this is very good. one of the best i've seen. pretty good acting too. i was a little confused why there was so much fist fighting but its still choreographed very well, especially for amateurs. the only thing i was left wondering - why didn't you shoot the confrontation w the dark lord rather than telling about - it would have been epic!
Also, not a fan of the shirtless thing either. If anything, it seemed a little over the top.
At the time, I was very limited to what I could do with people. I had my two main actors seen here but the other actor who was to portray the Sith Lord was unavailable mostly ALL the time. So, we only released this part of the story. But don't worry, the entire story is still on my mind and might possibly be made 100%. :-D
Nice tie-on cape fag. Most intense acting physically and emotionally huh, I think that is a sign, never act again, ever, for the love of everything holy, never act again. As far as story, Jedi and (?Not a Sith) in a druken bar fight in the middle of nowhere, STOP, just stop.
Kris makes a good bad guy, for sure. Sean is really good at... getting beat up... and playing the good guy. There's a lot of emotion in his voice near the end. The music is fantastic! You did a fantastic job of capturing the true essence of the dark side: rage and self-destruction. This was captured beautifully when Norian missed those punches near the last bit. So much character and emotion. Such a triumph over other fan films. Bravo!
and the dark side dont have shirts ??? nice Saber effect, the background looks like a warzone hahaha, the punch in the back honestly, should have knee'ed him in the guts ahahahaha Memnon so out of scorpion king ahahaahhahahaha
Ok. I don't know about anyone else but I if were a Jedi Master I would NEVER resort to plain common fist fighting. The Force carries it's users above that level of combat.
This was beautifully done. Very emotional, it kind of follows the philosophy that should a Jedi solve all his problems with a lightsaber, he will ultimately turn to the dark side. For it is meant as a symbol of the order not as a weapon, only the sith see it that way. A jedi should seek peace through compassion and understanding. Till the end, severus is a jedi through through.
Nice fist fight. I'm glad to see the jedi/sith fights away from lightsabers every now and then. Very emotional. Nice acting. It was a little awkword, but I think it was only that way because of how real the situation was. So, interesting concept, for once, the bad guy comes back to the light! WOOT! Though I have to say, you guys did that so well that I'd like to see the battle with the sith and watch Serverus's death scene. Lol nice post-credit humor.
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wo dude wtf. do u still fucking live in yer parents basement? this is fucking pathetic that you have the time to do this. its not even cool. get a fucking girlfriend fag.
omg, dude what editing stuff do you use? downright amazing. do u have a machine just built strictly for it? or do u have a something that can be used just with a PC or mac?
Hey Desmus, how long did it take you roughly to rotoscope the lightsabers? I'm doing a project like this and I just wondered how many hours i'd have to spend doing the lightsabers, top film by the way!
my god...the starwar fan fighting has gotten bland..well what i've been seeing but this was simply amazing though it didn't have a lot of lightsaber fighting, this was by far one of the best videos i've seen :D! great work.
god damn guys third time watching it and the end just hit me alot harder than before, this has alot of beauty to it something you dont find in most fan films
Sorry! Just got back from my vacation in Washington. Ummm, send me your email address through a YouTube message and I'll be happy to forward the sound effects to you.
5/5 guys well put. the only thing bad i would have to say is the intisity of the blades seemed a lil to much but that may just be me but well done keep up the good work.
I've got a script written, I've got actors, all i need now is to get the costumes and find the time to sit down and decide when to film it and edit it as i understand its a lengthly process lightsabers...and college is eating most of my time right now...but thank you for your interest, it's still in early stages
I Think the saber effects were a little bit blown out because of the colour grading on the footage. I like my sabers a little bit blown out because it intensified the glowing hotness that lightsabers are!
It's all really personal preference in the end... Thanks for your input! =)
Harrison, your talents and the talents of those you work with continue to amaze and please me. I share the bewilderment of the others about why this did not qualify. And Kris Thompson is surely the James Dean of our generation. His acting has a great range of power and intensity.
Last Samurai music fits well here :)
JosephDeJesus 2 months ago
FUck I hate all these credits!!!!!!! Just show me some action already!
gunvor69 8 months ago
severus is a harry potter person's name ( Severus Snape)
chasharv 11 months ago
@chasharv
Because no one else can be named Severus.
