Gun Kata

[DLRaven1]

actually nice work - putting these effects in is actually quite hard. ignore the haters - those that can't create simply critize - keep up the good work...

[guesswho2140]

yh this sucks ass

[DeathxNote100]

I know this niqqa ain't jus block a bullet wit a butterknife

[guesswho349]

lmao they were like 4 feet apart at the start how did they end up running so much

[ranmarius]

lol that was a shitty gun kata.

[Hallstaintedred]

:54 man in yellow hoodie has no bullets, 1:08 after no reload, fires.......

[timmymo22]

Very fun... and very funny, I liked it.

[gioboy]

the choreography is good. but it's too lame.

[getinterested]

SO STUPID!! not the video, that everyone has something negative to say, awsome video man better than i or any of these guys could do! funny ending too hah

[Duspende]

This.... Has nothing to do with Gun Kata.

[preachermuaddib]

so very awful

[mrkiky]

Ridiculously ridiculous....500 characters is not enough for the list of things wrong. It's so ridiculous ,even the funny ending lost some of its funny.

[skymafia1]

As a martial artist I know it would take some time and effort to create this choreography. Arrangement shows some imagination and skill. Well done.

[Kit572]

Its okay, but you shouldve sped up most of it...

[rojm]

so stupid

[MolotoveCocktease]

Now, I can understand battling it out for a Dr. Pepper. But you've seriously gotta pull your choreography together, guys. C+ effort.

[YouMockMe]

Your Gun Kata is no match for my GunFu!!!!

[EvisceratorBand]

Well I shot his gun out of his hand, I should probably run away now.

[kizersuzi]

what a pair of tards

[anonymousdev1l]

@kizersuzi but a pair of tards that where having fun =p

[mymarleyisgone]

the ending was amazing dude you rule

[DJ0of0the0X0Universe]

realy cool, i love the shoot and spark effekts.

pls more of these^^

[ArkaKressel]

wow nice choreography

[JBGUY2K]

This backyard looks... oddly familiar. Didn't you guys do some Mortal Kombat video a while back?

[NoPointSketch]

Nice, but as freddiew said Bigger Muzzle Flares!

[SFDPEN]

Filmed by? :) Nice little video! a little more time on the flare effects and the sounds too would really make a big difference, but i like the way you chose to film it ! Thumbs up!

[hardORjumpstylePICK2]

wow really good, just nxt time remember wat hand u were previously shot in o and i have a teacher named mmrs gustafson

[hardORjumpstylePICK2]

wow really good, just nxt time remember wat hand u were previously shot in

[TheEr0401]

wow tlak about stealing the whole Tard thing (SHAYTARDS) noob.

otherwise nice vid, but make big muzzle flares and actual gun sounds at some parts, I own the Airmag c11 too i know its sound

[TheMagicTard]

@TheEr0401 Uh, I made this username before shaytards even existed, like 5 years ago

[SnGxFRESHTIDE]

@TheEr0401 are you retarded... people have been saying tard since before you were born .. fag

[Cray407]

Dr. Pepper = Totally worth it.

[CheezyMcMuffin]

it would be better if he opened the dr. pepper and it asploded in his face, because that looked like it would have shaken it up.

[deejjj269]

hahahaha

[MikelSeo]

ending killed it..........................

[IronLars]

That was cool.... but one mistake, the muzzle flares was TOO small

[Kas3104]

where do you have the royalty free music from?

[RhetoricalFilms9792]

If i'da edited this i would have cut it way down and added some bigger muzzle flares, sped up some parts.

[ANT1NY]

haha watching this makes me realize how hard it is for actors to do scenes like this, i mean come on that is some bad acting lol

[Gameking30578]

I liked it, not professional, but I thought it was good.

[YoDarrell]

Doctor Peper whats the worst that could happen.

[fenderbullet150]

lol...you must really liek dr.pepper and juicy fruit's

[futurerocker77]

nice choreography!

[toowal]

Thats good. Check out my action scene!

[ThorAxeTheThunder]

good video but the flares are too small in my oppinion

[Fukyoureviews]

im just wondering how you did the gun effects

[TheTimeLordAnthony]

well done guys thats pretty cool

[TheDittyBags]

This was ALL for a Dr.Pepper!? Lol

[lagiator]

what camera you used?

