i think you are very good but i think it was a poor choice on your part. just because this monologue is a bit strange and such, you probably should've gone with something that was a little more natural and believable. but i do think you have talent!! :)
I thought this was really good. You kept the timing well, and your gestures and etc made it all the better to watch. That hoebag person doesn't know what she's/he's talking about. I've been acting and singing for a long while now, and I think that was really good. I was looking for this monologue for my next audition, and out of all of the youtube videos I've seen for this monologue, so far, you've been the best. I think this was very good. So, keep acting, and well done!
You're really likable and have a really good singing voice, but this monologue performance is a little off. Luisa is kind of, to put it simply, crazy. In the plot, she just became a pretty young woman after being an awkward-looking girl and it kind of messed with her head. She's hopelessly romantic and wide-eyed to the point that she's almost irritating. Your portrayal kind of lacked understanding of the character. I think you're capable of improving this monologue. You have talent.
Your acting skills are very poor; the way that you executed your monolugue was unsuccessful and unbelievable. Although you maintained consistency in your performance, it was not accurate or appropriate for the mood of this peice. You probably have never had any acting lessons, so I can see that I just wasted my precious time to even give you my mere advise, which will do nothing to even begin to fix the mistakes of your acting. I felt completely and miserably awkard witnessing this performance.
Are you familiar with the whole show? I've seen it a couple of times. This character is sort of not all there. I would add an airy tone to my voice. Maybe not be as concerned about the bird. These types of things just amaze her rather than make her angry or distraught. I plan on posting myself doing this monologue, so you can check it out if you want to see what I am talking about. Good luck in all your future endeavors!
That was very good! I liked the emotion. ^^ I'm actually about to use this same monologue to audition for a school musical, and this helped me a lot! Thanks! Wish me luck! :)
great job! I'm auditioning for part tomorrow, you've helped me out a lot! thanx
emilykay23 2 weeks ago
That was really really good :)
mmmchingawa 1 month ago
this was great :) I was wondering if you could maybe check out my monologue from "the Fantastick's"? I'd really appriciate it :) Keep it up :)
Iceyblue62093 2 months ago
Awesome Reel!! You need to post your talents on HollywoodNextStar. Link is in the Channel. ACTORS OF ALL LEVELS WELCOME
HollywoodNextStar 6 months ago
This is really good! :) But, maybe some more craziness in your voice. and some dynamics! :)
still awesome! haha
thearter12 11 months ago
haha u like had an orgasim in the middle of it
alltimehigh21 1 year ago
i think you are very good but i think it was a poor choice on your part. just because this monologue is a bit strange and such, you probably should've gone with something that was a little more natural and believable. but i do think you have talent!! :)
dreamdaily94 1 year ago
this is horrible there was no motion to it. the way you talked made me go to sleep right away.
bigbirdforeva 1 year ago
I thought this was really good. You kept the timing well, and your gestures and etc made it all the better to watch. That hoebag person doesn't know what she's/he's talking about. I've been acting and singing for a long while now, and I think that was really good. I was looking for this monologue for my next audition, and out of all of the youtube videos I've seen for this monologue, so far, you've been the best. I think this was very good. So, keep acting, and well done!
lilytheactress1 1 year ago
You're really likable and have a really good singing voice, but this monologue performance is a little off. Luisa is kind of, to put it simply, crazy. In the plot, she just became a pretty young woman after being an awkward-looking girl and it kind of messed with her head. She's hopelessly romantic and wide-eyed to the point that she's almost irritating. Your portrayal kind of lacked understanding of the character. I think you're capable of improving this monologue. You have talent.
Judill 1 year ago
Your amazing :)
LaraMTV 1 year ago
Where do u get your inspiration seems a bit woody like do you go to a forest and stare at trees for inspiration :) just kidding gud show
bountyc 1 year ago
wow hoebag7994 YOU probably have no acting skills, she was very good!
KenzieOzzy 1 year ago
* 7994
Sweetheart5997 1 year ago
@ hoebag7996 u don't know watt ur talkin bout so stfu and learn how to spell thank u :)
Sweetheart5997 1 year ago
Your acting skills are very poor; the way that you executed your monolugue was unsuccessful and unbelievable. Although you maintained consistency in your performance, it was not accurate or appropriate for the mood of this peice. You probably have never had any acting lessons, so I can see that I just wasted my precious time to even give you my mere advise, which will do nothing to even begin to fix the mistakes of your acting. I felt completely and miserably awkard witnessing this performance.
hoebag7994 1 year ago
fabulous
laurafarran1 2 years ago
Are you familiar with the whole show? I've seen it a couple of times. This character is sort of not all there. I would add an airy tone to my voice. Maybe not be as concerned about the bird. These types of things just amaze her rather than make her angry or distraught. I plan on posting myself doing this monologue, so you can check it out if you want to see what I am talking about. Good luck in all your future endeavors!
littleactressann 2 years ago
Wow thats really good!! I'm using this for an audition to and I think you did great!! :)
xoxmadlovexox 2 years ago
this was really good !
i was thing of using this and you helped !
thanks !
wowoanissabaybeey 2 years ago
i luv da emotion yew put in2 it! very amazing! but i hav 2 questions lol
what are/were yew auditoining for?
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where did yew find this monologue cuz iv bin looking 4 it on da internet but i just cant find it! :/
Mrsbroadwaystar7 2 years ago
@Mrsbroadwaystar7 You know nothing.
hoebag7994 1 year ago
@Mrsbroadwaystar7 You know nothing.
hoebag7994 1 year ago
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@Mrsbroadwaystar7
You know nothing.
hoebag7994 1 year ago
That was very good! I liked the emotion. ^^ I'm actually about to use this same monologue to audition for a school musical, and this helped me a lot! Thanks! Wish me luck! :)
everlaughingspirit 2 years ago
You did well....except for the fact that you sounded a little out of breath.
911FANGS 2 years ago
Just amazing, It's a fact we¿ll see you soon rich and famous, Im another fan that follows you from far far away.Take care dear!
kokecito01 2 years ago