years ago
Thanks, Deach!
helveticaukes 2 years ago
I thought Love was your last name. You're the kind of person who ought to be writing songs, clearly. Write lots more. And your nerdy T-shirt is actually cool!
DonfromMT 2 years ago
Love is for sure my middle name. My parents effectively gave me one of the cheesiest pick up lines of all time when they named me. I can't make any promises about the results of future songwriting endeavors, but I will give it a try. Thanks for the encouragement!
helveticaukes 2 years ago
awesome first song Sam! it has a really strong hook.
russbuss415 2 years ago
Thanks for the feedback, Russ!
helveticaukes 2 years ago
Excellent song, great performance :)
Dont really need to wish you luck !
UnluckyMum 2 years ago
:-) Thanks for the feedback!
helveticaukes 2 years ago
First- would you mind posting the lyrics? I missed a couple.
Sam you have such a great, powerful voice. And why have you not been writing songs? This is an incredible first effort... are you sure you don't have a bunch already written & yr fibbin to us?
Great last line, too!!
adellethegreat 2 years ago
Aw, sheesh, Adelle!
No, I am not fibbin', this is definitely my first completely original piece. I do have a little experience writing parodies and stuff, but that stuff mostly circulates only within my circle of close friends. As for actual songwriting, I've made some attempts, but I usually end up trying too hard and then it's just a big mess.
I will definitely be posting the lyrics for you. Thanks for the feedback, Adelle!
helveticaukes 2 years ago
Well I feel like queen shit to have helped inspire yr first song! Trying usually turns into messes for me to. Inspiration comes when it wants but I'm sure now that you guys have met, he'll be back ;)
There was just one line near the beginning I didn't catch- you were singing quite clearly don't worry :)
adellethegreat 2 years ago
Liked, liked, liked!! :-)
ctrymaus 2 years ago
Thanks, thanks, thanks!! :-)
helveticaukes 2 years ago
Had to sign in as myself, Sam, to tell you how great your video is! It's not too cheesy because it's so playful that it doesn't get saccharine. Yep, you're the BEST!
straer01 2 years ago
Aw, shucks, Erika! If we keep this up, we are going to have the tamest VH1 Behind the Music/E! True Hollywood Story of all time! I thought I may have been going a little over the top by including my cheesiest pick up line of all time, so it's good to know that the cheese was kept at a manageable level.
helveticaukes 2 years ago
Just watched it again, yep, definitely great ! :)
CherishedCarCare 2 years ago
Aw, shucks! :)
helveticaukes 2 years ago
Your best I've watched to date, and your own tune too ! GREAT !
CherishedCarCare 2 years ago
Gee, thanks, Tony! :)
helveticaukes 2 years ago