[TheMagicTard]

@lagiator Sony HD Handicam

[lagiator]

@TheMagicTard thanks for answering. and what effects you used for on the video for the colors to be like these?

[TheMagicTard]

@lagiator For the color grading, I used some presets from video copilot called film magic pro

[TekjuiLoku]

I think attention to sound is needed a bit more here, the final product could have been made a lot better with some more realistic folley, also the ambience towards the begining is a bit distracting, i noticed a change in the wind noises as the shots changed, it was a little annoying for me. Good work though :)

[ChaohsiangChen]

Originally I was thinking about putting some critics based on reality. Then it came up to me that this is gun kata, which is anything but reality. I must appraise your efforts in putting together this video, which is better than 99% of gun fighting scene in the TV or movies. Hope that you can improve your skills in action filming and move to the big stage for big money in the future.

[russle360]

I liked the camera movement, but the action was a bit slow. Also the "conflict" was rather lame; it'd be better just to start shitting on each other, not resolve it over soda...lol.

[B4tt]

Why run away when the enemy is on the ground and you have a loaded gun in your hand ?

[QUATR00]

Muzzle flash is too small. Guns don't recoil if the clip is empty. The fighting seems unrealistic because it was too slow. Some of the sounds don't fit together in the environment. The smoke from gunshots was too dark (it should have been almost invisible against the sky). Maybe use fewer shots next time, because there are too many now, which looks quite unprofessional and distracting.

The color correction was nice though. Royalty free music - a bonus.

That's what I've got to say so far =]

[TheMagicTard]

@QUATR00  noted

[QUATR00]

@TheMagicTard The idea is pretty nice, I might say. I liked the comic end :D

[TehRSDude]

@TheMagicTard I'd like to add something to QUATRO0's comment. The sounds to the guns were really quiet, I mean think about it, guns are really loud. (sometimes making people def.) but good job :]

[Vincent502]

@TheMagicTard Adding a note to the notes: if you were holding a knife while holding gun, you wouldn't be holding it BLADE FACING YOU while searching the house. Other than that QUATR00 nailed everything on the head.

[TheMagicTard]

@Vincent502 The knife was facing down

[ConnorKeithRowland]

horrible sounds and muzzle flares

[Thakkennes]

tactical knife FTW!

[DrkGK]

Lol, 0:54 Guns usually don't recoil on an empty clip xD

[sekan123]

Maybe increase the sound of the gun shots and speed the clip up a bit while fighting or else it was kind of cool

[GraciousUndead]

I don't think people like DingoJohn, should be allowed to criticize like they did. Your muzzle flairs need a little work, really by work I mean they need to be bigger. That and I laughed when he grabbed the dr pepper out from his pocket, I wouldn't take it, you know how shaken up that would be?

[devilsson2010]

I think you guys did a great job, action is a tad slow but choreography is great! Would love to see an update.

[GOFFYTIME]

AWESOME!

yeh yeh production editing and whatever fancy crap other dudes have already told you about, but the actual basics are SOLID.

ive subscribed. provide more awesomeness.

[JuggaloHarry]

The two big issues is the guns have barely any flare and the action is very slow

[L33tRaven]

LOL

[TomShayAdams]

Exactly like he said, your muzzle flares are too small, no environmental reaction, recoil looks good though lol.

[KILLPOCALYPSE9]

kick ass even though the flares were small. i like th CQBs (close quater battle) you did :D

[DingoJohn4]

This was really... bad... Like extremely crappy made... but within this comment is also constructive criticism, because you have potential, with some refining and a lot more effort, this could be awesome ! Just too many mistakes in editing and too slow fighting ;)

[TheMagicTard]

@DingoJohn4 Thanks I guess. We will be making the sequel quite a bit more professionally this summer

[tunaktunaktu]

fail

[curecreatorr]

One last thing, use louder gun noises, we are within 10 ft and pistols are really loud I have used airsoft guns louder than those sound effects, Wonderful job.