Desmus55 11 months ago
In your titles why not add "between light and darkness lurks shadows"
Also it would of been great to see at 6:48 in the two door ways a jedi master and a sith standing, watching and just observing
nedster01 11 months ago
In your titles why not add "between light and darkness lurks shadows"
nedster01 11 months ago
@nedster01
Because the character is trapped between choosing the Dark Side of the Light Side of the Force.
Desmus55 11 months ago
this is very good. one of the best i've seen. pretty good acting too. i was a little confused why there was so much fist fighting but its still choreographed very well, especially for amateurs. the only thing i was left wondering - why didn't you shoot the confrontation w the dark lord rather than telling about - it would have been epic!
Also, not a fan of the shirtless thing either. If anything, it seemed a little over the top.
schmoops3000 1 year ago
@schmoops3000
At the time, I was very limited to what I could do with people. I had my two main actors seen here but the other actor who was to portray the Sith Lord was unavailable mostly ALL the time. So, we only released this part of the story. But don't worry, the entire story is still on my mind and might possibly be made 100%. :-D
Desmus55 1 year ago
why where you shirtliss?
higle6 1 year ago
Omg put a top on
@(-_-)@ lol
madeleine77031 1 year ago
camera was shaking but its stull awesome
DaSlimer 1 year ago
Nice tie-on cape fag. Most intense acting physically and emotionally huh, I think that is a sign, never act again, ever, for the love of everything holy, never act again. As far as story, Jedi and (?Not a Sith) in a druken bar fight in the middle of nowhere, STOP, just stop.
DarkStar3141 1 year ago
if i was a jedi i would my fist only when necessary (but i would use the force to make my punches stronger)
komando231 1 year ago
Fantastic acting, well done.
PickledFoo 1 year ago
good, veryy well animated, great fighting scene, the acting perhaps could be better, but altogether an exelent video
dwoodsky 1 year ago
when the sad music came on i was felling that i was almost gunna cry lol
OrkiraMusic 1 year ago
Kris makes a good bad guy, for sure. Sean is really good at... getting beat up... and playing the good guy. There's a lot of emotion in his voice near the end. The music is fantastic! You did a fantastic job of capturing the true essence of the dark side: rage and self-destruction. This was captured beautifully when Norian missed those punches near the last bit. So much character and emotion. Such a triumph over other fan films. Bravo!
destaniofhearts 1 year ago
4:15 lmao! great job!
Painkiller99120 2 years ago
why wasn`t kris wearing a shert
MultiJake2000 2 years ago
i like it very much, good effects
los2gatoslocos 2 years ago
and the dark side dont have shirts ??? nice Saber effect, the background looks like a warzone hahaha, the punch in the back honestly, should have knee'ed him in the guts ahahahaha Memnon so out of scorpion king ahahaahhahahaha
WarHero4159 2 years ago
severus frm hp ha i love that but its more like a evil name
hcomedygames101 2 years ago
the setting should have been darker to go with the mood
ccburgett 2 years ago
very nice, i like the look and feel, but the sabers are a bit thick trey to use a smaller thing to fight with as sabers 5\5
ccburgett 2 years ago
Ok. I don't know about anyone else but I if were a Jedi Master I would NEVER resort to plain common fist fighting. The Force carries it's users above that level of combat.
VampCoffee 2 years ago
But never would you use the Force against someone you're trying to save, especially if it's your brother.
Desmus55 2 years ago
Hey, Jedi and Sith do what they gotta do, be it swords, fists, feet, the Force, whatever the job calls for...
DouglassRobert 2 years ago
Great video, very powerful and moving.
Thanks
ToonandBBfan 2 years ago
This was beautifully done. Very emotional, it kind of follows the philosophy that should a Jedi solve all his problems with a lightsaber, he will ultimately turn to the dark side. For it is meant as a symbol of the order not as a weapon, only the sith see it that way. A jedi should seek peace through compassion and understanding. Till the end, severus is a jedi through through.
