Lightsaber Choreography Contest V - Entry 1 (Amazing!)

[CountVagus]

enough is enough when it comes to double-bladed lightsabers. Darth Maul's was cool, and maybe Ryan's in RvB2, but seriously, no more double bladed lightsabers! Its getting old!

[Mystro1989]

loved it!! but i do have to question the choice for an orange saber. 4.5/5. amazing sound effects btw

[SlyYevon]

Choreography was there, but it didn't look like the people involved were really into it. In parts they were literally walking, forcing me to say this is decent at best.

[Xzigy]

wtf with gay lightsabers? give me red,blue,green! not fucking purple,yellow or some crazy shit...

[MASTRCHIEFMOE]

how ironic.hes asian he has a yellow shirt and a yellow lightsaber...

[rustypro98]

lmao, dood don't fuck with a mans camera! Youve never seen the Jackass movies?

[thestickmanstudios1]

@rustypro98 especially if the cameraman's a sith

[TheAdomino97]

Great job!!!

[xEle360x]

Asians always win >.>

[Verithiell]

what is the tile of ending credits song?

[jediguardian10]

love the move at 2:19 :)

[jediguardian10]

love the move at 6:46! :)

[Robotman42]

HAHA Brilliant ending

[jdogloverdude]

and of course the ginger comes back and wins out of no where

[MattObreroXD]

niicceee

[kevhot]

Cool Starkiller style 1:28

[spacebender]

Well done!

[jediguardian10]

ending was totally unexpected! lol. pretty damn good vid.

[Pmcg0]

the yellow dude kid the green dude threw the balls lol

[FilmAcolyte]

meh the guy with the orange lightsaber's technique is a kinda sloppy. He has more that one occasion to slide down and kill his opponent. Remember kids, attack the person, not the weapon.

[darkdude1900]

hahaha, that ending was funny as hell. "Break my camera will you?!?!?"

[destaniofhearts]

Heart-pounding music, descent camera angles, good choreography, nice visual and sound effects. ENTER RANDOM GREEN LIGHTSABER! That was a little weird to me. I've never been fond of spontaneous characters. If they aren't introduced properly, they are only good for dieing. I found the cameraman's entrance hilarious! Anyway, one thing that I noticed that was missing was plot. Fights are cool, but when there is a story behind it, the video becomes much better. 4/5

[theunholybudders]

interesting. you may be the very first person I've seen to say that he wants a plot involved in a duel. It wrecks the movie.

[destaniofhearts]

Actually, only BAD plots wreck the movie depending on what you are looking for. If you wnat pure fighting, your video gets 4/5. However, if you need a plot that is descent/worth doing, let me know. I'd be glad to give you a killer plot with twists, turns, and surprises that will keep your audience glued to the screen.

[theunholybudders]

that's what the majority of audiences DONT want. They're here to see a sick lightsaber duel, not some corny movie.

[destaniofhearts]

XD True. Kinda sad in a way. Though, I guess it really depends on the audience you are performing for. So still, good job on the video!

^-^

[theunholybudders]

lol read the description. I didn't make this, only uploaded it.

[destaniofhearts]

DOH! *slaps hand to forehead*

[jediguardian10]

@theunholybudders hey. did the guys that made this have a youtube account?

[Xzigy]

@theunholybudders exactly :)

[thefriendlybearclub]

very cool... it was kinda dissapointing though cuz i was waiting for them to break the lightsaber staff in two so the bad guy would have two separate ones and go jar'kai style... oh well.

[PickledFoo]

It was a refreshing twist to see the bad guy win for once, and even more so to see what happened immediately after! The effects were nicely done, but the choreography was a bit disappointing, especially after seeing how well the guys were able to handle their weapons. Overall though, I thought it was a nicely done video! :)

[Biometeric]

Could have invested in some proper clothing.

[sullivan556]

where's the music from?

[Atopgun007]

Not too bad. I would go as far as to say amazing. But not terrible. Effects seem a little weird at times but I understand the trouble with rotoscoping. Keep at it and everything gets better over time.

[JRID36]

sortilegus,

did you ever think that they were just trying to get there opponents lightsaber out of the way so they could kill them

[sortilegus]

not bad. one typical problem of choreographed sword fights tho: most of the strikes aren't for the body, you can tell they're just trying to hit each other's swords/sabers, especially with the bo. but, still impressive.

