This was written for the competition to make the one released. So this was before then so how can it be a rip off if it is a competition entry for the same competition?
It's actually offense, why correct incorrectly? If it really mattered to you, you could have actually made a real sentence rather than an wrongly placed comma and unnecessary period.
I like this version better than the one they picked but seeing as they wanted the cheesy kind of style I think they were right to choose they went with. But hey! I still love this version !! :D
I was showing my dad these, and he changed every single one before the line "There's nothing in my heart but you" (and even that was being generous, he only just about got there once).
When he clicked yours, he listened all the way through. The entire thing. I'm thinking that's a good sign :) Hahaha
Hey, I'm lovin the melody but maybe you could try and make it a little more eighties. If you could send me an audio file of the guitar music and vocals separately i could try and add some synth to it :D
i really like this version best. yeah i agree with slobclothing, it does sound like something from fall out boy. that makes it even better though. i love it! :D
this is fucking brilliant!!! this should've won :D
reestophor008 2 months ago
LOVE this version! Good job, mate!
faithlessbelievers 5 months ago
I love this one so much more than the one they chose. <3
SinfulPity 7 months ago
it's really amazing how different a song can sound just by changing the melody. really amazing job (:
stylesaturation 9 months ago
realy nice
NIKAGEORGIAN 1 year ago
it's not better than the original, but it's pretty cool, ur a good singer:)
oskarsine 1 year ago
Oooh! i love your energy!!!
killerkay83 1 year ago
like it better than the first version keep it up man
tredger42 2 years ago
really good! i love chartjackers
paperclip418 2 years ago
haha omfg, cant you ppl that say this is a rip off think a little bit?
It was made as an entry for the chartjackers contest
*moan over*
jagekung 2 years ago
WOW You're really good
JustMusic121 2 years ago
this was good, a more modern melody.
good entry.
LetsSambaNayy 2 years ago
OMG!!!
How stupid are people????
IT IS NOT A COVER!!!!!
IT IS AN ENTRY TO THE COMPETION!!
LEARN TO READ THE INFO BOX!!!!
:) loool
xJuiceyLucyx 2 years ago 12
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i dont like this... i hate wen people do variations on original songs. you can barley hear the original melody!! BOO!!
here4thefood21 2 years ago
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xJuiceyLucyx 2 years ago
@here4thefood21
You obviously didn't follow the project, he was auditioning for them to use his melody..
At the time of recording, I don't think he even heard the one that was used. Therefore, he wasn't doing a variation on the "original" song.
EricaCookies 2 years ago
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this isnt very good; the original is better
tonykart4life 2 years ago
This was written for the competition to make the one released. So this was before then so how can it be a rip off if it is a competition entry for the same competition?
xJuiceyLucyx 2 years ago
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@xJuiceyLucyx
You obviously didn't follow the project, he was auditioning for them to use his melody..
At the time of recording, I don't think he even heard the one that was used.
Therefore, he wasn't doing a variation on the original song.
EricaCookies 2 years ago
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This. Sucks.
augmiester123 2 years ago
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I'd like to see you do better.
EricaCookies 2 years ago
it was a contest this is an entry he isnt playing it wrong because it wasnt writen when he made this! Xp ~sam
xXSammikinsXx17 2 years ago 3
lol love the way people think he's playing it wrong!!! LOL it was a competition to write the MELODY for the song! Give im a break, it's good! :-)
HarryAlfieHudson 2 years ago 3
too fast
Vikije666 2 years ago
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a crap rip off
tyeworld 2 years ago
Its not a rip off you muppet he wrote it???
it was his entry for the competition genius.
xJuiceyLucyx 2 years ago 2
i liked tahat a lott (:
SurayuhxSunshinex3 2 years ago
AWESOME
p2kout 2 years ago
this version is way better than the one they picked. you're brilliant. :D
lemons349 2 years ago
i deffinatly prefer this version :)
GemBob123 2 years ago 3
you are very good mate.
