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From: baynej
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  • First of all, I don't know how I stumbled over this, but I'm working a lot with short film/videos so I guess I could stop by and give you some criticism. I think it seems slightly overplayed, and you really make it hard for yourself by having such a long taking. As well, even if it seems quite natural, I'd say, it does not sound that way. Well, I suppose you've trained a lot since, so maybe it doesn't go for you anymore. Anyway, good luck! :).

  • Is this your writing?

    In a real situation, there would be more hesitation, trying to find the right words, maybe even starting out on a train of thought and losing it etc.

    Good writing can capture the spirit of that.

    Anyway. Watched the one about rescuing the old lady and it occurs to me that you might be more comedically inclined.

  • Nicely done! Very convincing, you have potential. A real confession of that kind will definitely have stutters and choked-up words. It was stirring, for me you did great with your eyes (you looked really vulnerable), I hope you were just acting!

    I can't get over the fact that you're all grown up in this video and yet I can see a thumbnail of you as a kid doing the teabag experiment (on the right) lol.

    I'd like to see you redo the teabag experiment too. Would be a nice comparison. :)

  • Corey Delaney

  • I think you don't need acting...just be yourself addressing what's important to you. You're quite an incredible person, so I think the best person you could play would be yourself because you're god damn beautiful. Good luck to you.

  • Hey I am a random guy on the internet and not sure how but I ran into your video, just wanna say you are really beautiful and act great, you will make a great actress someday.

  • you need to work on your eyes , here they are more calm rather than upset or sad, in real life regardless of how strong willed the person typically the eyes will tell it all .........other than that it was very natural GOOD LUCK!!!

  • @baynej your very cute

  • very very well done. you got some skillz!

  • lol @ 0:28

  • Bravo! very good i think you got some tallent here!

  • If i get my hands on that science teacher i'll throttle him,,oh wait acting,,, nice work,and wouldn't worry too much at all about little stutters,as you're not suppose to be reading a speech,all good actors add them at certain times for realism.and dont be afraid to be quiet at times,the eyes can say more than anything.it's so true that people read body language and facial expressions as much as they listen to what you say. ,,ok that was my 2 cents,,

  • very cute

  • A little rushed and unnatural at the start. Looked like it took you a bit to get into character and relax, but once you did you were great. You are quite good if you can clear your head and really let yourself become the character.

  • @ClayThrower Thanks so much mate i will defs do that!

  • good but twisted.. please tell me this isnt some what personal experience?:s

    14 yr old pregs to teacher = Fucked up.

  • That was really good Josie, iron out the little stutters you had and it'll be awesome!

    Have you picked a Shakespeare piece yet? I'm having a great deal of trouble picking mine...

    Andrew

  • It seemed like I could believe you reactions in this little piece. But what do I know. I think you were good, Do the teabag thing for us again, ;-) All the best with your acting.

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