[galvatorix666]

nice work guys!

[ivanRq92]

THE CAMERA MAN!!

[tehpwner15]

who won

[Revaris]

awesome =) nice music choices too, 5 stars

[indiesk8r1]

love the camerawork.

[Weightlifter10000]

that was well gd !

[BluesMan88]

not bad. lacks intent and power. not much spark. but not a bad try

[mehigh2marsiansky]

why dont you lightsabre-practicing guys dont wear some cool costumes instead of your adidas pants!! it doesnt take much just to look for some neutral clothings that would at least look like SW.

[theunholybudders]

because they're not supposed to be jedis. Why don't you people ever understand fanfilms. All they're doing is a lightsaber duel, not some scene from star wars. Look at Ryan vs. Dorkman.

[pkmuffun]

that duel was really boring. the editing was good, but the choreography could be so much better

[KingOfZilla]

when dose the next contest start?

[shadow7164]

woh, don't mess with the camera man lol

[Reaper478]

good vid but I've seen better.

You could tell they were just going though the motions. There was no anger, or emotion at all in their movements.

[Tomster68]

This is very good. I like the sound FX too. Some of the other LCC vids don't have sound, it was very real. Too Cool :P

[mushu144]

very good. i like that the camera guy won.hahaha

[EICM1975]

It wasn't Amaizing! but it was good and the end its funny. After all the ass the guy in the yellow shirt did, he had his butt handed over to him by the camera guy. I guess you finally mess with the wrong guy. Either that or the camera guy really loved his camera. LOL.

[DarthZarus]

Death by Cameraman it shall be!!!

[RafulsoN]

Camera man pwned!

[mikeyburger1]

well made!!

[enialreth]

OMFG THIS IS GAY, they copied a better lightsaber fight that you can find of the internet so mostly not only their work... It was okay though, but still I don't like the ripping bits...

[DarthZarus]

the force is strong with this one.....but i can't say the same the for little orange blaster....and what's with the ratchet and clank music at the end?

[lordloide]

excelente video ^^

[svarted]

hahahaha, and the blaster. Sweet! Nice movie ;P

[GWH87]

Love the UT2K4 music.

[starwarsgeek8]

That was INCREDIBLE!!!! Flawlss! (except perhap there sould have been more motion blur)  Loved the 'punching the camera' thing.

[brunisto]

muuuyyyyy buenooooooooo...!

[TheMetalFiddler]

lol the ending made it.

[tongtingtingtong]

camera man pwned the sith!

[JaredRp]

Lol.. not too bad give you the thumbs up on the camera punch xD.

Keep it up.

[celtic16]

cool ending.

[mirak973]

yeah! not so bad, 'n the end : LOOOOOL !! ..style

[Gabitroncangry]

lol at the end the punched the camera kid LOL!!

[jakebreaker]

2:07 - That was the perfect "Holy shit!" moment.

[Gabitroncangry]

LOL!!

[serraboi]

3:30!! haha that was badass!!!!!

[1262Scorch]

Awesome!

[Lostprophetzzz]

what is reg?

[ZarazeVnV]

Regular

[T0MMYVERCETTI]

the only gripe i have is that they were wearing reg clothes. should have had some costumes. great job overall though

[kergiby]

RFRicken awesome!! very close to a RVD style fighting, still good. nice ending

[XFighterDarkSide]

Awesome!!! 5*****

[kratosthegreat]

good choreography, well done, but guys.. too much swilring the lightsabers for nothing. nevertheless, really well, nice variaty(double-blade, differant grips,etc.) just work on the acting part of it.(still kind of simple minded... might get tricked..!)

[LaggyMcDougal]

The swirling is part of the flare. . Although I agree with you. . it does add to it at key parts. The only problem that I have with this is the stance of thes guys. There are timing issues and it seems like they are just doing the moves, and not putting any style into it.

[kratosthegreat]

I give credits where credits are due, the are still kids,and they did a good job, but dont exacly have the strengh for depth in the motion, but most of moves would be easy to ether parry or counter.one strong strike would knock the blade from the hand considering the way they hold it. Style!!I am a maniac of style for any kind of blades (like Dante`s sword) and I agree, the style is really not there, just everyday moves...

