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From: tombeals69
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  • WOW!!!that was tight had a Cali SWAG going on..Lyrics were thought provoking....a bit blown away at the moment..

  • @ladieleo100

    thanks for the positive feedback. i dont really get many views or good comments because its not like a lot of rap you hear out now. it also doesnt sound great because i used a $15 walmart mic and did it all in one take. but ive made a lot more songs now, just havent put them up on here, but thanks for watching!

  • your vocals are to low, cadence is off.

  • same shit here man i used to make songs for release of emotions too...

    checks my shit out and dont worry i got ever crappier quality with a 10$ mic...

    iam a big screw head as iam from texas i was born listining to metal and hardcore playin drums but always had a passion for rap....not to get big but the fact that you can put true shit and everyday situations.....thats why i stay screwed up.......by screwed up i mean i jam nothing but dj screw and the s.u.c. soldiers united for cash..........

  • thats whats up good shit man.....

  • @emerik12345

    thanks man. the quality sounds like shit cuz i used a $20 mic. i been trying to expand my lyrics and stuff, but i have no intention on getting signed or anything like. i just write when shit gets tough and i feel like im not going anywhere. helps me to not feel so bad when i can express myself in music.....

  • @emerik12345

    and if you have any suggestions for a song topic, hit me back. im always looking for new ideas =)

  • thanx for your thoughts. Check out 2Pac's Dear Mama,it was a fav of mine and my son

  • @tammyduke1

    I appreciate your feedback, and I've heard that song many times. I can't seem to get enough of the real hip-hop and rap that's out there. If your big into this rap or hip-hop with emotion, check out any underground artist. You will find AMAZING lyrics and a lot of them will hit home to things you've experienced. This mainstream BS we're feeding the world is nothing. They rap about the things that I care the least about.

  • Nice lyrics!! You should upload this somewhere.

  • @LuisDel09

    its already uploaded on youtube. lol

    do you know of any sites that you upload music to to get people to listen to it? if you know of any, let me know.

  • ..... :  ] the lyrics are soooo deep and nice.well.. :D niceee

  • @Jessicagftp

    thanx for the posotive feedback. im writing another somewhat like this one, but not quite as focused on suicide and death. just focusing more on the challenges everyone faces and how everyone fights with the devil....

  • NICE!!!!!!

    Sick Rhymes bro.

    5 stars!!

  • @julio123206

    thanx man..

  • aight flow but still shits weak tweak!

  • @WickedImpulsez

    just know that im not even a big rap fan, so i guess the fact that i can do anything like rap is a surprise....

  • tom, this is awesome. its so good. i thihnk its crazy awesome.

  • thanx........

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