pretty good job, but you gotta work on the acting and the accents a bit. Take time with each character developing what their motivation, what is motivating your character (they want to finish the war and go home), obstacle (they gotta kill these Germans) and action, what they actually do to try get what they want (attack the Germans so they can go home) Trust me on this I go to school for acting!
Not too bad, did you have the option of 16:9 to film in? Would've been more film like if you filmed it like that :) Few bits are a bit... iffy, only real pet hate is the tactical point of view....
clumped up on patrol... big no no in british army lol
From what I saw, you guys have NO tactical skills whatsoever. Slowly walking around when you're moving through the field with nobody covering the rear or even scanning the sides for enemies, bunching up into one mass group when you all crouched down to discuss the battle plan, when given the order to move out and begin the attack, you all just sorta slowly walked again, then continued to just casually walk whilst under fire from an MG42. Learn how to run, pretty sure no soldier walked under fire
@xChainsawxGutsfuck Yea there was supposed to be a whole scene where we're moving through the trees not the field and most of the time we were trying to run but that field was so muddy and thick we could barley walk let alone run. it tripped at least three times taking equipment out there!!!
@PapeTonProduction Just a little ting to notice. Right before the germans START to fire against the smoke, he shouts "Nicht schissen" wich means "Don't shoot!"
@mastermike95 the story was better I mean the whole film was supposed to be half a n hour but we had a shortage of actors and mother nature played a role in cutting it shorter, sorry.
Awesome Job! Congrats on ur first movie. The tracers and explosions are sweet! Really cool the way some of the tracers go behind actors. But I wanna c way more explosions in ur next film! I like explosions!
What video editing software did you use to get those muddle flashes?
hurstolds841 1 day ago
@hurstolds841 Action Essentials 2 Muzzle Flashes, edited with Power Director 9, great programs i must say.
PapeTonProduction 15 hours ago
lol kommt jemand aus berlin
TrinaHyonwl242 1 month ago
awesome durand cant wait for ur next movie woop woop
zoiethetiger 1 month ago in playlist Uploaded videos
pretty good job, but you gotta work on the acting and the accents a bit. Take time with each character developing what their motivation, what is motivating your character (they want to finish the war and go home), obstacle (they gotta kill these Germans) and action, what they actually do to try get what they want (attack the Germans so they can go home) Trust me on this I go to school for acting!
WhatThatWasSick 2 months ago in playlist More videos from PapeTonProduction
Not too bad, did you have the option of 16:9 to film in? Would've been more film like if you filmed it like that :) Few bits are a bit... iffy, only real pet hate is the tactical point of view....
clumped up on patrol... big no no in british army lol
But still, we live and learn! Good stuff :)
BOT101st 2 months ago
@BOT101st I do have the option i just like it being fullscreen maybe next time, and how do you think theyd walk on patrol. And Thanks!
PapeTonProduction 2 months ago
From what I saw, you guys have NO tactical skills whatsoever. Slowly walking around when you're moving through the field with nobody covering the rear or even scanning the sides for enemies, bunching up into one mass group when you all crouched down to discuss the battle plan, when given the order to move out and begin the attack, you all just sorta slowly walked again, then continued to just casually walk whilst under fire from an MG42. Learn how to run, pretty sure no soldier walked under fire
xChainsawxGutsfuck 2 months ago
@xChainsawxGutsfuck we were at a shortage of time, so sorry our tactics werent exactly as we planned..sorry to disapoint
IkEaSaUrUsREX 2 months ago
@xChainsawxGutsfuck Yea there was supposed to be a whole scene where we're moving through the trees not the field and most of the time we were trying to run but that field was so muddy and thick we could barley walk let alone run. it tripped at least three times taking equipment out there!!!
PapeTonProduction 2 months ago
@PapeTonProduction Just a little ting to notice. Right before the germans START to fire against the smoke, he shouts "Nicht schissen" wich means "Don't shoot!"
Funny thing ;)
AirborneSargent 2 months ago
@xChainsawxGutsfuck good for u and you username says alot about you. :/
zoiethetiger 1 month ago
nice video at nice uniforms and equipment, the gun sounds are good but try to find some better speciel effects :D
johantoppdk 2 months ago
Good job lads! Well done!
BLACKWATCHRHC 3 months ago
Loved the props! However I think you should work more on the acting, story, and editing. Good Job!
mastermike95 3 months ago
@mastermike95 the story was better I mean the whole film was supposed to be half a n hour but we had a shortage of actors and mother nature played a role in cutting it shorter, sorry.
PapeTonProduction 3 months ago
Nice!
JessesWarMovies 3 months ago
lol... the mix between london and american accents XD
chriszebo 3 months ago
In my opinion:
Story- 9/10
Acting 9/10
Effects 6/10
Amazing movie just didnt like the effects awesome job guys! and im not bagging i know they cost alot..
101AirborneFilmsGuns 3 months ago
Awesome film man!
The501stPIR 3 months ago
this is awesome but work on the accents lol
101stairbornedan 3 months ago
good job guys
schmitty4ws 3 months ago
Looking good mate :)
JordanReynoldsFilms 3 months ago
Awesome Job! Congrats on ur first movie. The tracers and explosions are sweet! Really cool the way some of the tracers go behind actors. But I wanna c way more explosions in ur next film! I like explosions!
TheDemolitionD 3 months ago
Nice job!
Remagenbrid 3 months ago
great job guys love it
haleymadimckenzie 3 months ago
Good Job! This is really a nicely made movie.
24michiganironbrigad 3 months ago