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  • most of it was ok

    good

    2,3,and whats sdistic?

    the rest were ok

  • i hate this video ...

  • my voice is way better, just saying

  • sounds like its being read instead of spoken. no emotion just words. just doesnt sound natural

  • This is shit.

  • I just like the "Im hungry ¬¬" (XD LOVE THAT ONE!) and the "whats sadistic?" parts....the other arent bad but.....I dont know....the voice and tone just dont fit with Blood =/

    Sorry =3

  • i really like your voice, but you need to work on emotions

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  • I acctually enjoy this voice. It has a certain underlying grumpiness that reminds me of my friend kayla. I think it's really good for her general personality.

  • not how i imagined her at all.

  • Lol well, its a good call, but i expected her voice to be more, corse, not angry all the time, but not like it sounds here X3 but still she fits the bill perfectly in some of the scenes

  • I Know bloodspill is ... well whatever.. But it lacks emotion and agreesion.

  • A little bit of insight on Bloodspill's character. She's not "full of rage" when nothing is around to make her mad. She cares for her sister just like anyone would, but has a hard time revealing any true emotion. But that doesn't mean she's ANGRY every second of the day. She has her moments. There's a reason we went with a read similar to this one. Bloodspill isn't a mess of rage. She's basically just a typical wolf. Angry when she needs to be, but mostly, she keeps any real feeling to herself.

  • Hmm. It's alright. I imagined it to be sorta scratchy, and more, how do you say.. Gah I can't think of it, almost more childish in how she says it, not the pitch of the voice though. More sharp.

  • i don't like it, it's not agressive enough and i imagined her voice more dark and mysterious with hints of agression and threat. also she sounds too old in this and too formal

  • Yeah same, i thouht she would be more tom-boyish... sorry person

  • Hmm... Sorry, but not quite how I pictured Bloodspill's voice. I expect her to be tom-boyish but this voice is just a little too deep and flat for her.

  • have more expression!sme more GRRRRR besides that youd be perfect

  • More expression... And it sounds too manly... O.O

  • The voice fits but there isn't enough expression to it.

  • Eh.... more aggression

  • sorry but i dont reall like it

  • I dont really like it.......maybe if there was more..agression....The voice sounds more like its reading a book then speaking the charector........

  • i particulary dont like it..

    xD sorries.

  • I Love How She Says.

    Im Hungry xD

  • I think her voice is too monotone, it's needs more expression. That's just what I think htough

  • I`m sorry about my last comment.

    Sorry Lyrak

  • of all the voices, this one is my least favorite. she needs more agression, its too monotone. maybe more of a matter-of-fact humorous voice would work better.

  • I agree

  • Maybe a bit more agression home it helps other then that she did a great job her voice matches her

  • Oookay... WHY are none of my replies to people's comments posted threaded like they should be? Argh! *whacks youtube*

  • I think it fits her perfectly =)

  • Er, not what I really imagined for Bloodspill...I can't really describe the voice, but a dull..uncaring sort of speech really, and the tones of the voice actor don't entirely fit that well, sorry.

  • I did reads like that, I was asked to do something different. *shrugs* The only two reads I really like out of this set are "I hate children" and "they tresspassed, we should kill them". I need to work on the rest. They were more just tests of my voice at that octave, so to speak. It's just barely below my real speaking voice, higher pitched than my original reads that were rejected.

  • Personally I like it if her voice didn't sound like a whisper so much

  • Well, mostly she looks full of rage. I'm missing that in the voice though. But it fits from the sound perfectly.

  • I don't think Bloodspill is dainty enough for a highpitch girls voice. This here you can tell she's a girl, but a tough one D: I think it works for her, but just needs a little more growl or snarl too it when she's really angry.

  • Well. Her voice sounds a bit too manly, as I know she is female. I expected more of a woman's voice, but with little or no emotion in her words. I see this actor has seceded the emotion part of the voice, but not the tone. Maybe a little bit higher of a voice and it'd be perfect.

  • This is the first comment that we've got that says her voice should be higher. Hah. I'm not sure how well a higher voice would be suited for Bloodspill as she is rather... "testosterony", but we'll take that into consideration. Thanks!

  • Really gd, but at 0:29 , I think she should project a bit more rage. Not be afraid to shout

  • Yeah I need to redo that line sooo badly. I HATE how I did that line, seriously. lol

  • ONLY that one, cause ur voice is perfect in the rest :)

  • I've actually re-recorded new versions of all of them so we can pick the best. :) Better emotion I think in the ones I did yesterday.

