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  • Oh, trust me, I do. I know you do, too. Seriously, what guy doesnt! I bet even Derek over here dreams about getting into Raileys pants, he said. He really needs to stop talking.

    Too bad I already have, Nick said. Justins mouth dropped open and I slapped my hand to my forehead.

    You banged-

    JUSTIN SHUT UP! I interrupted him while stomping off. TOOO FUHNNYY(:xd

  • hahahah duuude most hilarious chapter ever.

    i LOVED this one

    it keeps getting better and better!

  • ahaa.

    hilarious!

  • lol, ok i hate him, but Justin is hilarious anyway, nicve chapter!! can't wait till u write more i love your sereis, they're such great inspiration for mine!

  • I hope Raliey doesn't freek out :(

    lol

  • hahahahahha

    this is great

  • omg i loved this chapter it was hilarious

    wait what am i saying i love every chapter

  • lol.

    that was great :]

  • and nice one haha(:

  • nice pickup lines.

    xD

    what i railey gonna say?!

    yikes.

  • haha, the pick up lines were hilarious, but i didnt get the irish one

    and nick slipped up, hows railey going to react to that

  • Haha, yeah I got them all off some website.

  • jobrosarethebest:

    what that one means is (im guessing) Derek is Irish, and Irish inSIDE of her. You know, inSIDE. of her.

  • yea, thats what i was guessing, but i didnt know if derek was irish or not, cauise it wouldnt make sence if he was not

  • yeah haha and yeah it wouldn't

  • awesome

  • hahaha

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