[curecreatorr]

The other things I might change are try to actually stab something (other than the actor) when you're supposedly trying to stab the guy. Have his arm in the way of lets say a pillow, then you try to stab the pillow (with full force) and he either grabs your arm or moves in time to deliver a new punch. Muzzle flashes could be bigger. Lastly, in general, try to move faster, this is after all action, not drama. Otherwise, great job all the principles are there they just need refining.

[curecreatorr]

I would like to ad. If you ever watch an action movie or your favorite action TV show, all of the cuts are really fast. You might have been lazy in which case this is going to sound really stupid but just one instance at 1:25 for the kitchen scene, you should have entered the scene cut to about half a second of roll on the knife to show it and then cut to him grabbing it, then another cut to him putting the knife in a tactical grip while leaving the room and then a last shot of him entering.

[TheRikister]

Your aim sucks.

[chinomunk]

lol that was cool

[Hardboi01]

if the guy in the white jumper shot the gun that was in the black tshirt guys hand how was he still able to use it? i know its just a fun movie thing but try thinking about the holes in the story :D

[kkevinC]

haha nice.

[rawralex3]

my constructive criticism continued. i love the way the music changes as guy in hat enters the house at 1:20. that's all i have to say. i hope you took it as constructive criticism and insult.

[TheMagicTard]

@rawralex3 Constructive criticism is always welcome. I'll take not e of some things for when we make Gun Kata 2 coming soon

[rawralex3]

it was decent. the fight scenes were pretty well choreographed. the lighting was no good in many spots. some of it was kinda unrealistic. like at :21 that shot was impossible to miss. at :22 the arm grab was waaay to slow. really a lot of the movements a little too slow. i understand the need to move slowly to get things right but maybe just a little more practice so you can go faster or just speed it up in the editing. at :33 why would he run away rather than shooting the other guy?

[bobndroppy]

I like it. The end made it funny and worth watching

[jonibravo14]

terrible



[Fuxetan]

hahaha nice!

[hilltopdub]

sound needs to be louder and flash needs to be bigger then that wimpy shit

[tmafkap]

Cool and well done! Interesting topic BTW: what soft-drink addiction makes people do...

[Julienrewind]

Fucking great, loved it. Inspired me :D

[Scorpion85629]

LMAO, all that fighting for your DR. Pepper. Good job guys very entertaining.

[Caleefornia]

OLD NAVY

[biporio]

Fanboys do it wrong.

[inventiveinsanity]

The editing feels weird. It could be the movements of these two guys though. It isn't fluid enough, and seems like you're still rehearsing...

[hydha]

wadefak...

cool, but better if u user blowback pistol...

[Czaendermajer]

BULLSHIT!

[Shalom2378]

From 2:00 by 2:32,can someone copy what they are talking for me?

[TruthWithinTruths]

LMAO EPIC! "Just give me back my Dr.Pepper and my Juicy Fruits" wasn't expceting that....yeah speed up the choerography....other then that very good!

[Ruychaven]

Great job guys!

I liked the sound effects of the gun shots and the Big Boss stance (with the knife) was great!!

[pwntalive]

this video already has 3,459 views to many

[kriz2QTIP]

really lame......i didnt see any gun-kata

[VinceKato]

dude(or chick) this IS basically gun-kata. What were you expecting? Grenadier? oh god that show......

[redsbr]

Speed up choreography etc. Looks awesome.

[spartan277]

I would like to see a sequel to this.

[jesarauda]

eh. Right at 0:32 this fight could have been over if he hadn't run away. Sad.

[nyne9998]

i agree completely

[losdalmatos]

nice ending :P

[tavysimon]

really funny dudes..specially the end..dr peppers lol

[HARDCORESKELETORN]

sequill would be nice (I cant spell lol)

[Sweatysweatpants]

GAY

[jonvoid]

we won't hold that against you

[klemle]

Is that the metal gear solid 3 snake gun and knife holding stance i spy?

[thejanksta521]

ya it is

[jarettdaferret]

EPIC!

thats pretty good i agree sequel would be tight

[UndeadHavoc1]

heh heh heh...not bad, not bad at all. A sequal would be cool indeed

[Kotonargro]

Its really good man LOL make a squeal but maybe the clothing/costumes if you get some, it would make it better

[mysteriousjustin]

Enjoyed watching it, Great job on the Special F/X.

[sirbarfsalot12345]

awesome