good job. definite a unique interpretation of the song. congratulations.
sengjai 2 years ago
Such a Daphne Loves Derby feel. Reminds me of Pollen and Salt by them. Would've been amazing~
skinnyfistz 2 years ago
i prefer the the chartjackers version ...no affence :)
MadOnMusic1 2 years ago
offence, not affence.
purplejumper1992 2 years ago
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@purplejumper1992 omg your so cool, correcting people's spelling on youtube (Y) you do realise how sad that is :L ahh dear, get a life :)
call the spelling police i put 1 letter wrong in a word by mistake... i hate people like you!
MadOnMusic1 2 years ago
You're*
LOL messing with you. ;P
Thunderkleez1 2 years ago 2
@Thunderkleez1 LOL haha :P
MadOnMusic1 2 years ago
It's actually offense, why correct incorrectly? If it really mattered to you, you could have actually made a real sentence rather than an wrongly placed comma and unnecessary period.
The End.
ghandiwon 2 years ago
It's not high school musical like what they have picked... much better =D
MrDeverill 2 years ago
I like this version better than the one they picked but seeing as they wanted the cheesy kind of style I think they were right to choose they went with. But hey! I still love this version !! :D
PsychoFr3ak618 2 years ago
i prefer this one =] =]
josephiny4 2 years ago
Omg i love this!!
ChurnedKeyboard 2 years ago
oh man...i like this better than the version they went with!
stephhead2 2 years ago
if my boyfriend sang me this song... just like this.... I think I'd die. This is awesome. (:
xkillerkiwi666x 2 years ago
*thumbs up to the person who gave you a thumbs down* lol
BenderDaOffender 2 years ago
doesn't fit what ChartJackers were looking for, but i don't care i love it! great job
MewBecki 2 years ago 3
really good ♥
funkygem239 2 years ago
I think that both are great, but i think the one that they chose was better for what they were looking for (cheesey pop!)
awesome though =) <3
AliceLuciee 2 years ago
really liked this
TheresBryanLaird 2 years ago
I actually like this version a lot better than the one they picked. honestly.
LorelaiLeigh 2 years ago 2
the verses in this are really good
but the chorus in the song they chose, i think, is better.
but you can't put the two songs together, cuz they sounds completely different
thrilllex 2 years ago
your really good i really like this
well done :D
xx
Una756 2 years ago
I love this. (:
kendersonn 2 years ago
well good :)
SkiJade 2 years ago
This is amazing! (L)
CharleiighChiing 2 years ago
Awesome!!! Love it!! Your voice is really amazing!
DA1786110 2 years ago
Like it! :]
too bad there can't be two versions of the song, cuz im liking yours and the winners too :]
Good job :]
babsie741 2 years ago 8
I prefer ur version btw! :D
paulwilsonmusician 2 years ago 2
i like this version personally myself :P
The other guy's is good too, but this is more my musical preference.
ydoiwatchthese 2 years ago 2
this is ok, not bad. however i like the original, you should work with him though. that would be raw... or go in to gangster rap :P
MrRobby241 2 years ago
this is so freaking amazing.
musicxveins19 2 years ago
man yr pretty damn good
amazing lyrics aswell
buttaz95 2 years ago
Great job man!
MurderousMicrowave 2 years ago
i prefer the verse from this one but the chorus from the winner is superb
opticmovies 2 years ago 4
i like this version better! :-) x
jenny0285 2 years ago
cool job dude
Toyman6000 2 years ago
nice meldoy dude, i like it :-) you got featured on bbc!!!!! wow!
and thanks for comenting on my audition vid, thought Id return the favour xxx
theprettypageturner 2 years ago
nice cover XD
ThoughtOfaGirL 2 years ago
why be so mean and harse?