ChaosOmegaNova 2 years ago
Nice fist fight. I'm glad to see the jedi/sith fights away from lightsabers every now and then. Very emotional. Nice acting. It was a little awkword, but I think it was only that way because of how real the situation was. So, interesting concept, for once, the bad guy comes back to the light! WOOT! Though I have to say, you guys did that so well that I'd like to see the battle with the sith and watch Serverus's death scene. Lol nice post-credit humor.
destaniofhearts 2 years ago
awesome
omghahaxd 2 years ago
OnThisGround. Calm down. These guys's videos are phenominal. Your just jealous because you don't have the balls to do this stuff.
xlxAUST1Nxlx 2 years ago
you got told! Harrison FTW!
leroynwdl 2 years ago
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wo dude wtf. do u still fucking live in yer parents basement? this is fucking pathetic that you have the time to do this. its not even cool. get a fucking girlfriend fag.
OnThisGround 2 years ago
Nope. I live in my own house. And I'm gay. :-p
Desmus55 2 years ago
@Desmus55 seriously or r u jst playing around
jediorder98 1 year ago
Says the guy looking for these videos. oh yeah, you completely showed him.
SKULLBUNNY911 2 years ago
@OnThisGround it's also not cool to bash people who took the time to make something you can't, you little bastard
thestickmanstudios1 1 year ago
the effects and fighting were really good the acting was ok but overall i like it 3/5 stars
also if you get a chance can you check out my star wars videos
StarWarsChronicles 2 years ago
bello ma niente di che...
stuprohtuasore 2 years ago
omg, dude what editing stuff do you use? downright amazing. do u have a machine just built strictly for it? or do u have a something that can be used just with a PC or mac?
bassrocks101 2 years ago
very good. norian is a better actor than hayden by far!!!
was this shot in california...or some desert location?
bookworm1138 2 years ago
This was shot in an abandoned Sand and Gravel plant in Arizona.
Desmus55 2 years ago
I would've changed the ending. . .had the brothers kill each other. .at the same time.
mvaldez02 2 years ago
That'd be downright depressing,
Desmus55 2 years ago
Hey Desmus, how long did it take you roughly to rotoscope the lightsabers? I'm doing a project like this and I just wondered how many hours i'd have to spend doing the lightsabers, top film by the way!
LFfilms 2 years ago
It's like Brokeback Mountain meets Star Wars! Post coitus / pre reunion. Yikes!!!
incadove 2 years ago 2
You love it!
NavajoJoeFilms 2 years ago
Great job, excellent music selection, very dramatic. 4/5
jackthefrenchguy 3 years ago
The Sith are emo.
10000nutz 3 years ago
Damn Sith!
NavajoJoeFilms 2 years ago
That's A Very Good JOB,
and by the way your lightsabers effects were Fantastic , wonder how many hours took you to apply that effects
GREAT 5*****
lovereslove 3 years ago
LOL thats an amazing video good job you two
driftura93 3 years ago
my god...the starwar fan fighting has gotten bland..well what i've been seeing but this was simply amazing though it didn't have a lot of lightsaber fighting, this was by far one of the best videos i've seen :D! great work.
deadmeat90 3 years ago
Well done! You needed a little blood in there, but it was cool all around. Waiting for part 2!
jediavatar 3 years ago
OMG! You had me crying at the end.... T.T
yaminokai 3 years ago
Fantastic film and the score choice was great, really makes this an empowering film
LFfilms 3 years ago
You guys were really tired at the end, weren't you?
futbolbro 3 years ago
Yeah, you can say something like that.
Desmus55 3 years ago
Well done. I'd very much like to see the confrontation with the Sith Lord. You two are very good actors. Keep up the good work.
Frostwolf223 3 years ago
no offense, it was kinda funny when you started punching each other- that was truly unexpected
dunklersuperheld 3 years ago 2
how do you get the title and credits like that?
dunklersuperheld 3 years ago
You should film that epilogue.
Duke0fAllTrades 3 years ago
Great job man! Great choreography as well! I have to say this is one of your best films to date!
jweinrub 3 years ago
Wow! That was one of the best fan films I've ever seen.
My only complaint was, if you're not an old 80's rock star leave your shirt on.
Two thumbs up.
