While many of the points mentioned are inspirational, the effects are well done, and the narators voice fits all criteria for a male narator, the finished video comes off as somewhat fake and forced. Propaganda is a term that comes to mind.
The video description with only 3 lines of text relates a much clearer and better message.
"Where there's memory...there's Micron." is a false statement, but makes it clear that memory is your business.
You do not mention that it's by efficient and high performance memory you are contributing to the points mentioned in the video. Focusing on this, and shortly how its done, would make your video seem much less like empty marketing propaganda.
I regard Micron's products as best-in-class, and hope my feedback will be seen as an attempt at being helpfull, and not an attack on your marketing department.
RIP Steve
VivianAkacie 3 weeks ago
Feedback on this promotional video, part1:
While many of the points mentioned are inspirational, the effects are well done, and the narators voice fits all criteria for a male narator, the finished video comes off as somewhat fake and forced. Propaganda is a term that comes to mind.
The video description with only 3 lines of text relates a much clearer and better message.
"Where there's memory...there's Micron." is a false statement, but makes it clear that memory is your business.
gulllars 1 year ago
Part 2:
You do not mention that it's by efficient and high performance memory you are contributing to the points mentioned in the video. Focusing on this, and shortly how its done, would make your video seem much less like empty marketing propaganda.
I regard Micron's products as best-in-class, and hope my feedback will be seen as an attempt at being helpfull, and not an attack on your marketing department.
gulllars 1 year ago 2