Read your feedback, I say your film lacks nothing but to enter it into the BOFF on BIGSTAR.tv!!! They have a 5 minute or less any genre accepted worth 50 GRAND!!! I;ll inbox you the link.
first of all not tight enough is framing not blocking and the blocking was bad because alot of the times when a character would talk another character would be covering him and we wouldnt see the chracter who was speaking.
Read your feedback, I say your film lacks nothing but to enter it into the BOFF on BIGSTAR.tv!!! They have a 5 minute or less any genre accepted worth 50 GRAND!!! I;ll inbox you the link.
PAPA53167 1 year ago
I know what framing is to me framing and blocking walk hand and hand. but now that a look a little closer I see what you mean in this short.
BENTLIVE 2 years ago
Story Lacks immensely.
Blocking could have been WAY better
Music was only ok
Good fight scene
PancerFTW 2 years ago
As far as blocking goes the only thing I see wrong is the blocks were not tight enough
BENTLIVE 2 years ago
first of all not tight enough is framing not blocking and the blocking was bad because alot of the times when a character would talk another character would be covering him and we wouldnt see the chracter who was speaking.
PancerFTW 2 years ago
It's like a scene from a full-length movie. No beginning, no end... just a middle. Which is fine, actually...
cpo2u 2 years ago
whats was the point? i don't understand
FilmSlayer 2 years ago 3
Good shorts...keep up the good work
musicluver2204 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
great acting. good audio, good editing.
needs more story development.
cool piece of work though
smashmouth499 3 years ago
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smashmouth499 3 years ago
year 12 media project about 3 4 years ago
Achilleas101 3 years ago
after watching it again i am not sure if the person in the white jumper is a girl... maybe a transvestite?
Achilleas101 4 years ago
where??
What??
I don't get the point of this film.
ShinFuYux 3 years ago
the girl in the white jumper has a huge nose
Achilleas101 4 years ago