2oDIVo9 2 years ago
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your alright on guitar but you cant sing very well at all dont go on the x factor because youll loose
smithy9871 2 years ago
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TRUE YOU ARE PRETTY UGLY LOLZ JOKE
xXx00SLATERBOY00xXx 2 years ago
idiot
turbomonkey138 2 years ago
its very john mayer :)
ProcessedSugarBlues 2 years ago
Awesome :D
eggbertina 2 years ago
I really love this version! There are so many amazing auditions!!
weneedharrypotter 2 years ago
I like this a lot better than the one that won
melodyhellyeah 2 years ago 4
nice voice, nice playin, good all round
TheHumanProject92 2 years ago
Grats on getting on tv. (:
Really nice version.
Kero171 2 years ago
see when you sing the lyrics they don't seem as cheesy as they actually are. :)
rappstack 2 years ago 3
This is deffinately the best version i've heard
Greenfire1001 2 years ago
one of the better ones! :D
sgt1337 2 years ago
ok this is mad good
PhilMusician 2 years ago 2
This is very aweosme! I really like it, great job :):)
AlyAndCate 2 years ago
This one to win :)
YouKnowItFeelsSoGood 2 years ago
I really like this version. You have an excellent voice. =D
Francis9105 2 years ago
I was showing my dad these, and he changed every single one before the line "There's nothing in my heart but you" (and even that was being generous, he only just about got there once).
When he clicked yours, he listened all the way through. The entire thing. I'm thinking that's a good sign :) Hahaha
bostoncremetimbit 2 years ago
amazing:)
shanfreya 2 years ago
Loved it :)
RedVolly 2 years ago
ur mitage lol the best medoly ive listen to yet u shoudl def win im gonna go big ya up on the meldoy section for chart jakers
bubblesmad 2 years ago
i reli liked this lol
randomboyy 2 years ago
wow, i think this is my favorite so far!
jimmy0010 2 years ago
This is sooooo good. Been stuck in my head sincethe first time I heard it.
Miles better than any of the others.
You should win.
Love it. Love your voice. You should sing it too :)
xx
xJuiceyLucyx 2 years ago
yes.
just yes.
halapalu 2 years ago
So infectious. Definitely one of my top two so far. I have't watched them all yet so, it's so far.
SaraExLuna 2 years ago
of all the ones ive looked through, this ones my favorite.
good luck (:
victoriamayx3 2 years ago
this is reli awesome =] x
mollycraven5 2 years ago
haha apparently people think this sounds like fall out boy?? definitley not
but still very very good
i hope this wins :)
XleeuhhhX 2 years ago
its good (Y)
much more 'popish' than the others which is the concept.. I think. :)
vodapoUK 2 years ago
people seem to like your one and mine the best! xD haha, best of luck for this though :) (y)
thelolpanther 2 years ago
Hey, I'm lovin the melody but maybe you could try and make it a little more eighties. If you could send me an audio file of the guitar music and vocals separately i could try and add some synth to it :D
MissPerfectionist14 2 years ago
i like it :]
framepaintingsalways 2 years ago
amazing! so catchy
i love it
xD
MyBurningCity 2 years ago
Ooh, I like... this would be awesome with guitar, drums, etc., but I agree with OKaysional, the acoustic is awesome!
Marj12592 2 years ago
omg i love this <3
gabbierox102 2 years ago
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he sucks
mrT90211 2 years ago
awesome
danfari174 2 years ago
This is awesome!!
Although some people probably want to add more instruments to this, the acoustic version would be my fave!
OKaysional 2 years ago
I like it.
orangeboy69 2 years ago
you are so amazing!
my favourite version so far!
so talented and your voice is gorgeous!