FunnyGuyTimmy 3 years ago
Haha. He was only 17 at the time. ;-)
Desmus55 3 years ago
god damn guys third time watching it and the end just hit me alot harder than before, this has alot of beauty to it something you dont find in most fan films
I want those punch sounds though lol
lousaffire 3 years ago
Sorry! Just got back from my vacation in Washington. Ummm, send me your email address through a YouTube message and I'll be happy to forward the sound effects to you.
Desmus55 3 years ago
5/5 guys well put. the only thing bad i would have to say is the intisity of the blades seemed a lil to much but that may just be me but well done keep up the good work.
DrKVaen 3 years ago
Yeah, one fault in this project. But it really didn't matter to me. They still looked beautiful!
Desmus55 3 years ago
yeah other than that it looked really good.
DrKVaen 3 years ago
excellent production though guys the sound effects for the punching are perfect did you make them yourself or find them?
lousaffire 3 years ago
I found them.
Desmus55 3 years ago
where please for the love of all that is sacred in small films !!! lol
lousaffire 3 years ago
another cool duel , but i gotta say jedi are nothing without the rest of the kinds of people in the setting
lousaffire 3 years ago
that was totally ausome im definitally going to add and subscribe to u guys XD
supermacfan101 3 years ago
Thank you very much!
Desmus55 3 years ago
that was amazing!
real nice work!!
expelliarmus007 3 years ago
it is all very well love it
Falzar22 3 years ago
Awesome movie. Personally, I think you've already made your film. Your actors and the story is great and dramatic.
We Dark Others here at the Day Watch wish you all the best in your future films.
lordzavulon666 3 years ago
Brilliant! love it, i'm in the process of making a lightsaber film :) good work here guys
LFfilms 3 years ago
How's that coming along?
Desmus55 3 years ago
I've got a script written, I've got actors, all i need now is to get the costumes and find the time to sit down and decide when to film it and edit it as i understand its a lengthly process lightsabers...and college is eating most of my time right now...but thank you for your interest, it's still in early stages
LFfilms 3 years ago
the music is brilliant
stache05 3 years ago
Marco, John, and Hans always hit the spot!
Desmus55 3 years ago
absolutly
stache05 3 years ago
This is amazing!
The editing and acting are both great.
Excellent job!
DoubleeTeeVee 3 years ago
I loved it, however the saber effect was WAY too intense. I don't know whether that's due to the mood you set or not, but it's just bad looking.
theunholybudders 3 years ago
I Think the saber effects were a little bit blown out because of the colour grading on the footage. I like my sabers a little bit blown out because it intensified the glowing hotness that lightsabers are!
It's all really personal preference in the end... Thanks for your input! =)
BenMcEwan 3 years ago
Wow ... a star wars fanfilm hasn't got me teary-eyed in so long.
SilentBat 3 years ago
VERY GOOD ACTING!!! 5/5
BlackGatchaman 3 years ago
I really hope to see a high quality version if this in the near future. Any chance there will be a HQ version for download?
hattemaker 3 years ago
There will be a high quality version available on Vimeo in the coming weeks.
Desmus55 3 years ago
Great. Looking forward to it.
hattemaker 3 years ago
great film! 5/5
dstipek 3 years ago
I don't know how that shitty entry by "BruceM" made it into the contest and yours didn't... I call blasphemy!
tricofilms 3 years ago
Harrison, your talents and the talents of those you work with continue to amaze and please me. I share the bewilderment of the others about why this did not qualify. And Kris Thompson is surely the James Dean of our generation. His acting has a great range of power and intensity.
Ozirah54 3 years ago
That was awesome! But how the hell did that have no choreography in it? I can't believe you were disqualified!!! Let's go kill ObiJuan and Sage =P
BenMcEwan 3 years ago 2
Very well done guys and great acting, the fistfighting was the best. keep it coming!
wildwestoutlaws 3 years ago 2
Oh my gosh, nicely done boys. :)
bralen24 3 years ago 2
This was really, really, REALLY good! :D I loved it, and the end was so believable, I nearly shed a tear ;) Great work, Harrison. Great work.
hattemaker 3 years ago 2
Damn convincing fistfighting :) me like.
tomellingsen 3 years ago 2
nice! I get really excited looking at these vids! they rock! ;) FIRST TO COMMET YAY! 5/5
YoshiPower65 3 years ago 2