work on your punches hit them with some crazy metaphors....listen to some of waynes lines
then you got a good voice
be a lil more creative no more mainstream u could put a lil bit in but then go to space ....you could do it....feel like ur an alien in a UFO (beam me up not an example...just a line).
ight well this is what you call a hatin ass nigga. dique decent , atleast he startin somewhere , where da hell you at ? prolly 30 somethin years old still sleepin at ya moms crib . comeon man where dat 14 year old you talkin about? he prolly be battlin niggas for they lunch at school . smd nigga you trash . NUFF SED TO ChickenIntestines . hatin ass nigga .smh
Lol, you decent, I was nicer than you when I was 14, you just got a cute little studio, and ok flow, your lyrics are mainstream. You got little to NO punches, your multi syllable rhyme scheme is mediocre, she can lick your scrotum, actually my man is 14 and he nicer than you, they used to call me a prodigy, but the mainstream rap game stupid, nobody is even real nice that's coming out. Anybody can thumbs down this, because I know what I'm talking about, and I could care less.
2 yrs now, time flies
TheRooksEnt 9 months ago
HOT SHIT...
deedeecsl 1 year ago
soon to be a year...god damnnn
TheRooksEnt 1 year ago
damn rogue! you go off!!
hatchet2dope 2 years ago
Cezbeat!!!
cezbeats 2 years ago
niceeee,but keep workin
JnLdebutsin09 2 years ago
nigga u sound like a mexican immigrant. im dominican cunt
TheOfficialJL 2 years ago
The beginning sounds like 50's flow from Okay Alright
kingstillballin 2 years ago
never heard that one lol but alright..but just understand this was my one and only mainstream
i tried to stay as simple as possible wit it
TheRooksEnt 2 years ago
where was rooks born
kingstillballin 2 years ago
clifton, nj
TheRooksEnt 2 years ago
sick footage!
BTEAM BANDITZ!!!!
calirepresentative 2 years ago
sick studio... where is the rooks from???
iNNERGbteam 2 years ago
from north jersey...paterson.passaic,clifton
TheRooksEnt 2 years ago
Passaic? im from Passaic. I aint that. Hot shit tho .
TheRealWisdom 2 years ago
i be at benson...playin ball wit my cuzin
TheRooksEnt 2 years ago
ohh iiqht, atleast somebody else in Passaic can spit beside myself cus the rest suck. lol
TheRealWisdom 2 years ago
damn i see a lot of criticism on this video..... tell me what yall think of "Bteam Banditz" type it in!!!
iNNERGbteam 2 years ago
THIS SHIT IS TRASH
broadwaybv 2 years ago
Okay this is actually pretty good
work on your punches hit them with some crazy metaphors....listen to some of waynes lines
then you got a good voice
be a lil more creative no more mainstream u could put a lil bit in but then go to space ....you could do it....feel like ur an alien in a UFO (beam me up not an example...just a line).
rblast14 2 years ago
this guy is sickkkk
TryHardOrDieTrying 2 years ago
I fucks with it
MellMcCloud 2 years ago
ight well this is what you call a hatin ass nigga. dique decent , atleast he startin somewhere , where da hell you at ? prolly 30 somethin years old still sleepin at ya moms crib . comeon man where dat 14 year old you talkin about? he prolly be battlin niggas for they lunch at school . smd nigga you trash . NUFF SED TO ChickenIntestines . hatin ass nigga .smh
ROOKS ^
SdottofTRE 2 years ago
I'm 18, and going to be on Grindtime soon.
ChickenIntestines 2 years ago
Lol, you decent, I was nicer than you when I was 14, you just got a cute little studio, and ok flow, your lyrics are mainstream. You got little to NO punches, your multi syllable rhyme scheme is mediocre, she can lick your scrotum, actually my man is 14 and he nicer than you, they used to call me a prodigy, but the mainstream rap game stupid, nobody is even real nice that's coming out. Anybody can thumbs down this, because I know what I'm talking about, and I could care less.
ChickenIntestines 2 years ago 2
i can definitely appreciate somebody who can give criticism and explain why in an articulate way with reason behind it i give u a thumbs up
babyduder 2 years ago
nah this nigga has the same flow as drake he is pretty ill to this nigga under me thinks they are talking about his voice
JUSTINDIFIORE 2 years ago
this nigga dont sound like drake!
fuck u smokin!?
mister1hiter 2 years ago
yall shuld let da nig hop on i culd sing nd if yu had a singa it wuld sound hotta
deydey321 2 years ago
dats not drake
degrassiluver4eva 2 years ago
your aight where you from
anthonychrisbradley 2 years ago
paterson, nj
TheRooksEnt 2 years ago
rap started out of necessity, now its its groupy love haha the fans want in
sddraguta 2 years ago
white people cant say nigga
iSOLDIERFRONT12 2 years ago
haha lmaooo naa they just look white
TheRooksEnt 2 years ago
why cant crackers say nigga?
?? they invented the word my niggaz.
sk8ter904 2 years ago
dat shit nigg keep dat shit rolln
ERICROGERS012 2 years ago
you sound like drake......not a good thing
xGrimDattax 2 years ago
yoo yall sickk keep doin ur thingg yo
shabbadikiller 2 years ago
Dopee .
TheRealWisdom 2 years ago
btw reason iz nokkin...i gotta get it
Mpop 2 years ago
dats pro tools 8
TheRooksEnt 2 years ago
ma lil niqqa ahzel went in....i wanna hear dat so hard trakk i did for yuh..holla at me kiid
Mpop 2 years ago