Love it :) xxx
laurab7707 2 years ago
mmmm i like this one =D
thinksmart44 2 years ago
good! awesome voice and guitar! but not sure how catchy it is for a chart song?
muddy23 2 years ago
really good. not really the genre they wanted IMO.
thenickmister 2 years ago
I didn't know Pete Docherty was on Youtube.
wowknobs 2 years ago
I like this (:
AnimalGurl55 2 years ago
This is good, I like it :3
HaylinMusa 2 years ago
You should post an mp3 : o
Kegozen 2 years ago
oh hey Sum 41
elisaisnothome 2 years ago
you're good :OOOO
veeevy 2 years ago
this is extremely good :] hope they pick it!
linkinparkk4ever 2 years ago
i like this one very very much
candyland541 2 years ago
:)
verrrry nice
XleeuhhhX 2 years ago
This is really good ^_^
abandonedtemperance 2 years ago
I'd be *really* surprised if they didn't pick this one. Great job!
eruanna317 2 years ago
favoritee!
xldombr0x 2 years ago
sounds a bit punky more than poppy...
thelolpanther 2 years ago
i really like this one, its different somehow
bubbles9630 2 years ago
this is the best entry
SloMoMumboJumbo 2 years ago
LIKE LIKE LIKE.
overzellis1499 2 years ago
awesome job! :D the tune makes me happy :)
RandomChocoholic 2 years ago
*dies* favorited! i love it!!
buggaboo16 2 years ago
this is great!
neopolitan1177 2 years ago
i really like this!!! great job!!! :)
Arydun 2 years ago
This is definitely my favourite so far.
creatievzyn 2 years ago
love it
ColdEyesColdHeart 2 years ago
Ive listened to most... and you totally win. It has to be a fast song... and it also sounds a little like that Mario song which is also awesome =)
Hope you win
nikkiliverpool 2 years ago
ive seen most, this is my fav :)
cycoG 2 years ago
definatly the best!!! and also it sounds like all time low a tiny bit
reallly love it :)
VixNev94 2 years ago
This is my favourite so far :)
thethreefitties 2 years ago
Wow. this is my fave so far, :D
xSophieSkittles 2 years ago
i actuallyy really like this haha :)
MoleInHole001 2 years ago
great chorus!!! i prefer it to my response! lol reminds me of falloutboy 'yule shoot your eye out'
Jimbo459 2 years ago
definitely my favorite(:
good luck!
WhyHelloMegan 2 years ago
Ok,now this is my favourite out of the ones i've heard.
Sounds like old fall out boy :]
katyr11 2 years ago
This is awesome. Ur a really gd singer. Hope u win. This is exactly the type of thing i imagined when they said 80's love song.
Gd luck!
electrifyingerin 2 years ago
Omg this is the best one so far! :O
doctorwho1994 2 years ago
I LOVE THIS i've seen loads of others and this is my favourite :)
n00dle12345 2 years ago
this is great!!! they should totally choose this
or atleased parts of it or somethign
emxxxily 2 years ago
woooooow! ♥ ♥
if they don't pick u, i'm gonna be mad! :'D
LOVE LOVE LOVE this. :)
Daisuke91 2 years ago
coool beeeans
youmakeme6 2 years ago
my favourite so far :)
haribo33 2 years ago
Fall Out Boy =/= 80s though, which is what they wanted. I like it though.
Aradion15 2 years ago
I. Love. This.
KawaiiFwoggy 2 years ago
i really like this version best. yeah i agree with slobclothing, it does sound like something from fall out boy. that makes it even better though. i love it! :D
Rockena6 2 years ago
I think this ones the bestt :)
x
ImAQuigger 2 years ago
this is spiffy! i hope you win!
mionicman 2 years ago
I like this one :D
heheitslucy 2 years ago
Its the most fall out boy thing I've ever heard.
slobclothing 2 years ago
apart from FOB are shit and he isn't
turbomonkey138 2 years ago
Amaizing! :D
iCherryx 2 years ago
I really like this one!
gamespeopleplaynow23 2 years ago
Oh, wow.
I like this.
notochrasy 2 years ago
ooo I like this one! one of my favorite entries by far! :)
dancergirl34512 2 years ago
i like this :D x
noobcakes99 2 years ago
good going!
danlimb 2 years ago
Upbeat and with a happy generic pop feel :D Excellent! 5*
jonnydarkmusic 2 years ago 3