    May try to make them into a video too so I can show folks the newer ones.

  • ok, sounds great :)

  • *points to video response* ;)

    Still not finalized, obviously, but proof I'm working and trying to take suggestions into consideration.

    Just because I'm cast certainly doesn't mean the work's over.

  • hehe, ok. I'll go check it out :)

  • Hm, seems it's not showing anymore. You can find it by clicking my name and looking at my vids though.

  • Yeah, that's where i went and saw it.

  • Sounds great to me :D

  • hmmm seems kind of bland. She sounds like she is trying to seduce someone near the end.

  • Well, we were told that Bloodspill is very reserved unless she's angry. So she shows little to no emotion in her words. Which is why she sounds 'bland', I suppose. And how does she sound seductive? Hah.

  • Well even is she does lack emotion the voice seems to be to bland I guess for the character's personality. maybe to bland?

    and near the end I guess the tone that comes out with short lines. It sounded kind of weird.

  • The short lines are my biggest hurdle. I'm still working at it. Honestly, if anybody who has had voice coaching can assist with suggestions I'd more than welcome them - I can usually adapt things I learned as a singer to trying to play with voice acting bits, so throw 'em at me if you've got 'em.

  • nice! great pick!

  • I love it! There is the perfect amount of a sardonic tone in her voice.

  • kinda blah, blood seems like she has a little more fire.

  • She would make an awesome Blood, but she needs to be darker.

  • Darker as in how? Bloodspill isn't evil.

  • Darker as in... hardened from bad experiences.

  • Well other than being exiled with the rest of the BBDs, Blood hasn't really had a 'hard' life. So I'm not sure that would really fit.

  • I like it, I think it's nice.

    One thing that made me laugh... "I'll soak the earth with your GOOOOOUTS!!" lol she said guts funny.

    It is just a bit nasal... so I'd say... work on that? That's pretty much it. Good job in my opinion.

  • I think Bloodspill should have been male all along. But this voice sounds okay, I guess. I think it's hard to get exactly the right voice for her, lol.

  • :l It ... dosnt fit him as i thought... :l

  • Blood is a female

  • i know but .... D: Ehh...... Need more agrresion in her voice.

  • Remember, this is not the final cut. It will be extremely fine tuned, meaning a lot more 'emotion' as people like to say, will be added to create the right environment.

  • Bloodspill is a girl :P

  • I agree with

    KiraraInuyashaLovr, it does sound pretty nasal. I almost lol'd when I heard it

  • I'm workin' on it, never fear! I think it sounds too nasal on most of the lines too.

    I've been having sinus problems all year which is probably part of it. LOL

  • I really like the attitude she puts into her voice like how she makes Bloodspill sound like she doesn't care what the other characters are talking about at certain moments. It's just like I imagined her attitude was supposed to sound. I don't mind if she does get more growly or not. Personally, I think it makes her more surprising and interesting as a character when she isn't growly because when she gets angry she goes from quiet and careless to frighteningly agressive!

  • Lol Lykar Has The Right Atitude in her voice, tis coooooooool

  • Hmm.. I'm not sure I like her voice well enough to be Bloodspill :c

    I think Bloodspill's voice should be deeper, have more of that "growl" factor. Though some of the dialogue sounds good, Lyrak's voice sounds very nasal to me, and it just doesn't fit.

  • If it was any deeper, Bloodspill would be a man. Hah.

    Also, give Lyrak notes on how to improve. It's not called "constructive criticism" if you're not helping.

  • A girl can have a deeper voice without being a man. And if you noticed, I DID give constructive criticism. I said her voice should be a bit deeper, and have more of a "growl fractor", more UMPH in it. I also stated she sounded kind of nasal. I pointed out these specific things, if that isn't constructive criticism, then I don't know what is. All I'm saying is that Bloodspill is a big, powerful, threatening wolf and I think her voice should reflect that.

  • Saying "it just doesn't fit" isn't constructive, which was what I was pointing out.

    Either way, like it is stated in every single Casting Call video, this is not the final audio and will be extremely fine tuned.

  • If "it doesn't fit" was the only thing I said, then sure, you'd have something to complain about. But I added lots of reasons in detail of why I thought it didn't fit. I have great faith in this project's ability to get the right people and make it grand, but you don't need to criticize me when I give an honest opinion and a proper critique.

  • With the number of people saying 'add moar emoshun plz then it b gud', it's hard to differentiate between who actually know what they're talking about and who doesn't. Yours was a bit blurred to me, so I apologize.

  • Woo!! go Lyrak =]

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