Once again the writing is soooo well done in this, the whole suicide scene seemed like it was taken straight out of Mass Effect that's good it is! The story is really getting good now too and the editing has for sure improved since episode 1..
hey, you should use deathmetal, ill recomend some bands 4 u: parkway drive (use romance is dead, idols and anchors, and anasasis), suicide silence, and the breathing process (pandoras rebirth)
I use Rage because a lot of their songs have something to do with the subject of the episode. Every song has a connection to the plotline of that episode.
don't get me wrong the cinematography and angles are spot on for the genre, i just think its better to write what you know. are you american? have you looked into outsourcing the voice or is that too much? once again great job dude.
Yeah, I am. The thing is, I'm from the south. I've noticed that the southern accent and a British accent sound similar in that it elongates and accentuates vowels. I thought I could pull it off well enough. Besides, Patrick doesn't talk all that much anyway.
I'm trying my best. It wouldn't suit the character of Patrick very well if he were american as well. And I've already started with it. Now I know what not to do. Thanks for the criticizem
Heres what you have to do Suck It UP! The chief isnt here and neither is god.
zeuns966 9 months ago
i thought patrick was british... then he starts talking australian
IForgotToShoot9 1 year ago
best machinima story ever i love this.
AnimeMasterXD 1 year ago
umm to me tht was confusing as hell
boomkiller25 2 years ago
thats a life lesson well learned
jorden452 2 years ago
patrick is pretty cool
wargenie 2 years ago
u know i just noticed it was black and white too after the first 5 minutes lol.
MasterMatt217 2 years ago 2
but... aren't we all masterchief :D?
water5000 2 years ago 2
wait.... I just noticed this series is in black and white, why is that?
VIIproductions 2 years ago
Funny. So far my favorite Character is Patrick. He seems alot like me, and my name is Patrick so maybe that's why.
Cayman192 2 years ago
lolol 2:15 sounds like hes getting raped xD LOL Great Vid
IICheApSh0Tz 3 years ago
one fucking word....AWESOME
sryimanoob 3 years ago
lol "hes not here and neither is god" hahaha
deathscore 3 years ago
holy jesus what was with the gus voice at 0:44
deathscore 3 years ago
Daniel's talking over the radio.
Rahheemme 3 years ago
oh ok i tohught it was a mess up
deathscore 3 years ago
dude great music choice. Rage in the first episode and come as you are in the second. good picks
AppleBear666 3 years ago
Didn't ANYONE notice that nathan barnett's voice was in there? y'know the guy with Surprised Brain Syndrome? Just pointing out a fact...I think
ClassicFuture 3 years ago
Hahahaha!! Swing and a miss, dude. That was my dad. He saw the first episode and wanted to be in the second.
An no, my father is not Nathan Barnett.
Rahheemme 3 years ago
But you seen him before right? He's funny as hell
ClassicFuture 3 years ago
I have now that you've mentioned him. Yeah, he's a good actor and really good at that fall thing.
Rahheemme 3 years ago
Much better this time, good job 4.5/5
DarthScohin 3 years ago
you bought the legendary map pack to use the digital filters
k00lproductions 3 years ago
Well... Yeah, but that's not how I did it. The filters aren't on all the maps.
Rahheemme 3 years ago
yeah I just found that out when i bought the ledgendary map pack
k00lproductions 3 years ago
Once again the writing is soooo well done in this, the whole suicide scene seemed like it was taken straight out of Mass Effect that's good it is! The story is really getting good now too and the editing has for sure improved since episode 1..
GNoodle 3 years ago 2
you have all my favorite groups in the credits, first RATM second fave the Nirvana first fave. makes me like your vids even more :)
SkateteamCaveman 3 years ago 2
That's good, because I'm gonna be using more Rage in the future.
Rahheemme 3 years ago
hey, you should use deathmetal, ill recomend some bands 4 u: parkway drive (use romance is dead, idols and anchors, and anasasis), suicide silence, and the breathing process (pandoras rebirth)
1160200692 3 years ago
I use Rage because a lot of their songs have something to do with the subject of the episode. Every song has a connection to the plotline of that episode.
Rahheemme 3 years ago
it is like a messed up soap oprea
chickenlittleT 3 years ago 2
its forge
DylIsPimp 3 years ago 3
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okay i just have one question for you, how did you get a hornet in sandtrap? I looked everywere for one! Other than that the video was great!
njd062199 3 years ago
Magic. FWOOSHAAAH!
Rahheemme 3 years ago
dude are u just a dunb fuck or what ever heard of forge you can buy a fucking hornet
newlife623 3 years ago 5
Cool man, hope it all goes well. keep it up
theshagster5000 3 years ago 7
don't get me wrong the cinematography and angles are spot on for the genre, i just think its better to write what you know. are you american? have you looked into outsourcing the voice or is that too much? once again great job dude.
theshagster5000 3 years ago
Yeah, I am. The thing is, I'm from the south. I've noticed that the southern accent and a British accent sound similar in that it elongates and accentuates vowels. I thought I could pull it off well enough. Besides, Patrick doesn't talk all that much anyway.
Rahheemme 3 years ago
I really liked the 2 accents. It really shows you the many different peoples and cultures who are a part of the UNSC. Excellent work, man! Amazing!
WEASELofROME 3 years ago 2
i lke it, but the fuckig stupid english accent is so fucking rubbis, why not just be american aswell, other than that wicked
theshagster5000 3 years ago
I'm trying my best. It wouldn't suit the character of Patrick very well if he were american as well. And I've already started with it. Now I know what not to do. Thanks for the criticizem
Rahheemme 3 years ago
every one we gotta promote this vid
monk3yblade 3 years ago
that was good
xXomeganiXx 3 years ago 3
i like it
darthstewie77 3 years ago
nice
grabagun1 3 years ago
Wow man, that was good. You really improve with each episode you make.
Vaulted00Neurosis 3 years ago