[straggler4574]

haha, I love the Ratchet and Clank music at the end...

[Galentw]

This video is NOT amazing!

[raptorian19]

hahahaha, but yey finally someone with RED!,love it

[deonax]

nice choreo. the swordplay flows nicely. kinda reminds me of rvd

[pablofallenjedi]

u guys r awesome great work!

[WilliamsStarseeker]

the clothes don't fit the saber color

[baggio5000]

how racist... the chineese guy with yellow shirt yellow saber...

lol im just kidding xD pissed camera man XD

[frankclau]

Really cool guys!

But why oh why is Pico wearing his sweater around his waist? :O

Other than that just awesome ;)

[BlackGatchaman]

Great vid. I like how the cameraman gets the last laugh. Great, energetic fights!

[madARTGermany]

guys, the choreography is absolutely amazing! So quick, so fluent, so realistic and well practiced! But hey: oooooouch, my ears! 'd be cool if you 'd try a lower sound level next time.

[cknan]

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[bloodwolf0]

lol XD GO CAMERA DUDE!

[StrWrsChoreographer]

wicked

[EckoHobozHomie]

i want toknow where i can get that song in the credits...its from R&C going commando..anyone know?

[SuperIby]

Haha, Lolz at the ending, amazing, and awsome. 5* (mind you thats what i rated it!) :-D

[IrOn876]

pretty cool i give a 5+

[Dyyor]

lol, cameraman- joo keeled me camera! i keel joo!

[burnchavs]

not bad but heres a few tips:

less afro, more social skills

get a life fools :D

[alonespinoxa]

rayan and dorkman sucks !!! .. here the new masters of jedy !!! wow

[kingster108]

lol that was a really funny ending...but otherwise nice action

[sakazaki]

Lol...but the battle and idea was great. Very well composed as well...^^ art of the saber...

[greenberet101]

art of the saber was a hell lot faster and better

[NeoShadow8]

That was awsome. But an awful lot of smoke though.

[blademen7050]

the end was the funniest XD

[sly625]

It was ok, but as I stress in most of my comments, you need to wait on posting the video till you got faster at the choreography. Funny cameraman ending. Overall a good performance, but needed alittle more practice to get to near perfect.

[darkpivotpro]

Lol, I used pinnacle for mine too. (It will never be released though)

[evilottojr]

the cameraman was kind of a cliche, but overall good choreography.

[evilottojr]

Pretty good.

[kcgreatfox]

I thought it was ok... "amazing" is a bit of a stretch. It would have been way better if they weren't dressed like fifth graders, with bright yellow shirts and sweaters tied around their waists. Although the choreography was good, it didnt impress me all that much. It should have been faster and more creative.

[carlosdrill]

Sure thing was Amazing!!

[mad2nitte]

George Lucas can learn from videos like this a thing or two about keeping sets simple and concentrate on the actual sequences and acting and not on effects. Very good job.

[podey89]

Great job guys!

[halo1173]

nice job

[laiobiwan]

the camera angles have not been planned...this is very confusing!

[Urbanninja3]

decent saber animation not the best fight i have ever seen but nice work usually hard to animate sabers on a tree background i tried mine in my garden and had to duct tape it white so i could see it

[Urbanninja3]

also i meant to add the coreography is poor it all felt to palned when i make my vids i plan where im gonna be and what type of move but thats about it e.g high or low

[darthkahn45]

The one that won was a lot better, as was entry 5 this was ok but needed some work it was a bit slow and pausey

[ultimatemusician]

not bad just a few things i would like to say

1) at 4:53 insted of boping him in the back KILL THE BASTARD he lost his golden oppertunity

2) they where not aiming at the person, they where aiming at the sabers giving it a too planned out look to it

i would not have given them first but maby a close 4th

[theunholybudders]

trust me, these guys were one of the top ones. I've seen all the other entries. most were kinda weak.

[JarodKwan]

LMAO The ending was so perfect LOL..Cameraman kills the star LOL

[vanir92160]

It was almost perfect!!!!!

[CRAZYconTHEsk8er]

so, these aren't your vids?

[ultimatemusician]

if you want to see vids that theunholybudders and his crew have done search KYLE vs REECE and PETER vs BRANDON